中考英语复习作文分析

话题-自荐信1.（2020中考）假定你是李华。某英文报"MyHometown"专栏面向中学生招募小记者,请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下;1.熟悉家乡;2.乐于交流;3.擅长英语。注意:1.词数80-100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称:4.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:journalist(n.记者);column(n.专栏)DearSir/Madam,IhearyournewspaperneedsjournalistsforthecolumnMyHometown.Ihopetobeamemberoftheteam.First,Iknowalotaboutmyhometown,suchasitshistoryandculture.Besides,IusedtoworkasajournalistformyschoolnewspaperandIdidaverygoodjob.I’measy-goingandalwaysreadytocommunicatewithothers.Moreover,IhaveagoodknowledgeofEnglish,andI’mskillfulatexpressingmyselfclearlyinEnglish.I’msuretobetherightpersonyouarelookingfor.I’dbethankfulifIcouldgetthischance.Yours,LiHua话题-个人经历与感受2.（2021年中考）假定你是李华,曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括:1.事情经过;2.个人感悟。注意:1.词数80-100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称:4.短文题目已给出,不计人总词数。参考词汇:pocketmoney(n.零花钱);meaningful(adj.有意义的)OnceIWasPraisedOnceIwaspraisedbecauseIdidsomethingmeaningfulwithmypocketmoney.Oneday,Ihappenedtoknowsomestudentsinaschoolwerehungryforknowledgebuttheydidn'thaveenoughbooks.Idecidedtooffermyhelp.WithallthepocketmoneyIsaved,Iboughtsomebooksonline,andgavethemawaytotheschool.Myparentswereveryhappyandpraisedmewhentheyheardaboutit.TheysaidIdidameaningfulthing.Ibelievethateverylittlebithelps.IwillcontinuetodowhatIcantohelpothers.话题-介绍感恩的人或事以及如何表达感恩之情Thankyou,myteacher!3.I’dliketosaythankstomyEnglishteacher,MissLi,becauseshe'shelpedmealot.Once,IfailedmyEnglishexam.WhenshefoundIwasveryworried,sheencouragedmetostudyharderandpromisedtohelpme.Afterthat,IturnedtoherforhelpeverytimeIhadquestions.Shewasalwayspatienttomakemeunderstandeverysinglequestion.Withherhelp,I’vehadenoughcouragetofacedifficultiesandmademuchprogressinEnglish.Thankyou,mydearteacher!Theloveandsupportfromyouwillbewithmeforever.TheChangesofMyHometown请你按照下面表格的提示，写一篇题为“ChangesinMyHometown”的英语短文,开头已给出。内容要点旧房子高楼过去河水肮脏现在河水清澈步行、骑自行车上班乘公交车、开小汽车上班要求：1.以今昔整体对比的方式写一篇短文；2.词数100词左右。Myhometownhaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.Inthepast,therewerealotofoldhouses.Theriverusedtobeverydirty.Italwayssmelledbad.Itisinconvenientforpeopletogotoworkbybikeoronfoot.Butnowthingsaredifferent.Therearemoretallbuildingsherethanbefore.Theriverissocleanthatpeoplecanswiminit.What'smore,peopletakebusesordrivetheirowncarstowork.Iamhappytoseethatmyhometownisbecomingmoreandmorebeautiful.近年来中国发生了翻天覆地的变化，取得了很多世界瞩目的成就，例如航空航天技术的一步步突破、杂交水稻的成功培育、两届奥运会的成功举办……某英文网站正在开展以“厉害了，我的国!”为主题的征文活动。请你以“Chinamakesmefeelsurprised”为题目,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文投稿。要求:1.选择中国发展中一个让你感到惊讶的事件进行简单叙述，并写出你的感受;2.书写规范,要点齐全,条理清晰,可合理发挥;3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名、地名,否则不予赋分;参考词汇:aerospaceindustry航空航天工业;spaceship宇宙飞船;develophybridrice培育杂交水稻;Beijing2008Olympics北京2008奥运会;Beijing2022WinterOlympics北京2022冬奥会ChinamakesmefeelsurprisedI’mveryproudofmycountry-China,especiallyafterwatchingthedocumentaryAmazingChina!Actually,Ourlifehaschangedalotinrecentyears.First,therearesomeshared-bikesaroundus.They’reveryhelpfulandconvenientforustotraveltoplacesnottoofarawayfromourhome.Secondly,lotsofrestaurantsoffertheoldanddisabledpeoplefreebreakfast.Besides,thegovernmentprovidestextbooks,mealsforalltheprimaryandjuniormiddleschoolstudentsforfree.Theoldpeopleoversixtyagescangetsomemoneyfromthegovernmenteverymonthtofeedthemselves.Thirdly,youcanseehigh-speedtrains,subwaysandhigh-speedroadseverywhereinChina.ItshowsChinaisdevelopingfastintheworld.What’smore,WechatPayiswidelyusedincities,townsandvillages.TheChinesepeopleofallagescanusetheirsmartphonestoshoponline.watchthelatestmovies.Lotsofforeignerscanhardlybelievetheireyes.介绍传统节日MyfavoriteChinesefestivalistheDragonBoatFestival.

