2023年自考类英语自考英语写作基础历年高频考题带答案难题附详解

2023年自考类英语自考英语写作基础历年高频考题带答案难题附详解（图片大小可自由调整）第1卷一.历年考点试题黑钻版(共50题)1.Wereluctantlyacceptedouremployees'request.Theyrequestedforextendedcoffeebreaks.(simplesentence)2.Alandidnotknowthathehadwontheraceuntilhecrossedthelineandfeltthetapesnapagainsthischest.(periodicsentence)3.Writealetterofjobapplicationaccordingtothefollowingsituation:ProfessorLiuwhooncetaughtyouatuniversityresignedlastyearandbecamepresidentofChungHwaCommercialBank.Asabankingmajor,writealettertohiminordertoseekapositioninthebank.PleasesignyournameasLiPing.(150-200words)4.Therearethreeboyswhoaremastersofoperatingcomputerprograms,Tomisthegreatestone.5.Alicelikestolistentoclassicalmusic,andJessicalikestolistentoclassicalmusictoo.(simplesentence)6.Therainbecameheavy.Makingitimpossibletocontinuewiththegame.7.Topassthecourse,yourtermpapermustbehandedinontime.8.Thenshewentonnervouslywithherwork.Knitting.9.Ihaveanewdigitalcamera,butIdon'tknowhowtouseitproperly.(compound-complexsentence)10.Thenextafternoonwecametothewaterfall.Themostbeautifulsightonourjourney.11.ReadthefollowingparagraphcarefullyandchoosethebesttopicsentencefromthefourpossibleanswersthatfollowtheparagraphbywritingA,B,CorD.

TopicSentence.______

Afewyearsago,letterwritingwasthemostimportantmeansofcommunicationandpeopleseldommadephonecalls,especiallyintheruralareas,becausetherewerenotmanytelephonesavailable.WiththerapiddevelopmentofChina'seconomy,telecommunicationserviceisbadlyneeded.Forexample,whenmanyyoungChinesegoabroadtoworkortostudy,theywanttogetintouchwiththeirfolksregularlyandeasily.PrivatecompanieshavemushroomedalloverChina;businessmenrealizetheimportanceoftelephone.Inthecountryside,lettersusuallytakeseveraldaysorweeks,andmuchtimewillbewasted,sopeoplehavedreamedformanyyearstohavetelephoneservice.Sincemanyfamiliesaregettingrich,theycanafforditnow.

A.Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplerelyheavilyonthetelephoneinsteadofletters.

B.Nowadaysletterwritingisthemostimportantmeansofcommunication.

C.Internetisthemostimportantmeansofcommunicationtoday.

