2023年高考英语复习读后续写05 读后续写优秀范文

ARuntoRemember

Thirteencanbeachallengingage.NotonlydidIhavetoadapttomychangingbody.Ialsohad

todealwithmyparents'bitterdivorce,anewfamilyandtheupsettingmovefrommycountryhome

toacrowdedsuburb.

Whenwemoved,mybelovedcompanion,asmallbrownpony（小马），hadtobesold.

Feelinghelplessandalone,Icouldn'teatorsleep,andIcriedallofthetime.Imissedmy

family,myhomeandmypony.Finally,myfather,realizinghowmuchImissedmypony,purchased

anoldredhorseformeatalocalmarket.

Myhorse,Cowboy,waswithoutadoubttheugliesthorseintheworld.Hewaspigeon-toedand

knock-kneed.ButIdidn'tcareabouthisfaults.Ilovedhimbeyondallreasons.

IjoinedaridingclubandfacedrudecommentsandmeansnickersaboutCowboy'slooks.I

neverletonhowIfelt,butdeepdowninside,myheartwasbreaking.Theothermembersrode

beautifulregisteredhorses.

WhenCowboyandIenteredtheeventswherethehorseisjudgedonappearance,wewere

quicklyoutofthegame.Ifinallyrealizedthatmyonlychancetocompetewouldbeinthetimed-

speedevents.Ichosebarrelracing（绕桶赛）,aneventinwhichahorseanditsriderattemptto

completeatriangularpatternaroundthreebarrelsinthefastesttime.

OnegirlnamedBeckyrodeabigbrownhorseintheraceevents.Shealwayswontheblue

ribbons.Needlesstosay,shedidn'tfeelthreatenedwhenIcompetedagainstheratthenextshow.

Shedidn'tneedto.Icameinnexttolast.

ThebittermemoryofBecky'ssmirks（得意的笑）mademedeterminedtobeather.Forthe

wholenextmonth,IwokeupearlyeverydayandrodeCowboyfivemilestothearena（运动场土也）.

WepracticedforhoursinthehotsunandthenIwouldwalkCowboyhome.OnthewayhomeI

wouldbesotired;thosefivemilesseemedtwiceaslong.

Allofourhardworkdidn'tmakemefeelconfidentbythetimetheshowcame.Isatatthegate

andsweateditoutwhileIwatchedBeckyandherhorsechargethroughthepatternofbarrels,

finishingthecoursewithcase.

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者才13岁就承受着家庭的变故，并且失去了宠物小马驹的

陪伴，他很孤单，需要陪伴。父亲在当地市场买了一匹老马，尽管Cowboy很丑，她还是很

喜欢他在身边；一个叫贝基的女孩骑着一匹棕色的大马参加比赛，当作者在与她竞争时，她

轻易的赢了，但是贝基得意的笑让作者决心打败她，并且最终做到了。

【续写范文】Myturnfinallycame.AsIurgedCowboyforward,hestumbled,andalmostfell,much

tothedelightoftheotherriders.Ijammedmyhatdownonmyhead,strokedCowboy*sbigredneck

andenteredthearena.Atthesignal,wedashedtowardthefirstbarrel,quicklywhippedarounditand

withperfectprecisionroundedthesecondandthunderedontothethird.Wetorearoundthefinal

curveandshotforthefinishline.NocheersfilledtheairwhenIfinishedmyshow.Theendofour

runwasmetwithsuiprisedsilence.Withthesoundofmyheartpoundinginmyears,Iheardthe

announcercallourtime.CowboyandIhadbeatenBeckyandherproudfancyhorse!Igainedmuch

morethanablueribbonthatday.Atthirteen,IrealizedthatPdalwayscomeoutawinnerifIwanted

somethingbadlyenoughtoworkforit.Icanbethemasterofmyowndestiny.

