专题十九书面表达课件

专题十九书面表达pptx专题十九书面表达pptx专题十九书面表达pptx考点一提纲类Writing1(2018天津夏)假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他

曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世

界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。(1)比赛的时间、地点;(2)邀请他的原因;(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。五年高考考点一提纲类Writing1(2018天津夏)假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校,他

曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队,参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世

界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。(1)比赛的时间、地点;(2)邀请他的原因;(3)训练计划将发送其邮箱,请他提出建议。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。五年高考参考词汇:世界青少年机器人技能竞赛theWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionDearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.

Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiJin答案[写作提示]1.本文是一封电子邮件,主要人称为第一人称和第二人称,主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。2.文章要点:①说明写邮件的目的;②介绍比赛的时间和地点;③邀请他的原因;④告知Chris训练计划将发

送到他的邮箱并请他提出自己的建议。Onepossibleversion:DearChris,Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.TheWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionisscheduledtobeheld

attheendofJulyinTianjin.Imwritingtoinviteyoutojoinourteamtoprepareforit.AsfarasIknow,youoncewonaprizeinaroboticscompetition.Therefore,Ithinknotonlywillit

beagoldenopportunityforyoutoshowyourgreattalent,butalsoyoucanofferusguidance,whichisofgreatsignificanceforustoperformwellinthecomingcompetition.Ourtrainingplanistobesenttoyoure-mailbox.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldgiveusyourpersonaladviceafterreadingit.Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiJin精彩语句

1.精美词汇schedulev.安排;计划agoldenopportunity良机significancen.重要性2.出彩结构Therefore,Ithinknotonlywillitbeagoldenopportunityforyoutoshowyourgreat

talent,butalsoyoucanofferusguidance,whichisofgreatsignificanceforustoperformwellin

thecomingcompetition.(倒装句+非限制性定语从句)Writing2(2018天津春)假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你在某网站的论坛上读到一位名为Chris的外国学生发的帖

子,得知他有意来中国的大学学习。请根据以下提示给Chris留言:(1)鼓励他来中国留学;(2)说明来华留学的好处(如:加深对中国的了解,对个人发展的益处等);(3)表示愿意进一步提供帮助。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。

ChrisAustraliaAnysuggestions?PostedonMar.22nd,20189:00PMItstimetomakeadecision.ImwonderingifIshouldgotoChinafor

college.

LiJinChinaReplytoChrisPostedonMar.23rd,201810:00AMHi,Chris,答案[写作提示]1.本文为跟帖留言,属提纲类作文。以第一人称为主体人称;以一般现在时和一般过去时为主

体时态。2.根据内容要点可分三段来写:①鼓励Chris来华留学;②说明来华留学的好处;③表达自己的意

愿:愿意进一步提供帮助。Onepossibleversion:Hi,Chris,IlearnedaboutthemessageyoupostedontheInternetthatyouhavetheintentiontocometoChi-

naforcollege,whichmakesmedelightedbecauseIbelieveitwouldbeagreatopportunityforyou

toenrichyourlifeaswellasbroadeningyourmind.TherearemanyadvantagesofstudyinginChina.Firstofall,therearemanyremarkableuniversi-

tiesinChinaforyoutochoosetoattendandyoucanexperiencetherichChineseculture.Second,

itisanextremelymeaningfulexperienceforyou,providingyouwithawonderfulplatformwhereyoucannotonlylearnmoreaboutChinabutalsopromoteyourpersonalabilities.Donthesitatetocontactmeifyouneedanymorehelp.高级表达

1.broadenonesmind开阔眼界2.anextremelymeaningfulexperience一次极其有意义的体验3.therichChineseculture灿烂的中国文化4.promoteyourpersonalabilities提升你的个人能力精彩语句