Itfallsonthefifthdayofthefifthlunarmontheveryyear.It’sadaytorememberQuYuan,agreatpoet.Onthisdaypeopleusuallyeat

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andholddragonboatraces.TheyalsohangChinesemugwort(艾草)aroundthedoorsandcarryaspicebagaroundwiththem.Whatmakesthefestivalspecialformeisthedragonboatrace.Themembersofthedragonboatteamhavesuchgreatteamspirit—everybodytriestheirbesttowintherace.Itisveryexcitingandinteresting.SomyfavoriteChinesefestivalistheDragonBoatFestival.[大庆]春节是我国的传统节日。请你结合下面的汉语提示为外国友人介绍春节的习俗及我们的庆祝活动。提示:1.打扫房间以扫除坏运气。2.吃年夜饭庆祝新年的到来。3.家人们观看春节晚会。4.穿上新衣去拜年。5.孩子们会收到压岁钱。Asweallknow,theSpringFestivalisoneofthemostimportantfestivalsinChina.ItisusuallycalledtheChineseNewYear.Tocelebrateit,peoplealwaysdoalotofpreparationsforit.Afewdaysbeforethefestival,peopleusuallyhaveathoroughcleaninginordertogetridofthebadluck.OntheeveoftheSpringFestival,thewholefamilysitstogether,havingabigdinnerandenjoyingtheTVprogrammesuntilmidnight.Andchildrenareespeciallyhappybecausetheycangetluckymoneythatiswrappedinredpaperfromtheirelders.OnthefirstdayoftheNewYear,allthepeople,theoldandtheyoung,wearnewclothestovisittheirrelativesandfriends.Theywisheachothergoodluckinthecomingyear.Everybodyhasagoodtimeandfeelshappyduringthefestival.介绍志愿活动人们常说:“服务他人，快乐自己。”你准备利用即将到来的暑假去社区做一些服务工作。请根据以下表格提示内容,给你们学校的英文报写一篇短文,介绍你的计划。PlacesActivitiesCommunitycenterhelptheold,singsongs,tellstories,...Communityhospital(s)handouttheleaflets(宣传册)onCOVID-19，..Communitypark(s)pickuprubbish,waterflowers,...……Asweallknow,“Servingotherscanbringushappiness.”Summerholidayiscoming,I’lldosomeserviceinmycommunitytomakeitbetter.First,I’llgotoourcommunitycentertohelpandcheeruptheoldpeople.Forexample,Icansingsongsortellthemsomeinterestingstories.Second,I’mgoingtohandouttheleafletsonCOVID-19atourcommunityhospitalorotherplaces.Next,I’malsoplanningtopickupandsortrubbishwithmyfriendsinourcommunitypark.AndIwillwaterflowersinthepark.What’smore,I’llhelpthekidswiththeirlessonsandlookafterthemaswell.I’msureI’llhaveameaningfulholidaythissummer.语言学习亲爱的同学,本堂英语测试完之后,三年的初中学习生活就结束了。请你以“HowtolearnEnglish”为题写一篇英语短文,把你三年来的英语学习经验介绍给下一届的初一同学,说说英语学习的重要性、谈谈你是如何学习英语的以及你对他们学习英语的建议。提示问题:●WhydoyoulearnEnglish?●HowdoyoulearnEnglish?●Whatisyouradvicetothem?要求:1.卷面整洁(无污迹),书写工整(有美感);2.条理清楚,句式规范。全文词数80词左右,短文开头已给出，不计入总词数;3.内容尽量包括提示信息,可适当发挥;文中不得出现个人真实信息。HowtolearnEnglishDearyoungersistersandbrothers,asweallknow,Englishisusedverywidelyintheworld.Howcanwelearnitwell?Herearemysuggestions.First,weshouldoftenlistentothetapes,Englishsongsandprograms.WatchingEnglishmoviesisalsohelpfultous.Second,weshouldspeakEnglishinclassasmuchaspossible.Don’tbeafraidofmakingmistakes.Themoreyouspeak,thefewermistakesyou’llmake.We'dbetterjointheEnglishclubandpracticewithothers.Third,wecanreadmoreEnglishnewspapersandmagazines.It’sgoodforus.Atlast,weshouldrecitesomegoodpassagesandkeepdiaries.Inaword,aslongaswedomorelistening,speaking,readingandwriting,wewilllearnEnglishwell.Asweallknow,studentsshouldlearnhowtogetonwellwithothers.Butinwhatways?Firstofall,weshouldrespectothers.Everyonehastheirownwaytodothings,soweshouldunderstandeachother.Besides,itisimportantforustocommunicatewitheachotherandshareourhappinessandsadness.What'smore,weshouldbekindtoothersandoffernecessaryhelptothosewhoareintrouble.Inmyopinion,weshouldtreatothersinanhonestway.Onlyinthiswaycanwegetalongwellwitheachotherandfeelhappy.