【范文译文】终于轮到我了。当我催促牛仔前进时，他跌跌撞撞，差点摔倒，这让其他骑手

很高兴。我把帽子戴在头上，抚摸着牛仔红红的大脖子，走进了竞技场。接到信号后，我们

冲向第一个枪管，迅速绕过它，以完美的精度绕过第二个枪管，然后轰轰烈烈地冲向第三个

枪管。我们绕过最后的弯道，冲向终点线。当我结束表演时，空气中没有欢呼声。我们的奔

跑结束时遇到了令人惊讶的沉默。随着我的心跳声在我耳边，我听到播音员在叫我们的时间。

我和牛仔打败了贝基和她骄傲的花马！那天我得到的不仅仅是一条蓝丝带。十三岁的时候，

我意识到如果我非常想要一些东西来为它工作，我总是会成为赢家。我可以成为自己命运的

主人。

2.【原文内容】Duringthispastyear,Tvehadthreeinstancesofcartrouble.Eachtimethesethings

happened,Iwassickofthewaymostpeoplehadn'tbotheredtohelp.Oneofthosetimes,Iwason

thesideoftheroadforclosetothreehourswithmybigJeep.Iputsignsinthewindows,bigsigns

thatsaidNEEDAJACK（千斤顶），andofferedmoney.Nothing.RightasIwasabouttogiveup,a

Mexicanfamilyinasmalltruckpulledover,andthefatherboundedout.

Hesizedupthesituationandcalledforhisdaughter,whospokeEnglish.Heconveyedthrough

herthathehadajackbutthatitwastoosmallfortheJeep,sowewouldneedsomethingtosupport

it.Thenhegotasaw（锯子）fromthetruckandcutasectionoutofabiglog（圆木）onthesideofthe

road.Werolleditoverandputhisjackontop,andwewereinbusiness.

Istartedtakingthewheeloff,andthen,ifyoucanbelieveit,Ibrokehistireiron（拆轮胎的扳

手）.Noworries:Hehandedittohiswife,andshewasgoneinaflashdowntheroadtobuyanew

tireiron.Shewasbackin15minutes.Wefinishedthejob,andIwasaveryhappyman.

Thetwoofusweredirtyandsweaty.Hiswifepreparedapotofwaterforustowashourhands.

Itriedtoputa$20billintheman'shand,buthewouldn'ttakeit,soinsteadIwentuptothetruck

andgaveittohiswifeasquietlyasIcould.Iaskedthelittlegirlwheretheylived.Mexico,shesaid.

TheywereinOregonsoMommyandDaddycouldworkonafruitfarmforthenextfewweeks.

Thentheywouldgohome.

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了去年作者汽车出现了三次故障，大多数人都懒得帮忙，作者

对此感到很厌烦。有一次，他的汽车又出故障了。他在路边求助了接近3个小时，但是没有

人停下来帮忙。就在打算放弃的时候，一个过路的墨西哥家庭停下来，提供了帮助。

【续写范文】WhenIwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifFdhadlunch.ItoldherIhadn't

hadlunchbecauseI'dbeenwaitinghereforhelpfornearlythreehours.Thegirlsaidtheydidn't

haveluncheither.Shesuggestedtoherparentsthatwehavelunchtogether.Theirtruckhappenedto

havesomefoodandsomethingsforthepicnic.Soweatetogetherinavacantlotbythesideofthe

road.Duringthattime,ItoldaboutwhathadhappenedtomeandhowIfelt.Theyshared

interestingstoriesabouttheirlivesinMexicoandonfruitfarms.Afterlunch,thegirl'smotherputa

paperbagoffruitinmyjeep.Ishowedmygratitudeagainandwesaidgoodbyetoeachother.

Aftertheyleft,Igotintomyjeepandopenedthepaperbag.Therearesomedelicatefruitsin

thepaperbag.IwassurprisedtofindthemoneyIhadquietlyleftthem.Atthesametime,therewas

anotewrittenbythegirl,whichread"Weareveryhappytobeabletohelpyou.Wehave

encounteredmanydifficultiesandbeendisappointed.Butwemetalotofhelpfulpeople,which

madeusfeelverywarm.Tohelpotherswithone'sownabilityisalsoakindofliftingafinger.The

beautyoflifecomesfromtheseliftingafinger.Ihopeyouhaveagoodlifeandahappymood.”