D.ManyfamiliesinChinaaregettingrichnow.12.Thoughcheerfulincompany,hewasoftensadinprivate.(loosesentence)13.Choosethebesttopicsentencefromthefouroptionsbelow.WritethecorrespondingletterofyourchoiceontheAnswerSheet.A.Somepoliticalpartieshaveadoptedanimalstorepresentthem.B.Carsaregivenanimalnamestomakeconsumersassociatethemwithspeedandgrace.C.Manyprofessionalsportsteams,suchastheTigersandRams,havechosenanimalnamestosuggestpower.D.Manypeopleintheworldholdanimalsinsuchhighregardthattheyuseanimals'namesfortheirorganizationsandproducts.14.Ihavecheckedmydocumentsseveraltimes.Istillcan'tfindtheproblem.(compoundsentence)15.Walkedalongtheriver,Iranintoahighschoolfriendofmine.16.Wheretogo,whentostartandwhatotherthingsweshouldpayspecialattentionto.Wehavetodiscussnow.17.Tokeepthegirlstudentsinterestedingettinginshape,anexerciseprogramwassetupforthesummermonths.18.Theyhavebeenengagedintheworkalldaylong.Withoutarest.19.Anewblouseinafashionablecolorcanupdateanoldoutfit;incontrast,addingdramaticjewelryoranattractivescarfcanmakeanoldoutfitseemnew.20.Heinvitedallhisgoodfriendstohiswedding.JackandJoeywereincluded.(simplesentence)21.Thearticleisdifficulttounderstandnotbecausethevocabularyistechnicalbutbecauseofthecomplicatedsentencestructure.22.Thestorywasinteresting.Itwasnotbelievable.(complexsentence)23.Asherweddingdateapproached,IthinkthatIwasalmostasexcitedasmysister.Sheclaimsshedidnotsleepatalltheweekbeforethewedding,andIdon'treallythinkIdideither.UsuallyIgotobedabout10:30,andsleepuntilaround7:30.Iknowthatatleasttwoofthosenightswesatupallnightreviewingplans,checkingtoseethatwehaddoneeverythingonour"todo"list.Twodaysbeforethewedding,myexcitementhadreachedsuchapeakthatIdidn'teveneat.Iusuallyenjoyeatingalotofcandieseveryday.MaybeIhadborrowedlovefrommysisterandwaslivingonit,butIjustwentsailingthroughtheday,fullofenergyandnottheleastbithungry.Onthedayofthewedding,Iwasupat4:30inthemorning,shoutingateveryonetogetup.Ievenbegantogetdressedfortheweddinganhourbeforemysisterdid.AndafterIwasdressedinmybridesmaid'sgown,Icouldn'tsitdown.Ijustpacedthefloor—foranentirehour.Idon'tthinkIcouldtakehavingasistergetmarriedveryoften.24.Smallbusinessesgrowintobiggerones.Addingtotheeconomicvitality.25.HowmuchthereistolearnandhowmuchIdon'tyetknowisoneofthemostimportantthingsI'velearned.(periodicsentence)26.You(LiuDan)receivedapresentofsomemoneyfromarelative.Writealettertothankhimorherforthepresentandsaywhatyouintendtodowithit,suchaspayingtheregistrationfeefornewcoursesandrents,andbuyingtextbooksandreferencebooks.Promisethatyouwillkeephimorherinformedofyourlifeandstudyatschool.(150～200words)27.Wehaveallusedphysicaldatabasessinceourgrammarschooldays.Grammarschoolisknown