1.精美词汇opportunityn.机会enrichvt.使丰富remarkableadj.卓越的,非凡的2.出彩结构(1)IlearnedaboutthemessageyoupostedontheInternetthatyouhavetheintention

tocometoChinaforcollege,whichmakesmedelightedbecauseIbelieveitwouldbeagreatop-

portunityforyoutoenrichyourlifeaswellasbroadeningyourmind.(message后接省去that/which

的定语从句,that引导同位语从句,which引导非限制性定语从句,because引导原因状语从句)(2)Second,itisanextremelymeaningfulexperienceforyou,providingyouwithawonderfulplat-formwhereyoucannotonlylearnmoreaboutChinabutalsopromoteyourpersonalabilities.(现

在分词短语providing...作伴随状语,where引导定语从句)Writing3(2018课标全国Ⅰ)假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回

复邮件,内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案[写作提示]1.本文是回复一封邮件,主要人称为第二人称,写作主体时态为一般现在时。2.文章要点:①到达时间;②合适的礼物;③餐桌礼仪。Onepossibleversion:DearTerry,Iamdelightedwhenreceivingyourletter,askingwhatcustomsyoushouldpayattentiontowhen

visitingafriend.Herearemytipsforyou.Firstofall,bearinmindthatyouhadbetterarrivepunctuallyorsometimeearlierthantheap-

pointedtime,whichisofgreatsignificancetoshowyourpoliteness.Additionally,toberespectful,

youmightaswellbringanappropriategift,likesomefruits.Mostimportantly,itsvitalthatyou

shouldmindyourtablemanners.Forinstance,neverspeakwithyourmouthfulloffood,whichmaybesimilartoyourowncustom.Inbrief,doastheChinesedowheninChina.Idohopeyouwillhavegreatfunatyourfriendshome.Yourssincerely,LiHua精彩语句

1.精美词汇punctuallyadv.准时地beofgreatsignificance很重要appropriateadj.合适的2.出彩结构Firstofall,bearinmindthatyouhadbetterarrivepunctuallyorsometimeearlier

thantheappointedtime,whichisofgreatsignificancetoshowyourpoliteness.(that引导宾语从句,

which引导非限制性定语从句)Writing4(2018课标全国Ⅱ)你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing

To-

gether,内容包括:1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案[写作提示]本文为提纲式作文,属于应用文中的书面通知。可采用三段三步写作法写作。第一步审题立意,布局谋篇——“启”:审题确定主题、体裁、主要人称和主体时态。主题:

在学校宣传栏“英语天地”发布邀请大家观看短片的书面通知;体裁:书面通知;人称和时态:以第一、二人称为主要人称,以一般现在时或一般将来时为主体时态。第二步确定、提炼和理顺要点,顺势承上启下,巧妙转折过渡——巧“承”妙“转”,即注意

段落之间、句子之间的衔接与过渡。结合要点文章可分三段来写。第一段:介绍短片内容—

—学校的发展;第二段:说明放映的时间和地点;第三段:表达愿望——希望大家对短片提意

见。第三步紧扣主题,遣词造句——“合”:照应开头和主题的完美的结尾,是画龙点睛之笔。紧

扣主题组词成句,做到语言得体、准确无误,避免重复;遣词造句时,注意高级词汇、短语或句

式的使用。Onepossibleversion:NoticeDearschoolmates,ItisagreathonortobeonbehalfofourschooltoinformyouthatwellinviteyoutoseeanEng-

lishshortfilmnamedGrowing

Together,whichisaboutthedevelopmentofourschool.Wehavearrangedthattheshortfilmwillbeonshowfrom16:00to17:00atourschooltheaterto-morrow.Dontmissthechanceoftakingpartinthiscollectiveactivity.Idohopeyoucangiveussomevaluablesuggestionsabouttheshortfilm.Pleasegiveyourfeed-

backintimeandcontactusatyourconvenience.StudentsUnion精彩语句1.精美词汇onbehalfof代表takepartin参加;参与feedbackn.反馈atonesconvenience

在某人方便的时候2.出彩结构Itisagreathonortobeonbehalfofourschooltoinformyouthatwellinviteyou

toseeanEnglishshortfilmnamedGrowing

Together,whichisaboutthedevelopmentofour

school.(that引导宾语从句;which引导非限制性定语从句)Writing5(2018课标全国Ⅲ)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:1.学校的体育场馆;2.主要的运动项目;3.你喜欢的项目。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案[写作提示]1.本文为书信形式的说明文;以第一人称的口吻介绍学校的体育场馆和主要的运动项目;时态