Thismademeverymoved,andIwouldtrymybesttohelpmorepeopleinthefuturetomakeour

worldmorebeautifulandwarmer.

【范文译文】我正要告别时，那个女孩问我吃过午饭了没有。我告诉她我没有吃午饭，因为

我在这里等了将近三个小时的人来帮忙。那个女孩说他们也没吃午饭。她向她的父母建议我

们一起吃午饭。他们的卡车碰巧有一些食物和野餐用的东西。于是我们在路边的一块空地上

一起吃饭。在那段时间里，我讲述了发生在我身上的事情和我的感受。他们分享了他们在墨

西哥和水果农场生活的有趣故事。午饭后，女孩的妈妈在我的吉普车里放了一纸袋水果。我

再次表达了我的感激之情，我们彼此道别。

他们走后，我上了吉普车，打开纸袋。纸袋里有一些精致的水果。我惊讶地发现我悄悄留给

他们的钱。与此同时，女孩写了一张纸条，上面写着：“我们很高兴能够帮助你。我们遇到

了许多困难，也感到失望。但是我们遇到了很多乐于助人的人，这让我们感到很温暖。用自

己的能力帮助别人，也是一种举手之劳。生活的美丽就来自于这些举手之劳。我希望你有一

个好的生活和一个快乐的心情。”这让我很感动，我将尽我最大的努力帮助更多的人在未来

使我们的世界更美丽，更温暖。

3.【原文内容】Afteralongday,ZhangTianfinallygotbacktohissmallroom,feelingtired.

Hehadstartedworkingatseveninthemorning,anditwaseightintheeveningnow.Hehadto

preparehislessonsforthefollowingday.ThisisatypicaldayforZhangTian.ComingtoGuizhou

Provincetoteachhasbeenquiteanexperienceforhim.

ZhangTiangraduatedfromuniversityandgotateacher'scertificatelastyear.Hisparents,like

most,hopedhewouldgotoabigcitytofindateachingjob.Likewise,hisfriendsalllefthis

hometownforworkinShanghaiorBeijing.ZhangTianfeltdifferently,however.Hewantedtostart

anewlifestyle.Hehadmetwonderfulteachersfromsmallvillagesduringhisearlyschoolyears

andhewasinspiredbythemtogoandteachwherehewasneededthemost.Forthatreasonhe

appliedforandbecameavolunteerteacherinavillageschool.Bringingwithhimlotsofbooks,

clothes,andtwopairsoftrainers,ZhangTiantravelledtothevillagewithaneagerheart.He

imaginedallsortsofexcitingthingsaboutlivingindependentlyandteachinginavillage.

However,noteverythingliveduptoZhangTian'shopes.Theschoolhadjustthreeteachersand

ZhangTianwastheonlyEnglishteacher.Theothertwolocalteacherswereresponsibleformaths

andChinese.Theschoolwasmuchsmallerthanhehadexpected,withonlythreeclassrooms.In

frontoftheclassrooms,therewasaplaygroundwhichgotdustyonwindydaysandmuddyonrainy

days.Livinginthevillagewasalsomorechallengingthanhehadthought.Thepowerandwater

supplieswereunstable,sohecouldonlyshowereverythreeorfourdays,andhehadtolearnhow

tocook.

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了大学毕业生张天在贵州一所乡村小学支教的情况，生活工作

条件都很差，以及他决定留下来之后的工作。

【续写范文】Thethoughtofleavingonceflashedthroughhismind.Ifhereturnedtobigcities,he

wouldlivecomfortablyandgethighlypaidandhisparentswouldbehappy.Buthegaveitupand

managedtofindwaystodealwiththechallenges,lbmakeschcoollifecolorfulforhisstudents,

ZhangTianintroducedmoreinterestingsubjectssuchasmusic,arts,geography.Toughaslifeis,he

hasenjoyedwiththechildren.Whatmakeshimmostsatisfiedisthathisstudentsareabletoread

speakandwriteinEnglishandbecomeconfidentinlearningthelanguage.Thevillagerstreatshim

asoneofthem.

