2024届高三英语一轮复习读后续写讲解课件

高三读后续写实战演练67．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。AsanurseatthecancercarecenterwhereI’veworkedforsevenyears,I’lldoalmostanythingtomakeapatientfeelbetter.ButwhenImetPattyatthecenter,in2011,shedidn’twantmyhelp.Shewasatiny44-year-oldsinglemombattlinganaggressiveheadandneckcancer.Unlikemanyofourotherpatients,Pattywasaloneduringhertreatment,butnomatterwhatIdid.Icouldn'tgethertoopenup.Shejustburiedherselfinbookorpulledablanketoverherheadtofendoffconversation.EventuallyIhitonareliablewaytomakePattysmile:mentioninghernine-year-oldson,Stephen.She'dtellmehowwellhedidinschool,howhe'dbeenselectedtoreadapoemhewroteatalocalbookstore.Shedesperatelywantedtoliveforhim.Withthreekidsmyself,Itotallyunderstoodhowshefelt.Afterayearandahalfoftreatment,inAugust2012,Pattywastoldhercancerhadspread,andIlearnedshewouldn'tlivemuchlonger.Myfirstthoughtwas,“What'sgoingtohappentoStephen?”Nursesatthecentersharedstoriesattheirmeetingsabouthowbrightandunusualtheboywas.butnooneseemedtoknowhowtoresolvetheissueofwhatwouldhappentohimwhenhismomdied.Myhusband,Michael,whotooworksatthecenter,startedhearingaboutPattyandStephen.OnemorninginOctober,Pattyquietlyslippedaway.MichaelandIpickedStephenupafterschool,drovehimtoanearbypark,andsatonabenchbyapond.Ifinallymanagedtosay,“Stephen,we'resorrytohavetotellyouthis,butyourmomcametoanendthismorning.”ThesoundthatcameoutofhismouthwaslikenothingI'deverheardbefore.Thisskinnylittleguysatbetweenthetwoofusandjustwailed(哀号)andwailed.Itwasasifhiswholeworldwasjustdestroyed.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Somethinginsidemewastellingmewhattodo.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally,wetookhimhomewithus.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________思考：第一段应该写什么？我内心的某种东西在告诉我该怎么做。我应该帮助这个孩子。收养他（adopt）征求丈夫和小男孩的同意。他们各自的表现和言语。第一段：1.我想帮助这个可怜的孩子。Iwanttohelpthispoorboy.wanted2.我决定收养他。2.所以我决定收养他。2.尽管我已经有三个孩子并且我的家境不算富裕，我还是决定收养他。AlthoughIhadthreechildrenofmyownandamodestfamilyincome,Idecidedtoadopttheboy.亮点1.Although引导让步状语从句+主句2.modestadj.适中的，谦逊的

3.我告诉我的丈夫我的决定，他立即答应了。他说道，“这就是我想告诉你的。”Itoldmyhusbandmydecisionandheimmediatelyagreed.Hesaid,"That'sexactlywhatIwantedtotellyou."Itoldmyhusbandmydecisionandheimmediatelyagreed,saying,"That'sexactlywhatIwantedtotellyou."亮点1.现在分词作伴随状语;2.what引导表语从句4.我告诉小男孩，我们决定照顾他，给他一个家。4.我告诉小男孩:“我们决定收养他。”Itoldtheboythatwewouldgivehimahomeandtakecareofhimforhismother.亮点1.宾语从句;2.语言表达更温暖5.男孩哭着点了点头。Theboynodded,crying.亮点现在分词做伴随状语Iwantedtohelpthispoorboy.AlthoughIhadthreechildrenofmyownandamodestfamilyincome,Idecidedtoadopttheboy.Itoldmyhusbandmydecisionandheimmediatelyagreed,saying,"That'sexactlywhatIwantedtotellyou."Itoldtheboythatwewouldgivehimahomeandtakecareofhimforhismother.Theboynodded,crying.第二段最终，我们带他回了家。介绍他和我的孩子们认识。我告知孩子们这个孩子将来会跟我们一起住。孩子们的反应和表现。我的感受和故事的结局。1.我们把Stephen介绍给我们的三个孩子并告知他们他将和我们住在一起。WeintroducedStephentoourthreechildrenandtoldthemthathewouldlivewithusinthefuture.2.我的孩子们开心地接受了我的话并带

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亮点1.副词修饰动词，句子更加生动2.what引导的宾语从句3.我很开心，我的孩子们是如此友善并愿意和其他孩子分享他们的一切。Iwasgladthatmychildrenweresokindandwillingtoshareeverythingwithotherchildren.亮点1.宾语从句2.bewillingtodo4.Stephen很快融入了我们的家庭并和我们过着幸福的生活。

Stephensoonintegratedintoourfamilyandlivedahappylifewithus.亮点integrateinto…融入

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