以一般现在时为主。2.可采用三段式结构。第一段:介绍背景,引出写作目的;第二段:具体介绍试题给出的三个要点,其中第二个要点可采取列举的方式,第三个要点除了写自己喜欢的体育运动,还要阐述喜欢

这项体育运动的原因;第三段:总结并发出邀请。Onepossibleversion:DearPeter,Iamexceedinglydelightedtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeinyourlastletteraboutthephysical

exerciseinourschoolandthefollowinginformationmaygiveyouaroughsketch.Tobeginwith,afabulousnewstadiumhasbeenbuilt,whichhasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld,ofwhichping-pongandfootball,aswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.Asforme,Imintoxicatedwithbasketballsinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtoconfrontthechallengesinmylife.Allinall,Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.Yours,LiHua精彩语句

1.精美词汇exceedinglyadv.非常,极其givesb.aroughsketch向某人做简单的陈述enjoy

greatpopularity受到了热烈欢迎2.出彩结构Moreover,withthestadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportseventsareabletobeheld,

ofwhichping-pongandfootball,aswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.(with的复

合结构作状语,ofwhich引导定语从句)Writing6(2018浙江,第一节)假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:1.口语能力;2.相关经验;3.应聘目的。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案[写作提示]1.本文是一封求职信,以第一人称为主,时态主要用一般现在时。2.内容要点:(1)口语能力;(2)相关经验;(3)此次应聘的目的。Onepossibleversion:DearSir/Madam,Onseeingyournoticeonthebulletinboard,Ifeelexcitedtowritethisletterfortheposition.OwingtostudyingintheEnglishdepartment,IcantalkinEnglishfluently.Tobehonest,Ihave

justwonfirstprizeintheSpokenEnglishCompetition,sothereisnodoubtthatthereisnotany

problemformetocommunicatewithforeigners.Whatsmore,Ihaveeverservedasareceptionistinourschools70thanniversarycelebration,

makingmyselfmoreconfident.Inordertopractisemyspeakingskillsandgetmoreexperience,Imeagertobetakenonforthisjob.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua精彩语句1.精美词汇owingto因为fluentlyadv.流利地tobehonest老实说communicatev.沟通;

交流whatsmore而且confidentadj.有信心的beeagertodosth.渴望做某事lookforwardtosth.期盼某事2.出彩结构(1)Onseeingyournoticeonthebulletinboard,Ifeelexcitedtowritethisletterfortheposition.(on

doingsth.表示“一做某事”)(2)...thereisnodoubtthatthereisnotanyproblemformetocommunicatewithforeigners.(There

isnodoubtthat...句式)(3)Whatsmore,Ihaveeverservedasareceptionistinourschools70thanniversarycelebration,

makingmyselfmoreconfident.(making...为非谓语动词短语作状语,表示自然而然的结果)Writing7(2018北京,第一节)假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴

趣,计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件,内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.推荐他上哪所大学;3.建议他做哪些准备工作。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearJim,Yours,LiHua答案[写作提示]1.仔细审题,注意交际用语;2.要点齐全,合理添加细节;3.注意词句的使用,关注文章的整体性。Onepossibleversion:DearJim,Imhappytohearfromyou.WelcometoBeijingforyourstudy!SinceyouhavelongbeeninterestedinChineseculture,IthinkBeijingLanguageandCultureUni-

versityisanidealplaceforyou.Theuniversityisknownforitslanguageandculturecoursesin-

tendedforinternationalstudents.Ibelieveyouwillhavearewardingexperiencethere.Tobefrank,studyingforadegreeinadifferentcultureisnevereasy.Youdbetterlearnsomeba-

sicChinesebeforeyoucome.Thatway,youmayadjustyourselftothelifehereinBeijingsoon.Ifyouhaveanyotherquestions,doletmeknow.Yours,LiHua精彩语句1.精美词汇idealadj.理想的rewardingadj.值得做的2.出彩结构Theuniversityisknownforitslanguageandculturecoursesintendedforinterna-

tionalstudents.(非谓语动词作定语)Writing8(2017天津夏)假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs.Green一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况,请

根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入

了解天津等);(3)希望她有机会重访天津。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:第十三届全运会the13thNationalGamesDearMrs.Green,Imsogladtohearfromyou.