todayasgradeschoolorelementaryschool.Ourclassyear-books,telephonebooks,shoeboxesfullofreceiptsdocumentingvariousbillswehavepaid-thesearealldatabasesinoneformoranother,foradatabaseisnothingmorethanacollectionofinformationorganizedtoallowretrieval(取回)ofthatinformationincertainways.Anyonewhoiswellorganizedhasabetterchanceofsucceedingincollegeorinthebusinessworld.28.ZhangHuaispickingupnewvocabularyveryfast.Thespeedisamazing.(complexsentence)29.Itwasnearlydark.Asnowmobileappeared.Thesnowmobilewasroaring.Itwasrunningwithoutlights.IthitMrs.Li.30.Iforgotthetime.Imissedthetrain.(complexsentence)31.Sheshoutedandcriedforalongtimeasshewasextremelydisturbed.(sentencewithaverb-edphrase)32.Writealetterofthanksaccordingtothefollowingsituation:Yourfriendsentyouabirthdaygiftfromabroad.Writetohim/hertoexpressyourappreciation,explainwhyyoulikethegiftandaskabouthis/hersituation.PleasesignyournameasLiFei.(150-200words)33.Theyploddedalongthetrailallday.Withoutarest.34.Itwasmid-Junethemorningwegraduated,andIfaintedinthehugehallfortheCommencement(毕业典礼)fromtheheat.AfterwardsFrani'sparentstookseveralofustolunchattheSilverSwan.Mygrandparentshadnotcomefortheoccasion,butsentmeacheckforatriptoEurope-thatwasagraduationpresent,andaweddingpresentaswell,theywrote.Yes,thedecisionofmarriagehadeventuallybeenmade.Wehadalreadyhadaninterviewwiththecurate(牧师助理),anditwasexactlyoneweekaftertheCommencementandmytwenty-firstbirthdaywhenwe"stoodup"togetherinthechapel.JohntoldmethatIwouldneverbecomeagoodactress.Wehadaone-nighthoneymoonataninninBriarcliff,andthereallofasuddenIhadanattackofpanic.Asweclimbedintothebigbed,Iknew,toolate,thatIhaddonethewrongthing.Tomarryamanwithoutlovinghim,whichwaswhatIhadjustdone,notreallyperceivingit,wasawickedaction,Isaw.Stiffwithremorseandterror,Ilayunderthethinblanketthroughagoodpartofthenight.35.Mikeis18andhandsome.Hewearsapairofsunglasses.(longsentence)36.Hewalksslowlybehindme.Asifhedoesnotseemewalkingafewmetresahead.37.Sheclosedhereyes.Thinkingbackthroughtheyearsofbeingmother,wife,friend,daughter,andsister.38.Theobjectivesincludereducingthegreenhousegases,increasinggreenerycoverageandtoimposeheaviertaxesontheenterpriseswhichreleaseuntreatedwastetorivers.39.Thisisarichcountry.Therearelotsofpoorpeople.(compoundsentence)40.Relievedofyourresponsibilitiesatyourjob,yourhomeshouldbeaplacetorelax.41.Atlastmywishisrealized.ThegovernmenthasgrantedmepermissiontogototheWest.(complexsentence)42.Helookedforwardtothestudyperiodatschool.Itbeingtheonlytimehecouldsitunbotheredanddreamabouthisfuture.43.HanSoloisoneoftheheroesofStarWars.Heisabravebutself-centeredpilot.(simplesentence)44.Aftercorrectingallthemistakes,theseconddraftofthepaperwasmuchbetterthanthefirst.45.Writealetterofcomplaintsaccordingtothefollowingsituation:You(LiuDan)boughtanairconditionerinSunAppliancesandhaditinstalledtheotherday,butyoufoundthatthefanmadetoomuchnoisewhenthemachineoperated.Youdemandthestoretosendarepresentativetocheckitup.Inyourletter,providethespecificdefectsoftheairconditioner,thedateofpurchase,theserialnumberofitandthewaytocontactyou.(150～200words)46.Hefailedanumberofcoursesbeforeheearnedhisdegree.Amongthem,English,EconomicsandGeneralBiology.47.Lakeyisthemostbeautifuloneofthegroupofgirls.Sheisalsothemostintelligentandthemostresourcefuloneofthem.(sentencewithparallelstructure)48.Wehaveallusedphysicaldatabasessinceourgrammarschooldays.Grammarschoolisknowntodayasgradeschoolorelementaryschool.Ourclassyear—books,telephonebooks,shoeboxesfullofreceiptsdocumentingvariousbillswehavepaid—thesearealldatabasesinoneformoranother,foradatabaseisnothingmorethanacollectionofinformationorganizedtoallowretrieval(取回)ofthat

informationincertainways.Anyonewhoiswellorganizedhasabetterchanceofsucceedingincollegeorinthebusinessworld.49.Ireturnedtoschoolfollowingalongillness.Themathsteachergavememake-upworktodo,butthehistoryteachermademedrophercourse.(compound-complexsentence)50.Iamtired.Ihavetofinishtheassignmenttonight.(complexsentence)第1卷参考答案一.历年考点试题黑钻版1.参考答案：Wereluctantlyacceptedouremployees'requestforextendedcoffeebreaks.[解析]此题要求把句子改为简单句。在此题中，主要是把前后两个句子合并为一句话，并且在这句话中只能有一套主谓结构。只要把后一句话中修饰request的短语“extendedcoffeebreak”移到前一句，修饰前一句的request即可。2.参考答案：Notuntilhecrossedthelineandfeltthetapesnapagainsthischest,didAlanknowthathehadwontherace.[解析]原句是一个松散句，要求变为掉尾句。原句的主句部分为until前面的内容，变为掉尾句时，该部分要移至句尾。需要注意的是notuntil位于句首时，主句要采用倒装语序。译文：直到他冲过终点，胸部撞到终点线之后，艾兰才知道他赢了比赛。3.参考答案：January20,2016DearProf.Liu,

ItisayearsinceIlastsawyou.Ihopeyouhavebeenfaringalongverywell.IhavejustlearnedfromthepressthehappynewsthatyouarenowthepresidentoftheChungHwaCommercialBank.Wouldyoubesokindastoputmynamedownasastaffmemberofyourbank?