某英语杂志社JustAsk栏目收到一位青少年Claire的电子邮件，邮件中讲述了自己的困惑,并向大家寻求帮助。认真阅读这封电子邮件,假定你是Sarah或Kevin,请从不同角度给出合理化建议。To:JustAsk From:ClaireSubject:AskingforadviceDearfriends,IfeelterribleandIreallyneedyouradvice.TheproblemisthatI’mnotinterestedinclothes.Idon’tknowwhat’sinfashionandIdon’tlikegoingshoppingforclothes.SomeofmyfriendslaughatmeandsaythatIhaven’tgotstyle.WhatdoyouthinkIshoulddo?Claire,13要求:1.词数100左右,开头与结尾已给出，不计人总词数;2.文中不得出现任何与考生相关的真实信息。DearClaire,Iunderstandyou.OnceIwasalsointhesimilarsituation.It’snoteasyforustogetthroughteenageyearssmoothly.Herearemyopinions.Firstofall,justbeyourselfandsticktoyourownstyle.Thereisnoneedtocaretoomuchaboutwhatyouareinothers’eyes.Afterall,yourouterlookisnotasimportantasyourinnerbeauty.Figureoutwhatyouaregoodatandworkhardtomakeyourselfbetteratit.Everyonewilllookuptoyouifyouareoutstandingenough.What’smore,youshouldknowwhattruefriendsare.Atruefriendwillalwayscareaboutyou,notyourclothes.Hewillreachforyourhandandtouchyourheart,butnotlaughatyou.Inaddition,wearingcomfortablyandconvenientlyisenoughforateenager.Withthegrowthofyourageandexperience,youwilldevelopyoursenseoffashion.Goodluck!Sarah/Kevin保护视力Goodmorning,everyone!Mytopictodayis“ProtectingOurEyes”.Theeyesarethe windowsofthesoul,sowemustprotectoureyesFirstly,weshouldkeepabalanceddietanddoeyeexercisesfrequently.Wealsoneedtocontrolthescreentimeanddevelopgoodlivinghabits.Secondly,learningconditionsneedtobeimproved,especiallythepoorlightintheclassroom.Thirdly,doingeyeexercisesregularlyeverydayisagreatnecessity.Besides,enoughsleepalsocontributestotheimprovement.HowtoliveahealthyandhappylifeWiththeimprovementoflivingconditions,wearepayingmoreandmoreattentiontoourhealth,whichincludesbothphysicalandmentalhealth.Thenhowcanwestudentsliveahealthyandhappylife?Firstly,weshouldkeepourbodieshealthy.Notonlydoweneedtoeathealthyfood,butalsoweneedtoexerciseinaproperwayeveryday.Forexample,wecanrunfor30minuteseverymorningorplaysportsafterschool.Meanwhile,westillneedenoughsleepeveryday.Secondly,mentalhealthisalsoveryimportant.Weneedtoloveourlifeandtrytobeactive.Weneedtogetalongwellwithothersaswell.Whenwe’resad,wecancommunicatewithourparents,teachersandfriendsfrankly.Inaword,Ihopeeveryonecanhaveahealthybodyandmind,andthenwecanhaveahealthyandhappylifeeveryday.假设你是刘军,在上周末的乡村旅游中,你发现了一些游客的不文明行为。请根据下表信息给某英文报VOICE栏目的编辑写一封邮件,反映这些问题并提出建议。UncivilizedbehaviorsSuggestionsthrewrubbisheverywherepickedflowersclimbedtreesputrubbishintobins…注意:1.邮件内容必须包括上表所有信息,可适当增加细节;2.你的建议至少两条;3.词数:80-100(邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。参考词汇:不文明行为uncivilizedbehavior;编辑editorDeareditor,IwasshockedtoseesomeuncivilizedbehaviorswhenItookatriptoavillagelastweekend.Somevisitorsthrewrubbisheverywhereandleftplasticbagsflyingaround.Somepickedflowerswithoutpermissiontotakephotossothattheycouldshowoffonline.Andsomeclimbedtreesforfun,whichmightresultinseriousaccidents.Ithinkitwrongtoenjoyoneselfatthecostofothers.Visitorsaresupposedtoprotecttheenvironment,likeputtingrubbishintoproperbins.Andtheyshouldbecarefulnottocausetroubletothelocalsandkeepawayfromdanger.Inthisway,agreener,cleanerandmorecivilizednewvillagewillbethereforusalltoenjoy.Yourssincerely,LiuJun介绍传统节日MyfavoriteChinesefestivalistheDragonBoatFestival.

