高考英语短文改错课件-

短文改错————之高分秘籍短文改错

之高分秘籍短文改错————之高分秘籍短文改错Discussthesesentencesandcorrectthemistakeswiththerightsigns.

1.HaveyouseenMr.LiangAihuadancing“LittleApple”?That’ssuchabeautifulsceneIdarenothavemyeyesfixedonit.2.Havingbeendonetheexercises,Ibecomecrazy.Mydearteacher,Ihavehadenoughofyou!

3.ComparingwiththegraduatesofBlueFlyTechnicalSchool,thegraduatesofTsinghuaUniversityarenotsoskillfulwhenoperatingexcavators.

that∧Compared改词删词添词你看见过梁老师跳“小苹果”吗？那画面太美我不敢看。和蓝翔的毕业生相比，清华毕业生开挖掘机的技能简直弱爆了。做完这些练习，我也醉了。亲亲的老师，你也是够了。Discussthesesentencesandco

Whatisproofreading？满分10分，给出一篇10个错误的短文，要求考生将错误找出并规范改正。错误所占比例为1(添)：1（删）：8（改）增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。建议时间：10分钟Whatisproofreading？满分10分，思路要清楚,步骤要恰当1）通读全文，先查逻辑和主要时态；2）以句为单位，细查语法;3）由动词入手，注意句型和搭配；4）由易到难,各个击破;5）验证答案，规范答题；6）注意“五不改”：A、标点B、纲外词（汉字注释词）C、词序D.大小写E.单词拼写

Methods

思路要清楚,步骤要恰当1）通读全文，先查逻辑和主要时态；M常考错误类型错误类型

句法行文逻辑词法名词动词形容词副词代词冠词介词连词固定搭配名从定从状从时态一致人称一致逻辑一致常考错误类型错误类型句法行文逻辑词6一、动词形1.动词的______和_______的错误。

1.However,myfatherhadtoreturntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturday.(2011全国卷I）flew

2.TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.（2013新课标全国卷II）时态语态drunk6一、动词形1.动词的______和_______的错误。7

2.______________的错误.

1.

Istayedthereforoneandahalfhoursandmadesurethatthegirlwereallright.(2009全国卷2)was

2.Notonlythestudentsbutalsotheteacherlikethefilm.(2007天津卷)likesNotonlybutalsoor，either…or…，neither…nor…，not…but…，notonly…but（also）…，therebe句型主、谓一致一、动词形72.______________的错误.1.Is83._____________

的错误今天你找茬了吗？1.Generallyspeaking,iftakeaccordingtothedirections,thedrughasnosideeffect.taken2.Withaboyledtheway,theystartedtowardsthevillage.

(2011陕西卷)leading一、动词形非谓语动词83._____________的错误今天你找茬了吗？19二、名词数火眼睛睛：1.Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.（2011新课标全国卷）luggage2.All

thewomandoctorsinthehospitalgotapresentonMarch8th.women

1.____与_______名词的混用。2._____名词的________的错用。3.名词的____的误用。3.Afewdollarscanhelptofillachildhungrystomach.不可数可数可数格单复数child’s9二、名词数火眼睛睛：luggage2.Allthewo10三、还要注意形和副形容词和副词头脑风暴：

1.Whenshedroppedmeoff,Ipulledoutthetoyquickandgaveitback.（2011浙江卷）quickly原级,比较级和最高级less2.IlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittleaggressive.(2012新课标全国卷）

1．_______________的误用2.___________________的误用10三、还要注意形和副形容词和副词头脑风暴：1.Whens11四、代词格，细领悟3.it作形主、形宾或指代时有缺漏

(make,find,think)

或在从句中多余大家一起来找茬：1.WiththehelpofKatia,aroommateofme…(2011重庆卷）mine2.ItwasonlywhenwedidtheirchemistryprojecttogetherthatIbegantounderstand…(2010辽宁卷）3.Hefounddifficulttolearnmathwell.ourit1.人称代词,物主代词,反身代词,不定代词的使用．2.代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误.∧11四、代词格，细领悟3.it作形主、形宾或指代时有缺漏12五、介词短语须关注

