英语四级作文评分标准

英语四级作文评分标准第1页，课件共10页，创作于2023年2月评分标准4．避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分给低分，包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。

5.字数不足以应酌情扣分。二、评分标准

1．本题满分为15分

2．阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一份。

3．阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似，即定为该分数(即8分)；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)。但不得加或减半分。

第2页，课件共10页，创作于2023年2月分数档4．评分标准

2分

(33)—

条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分

(39)—

基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。

8分

(45)—

基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

11分(57)—

切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分(67)—

切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

[注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。]

第3页，课件共10页，创作于2023年2月p4累计字数CET-4110-119

100-109

90-99

80-89

70-79

60-69

50-59

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注：1．如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句，均不得计入所写字数。

2．规定的内容未写全者，按比例扣分。Sample:Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteaneye-witnessaccountofatrafficaccident.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:第4页，课件共10页，创作于2023年2月假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下

几点：1．车祸发生的时间及地点

2．你所见到的车祸情况

3．你对车祸原因的分析AnEye-WitnessAccountofaTrafficAccident14points/67ItwasthemorningofApril6th,2003.Atabout7:30,Iwenttoschoolbybikeasusual.Itwasarainydayandtheroadwasslippery.Ontheway,Inoticedaboyridinginfrontofme,talkingloudlywithhisfriends.Hedidn’tweararaincoat;insteadheheldanumbrellainonehand,androdewithanotherhand.

第5页，课件共10页，创作于2023年2月Sample-1AsheturnedlefttoGuangmingRoad,hefailedtoseeacarcomingfrombehindatruckparkedonthecorner.SuddenlyIheardabignoiseandsawanumbrellathrownaway.Theboywasknockeddownbythecar.Iwascompletelyshocked.Ithinktheboy’sabsent-mindednessaccountedmuchfortheaccident.Hewastalkingallthetimeanddangerouslyusedanumbrellawhileridingabike.Theweatheralsoplayedaroleinthetragedy.Thethirdcausewastheunproperlyparkedtruck,whichwasbigenoughtomaketheroadconditionsinvisibletothestudentswhoweregoingtomakeaturn.Allthesecontributedtothisaccident.第6页，课件共10页，创作于2023年2月Sample-2(11points/57)

ItwaslastFridaymorning.TheaccidenthappenedwhenIwasonmywaytoschool.ItwassoterriblethatIwouldneverforgetit.

Iwaswalkingalongtheroad,andtherearenotsomanycarsontheroad.Then,withabigsound,theaccidenthappened.Theredcarstopedsuddenlyontheroadsothatthedriveroffollowingcarcouldn’trespondimmiditely.Thebackoftheredcarwasbadlydamaged,butfortunatelytherewasnopeopleinjuredinthisaccident.

Ithinkthemainreasonsareasfollows:Firstofall,theredcarshouldn’tstopsuddenlywithoutanysignals.Secondly,thefollowingcarshouldkeepacertaindistancefromthefrontcarsothatthedrivercouldhaveenoughtimetotakemeasurswhenanybadlysituation.Finally,thesetwodriverswerecareless.Iftheyhadpaidmoreattentiontodriving,thisaccidentwouldn’thavehappened.第7页，课件共10页，创作于2023年2月Sample-3(8points/45)

ThetraficaccidentwastakenplaceatthejunctionoftwohighwayswhenIwasdrivingmycarhomeatabout4o’clock.

Theyellowcarinvoledintheaccidentwasrunningatahighspeedalongtheright-handwhenithappened.Hardlyitreachedthejunctionwhenitcrackedwithatruckrunningfromanotherdirection.Therewasnotimeforthedriverstochangethedirections.

Ithinktheaccidentmostlyattributedtosuchreasons:Firstlyandtheforemost,itwasthecarelessnessofbothofthedriversthatmostlymadetheaccidentshappen.Itwasnottoocarefulforthemwhenrunningacar.Secondly,theweatheralsoshouldberesponsibleforit.Thefogmadethevisionofdriversvague.Lastbutnottheleast,theconstructureoftheroadswasunreasonable.Thetraficlightsareneededatanyjunctions.第8页，课件共10页，创作于2023年2月Sample-4(5points/39)

Itwas8:00thismorning,Iwentonmywaytoschool.WhenIjustattheschoolgate,Isawtheterribletrafficaccidenthappend.

Astudentridehisbikeinahighspeed,andjustwhenhearrivedtheschoolgate,alargetrucktraveledoutofthegateandhithimdown.Hefliedover3mbeforehisbikehithimontheground.Surely,thepoorboywashurtverybad.

Ithinktherearetworeasonsfortheaccident.First,itwasjustthetimewebeganourfirstclass,thebikeriderperhapsdidnotwanttobelate,heridehisbikesofast,evendidn’tlowdownhisspeedatthegate.Secend,thetruckistoolarge,andatthattime,thereweretoomanypeoplewalkthroughthegate,sothebikedriverhavenootherwaytochose,buttorideinthemiddleoftheroad.第9页，课件共10页，创作于2023年2月Sample5(2points/33)

IsawtheTrafficAccidentinTianjinRoad.TheTrafficAccidenthasbeenatthemorning,May1.Twochildrenbybikewenttoschool.Acarissofast,thestreel.Andthecartouchedtwochildrenbybike,andtheTrafficAccidenthashappened.Oneistouchedsofarwayandtheotherisputdown.Marypeoplecomehere,andtheysenttotwochildrenwhogotoHospiton.Waitatime,TheploiemenarriverdintheAccide