IremainedatKangnanUniversityafteryourresignationlastyear,andgraduatedfromtheSchoolofCommercewithabachelor'sdegreelastsummer.Asbankingwasthemajorareaofmyfouryears'study,Iamanxioustogetabankpositionsoastomakeprofitableuseofmytraining.Iwillacceptanystartingsalary,formyobjectiveistogainexperienceinthecommercialbankingfromthebottom.Ishallfeelentirelycontentifthepositionoffersprospectsofpromotion.Astomypersonality,IsupposeyoustillrememberthatIamindustriousandconscientious.Hopingyouwillfavormewithanearlyreply.

Yoursrespectfully,

LiPing[解析]本题要求写一封求职信。写信时需要涉及的内容包括：写信的目的；自身学习情况以及性格等；对待工作的态度。写信时要有日期和称呼，最后要表达祝愿之情，签署姓名。4.参考答案：Therearethreeboyswhoaremastersofpperatingcomputerprograms,Tombeingthegreaestone.[解析]本题考查串句的修改。此题可直接将s改成being，从而使后半部分成为独立主格结构，从属于前面的主句。5.参考答案：BothAliceandJessicaliketolistentoclassicalmusic.[解析]首先来看译文：爱丽丝喜欢听古典音乐，杰西卡也喜欢听古典音乐。该句是由and连接的一个并列句，要求把它变为简单句。并列句是由处于同等地位的几套主谓结构的句子组成，而简单句则只有一套主谓结构。做这类题的关键是看原句的几个部分中哪些成分是重合的。显然，谓语部分是相同的，那么只要把主语部分Alice和Jessica重新并列组合即可，用and或者both...and...均可。需注意的是：当主语的单复数形式改变时，谓语动词也要有相应变化。6.参考答案：Therainbecameheavy,makingitimpossibletocontinuewiththegame.[解析]本题考查-ing分词引起的破句的修改。此类题可直接将-ing分词与前面句子连接。7.参考答案：Topassthecourse,youmusthandinyourtermpaperontime.[解析]本题错误是由垂悬修饰语引起的。修改这类错误的方法之一是找出隐含主语使前后句子逻辑上的主语一致。前面不定式的施动者是you，所以后面句子的逻辑主语不应为yourtermpaper。8.参考答案：Thenshewentonnervouslywithherknitting.[解析]这是一个由-ing分词引起的破句。当-ing分词处于一组词的首位或靠近首位时就有可能出现破句。这样的句子缺少主语或谓语动词的一部分，不完整，改正这类破句的方法有三个：(1)让破句与其前或其后的句子连接起来，使意思完整；(2)增添主句，把-ing部分变为动词的正确形式；(3)把being改为be的恰当形式。在此病句中，只有knitting这个-ing形式，弄不清楚它是主语还是谓语，根据前句意思，它应该是动名词形式，修改时可将其与前句合并。9.参考答案：Ihaveanewdigitalcamera,butIdon'tknowhowIcanuseitproperly.[解析]原句是一个并列句，要求转化为并列复合句。从原句的句法形态可看出原句的两个分句之间已经是并列关系，故在变为并列复合句时，只需要把其中的一句或两句变成复合结构(即转化为含有某种从句的结构)。观察可知，前半句无法改成一个从句，故只能将第二句改成复合句，可以把how加不定式部分改为宾语从句。译文：我有一个新的数码相机，但我不知道怎么用它。10.参考答案：Thenextafternoonwecametothewaterfall,themostbeautifulsightonourjourney.[解析]这是一个因增加细节引起的破句，这种破句通常缺少主语或者谓语。改正这类破句的一般方法是把破句与其前具有完整意义的话语连接起来，为破句增加主语和谓语动词，必要时可改变字词。在这句话中后一句话是前面“waterfall”的同位语，因此不用为后一句添加主语或者谓语，只需把它用逗号和主句隔开即可。11.参考答案：Topicsentence：A[解析]通过段落的第一句话可以排除选项B。由于全文中一直没有出现Internet这个词，所以选项C也可以排除。文章主要描述的内容是电话在现代社会越来越普及，代替了信件。