ZhangTian*sfirstserviceyearisalmostover.Whatshouldhedonext?Hecanchoosetoreturnto

bigcitieswherehecanachievehisvalue.However,lookingattheeyesofthechildrenandthinking

thepoorlifeofthevillagers,hedecidestodosomethingmore.Heiscontentthathecanmakea

differencetotheirlife.Hehasbeenthinkingtocontactcharityorganizationsforhelp.Andhewill

teachvillagershowtoselllocalproductsonlinesothattheycanimprovetheirlivingconditions,

whichhethinkswillbeofbenefittochildren'slife.Afteralongconsideration,hechoosestostay

foranotheryear.Atleastnow,hewantstostay.Maybenextyearhewillchoosetoleave.Who

knows?

【范文译文】离开的念头一度闪过他的脑海。如果他回到大城市，他会生活得很舒适，收入

很高，他的父母也会很高兴。但他放弃了，并设法找到了应对挑战的方法。为了让学生的校

园生活丰富多彩，张田引入了更多有趣的课程，如音乐、艺术、地理。虽然生活艰难，但他

和孩子们相处得很愉快。让他最满意的是，他的学生能够用英语读、说、写，并对学习这门

语言充满信心。村民们把他当成自己人。

张天的第一个服务年就要结束了。他下一步该怎么做?他可以选择回到大城市，在那里他可

以实现自己的价值。然而，看着孩子们的眼睛，想到村民们贫困的生活，他决定做更多的事

情。他为自己能改变他们的生活而感到满足。他一直在考虑联系慈善机构寻求帮助。他还将

教村民们如何在网上销售当地产品，这样他们就可以改善生活条件，他认为这将有利于孩子

们的生活。经过长时间的考虑，他选择再呆一年。至少现在，他想留下来。也许明年他会选

择离开。谁知道呢？

4.【原文内容】Myschoolhadatraditionduringtheninth-gradegraduation:abeautifulgold

andgreenjacket（theschoolcolors）,wasawardedtothestudentwhohadmaintainedthehighest

gradesfornineyears.

IhadbeenastraightAstudentsincethefirstgradeandhadlookedforwardsverymuchto

owningthatjacket.Myfatherwasafarmlaborerwhocouldn'tearnenoughmoneytofeedfive

children.Iwasgiventomygrandparentstoraise.Therewouldneverbeaschoolsportsjacketfor

us.Thisscholarshipjacketwasmyonlychance.

OnedayinMay,Ihappenedtooverhearintheoffice.Mr.Schmidt,myhistoryteacher,andMr.

Boone,mymathteacherarguingaboutme."Irefusetodoit!Idon'tcarewhoherfatheris；her

gradescan*tmatchMartha'satall.Iwon'tlieorfalsify（伪造）records."saidMr.Schmidtangrily.

ButMr.Boone*svoicesoundedcalm."Joann'sfatherisnotonlyontheBoard（董事会），he

ownstheonlystoreintown:wecouldsayitwasaclosetieand..

Shakingandsad,I,waitedafewminutesandwalkedaway.

Thenextdaywhentheprincipalcalledmeintohisoffice."Martha,"hesaid,“There'sbeena

changeinpolicythisyearregardingthescholarshipjacket.ThisyeartheBoardhasdecidedto

chargefifteendollars,whichstillwon'tcoverthecompletecostofthejacket.Soifyouareunableto

paythemoneyforthejacket,itwillbegiventothenextonein

StandingwithallthedignityIcouldfind,Isaid,"I'llspeaktomygrandfatheraboutit,sir,and

letyouknowtomorrow."Icriedonthewayhome.

本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的学校在九年级的毕业典礼上会奖励一件漂亮的金绿色

的夹克给9年来成绩最好的学生，作者一直是优等生，渴望得到那件夹克，但是偶然听到

Mr.Schmidt老师和校长争论夹克到底给她还是Joann。后来祖父告诉作者买来的奖不能叫

奖。校长最后也把夹克奖给了作者。

【续写范文】BythetimeIgothome,myeyeswereredandswollen.Ifoundmygrandpainthe

beanfield.Sensingsomethingwrong,heaskedmewhathappenedwithgreatconcern.Imurmured