Itfallsonthefifthdayofthefifthlunarmontheveryyear.It’sadaytorememberQuYuan,agreatpoet.Onthisdaypeopleusuallyeat

zongzi

andholddragonboatraces.TheyalsohangChinesemugwort(艾草)aroundthedoorsandcarryaspicebagaroundwiththem.Whatmakesthefestivalspecialformeisthedragonboatrace.Themembersofthedragonboatteamhavesuchgreatteamspirit—everybodytriestheirbesttowintherace.Itisveryexcitingandinteresting.SomyfavoriteChinesefestivalistheDragonBoatFestival.[大庆]春节是我国的传统节日。请你结合下面的汉语提示为外国友人介绍春节的习俗及我们的庆祝活动。提示:1.打扫房间以扫除坏运气。2.吃年夜饭庆祝新年的到来。3.家人们观看春节晚会。4.穿上新衣去拜年。5.孩子们会收到压岁钱。Asweallknow,theSpringFestivalisoneofthemostimportantfestivalsinChina.ItisusuallycalledtheChineseNewYear.Tocelebrateit,peoplealwaysdoalotofpreparationsforit.Afewdaysbeforethefestival,peopleusuallyhaveathoroughcleaninginordertogetridofthebadluck.OntheeveoftheSpringFestival,thewholefamilysitstogether,havingabigdinnerandenjoyingtheTVprogrammesuntilmidnight.Andchildrenareespeciallyhappybecausetheycangetluckymoneythatiswrappedinredpaperfromtheirelders.OnthefirstdayoftheNewYear,allthepeople,theoldandtheyoung,wearnewclothestovisittheirrelativesandfriends.Theywisheachothergoodluckinthecomingyear.Everybodyhasagoodtimeandfeelshappyduringthefestival.话题-介绍书籍（2022年中考）假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。请你写封邮件,向他推荐《西游记》。要点如下:1.风趣幽默,深受喜爱;2.团队合作,历险克难;3.追逐梦想,永不言弃。注意:1.词数80-100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。参考词汇:character(n.人物);overcome(v.克服)DearMike,SinceyouwanttoreadChineseclassicworks,I'dliketorecommendJourneytotheWesttoyou.Therearesomemainreasonsforrecommendingthebook.Forthelanguage,itshumorouswordsalwaysmakepeoplelaugh.Asaresult,theworkispopularwithpeopleofallages.Asforthestory,thecharactersovercomechallengeswithteamwork,andwecanlearnalessonfromthat.Whenitcomestothetheme,thebookencouragesreaderstofightfortheirdreamfirmlyandnevergiveup,whichgivesstrengthtorealizetheirdream.Forthereasonsabove,thebookiswellworthreading.Generallyspeaking,IthinkJourneytotheWestisawonderfulclassicwork.Hopeyouwilllikeit.近年来,环境恶化导致的问题日益凸显。假如你是某中学学生会主席李华,请你以学生会的名义向同学们发出倡议,呼吁大家从小事做起。为保护环境尽一份力。提示:(一)措施1.节约水电;2.少用塑料袋,不乱扔垃圾;3.绿色出行,如乘公交车、骑自行车、步行上学或购物等;4.……（二）提出希望审题思路：1.文体:本文是一篇倡议书,属于应用文写作;2.人称和时态:第一人称和一般现在时;3.提示内容要全部包含在作文中,需要增添内容,适当运用连词、副词等进行过渡,条理清晰,将活动内容介绍完整。写作提纲：首先点明环境问题的严重性保护环境倡议书<根据所给提示分点介绍保护环境的具体方法表达倡议，号召从小事做起，从现在做起Dearfriends,Theenvironmentalproblemsaregettingmoreandmoreseriousnowadays.Asstudents,weshoulddosomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.First,it’sveryimportanttosavewate