这虽然和中国经济的发展有关，但中国人越来越富只是电话普及的一个条件，并不是主要内容，因此选项D也不正确。所以选A。12.参考答案：Hewasoftensadinprivatethoughcheerfulincompany．[解析]本题考查松句和掉尾句之间的转换，题目中心意思是“Hewasoftensadinprivate”，将其提至句首即可。13.参考答案：A[解析]主题句是一段话的主题思想，通常是表示一般概念的句子，范围不能太大或太小，不能太笼统或太具体。B项“以动物名字命名的汽车使消费者联想到速度和魅力”和C项“许多职业球队像老虎和公羊，用动物名字来展示力量”太过具体，而D项“世界上的很多人将动物的地位看得很高，他们将动物作为自己组织和产品的名字”太过笼统，给出的信息较多，没有体现内容的限制。A项“一些政党利用动物来代表自己”指明了主题是“动物”，又将范围限定在“政党和动物之间的关系”上，因此最符合主题句的要求。14.参考答案：Ihavecheckedmydocumentsseveraltimes,yet/butIstillcan'tfindtheproblem.[解析]译文：我已经把我的文件检查了好几遍了。我还是没有发现有什么问题。本题是两个简单句，要求变成一个并列句。并列句是处于同等地位的两套主谓结构的结合。做这类题的关键在于准确选择并列连词。根据逻辑，很显然，两句为转折关系，可用并列连词but或yet连接。15.参考答案：Walkingalongtheriver,Iranintoahishschoolfriendofmine.[解析]本题中“walkedalongtheriver”是后面句子的状语成分，但由于“I”和“walked”是主谓关系，故应将“walked”改为“walking”。16.参考答案：Wehavetodiscussnowwheretogo,whentostartandwhatotherthingsweshouldpayattentionto.[解析]此题也是由从属连词引起的破句。改正方式是和后一句话连接起来，组成一个句子，前一句话作宾语从句。17.参考答案：Tokeepthegirlstudentsinterestedingettinginshape,theysetupanexercisepro-gramforthesummermonths.[解析]本题属于垂悬修饰语错误，修改方法是找出句子隐含主语。该题中的不定式部分找不到逻辑主语，改正时要明确动作的实施者。18.参考答案：Theyhavebeenengagedintheworkalldaylongwithoutarest.[解析]此句也是一个破句。改正的方法就是让后一句和前一句连接起来，做前一句的状语。19.参考答案：Anewblouseinafashionablecolorcanupdateanoldoutfit;bycomparison,addingdramaticjewelryoranattractivescarfcanmakeanoldoutfitseemnew.[解析]译文：颜色时尚的上衣足以为一件旧衣服增添光彩；相比较而言，加一串光彩夺目的珠宝或者一条引人注目的围巾也会使旧衣裳焕然一新。updateanoldoutfit和makeanoldoutfitseemnew意思是一样的，都是“使旧衣服变新”的意思，因此前后两个分句强调的是相同点而非不同点，而incontrast指的是两者之间的不同，因此应改为强调两者之间相同点的bycomparison。20.参考答案：Heinvitedallhisgoodfriendstohiswedding,JackandJoeybeingincluded.[解析]本题考查把两个句子组合成一个简单句。题目中第二个句子将动词be转换成分词being后，后半部分就成了前面句子的状语，符合要求。21.参考答案：Thearticleisdifficulttounderstandnotbecausethevocabularyistechnicalbutbecausethesentencestructureiscomplicated.[解析]本句中由not...but...引起的两部分内容，在句法功能上，都是状语，但在语法表现形式上却不相同，属于典型的错误平行结构。改正时只需将两部分内容都变成由because引导的状语从句即可。22.参考答案：Althoughthestorywasinteresting,itwasnotbelievable.[解析]同样先看泽文的意思，这个故事很精彩，令人难以相信。原句同样是两个简单句，要求我们变为复合句。现在把简单句变为复合句，同样先判断这两个句子的主从地位。根据句意，我们可以看出两个句子的意思前后有很大的转折。这样我们就可以确定从属连同可以用表语气转折的although；but等。23.参考答案：(1)UsuallyIgotobedabout10:30andsleepuntil7:30.

