无灵主语在读后续写中的运用

读后续写微技能无灵主语表达情绪JinhuaNo.1HighSchool

StephanieZhangWhenIwaswaitingfortheresult,______________.WhenIshowedittomyparents,_______________.Howtobetterexpressyournervousness?01020304WhenIwaswaitingfortheresult,Ifeltnervous.Iwaswaitingfortheresult,(feeling)nervous.WhenIwaswaitingfortheresult,my

washammeringinmychest.Nervousness

mewhenIwaswaitingfortheresult.tookholdofheart无灵主语Howtobetterexpressyourfear?WhenIshowedmyscoretomyparents,___________________________________________________________________________.WhenIwaswaitingfortheresult,myheartwashammeringinmychest.NervousnesstookholdofmewhenIwaswaitingfortheresult.①myheartwashammeringinmychest/②feartookholdofmeHowtobetterexpressyourfearornervousness?Tip1:

做主语展现情绪.My_________tightened(变紧).My_____wasbeatingwildly.My_____grewsweaty.My_____froze.My

_____turnedpale(苍白的).My_____weretrembling/shaking.My_____wentblank(空白的).heartlegspalmsfacestomachmindbody人体反应Howtobetterexpressyourfearornervousness?Tip1:人体反应做主语展现情绪。

3.Myvoice_______________.1.Tears________________downmyface.2.Beadsofsweat(汗珠)___________throughmyforehead.A.rolledB.streamed(流)C.liedA.pulledB.burst(迸发)C.gotA.cracked(破裂)B.laughedC.trembled(颤抖)ABBACHowtobetterexpressyourfearornervousness?Tip2:_____________________做主语表达情绪.Fear/Nervousness

tookholdofme.情绪的抽象名词PanicFrightTenseAnxietyseizedcapturedsweptoverHorrorfilledoccupiedruled(Awaveof)Howtobetterexpressyourfearornervousness?Tip3:__________________做主语烘托情绪.Therewasnotasoul(灵魂)in_____andeverythingwasso

dead-looking.Anabsolute(完全的)__________ruledthe...(place)Anabsolute__________ruledthe...(place)sightdarknesssilence环境描写无灵主语1.人体反应表达情绪2.情绪的抽象名词3.环境描写Practice:readforthemainidea.Janequarrelledwithherhusband,walkedintotheforestbyherselfandgotlost.Shehadspentanightaloneintheforest.Thenextday,shecontinuedfindingthewayout.Therewerehelicopters(直升机),butthehelicoptersdidn'tfindher.Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain._________________________________________________________ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup...__________________________________________________________________________Practice:improvethewritingButnohelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Janewasafraid.

Shesatbythestream,restingherfeet.IfIhadn'tquarrelledwithTom,Iwouldn'thavetobehere.Janewasveryregretful.ShewantedtosaysorrytoTomforlosinghertemper.However,theonlythingshecoulddowasliebythestreamandwaitforhelp.ItwasgettinglateandJanefellasleep.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup..._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________