Yours,LiJin答案[写作提示]1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为应用文。人称以第一人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主。2.写作要点:(1)介绍自己的学习和生活;(2)告诉Mrs.Green你已成为第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍你为此所做的准备;(3)希望Mrs.Green重访天津。Onepossibleversion:DearMrs.Green,Imsogladtohearfromyou.Withthecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,Iamengaged

inpreparingforit.Meanwhile,owingtomygreatinterestinsports,Ipaycloseattentiontothe13

thNationalGamestobeheldinTianjinattheendofAugust.AndthegoodnewsIwanttotellyouisthatIhavebecomeavolunteerforit.Inordertohaveagoodperformance,Ihavemadealotof

preparationsforit.Afterschool,IoftensurftheInternettogetmoreinformationaboutthehistory

andcultureofTianjin.IalsopracticemyoralEnglisheveryday.IdohopeyoucanrevisitTianjinsomeday.Yours,LiJin精彩语句

1.精美词汇performancen.表现;成绩revisitv.重游,再访beengagedin忙于2.出彩结构Withthecollegeentranceexaminationdrawingnear,Iamengagedinpreparingfor

it.(with复合结构)Writing9(2017天津春)

假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你的美国笔友Chris正在学习汉语,他得知“中国诗词大

会”在CCTV播出,非常感兴趣,便写信给你,希望你介绍相关情况及更多了解中国文化的途

径。请根据以下提示给他写一封回信。(1)简单介绍“中国诗词大会”引起的反响;(2)介绍了解中国文化的途径(如阅读相关书籍、利用媒体资源等);(3)表达对Chris学习中国文化的祝愿。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:中国诗词大会ChinesePoetryCompetitionDearChris,

Yours,LiJin答案[写作提示]本文为提纲式作文,属于书信体。主要使用第一、三人称,以一般现在时为主体时态。文章可分三段来写:首段简单介绍“中国诗词大会”在CCTV播出后的反响;第二段可具体推

荐一本书;第三段表达自己的祝愿。Onepossibleversion:DearChris,Imgladtoreplytoyourletter.ChinesePoetryCompetition,whichaimstoencouragepeopletoknowmoreabouttraditionalChinesepoetryculture,hasbeenbroadcastonCCTVandhasattract-

edalmostallthepeoplewhoareinterestedinChinesepoetry.Inyourletter,youmentionedthatyouareeagertoknowaboutChineseculture.Ithinkthebest

waytolearnaboutitistoreadsomerelevantbooks.Idliketorecommendabooktoyou.The

book,entitledRead

Poetry

and

Learn

HistorybyWangChunshui,issuitablefortheforeignersto

learnclassicalChinesepoetry.ThepoemsinthebookcanreflecttheChinesehistoryandculture,manyofwhichcangivereadersvividpicturesofthelifeoftheancientChinese.Andtheycanalso

improveyourappreciationofChinesepoetry.Ithinkthebookisagoodchoiceforyou.Ibelieveyouwillunderstandthepoemseasilyandeffi-

ciently.WishyoutoenjoythebookandknowmoreaboutChina.Yours,LiJin精彩语句

1.精美词汇beinterestedin对……感兴趣beeagertodosth.渴望做某事besuitablefor适合2.出彩结构ChinesePoetryCompetition,whichaimstoencouragepeopletoknowmoreabout

traditionalChinesepoetryculture,hasbeenbroadcastonCCTVandhasattractedalmostallthe

peoplewhoareinterestedinChinesepoetry.(句中使用了一个which引导的非限制性定语从句和

一个who引导的定语从句)Writing10(2017课标全国Ⅱ)假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,

内容包括:1.展览时间、地点;2.展览内容。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案[写作提示]1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为书信。人称以第一人称和第三人称为主,以一般现在时和一般将

来时为主体时态。2.文章要点:1)展览时间、地点;2)展览内容:中国传统剪纸艺术的历史和作品。Onepossibleversion:DearHenry,ImLiHua,oneofyourstudents.Imwritingtoinviteyoutovisitthepaper-cuttingexhibition.