(2)Iusuallyenjoyeatingalotofcandieseveryday.[解析]阅读后不难发现，本文作者是在描述姐姐在结婚之日将要来临以及结婚之日既紧张又兴奋的心情导致很多不寻常的事发生的情况。文章论述的核心点是不寻常的事，故表示寻常行为的第三句和第六句应当删掉。24.参考答案：Smallbusinessesgrowintobiggerones,addingtotheeconomicvitality.[解析]本题考查的是-ing分词引起的破句。当-ing分词处于一组词的首位或靠近首位时，就有可能出现破句。改正这类破句的方法有三个：(1)将破句与其前或其后的句子连接起来，使语义完整；(2)增添主语，把-ing部分变为动词的正确形式；(3)把being改为be的恰当形式。此题可以用逗号让破句与其前的句子连接起来，使语义完整。25.参考答案：OneofthemostimporantthingsI'velearnedishowmuchthereistolearnandhowmuchIdon'tyetknow.[解析]本题考查的是松句和掉尾句之间的转换。本题中心意思是HowmuchthereistolearnandhowmuchIdon'tyetknow，将其与后半部分位置互换即可。26.参考答案：

Oct.20,2005

DearAuntie,

Iammostgratefultoyouforsendingmetheamountofmoney.Idon'tknowhowtothankyouenough.

Indeed,themoneyyougavemejustmeetsmyneed.Atpresent,Ihaveregisteredtwocoursesinself-schoolingandwilltaketheexamsprettilysoon.Andit'stimeformetoregisteranothercourseapartfromEnglishandcomputer.Somemoneyisneededuponregistration,forinstance,payingtheregistrationfeeandbuyingnecessarybooksforthenewcourses.Besides,someofthemoneywillgotomylodging.Ihavesharedaroomwithaclassmateofmineinaplaceclosetomyschool.

ThankyouonceagainforyourtimelyhelpsothatIcouldgoonwithmystudy.Itwillprobablytakeanotheryeartocompleteallthecoursesandgetmydiploma.I'llhaveyouinformedofmylifeandstudyatschoolandI'lltrymybestnottoletyoudown.

Withlove,

LiuDan[解析]本文要求写一封感谢信，感谢信的内容应包含：①表示对亲戚的感谢；②收到钱以后对其的利用情况；③向他(她)告知自己的状况并再次表示感谢。

Usefulexpressions:

(1)Iammostgratefultoyouforsendingmemoney.

(2)Yourmoneyindeedmeetmyneed.

(3)Icanuseittopay....

(4)I'lltrymybestnottoletyoudown.27.参考答案：Wehaveallusedphysicaldatabasessinceourgrammarschooldays.Grammarschoolisknowntodayasgradeschoolorelementaryschool.Ourclassyear-books,telephonebooks,shoeboxesfullofreceiptsdocumentingvariousbilkswehavepaid—thesearealldatabasesinoneformoranother,foradatabaseisnothingmorethanacollectionofinformarionorganizedtoallowretrieval(取回)ofthatinformationincertainways.Anyonewhoiswellorganizedhasabetterchanceofsucceccdingincollegeorinthebusinessworld.[解析]本段话的大概意思是：我们从上语法学校起就开始使用物理数据库了。语法学校在今天称为年级学校或小学。我们的班级年鉴、电话簿和装满了收据的鞋盒——这些都是不同形式的数据库，因为一个数据库也不过是可以用某种方式取回整理好的信息的一种形式而已。任何一个善于规划的人都有更大的希望在大学或商业界中获得成功。本段的主题是数据库的特点，而第二句和末句与此无关，故可删除。28.参考答案：ThespeedwhichZhangHuaispickingupnewvocabularyveryfast,isamazing.[解析]原句是两个简单句，要求变成复合句。复合句是含有从句和主句的句子，主句部分常常是一句话的中心，从句部分由从属连词引导。本题中，speed是联系两个句子的纽带，本题主要讲第二句，即速度很惊人，所以将第一句改为第二句主语speed的定语从句。29.参考答案：Itwasnearlydark,andtheroaringsnowmobilewithoutlightshitMrs.Li.[解析]原句由几个简单句构成。第一句意思为“天快黑了”。第二句意为“一辆机动雪橇出现了”。第三句为“机动雪橇呼啸着”。第四句为“它没开车灯向前飞跑着”。第五句为“它撞上了李太太”。第一句显然是说明事情发生的时间，二句和五句说明了事情的经过和结果，三、四句则可以改为对第二句主语的补充修饰。30.参考答案：BecauseIforgotthetime，Imissedthetrain.[解析]本题考查把句子改为复合句。复合句是有主有从的句子，所以把意思较为次要的句子转化为从句即可。由于两句话之间是因果关系，所以应把第一句话转化为表示原因的从句，用because引导。31.参考答案：Extremelydisturbed,sheshoutedandcriedforalongtime.[解析]本题考查将句子改写为含动词-ed分词的句子。动词的过去分词和副词一起构成动词-ed短语作状语。32.参考答案：June23,2016DearAnna,

I'msohappytogetthebirthdaygiftyousentme.I'msohappythatyoustillremembermybirthday.Thankyousomuchforyourkindnessandthesurprise.

