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SummarywritingSummarywriting1Whatisasummary?Asummaryisashortstatementthatgivesonlythemainpointsofsth,notthedetails.Itisabrief,complete

and

objective

restatement

ofthemainideaandkeypointsofalongercomposition.Whatisasummary?Asummaryis2

本文总共25分，共分为5档第五档(21-25)理解准确,涵盖全部要点。

能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑。

完全使用自己的言语。4C原则

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本文总共25分，共分为5档第五档(21-25)4C原则3Step1.Readforthestyleandstructureofthepassage.Howtowriteasummary?

ArgumentationExpositionNarrationStep1.Readforthestyleand4Recently,

awildfishrestaurantwasorderedtoshutdowninHarbin,northeastChina'sHeilongjiangProvince.Asaresult,theowneroftherestaurantfacedafineof500,000yuan.ChenYan,atouristfromChangzhou,eastChina’sJiangsuProvince,complainedonlineonFebruary12thathewasbeingovercharged10,000yuanforthreebigfishatalocalwildfishrestaurantinSongbeiDistrictofHarbin.Worsestill,heclaimedthathisfamilymemberswerebeatenandthreatenedbytherestaurantstaffwhenhequestionedthebillatthecheckout.Chen’scomplaintimmediatelyspreadonChina’ssocialmedia.Theinvestigationresultsbysomelocalgovernmentdepartmentsshowedthattherestauranthadnofault,sincetheyhadalreadytaggedtheprice,whichraiseddoubtamongnetizensagain.Furtherinvestigationshowedthatonetypeofthefishserved,Huso,wasnottherealwildspecies,butakindoffarmedfishatamuchlowerprice.Sincethepricesofthefishdidhaveviolatedtherightsofconsumers,therestaurantgotitsduepunishment.Meanwhile,relevantgovernmentdepartmentsthathavestoodbythesideoftherestaurantinthefirstplacewouldalso

beinvestigatedandpunished.Similarcasesoffraudulent(欺骗的)pricingatscenicspotshavealsobeenreportedelsewhereinChina.InOctober2015,forinstance,atouristwasoverchargedforacourseofshrimp(虾)inthecoastalcityofQingdao,eastChina'sShandongProvince,whentherestaurantclaimedthequotedpriceof38yuanwasnotforthedish,butforeachshrimp!Authoritiessaythattheseillegalactionswillbeseverelypunished.Recently,awildfishres5NarrationWhen

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ChenYan,atouristfromChangzhou,eastChina’sJiangsuProvince,complainedonlineonFebruary12thathewasbeingovercharged10,000yuanforthreebigfishatalocalwildfishrestaurantinSongbeiDistrict

ofHarbin.Worsestill,heclaimedthathisfamilymemberswere

beatenandthreatenedbytherestaurantstaffwhenhequestionedthebill

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2.ChenYancomplainedhewasbeingoverchargedandwerebeatenandthreatenedbytherestaurantstaff.Chen’scomplaintimmediatelyspreadonChina’ssocialmedia.

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