Paper-cuttingisoneofChinesetraditionsandImsureyouwilllikeit.TheexhibitionwillbeheldinthelocalmuseumnextSaturday.SomefamousChineseartistswillperformonthatday.Meanwhile,somebeautifulpaper-cuttingworks,collectedfromalloverthe

country,willbeexhibitedthere.Itwillbeafeast.Ifyoulike,youcanalsojoininpaper-cutting.I

msureitwillbeanunforgettableexperienceforyou.Imlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua精彩语句

1.精美词汇exhibitionn.展览unforgettableadj.难忘的2.出彩结构Ifyoulike,youcanalsojoinin...(if引导条件状语从句)Writing11(2017课标全国Ⅲ)假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀

请他加入,内容包括:1.球队活动;2.报名方式及截止日期。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案[写作提示]1.本文为提纲类作文。人称应以第一、二人称为主,时态以一般现在时、一般将来时为主。2.写作要点:①导入话题:鉴于Eric对乒乓球运动的兴趣,特告知他校乒乓球队招收新队员的消

息;②介绍球队活动,可从日常训练安排以及比赛活动入手;③告知Eric报名方式,提醒他务必在

截止日期前完成报名。Onepossibleversion:DearEric,Imwritingtoinviteyoutojoinourschooltabletennisteam.Ihavebeentoldthatourschoolteam

isrecruitingnewmembers.Knowingthatyouarekeenonplayingtabletennis,Iwonderifyoud

liketojoin.Teammembersneedtoreceivetrainingafterschooleverydayandareoftenofferedopportunities

towatchtabletenniscompetitions,whichbenefitmemost.Whatdoyouthinkofit?Ifyouarein-

terestedinit,youcanvisittheschoolwebsitetosignup.Theclosingdateis15thJune.Ihopetomeetyouintheschoolteam.Yours,LiHua精彩语句

1.精美词汇recruitv.吸收;招募bekeenon酷爱……,对……着迷2.出彩结构Knowingthatyouare...Iwonderif...(现在分词短语中that引导宾语从句;wonder后

的if引导宾语从句)Writing12(2017北京,第一节)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或

者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:1.你建议的线路;2.你的理由;3.你的祝愿。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear

Jim,

Yours,Li

Hua答案[写作提示]1.本文为提纲类作文。体裁为应用文中的书信。时态以一般现在时为主。2.先介绍建议的旅游线路,再陈述理由,最后表达祝愿。Onepossibleversion:Dear

Jim,ImhappytoreceiveyourletterandknowyourecomingtoChina.OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai,botharehighlyrecommended.Personally,IpreferthetouralongtheYangtze,thelongestriverandoneofthemotherriversofChinesecivilization.YoucanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople.Moreover,thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing,withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots.ThatswhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzewillbeabetterchoice.HopeyoullhaveagoodtimeinChina.Yours,Li

Hua精彩语句

1.精美词汇recommendv.推荐civilizationn.文明2.出彩结构ThatswhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzewillbeabetterchoice.(表语从句)Writing13(2017浙江,第一节)假定你是李华,计划组织一次郊游,请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括:1.参加者;2.时间、地点;3.活动:登山、野餐等。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案[写作提示]1.本文是一封邀请英国朋友参加郊游的邮件,因此,时态要用一般现在时和一般将来时。2.注意本文的要点:时间、地点、参加者和活动,不可以遗漏要点。在表述的时候不可逐字翻

