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概要写作summaryWhatisasummaryAsummaryisabriefstatementthatgivesonlythemainething,notthedetails《牛津高阶英汉双解词典》1考纲要求1考纲要求概要写作。提供一篇350词以内的短文，要求考生基于该短文写出一篇60词左右（少于40或多于80词扣两分）的内容概要。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：1对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；2应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；3上下文的连贯性；4对各要点表达的独立性情况。2写作特点2写作特点bethoroughbebriefrestate/ownwordsbeobjective3写作步骤分段阅读找要点改写修改ReadtwoorthreetimestofindthestructureDividethewholepassageintoseveralpartsandfindtheeypointofeachpartRewritetheeypointsbyusingyourownwordsPolishthewholepassage阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Weshouldn’tjudgeaersedressedincertaintyaybenot,buttheycanshowourattitudetowhatwearedoingatthemomentWhenore,ifweareclean,smartandpolite,peoplewillhaveconfidenceinusPara1Para3Para2Para4Beforewriting:ReadforstructureandeypointsReadingforStructureHowmanyplePart2supportingdetailsPara4:Part3→conclusionHowtoGeteyPointstopicsentenceforeachparagraphFind:thefirst/lastsentence/jointhemtogether﹡SummarieinyourownwordsReadforeyPointseetsomeoneforthefirsttimewemaeadecisionaboutwhatthatostimportantthingistoweartherightclothesfortheoccasion_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________Point1___________________________________________________________________________________________________________ReadforeyPointsastheirstudentstowearauniformWhyAlotofteachersthinauniformmaesstudentsfeelthattheyareheltobeseriousabouttheirstudiesTeacherssaythatuniformscanhels,theycan'tjudgeeachotherbecauseoftheirclothesItalsoavoidsargumentsaboutwhoorwhatisfashionable

_____________________________________________________________________1_________________________________________________________________________________________________2_________________________________________________________________Point2___________3__________________________________________________________________________________4______________________________________________________________benefitsReadforeyPointsersedressedincertaintypesofclothes_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Point3__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ReadforeyPointsaybenot,buttheycanshowourattitudetowhatwearedoingatthemomentWhenore,ifweareclean,smartandpolite,peoplewillhaveconfidenceinus__________________Point4__________________________________________________________________________________________________ListtheeyPointsPara.Keypoints1Itisimportanttoweartherightclothesfortheoccasion.2Schoolsasktheirstudentstowearauniform.Why?…3However,itisnotonlyschoolsthatwantpeopletodressinacertainway.Weallhavefixedideasaboutwhatthepeopleinacertainprofessionshouldwear…adoctor…abank…Policeofficers…alotofcompanies…4...rightclothescanshowourattitude

thatweareseriousaboutwhatwearedoing..Furthermore,peoplewillhaveconfidencein

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theeypointsinyourownwordsinadifferentwayHowtorestate2usesynonyms同义词的运用3summarieeamples概括5combinesentences合并句子4sometimeschangethevoice主被动语态转换1changethesentencestructure句型转换EamplesofrestatingtheeypointsKeypoint1Theimportantthingistoweartherightclothesfortheoccasion.Restate①Wearingrightclothesforoccasionsissignificant②Sincejudgingapersonbytheirappearanceisunavoidable,wearingproperclothesfordifferentoccasionsisvital③ClothesshouldbewornsuitablyfordifferentoccasionsEamplesofrestatingtheeypointsKeypoint2Schoolsasktheirstudentstowearauniform.Why?…Restate①Studentsarerequiredtowearuniformsforvariousbenefits②Teachersthinuniformscanmaestudentsseriousabouttheirstudyandavoidarguments③WearinguniformsatschoolcanheleseriousabouttheirstudyandavoidmanysEamplesofrestatingtheeypointsKeypoint3

However,itisnotonlyschoolsthatwantpeopletodressinacertainway.Weallhavefixedideasaboutwhatthepeopleinacertainprofessionshouldwear…adoctor…abank…Policeofficers…alotofcompanies…restate①Differentselvesincertainways②Differentjobsneeddifferentclothesforcustomers'eportancetowhattheywearaccordingtotheirprofessionsEamplesofrestatingtheeypointsKeypoint4Rightclothescanshowourattitudethatweareseriousaboutwhatwearedoing..Furthermore,peoplewillhaveconfidenceinus.Restate①aeothersawareofourseriousnessandreliabilityAfterwriting:

Useproperconjunctions连接词）topolishyourpassageIntroduction:Theainlytellsus…表转折：but,however,though,although表并列、递进：aswellas,inadditionto,notonlybutalso,besides,what’smore,furthermore,表对比：meanwhile,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,contrast,表列举：firstly/secondly/finally/表原因：becauseof,dueto,onaccountof,;for…表举例：foreample/instance,suchas,andsoonEnding：therefore,consequently,Inshort,inconclusion,inaword使用合适的连接词Samsproperly要点3Inconclusion,ourclothescanshowourattitudes,suchasbeingseriousandreliable要点462词Somemistaesshouldbeavoided!83words,超字数与原文雷同的句子不要加入自己的观点不要缺失要点Conclusion：HowtoWriteaGoodSummary仔细阅读文本：读结构、读主题句、读关键信息。2用自己