Thescarfyouchoseformeisverybeautifulandfashionable.Bothitscolorandstylearemyfavorite.YesterdayeveningIworeitatmycolleagueget-togetheranditmatchedmybluedressverywell.MycolleaguesallsaidthatIlookedstylishandelegantinthescarf.Ithinkit'ssuitableforcasualwearandofficedressaswell.Youalwaysknowwhatisbestforme!

HowisyourlifeinAmerica?Haveyoudecidedwhethertocontinueyourstudyortowork?Anyway,I'msureyoucanmaketherightchoice.Bytheway,ourclassmatesareplanningagatheringinJulynextyear.Willyoujoinus?Wehaven'tseeneachotherforfiveyearssincegraduation!

Lookingforwardtohearingfromyon.Ican'twaittoseeyou.

Yonrs

LiFei[解析]本题要求写一封感谢信，信中的内容包括：表达自己的感谢之情；阐述自己喜欢这份生日礼物的原因；询问对方的近况。写信时要有日期和称呼，最后要表达祝愿之情，同时要注意签署姓名的时候不要用自己的名字，要用LiFei来代替。33.参考答案：Theyploddedalongthetrailalldaywithoutarest.[解析]此句也是一个破句。改正的方法就是让后一句和前一句连接起来，作前一句的状语。34.参考答案：Itwasmid-Junethemorningwegraduated,andIfaintedinthehugehallfortheCommencement(毕业典礼)frontheheat.AfterwardsFrani'sparentstookseveralofustolunchattheSilverSwan.Mygrandparentshadnotcomefortheoccasion,butsentmeacheektoratriptoEurope-thatwasagraduationpresent,andaweddingpresentaswell,theywrote.Yes,thedecisionofmarriagehadeventuallyheenmade.Wehadalreadyhadaninterviewwiththecurate(牧师助理),anditwasexactlyoneweekaftertheCommencementandmytwenty-firstbirthdaywhenwe"stoodup"togetherinthechapel.Johntold.methatIwouldneverbecomeagoodactress.Wehadaone-nighthoneynloonataninninBriarcliff.andthereallofasuddenIhadanattackofpanic.Asweelimbedintothebigbed,Iknew,toolate,thatIhaddonethewrongthing.Tomanyamanwithoutlovinghim,whichwaswhatIhadiustdone,notreallyperceivillgit,wasawiekedaction,Isaw.Stiffwithremorseandterror.Ilayunderthethinblanketthroughagoodpartofthenight.[解析]此题主要考查段落的统一性。统一性要求段落的支持句都必须围绕段落主题句的中心思想展开，并要求各句在人称、时态、文体等方面相互保持一致。任何与主题关联不大的内容都应予以删除。这段话主要讲的是：六月中旬的一个早上作者毕业了，由于太热，在举行毕业典礼时作者昏倒在大厅里。她的祖父母并没有来参加这个毕业典礼，但却送给她一张去欧洲旅行的支票作为毕业礼物，同时也是结婚礼物.由此引出作者结婚的事。作者已经决定要结婚了，婚礼定在毕业典礼后的一周，也就是作者21岁生日时。然后叙述作者在Briarcliff的一个小旅馆度蜜月时的感受。由此可知，文章主要讲的是作者结婚的事，所以第二句是多余的。第六句也与所讲内容无关，也应删去。35.参考答案：Mike,whois18,ishandsome,andhewearsapairofsunglasses.[解析]本题考查将句子改写为长句。长短句一般是根据句子的长短和词的多少来说的。短句多是简单句，而长句多是并列句、复合句和并列复合句。也有简单句是长句，而复合句是短句的情况。题目要求将句子改为长句，可以把“18”和“handsome”两个词中的一个作定语修饰Mike，另一个作表语，再将后句与前句用and连接即可。36.参考答案：Hewalksslowlybehindmeasifhedoesnotseemewalkingafewinetresahead.