1.主要考查__________________的搭配。这些错误你造吗？

1.TherewasoneonparticularI’dreallywanted.(2011浙江卷)2.不定式后的动词短语中_____不能省固定短语，固定介词in2.Hehadonlyasmallcoldroomtolive.in介词∧12五、介词短语须关注1.主要考查_________13注意多词、少词和搭配错误haveknowledgeofcatchasightofinhurryinSundayafternoonsuchmanypeopleinashortaon∨so六、习惯用法要记住∨a13注意多词、少词和搭配错误haveknowledgeo142.连词but，and，or,so,though/although的用法错误．会改错的孩子都是好孩子：七、冠词连词常光顾2.ZhangZhiwei,themonitorofourclass,isalwaysreadytohelpothers.3.Iboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybag

fromthefloor.(2011新课标全国卷）１.冠词a,an和the的用法错误．and1.Hefailedbuthewantedtotrythesecondtime.a142.连词but，and，or,so,though/al1.HeputitinasecretplacewhereIcouldn'tfind.which2.ThehousewhichLuXunoncelivedisbeingrepairednow.where3.I'llneverforgetthedaywhichIfirstwenttoschool.when1）定语从句关系代词和关系副词的误用II从句法的角度去分析:1.Heputitinasecretplace1.Wewouldreturnatnighttohearthathe'dpickedupfromtheradiointheday.what2.Butitdidn’tmatterthatIwouldwinornot.whether3.Whenpeopleareplayinggames,theymovealot.Thatishowsportsaregoodactivitiesfortheirhealth.why2）名词性从句连接代词和连接副词的混用1.Wewouldreturnatnightto1.Hegotupearlyinordertohecouldcatchthefirstbus.that2.Makeamarkwhichyouhaveanydoubtsorquestions.where3）状语从句引导词的误用1.Hegotupearlyinorderto1.Hisearscan’thearanything,soheisablind.2.Ithoughtthatitwasdulltowatchagameinwhichplayerskickedaballtoeachother.Therefore,myfatherlovesfootball.3.Ihavetotakeupapart-timejobbecausemyfamilyisrichenough.Ⅲ从行文逻辑的角度去分析notHoweverdeaf1.Hisearscan’thearanything动词形，名词数,还要注意形和副;非谓语，细辨别,代词格，细领悟;请念一遍咒语吧！介词冠词常常考，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑连词需关注；请念一遍咒语吧！介词冠词常常考，OurEnglishteacherbegintoteachusin

September.ShehadbeenteachingEnglishformorethantwentyyear.Shelikeswe,andsheisverystrictinallofus.Althoughsheisabitoldandnotsobeautifully,butweconsiderherasourmother.Sheisreallygoodteacher.Weareloveherverymuch.We’resurewe’llgetinwellwitheachother.动词形名词数介词短语需关注还要注意形和副冠词连词常光顾代词格，细领悟习惯用法要记住began

hasyearsuswithbeautiful∧aon实战演练动词形OurEnglishteacherbegintot

Haveaniceday!PracticeMakesPerfect

Haveaniceday!PracticeMake练一练自设改错题每6人一组（同一篇文章），相互讨论并共同设置10处错误。注意合理分配错误类型和错误间距。展示各组的作业，并对比原文（看出题是否合理、合逻辑）；练一练自设改错题Aftershopping,MotherandIwenttoarestaurantforlunch.InoticedMotherlookingatanearbytableoccupiedbyanelderlywomanandayoungcouple.Theyatesilently,anditwasclearthatthingswerenotgoingwell.Asweleft,Motherstoppedbytheirtable."Excuseme,"shesaid,puttingherarmaroundtheunhappyoldwoman."Youremindmesomuchofmymother.MayIhugyou?"Thewomansmiledhappilyassheacceptedit.Afterweleft,Isaid,"Thatwasveryniceofyou,Mother.ButIdidn'tthinkshe