读后续写 个人成长 减轻体重和克服恐惧使自己变得更好 课件-2024届高考英语一轮复习

高考英语读后续写语篇练习个人成长——减轻体重和克服恐惧使自己变得更好1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Butthenitallstartedchanging.Somethingclicked.Isuddenlydeterminedtogoonadiet,andlostsomeweight.Itwastough.Ifelthungryallthetime.Iwasalwaystemptedbythesmellofbreadandhamburger,evenwhenIdidn’tseethem.ButthetoughestthingwasthatevenifIhadjusthadmymeals,Ifelthungermentally.However,Iheldon.Inoveraperiodof6monthsIfinallymanagedtosticktooneofmydiets.Ididn’tknowhow.ButIdidmakeit.Thelossof90lbsbroughtmefromoverweightstraightdowntounderweight.Thisisn’tthebestpart.Moreimportantlyandinspiringly,Isuddenlyfoundstrengthinme.IrealizedIcouldbetotallydifferent.Andmaybe,IcouldevenbewhateverIwantedtobe.ThistaughtmethatIcouldchangemyself.ThenIwondered,perhaps,Icouldalsogetridofthoseofmyfears,justlikeIsucceededinlosingmyextrapounds.Itmightnotbeeasy,butitmightnotbethatdifficult.4续写原文Withhimyellingbyme,myeardrumsalmostgotbroken,forhismouthwassoclosetomyears.Forawhile,Ieventhoughtofshoutingbackathimandstoppinghisyelling.Peoplearoundwereturningtolookathim,andIcouldreadtheirthoughts,“Ishenevergoingtostop?”ButHeseemedblindtothoselooks.Athalf-time,Iescapedbywalkingforafewminutesoutsidethestadium.Iwasthinkingofseekinganemptyseatinthestudentsectionacrossthestadium,buttomydisappointment,theseatswerealltaken.Ihadnochoicebuttogobacktotheguy.Tomakemattersworse,whenreturningtomyseat,Imissedmystepsandfellheavilyonthestairs.AsIwasstrugglingtostandup,apairofhugehandshelpedmefrombehind.5段首句Para1:Chancepresenteditselfsoon.Para2:ItwasfromthatpointonthatIstartedchangingrapidly.6Part2题目分析7点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点8续写思路分析本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在成长的过程中如何找到力量去改变自己——减轻体重和克服恐惧使自己变得更好的故事。9续写思路分析Para1:Chancepresenteditselfsoon.由第一段首句内容“机会很快就出现了。”可知，第一段可描写作者利用公开演讲如何摆脱内心恐惧的经过。10续写思路分析Para2:ItwasfromthatpointonthatIstartedchangingrapidly.由第二段首句内容“从那时起，我就开始迅速地改变了。”可知，第二段可描写作者在成功减重和摆脱恐惧之后，很快地进行了其他方面的自身改变。11续写思路分析续写线索公开演讲——摆脱恐惧——其他改变——感悟12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①消失：disappear/vanish②摆脱：getridof/extricateoneselffrom③开始：start/begin情绪类害怕：fear/dread13续写素材可用句型：[高分句型1].UsingthefactthatIcouldchange,andthatIcouldgetridofmyfears,Istartedworkingonthemonebyone.(由第一个that引导的定语从句和第二个that引导的同位语从句，现在分词作状语)[高分句型2]Myfearofgreetingstrangers,myfearoftalkingtostrangers,myfearofaskingsimplequestionsIshould‘alreadyknow’,myfearofhangingoutwithpeople,myfearofnotknowingthings,myfearofmakingnewfriends,classmatesandteachers,myfearofbeingmyself,allofwhichhelpmakemeabetterone.(“代词+of+which”结构的非限制性定语从句)14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现Chancepresenteditselfsoon.Onesingletime,Iheardaboutapublicspeakingthinggoingonatmyuniversity,andforthefirsttime,Iactuallymanagedtobuildupthecouragetogothere.Itwasliberating.ForthefirsttimeIwasabletosharemystory,andabletodoitinfrontofdozensofpeoplepotentiallyjudgingme,andsuddenlyalltherandomfearsaboutspeakingpubliclystarteddisappearing.ThistaughtmeIcouldgetridofmyfears.16范文呈现ItwasfromthatpointonthatIstartedchangingrapidly.UsingthefactthatIcouldchange,andthatIcouldgetridofmyfears,Istartedworkingonthemonebyone.Myfearofgreetingstrangers,myfearoftalkingtostrangers,myfearofaskingsimplequestionsIshould‘alreadyknow’,myfearofhangingoutwithpeople,myfearofnotknowingthings,myfearofmakingnewfriends,classmatesandteachers,myfearofbeingmyself,allofwhichhelpmakemeabetterone.17范文译文机会很快就出现了。有一次，我听说我的大学正在进行公开演讲，这是我第一次鼓起勇气去那里。这是一种解放。我第一次能够分享我的故事，并且能够在几十个可能评判我的人面前分享，突然间，所有对公开演讲的随机恐惧都开始消失了。这教会了我可以摆脱恐惧。18范文译文正是从那时起，我开始迅速改变。利用我可以改变的事实，我可以