读后续写专题-有关动物的描写课件-2023届高三英语写作专项

读后续写：有关动物的描写Domesticanimals▲ACatwithHindLegsTuckedinandTailCoiledAcat

sprangup

uponthebench,

stretchedherself,

tucked

herhindlegs

underher

and

coiledhertailtightlyroundthem

asthoughtopreventthemfromaccidentally

workingloose.——DorothyL.Sayers;UnnaturalDeath,Chap.XI【译文】一只猫跳上长凳，伸了个懒腰，把后腿缩在身下，把尾巴紧紧地盘绕在腿上，好像怕尾巴不小心松了似的.【赏析】：一连串的动作描写，生动形象点出了猫咪的优雅和轻盈.【生词】tuck

/tʌk/

toputsthintoasmallspace,especiallytohideitorkeepitsafeorcomfortable

把…塞进狭窄的空间；把…藏入；收藏coil

/kɔɪl/~(sth)round,around,etc.sth~(sth)up=towindintoaseriesofcircles;tomakesthdothis（使）缠绕，盘绕AGreyCatThegreycat

seateditself

betweenandbehindthemagain.

Itblinkedslowly.

Theskinoverits

shouldersjerkedforward

underaflea,

andthenslippedslowlyback.

Thecat

lifted

apawand

inspected

it,

flicked

itsclawsoutandinagainexperimentally,

and

lickeditspadswithashell-pinktongue.—JohnSteinbeck:TheGrapesofWrath,Chap.6【译文】灰猫又在他们中间和后面坐了下来.它慢慢地眨了眨眼睛.它肩膀上的皮肤在一只跳蚤下面向前一缩，然后慢慢地滑了回来.这只猫抬起一只爪子检查了一下，又试着把爪子朝里朝外弹了几下，然后用贝壳般粉红色的舌头舔舐脚垫.【生词】blink=whenyou

blink

or

blinkyoureyes

or

youreyesblink

,youshutandopenyoureyesquickly眨眼睛jerk

/dʒɜːk/=Ifyou

jerk

somethingorsomeoneinaparticulardirection,orthey

jerk

inaparticulardirection,theymoveashortdistanceverysuddenlyandquickly.

使…猝然一动;

猝然一动flick/flɪk/=Ifsomething

flicks

inaparticulardirection,orifsomeone

flicks

it,itmoveswithashort,suddenmovement.

迅速地移动lickvt.

舔；pad

/pæd/

；n.

衬垫；便签簿；(猫或狗的）爪垫shell-pick粉红色；贝壳粉色关于动物的生动描写DescribingaDog

-Apuppy➢childlike

adj.天真烂漫的;孩子似的➢innocent

adj.无辜的;无罪的n.天真的人➢jade-green

adj.绿玉色的;浅绿色的➢velvety

adj.

天鹅绒般柔软的;醇和的，可口的➢hedgehog/'hed3hog/n.刺猬;刺猬状➢racoonn.浣熊➢wagv.(狗)摇摆(尾巴)

➢adorableadj.可爱的;可敬重的➢arrowtips箭头➢yipn.叫喊声vi.犬吠;尖叫➢yelpv./n.

(因兴奋、疼痛等)尖叫，大叫;狗吠➢cuddly

adj.令人想拥抱的;喜欢搂搂抱抱的;逗人喜爱的➢messy

adj.凌乱的;不整洁的➢wobbly

adj.不稳定的;摆动的歪斜的➢wobblyonhisfeet摇摇晃晃地站着AFemaleDog

Thedog,whohad

soundedsoferocious

inthewinterdistances,

wasafemaleGermanshepherd.

Shewasshivering.

Hertailwasbetweenherlegs.

Shehadbeenborrowedthatmorningfromafarmer.

Shehadneverbeentowarbefore.

Shehadnoideawhatgamewasbeingplayed.

HernamewasPrincess.—Jr.

KurtVonnegut;

Slaughterhouse-Five,3.—JohnSteinbeck:TheGrapesofWrath,Chap.6【译文】这只狗是一只母德国牧羊犬，在遥远的冬天听起来是那么凶猛.她颤抖着.她的尾巴夹在两腿之间.她是那天早上从一个农民那借来的.她以前从未上过战场.她不知道他们在玩什么把戏.她的名字叫公主.【生词】1.ferocious/fəˈrəʊʃəs/=veryaggressiveorviolent;verystrong

凶猛的；残暴的；猛烈的2.shiver

/ˈʃɪvə(r)/

=[

V]

~(withsth)(

ofaperson

人

)

toshakeslightlybecauseyouarecold,frightened,excited,etc.颤抖，哆嗦（因寒冷、恐惧、激动等）▲TheGreatBigYellowHorseIrememberonceoutatSt.Cloud.

Itwas

abigtwohundredthousandfranceracewithsevenentriesandKzar

abigfavorite.

Iwentaroundtopaddocktoseethehorseswithmyoldmanandyouneversawsuchhorses.

ThisKzarisagreatbigyellowhorse

thatlookslikejustnothingbutrun.

Ineversawsuchahorse.

Hewasbeingledaroundthepaddocks

withhisheaddown

andwhenhewentbyme

Ifeltallhollowinsidehewassobeautiful.

Thereneverwassuchawonderful,

lean,

runningbuilthorse.

Andhewentaroundthepaddock

puttinghisfeetjustsoandquietandcarefulandmovingeasy

likeheknewjustwhathehadtodoandnotjerkingandstandinguponhislegs

and

gettingwildeyedlikeyouseethesesellingplaterswithashotofdopeinthem.

