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高考快递NMET书面表达评分标准：第五档(很好)(21-25分)完全完成了试题规定的要求。—覆盖所有的内容要点。—应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。—语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构和较高级词汇所致，具有较强的语言运用能力。—有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。2.

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邮编：424100一、适当地使用一些单词、词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采，丰富语气的表现力。1.A

new

building

is

being

built

in

our

school.A

new

building

is

under

construction

in

our

school.It

is

raining

heavily.It

is

raining

cats

and

dogs.The

PRC

was

founded

in

the

year

1949.The

year

1949

saw

the

foundationof

the

PRC.二、尽量避免过多地重复使用某一单词。I

like

reading

while

he

likes

playing

football.I

like

reading

while

he

enjoys

playing

football.When

summer

comes,

the

day

is

getting

longer

andlonger,

and

the

night

is

getting

shorter

and

shorter.When

summer

comes,

the

day

is

getting

longer

andlonger,

and

the

night

shorter

and

shorter.三、可适当地打破常规，用一些倒装句、强调句或感叹句,可以为文意的表达增添一点新意。The

girl

was

hardworking

and

careful,

and

she

passed the

test.Hardworking

and

careful,

the

girl

passed

the

test.I

hit him

in

the

face.It’s

I

who

hit him

in

the

face.I am

glad

that

you

have

made

so

much

progress.How

glad

I’m

that

you

have

made

so

much

progress.四、使用主从复合句、分词、不定式等来代替简单句，能使书面表达行文更加流畅有力。He

was

very

humorous.

We

all

like

to

play

with

him.He

lay

on

the

grass,

counting

the

stars

in

the

sky.We

are

studying

hard

in

order

to

pass

the

entrance examination.In

order

to

pass

the

entrance

examination,

we

arestudying

hard.He

lay

on

the

grass

and

counted

the

stars

in

the

sky.He

lay

on

the

grass,

counting

the

stars

in

the

sky.五、改变句子开头方式，适当地把一些成份提前位于句子的开头，使整个句子读起来跌宕起伏，增加书面表达的表现力。A

temple stood

between

the

two

buildings

,

in

which

an old

monk

lived.Between

the

two

buildings stood

a

temple,

inwhich

an old

monk

lived.The

remains

of

Tom

is

floating

on

the

surface

of

theriver.On

the

surface

of

the river

is

floating

the

remains

of

Tom.As

he

was

deep

in

thought,

he

forgot

his

lunch. Deep

in

thought,

he

forgot

his

lunch.;表示时间;表示并列等。六、注意语句间的衔接与连贯，可使全文结构紧凑，层次清楚过渡自然。英语中的关联词语可以称之为“篇章的纽带”，这些关联词first,

later,

then,finally语可以是表示顺序的，如now,

at

present,

in

the

past,

during

the

day的:and,

or或选择的：because,

so,

thanks

tolaterAfter

graduation,

he worked

as

a

teacher,thenpost

office, he

quitted

his

job

and

did

business,he

became

a

millionaire.in

afinally;表因果的:first二00一年高考英语优秀书面表达赏析[原题]假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下面提供的信息，写一封回信，談一談减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。周末活动（减负前）周末活动（减负后）白天：上课、做作业白天：参加博物馆、学习电脑、绘画等晚上：做作业晚上：看新闻、读书、看报就寝时间：11：30就寝时间：10：00Dear

Dick,How

nice

to

hear

from

you

again.

In

your

letter,

you

asked

meabout

the

reduction of

learning

load

in

China.

Now,

I’ll

tell

yousomething

about

it.In

the

past,

we

had

lots

of

homework

to

do

and

had

little

timeto

do

other

things.

Even

on

weekends,

we

went

to

school

and

didhomework

in

the

daytime,

and

still

did

homework

at

night.

Iusually

went

to

bed

at

11:30,

so

I

felt

sleepy

the

next

day.Now,

after

reducing

learning

load,

we

have

much

more

sparetime.

On

weekends,

I

usually

go

to

museums,

study

computer,and

do

some

drawing

and

so

on.

At

night,

I

often

watc