How to polish an article 课件-2022届高考英语二轮复习

Welcometomyclass怎样让一篇文章起来“靓”Clothesmaketheman.Beauty

isthecombinationofthree-tenthsofgiftandseven-tenthsofgrooming.Sodoesanarticle.人靠衣装。三分长相，七分打扮。Howtopolishanarticle?使用较高级的词汇(useadvancedvocabularies)

使用较丰富的句式(usevarioussentencepatterns)使用恰当的连接词(useproperconjunctions)漂亮的书写（beautifulwriting）So一、使用高级词汇significant/vital/crucialplayanimportantpart(in)beofsignificance/importanceimportantthanksbbegratefultosbexpressone’sgratitudetosbtiredexhausteddislikebetiredofbeboredwithveryquite/rather/extremelybegoodatdowellinhaveagoodknowledgeofhaveagoodcommandoflike/loveappreciate/beinterestedinbecrazyaboutbekeenonloseone’shearttobegoodfor/dogoodtobenefitsbbebeneficialtocontributetorememberkeep/bear…inmindbecomingsoonbearoundthecornerbeapproachingbedrawingnearhelpsbgivesbahanddosbafavorwill/must

beboundtodo(必定会）consider/think

about…take…intoaccounttake…intoconsiderationwanttodosthbedyingtodosthlookforwardtodoingcan’twaittodosthlongtodosthbelievehaveconfidencein二、善用高级句型1.这是一个难得的机会，我们应该珍惜它。Itisararechance,soweshouldcherishit.(感叹句）Whatararechanceitis!weshouldcherishit.(such/so…that)(such/so…that开头的半倒装)Suchararechanceisit

thatweshouldcherishit.Howrareachanceitis!weshouldcherishit.Itissuchararechancethatweshouldcherishit.Itissorareachancethatweshouldcherishit.Sorareachanceisit

thatweshouldcherishit.2.你的鼓励让我取得了很大的进步。Yourencouragementledmetomakegreatprogress.(强调句句型）Itwasyourencouragementthatledmetomakegreatprogress.3.我们不仅可以开拓视野，而且可以丰富我们的生活。Wecannotonlybroadenourhorizon,butalsowecanenrichourlife.(notonly放句首的半倒装）Notonlycanwebroadenourhorizon,butalsowecanenrichourlife.4.我是一个有责任心的人。（responsible）Iamaresponsibleperson.(用定语从句改写）Iamapersonwhoisresponsible.5.他尽管累，但是内心感到很充实。Hewastired,buthefeltrathercontent.(although让步状语从句）Althoughhewastired,hefeltrathercontent.（让步状语从句倒装as/though）Tiredas/though

hewas,hefeltrathercontent.6.我们都知道，孰能生巧。Weallknowthatpracticemakesperfect.(as引导的非限制性定语从句）Asiswell-knowntoall,practicemakesperfect.(it做形式主语的主语从句）Itiswell-knownthatpracticemakesperfect.(what引导的主语从句）Whatiswell-knownisthatpracticemakesperfect.7.直到犯了很多的错,他才意识到他的错。(not…until)Hedidn’trealizehisfaultuntilhehadmademistakes..(notuntil的强调句句型）Itwasnotuntil

hehadmademistakesthat

herealizedhisfault.(notuntil放句首的半倒装）Notuntil

hehadmademistakesdidherealizehisfault.Notuntil引导的是从句，倒装发生在主句。8.

通过努力，我们才能得到我们想要的。Wecangetwhatwewantbyourefforts.(only置于句首的半倒装）

Onlybyoureffortscanwegetwhatwewant.Only+副词/介词短语/从句置于句首，主句要用半倒装三、使用恰当的连接词首先__________________正如谚语所说___________________

一方面，另一方面_______________

同时________________过了一会____________从那时起____________

直到现在____________不久以后__________

随着时间的流逝_____________________总之__________________

firstofall/tobeginwith

Asasayinggoes,ontheonehand,ontheotherhandmeanwhile/atthesametimeafterawhilesincethen/fromthenonuptonow/sofarbeforelongAstimegoesby,/Withtimegoingbyinaword/inshort就我而言_____________众所周知___________同等重要的是

________另外,此外___________更糟的是___________更重要的是____________结果_____________我想起_____________也就是说___________说实话_____________asfarasIamconcernedAsweallknow/AsisknowntoallLastbutnotleastbesides/what’smore/moreover/furthermorewhat’sworseAboveallasaresult/therefore/thusItoccurredtomethat…that’stosay/inotherwordstobehonest/totellthetruth常用谚语(Proverb)Actionspeakslouderthanwords.事实胜于雄辩。

Striketheironwhileitishot.

趁热打铁。Thinktwicebeforeyoudo.

三思而后行。Practicemakesperfect.

熟能生巧。WheninRome,doastheRomansdo.

入乡随俗。

Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失败是成功之母。Itisnousecryingoverspiltmilk.覆水难收。AllroadsleadtoRome.

条条大路通罗马。Timeandtidewaitfornoman.

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漂亮的书写某中学同学的答题卡可参看模板作文0分答题卡内容字数完全不够书写混乱，字间距太大基本错误百出阅卷教师

讨厌什么样的作文?涂涂抹抹，斑斑点点；层次不清，段落不分；语句不通，杂乱无章；书写潦草，卷面不洁；阅卷教师

喜欢什么样的作文?字体工整,卷面干净；紧扣主题,条理清晰；长度适中,基本无错；语言地道,过渡自然。Homework:polishthefollowingpassage①

Weallknowthateveryonewillgetintotroubleinourlives.

②Sometimesthetroubleisveryannoyingsowewanttoloseourtemper.③

But,Ithink,Althoughitisdisappointing,weshouldfacethetroublebravely.④

Andweshouldbelieveourselves.⑤

And,thetroublewemeetcanbegoodforus,forthetroublehelpusgrowupandaccumulate(积累）theexperienceforthefuture.⑥

Remember,troubleisourfriend.⑦

Whenwecangetonwellwithit,wewillliveahappylife.

①Asiswell-knowntoall,everyoneisboundtogetintotroubleinourlives.②Sometimes,soannoyingisthetroublethatwecan’thelpinglosingourtemper.③However,

asfarasIamconcerned,disappointing

as

itis,weshouldfacethetroublebravely.④Besides,weshouldhaveconfidenceinourselves.⑤What’smore,thetroubleweencountercanbebeneficialtous.Itisthetroublethathelpusgrowupandaccumulatetheexperienceforthefuture.⑥Keepitinmindthattroubleisourfriend.⑦Onlywhenwecangetonwellwithit,willweliveahappylife.possibleversionAsis