ThecrowdwassothickIcouldn'tseehim

againexceptjusthislegsgoingbyandsomeyellow.——ErnestHemingway:

MyOldMan.【译文】我记得有一次到圣克卢去.那里有场二十万法郎的大奖赛，有七匹马参赛，克扎是一大热门.我跟老头儿一起顺便到练马场去看看参赛的马，那么棒的马你还从没见过呢.这匹克扎是一头高大的黄马，看上去只懂得跑.我从没见过这么棒的马.这匹马低着头，正给带着绕场转一圈，它跑过我眼前，我心里就觉得空落落，它真帅.从来没有一匹如此神气、生来善跑的瘦马.这骑马跑过练马场时，四脚落地恰到好处，沉着谨慎，行动从容，好像心中有数该怎么跑似的，既不颠动，也不竖起后腿来发威，眼睛一股煞气，像你所看见的那些身上注射过兴奋剂准备出售的劣等赛马那样.人群挤得密密麻麻，我再也看不见匹马，只看见它跑过时的腿和一些黄毛.【生词】francen.法郎entry

/ˈentri/

n.参赛总人数paddock/ˈpædək/=

asmallfieldwherehorsesarekept.(放牧马匹的)

小围场hollow

/ˈhɒləʊ/

adj.空心的；空洞的builtadj.有…体格的jerk

/dʒɜːk/

vi.

痉挛；急拉；颠簸地行进sellingplaters（美国俚语）(赛马用语)劣等赛马ashotofdope

一针兴奋剂thesesellingplaterswithashotofdopeinthem

这些注射过兴奋剂的蹩脚赛马【动物的外貌描写】1.apairoflargewateryeyes

一双水汪汪的大眼睛2.twobigroundeyes两只圆溜溜的大眼睛3.beady/sparkling/twinklingeyes小珠般圆亮的/亮晶晶的/闪闪发亮的

眼睛4.anoselikeasmallblackgem一颗黑宝石般的鼻子5.long/muscular/skinny/spindlylegs长的/肌肉发达的/皮包骨的/干瘦的

腿6.furisaswhiteassnow皮毛像雪一样洁白7.alonglittletail一条长长的小尾巴8.littleearsonthetopoftheheard头顶上长着对小耳朵【动物的动作描写】1.wagthetail

摇尾巴2.smell/sniff

嗅3.bark/yap/yelp

狗吠4.lick

舔5.puttheearsup

把耳朵竖起来6.shakethewholebody

抖动全身7.bitethecornerofthecoat

咬住衣角8.rubtheirnecksandbackswiththeirpaws

用爪子摩擦它们的脖子和背部9.holdittightlywiththepaws

用爪子紧紧按住10.fallonitsback

摔得四脚朝天11.runaroundme

围着我跑12.keepscratchingyouwithhisfrontpaws

用前爪不停挠你13.raiseitswholebodyonitshindlegs

用后腿支起全14.leaptoitsfeet

跳起来15.restthenoseinitspaws

把鼻子搁在爪子里16.keepitsforelegsdoubledup

保持前腿弯曲17.curluponthesofa蜷缩18.reachoutitsfluffypaws伸出毛茸茸的爪子19.popitsheadout探出头20.cling

totheedgeofthebox抓住边缘【动物类有关的环境描写】1.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp（嗅着气味来到我们的营地）,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.2.SeptemberismostbeautifulinStrathroy,wherepeoplewholeheartedlyenjoythesimplepleasuresoflifeandnature（人们全身心享受人生和大自然的简单乐趣）.3.AsIpaced,thesoundofmyfootstepswasaccompaniedonlybythegracefullywavingleaves（我的脚步声只有优雅地摇曳的叶子伴随）.【动物类有关的情绪描写】1、动物类有关的感谢描写：MacthankedPaulandBecky,

“HowgratefulIamthatyoustoppedtosavemeandIoweittoyouthatI’mstillalive（我是多么感激你停下来救我，我能活下来全是因为你。）.”2、动物类有关的高兴描写：(1)TheyweregladtoseePoppycoming

backtoherusualself（他们很高兴看到Poppy又回到以前的自己）,guidingthelittledogondailywalksandevenintroducingtoitherfavoritetoys.(2)Smilingeversobright（笑得更加灿烂。）,hecalledouttohis

parents,whotuggedhiminforalong

hug.(3)Herparentswatchedthemplayingaroundandsmiledwithrelief（轻松地笑了）–Poppywasbacktoheroldcheerfulself!(4)IhadjustfinishedwashingthelunchdisheswhenthedoorslammedandBeckyrushedin,cheeksflushedwithexcitement（激动得面红耳赤）.(5)Receivingapositiveanswer,Samwaswildwithjoy

（欣喜若狂）andRoland,wagginghistailmerrily,asifintoxicated（好像喝醉一样）.3、动物类有关的放松描写：(1)Oncethehelicopterlanded,wegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved（又兴奋又放松）.(2)Seeingallofthese,wesighedwithrelief（兴奋地叹气）,sparklesofdelightarisinginourfaces.(3)Thenearerthehelicoptergot,themoreexcitedandhopefulshewas（她就越兴奋和有希望）.4、动物类有关的害怕描写：(1)Terrified（非常害怕）,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.(2)Seeingtheapproachofthepolarbear,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch（被恐惧吓呆，害怕到动也不能动）.(3)MywifeElligraspedmyclothesandtrembled,

swallowinghard（抓住我的衣服，颤抖着，使劲吞口水）.(4)Anumbingchillgrippedme（一种麻木的寒战擢紧了我）.【动物类话题结尾的主题升华句】1.ElliandIlearnedourle