[解析]本题考查破句的修改。修改方法是将后句直接和前句连接，句号改成逗号，As首字母小写。37.参考答案：Sheclosedhereyes,thinkingbackthroughtheyearsofbeingmother,wife,friend,daughter,andsister.[解析]此题是一个ing分词引起的破句。当ing分词处于一组词的首位或靠近首位时，就有可能出现破句。这样的句子缺少主语或缺少谓语动词的一部分，语义不完整。改正这类破句的方法有三个：(1)让破句与其前或其后的句子连接起来，使语义完整；(2)增添主语，把ing部分变为动词的正确形式；(3)把being改为be的恰当形式。此题可以用逗号让破句与其前的句子连接起来，使语义完整。38.参考答案：Theobjectivesincludereducingthegreenhousegases,increasinggreenerycoverageandimposingheaviertaxesontheenterpriseswhichreleaseuntreatedwastetotherivers.[解析]本题考查错误平行结构的修改。将“toimpose”改成“imposing”即可实现正确的平行连接。39.参考答案：Thisisarichcountry,buttherearelotsofpoorpeople.[解析]本题要求把句子改写成并列句。题目中的两个句子是转折关系，因此可以用but直接将两句话连接起来，构成并列句，两个句子仍保持原来的顺序。40.参考答案：Relievedofyourresponsibilitiesatyourjob,youshouldbeabletorelaxathome.[解析]本题属于垂悬修饰语导致的病句。垂悬修饰语指修饰语在句中找不到逻辑上被修饰的对象。本句中relieved这个形容词表示感到宽慰的、放心的，这个心理状态的主语并不是yourhome，所以relievedof...便成了无依着形容词短语，对这样的垂悬修饰语错误，必须明确心理状态的主人或者动作的实施者。41.参考答案：AtlastmywishisrealizedbecausethegovernmenthasgrantedmepermissiontogototheWest.[解析]原句由两个简单句组成，要求合并为一个复合句。复合句是含有主句和从句的句子。分析题干后可知，第一个句子讲述了中心意思“最终我的愿望成真。”第二句则是对第一句的原因的解释，即两句之间是一种因果关系，故用连词because连接。译文：最终我的梦想终于实现了，因为政府允许我去西部了。42.参考答案：Helookedforwardtothestudyperiodatschool.Itwastheonlytimehecouldsitunbotheredanddreamabouthisfuture.[解析]这是一个由ing分词引起的破句。当ing分词处于一组词的首位或靠近首位时就有可能出现破句。这样的句子缺少主语或谓语动词的一部分，不完整；改正这类破句的方法有三个：让破句与其前或其后的句子连接起来，使意思完整；增添主句，把ing部分变为动词的正确形式；把being改为be的恰当形式。在此句中，只需把being改为be的恰当形式即可。43.参考答案：HanSolo,abravebutself-centeredpilot,isoneoftheheroesofStarWars.[解析]原句是两个简单句，要求合并为一个简单句。从句意上看，两句话都是对同一个主语HanSolo的描述，在合并时我们可以采用同位语(abravebutself-centeredpilot为HanSolo的同位语)的方式将第二句的语意合并于第一句中。44.参考答案：Afterthecorrectionofallthemistakes,theseconddraftofthepaperwasmuchbetterthanthefirst.或Aftercorrectingallthemistakes,Ifound/feltthattheseconddraftofthepaperwasmuchbetterthanthefirst.[解析]译文：在更正所有的错误后，这篇论文的第二稿要比第一稿好多了。Aftercorrectingailthemistakes的主语是人，而后边的主语是theseconddraft，句子前后主语不一致。45.参考答案：

Oct.20,2004DearSir:

Iamawareofyourreputationforqualityproductsplusreliability;consequently,Idonothesitatetowritetoyou.

IpurchasedanairconditionerinyourstoreonFebruary14andhaditinstalledyesterday.Unfortunately,theinstallationwascompletebeforeIfoundthatthefanmadealotofnoise.Iwonderifthisairconditionerisadefectiveone.Theser