译,可以将一些信息包含在从句、分词结构中。3.注意句子之间的顺畅连接以及高级句式的使用。Onepossibleversion:DearChris,Howiseverythinggoingthesedays?Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojoinmyclassinanoutingorga-

nizedbymethisSaturday,June10th.Wewillstartat6oclockearlyinthemorningfromthe

schoolgate,andthentakeabustoYinlingMountain,wherewewillclimbthemountaininthemorningandthenhaveapicnicatnoon.Ifyoucouldcome,thereisnoneedforyoutotakefood

butyoudbetterwearsportsshoesandsuitableclothes.Wewillbereallygladifyoucancome.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua精彩语句

1.精美词汇suitableadj.合适的2.出彩结构Ifyoucouldcome,thereisnoneed...clothes.(if引导状语从句,thereisnoneedfor

sb.todosth.某人没有必要做某事)Writing14(2016天津)假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周

的交流活动。现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。(1)回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面);(2)谈谈收获或感想;(3)表达祝愿与期望。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dearfriends,Howtimeflies!

Thankyou.答案[写作提示]1.本文为欢送会上的发言稿,人称为第一人称,写作时态用一般过去时、一般现在时、一般将来时。2.写作要点包括:回顾双方的交流活动,细数收获或感想,表达祝愿与期望。Onepossibleversion:Dearfriends,Howtimeflies!IamLiJin,presidentofStudentUnionofChenguangMiddleSchool.Itsmy

greatprivilegetobehere,sharingthismomentwithourfellowfriendsfromtheGreatBritain.Dur-

ingthetwo-weekactivities,wesurelyexchangedourideasonlearning,waysoflife,PEandcul-

tures.Oneofthehighlightswasthesportsmeetingwherewecompetedwitheachotherinthebas-

ketballmatch.Thepasttwoweekswitnessedourgrowthandfriendship.Itisnotonlyyourenthusiasmbutalso

yourteamworkandgoodspiritsthatimpressus.Afterthetwo-weekexchangeactivities,wenow

haveabetterunderstandingofeachotheronawholenewlevel.AndIsincerelyhopeourfriend-shiplastsforever.Wishyouallthebest!Thankyou.高级表达

1.Itsmy/aprivilegetodosth.……是我的荣幸2.share...with...与……分享……3.competewith与……竞争精彩语句Itisnotonlyyourenthusiasmbutalsoyourteamworkandgoodspiritsthatimpressus.

(强调句型,被强调部分使用了并列连词notonly...butalso...)Writing15(2016课标全国Ⅰ)假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms

Jenkins写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案[写作提示]1.本文为半开放式作文,体裁为书信。人称为第一人称,时态主要用一般现在时。2.文章要点包括告诉对方你的情况(想去一家外资公司兼职)和要求(帮助修改申请书和个人简历)。Onepossibleversion:DearMsJenkins,Imoneofyourstudents,LiHuafromClassTwo.Imwritingtoaskforyourhelp.ThissummerIintendtotakeupapart-timejobinaforeigncompany,throughwhichIwouldliketobroadenmyhorizons,gainsomeworkingexperienceandmeetnewfriends.MyapplicationandresumehavebeenpreparedandIsincerelyhopeyoucanhelpmepolishthem.Firstly,Imwonderingifyoucanhelpaddsomecontents.Besides,iftherearesomemistakesinthem,Ihopeyoucanhelpcorrectthem.Lastly,Iattachsomematerialswhoseformathadbetterbechangedandhopeyoucanhelp.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakethetroubletodosomuchforme.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourstruly,LiHua高级表达

1.intendtodosth.打算做某事2.takeup开始从事3.takethetroubletodosth.不辞劳苦做某事,不怕麻烦做某事精彩语句ThissummerIintendtotakeupapart-timejobinaforeigncompany,throughwhichI

wouldliketobroadenmyhorizons,gainsomeworkingexperienceandmeetnewfriends.(through

which引导非限制性定语从句)Writing16(2016课标全国Ⅱ)假定你是李华,你校摄影俱乐部(photographyclub)将举办国际中学生摄影展。请给你的英国

朋友Peter写封信,请他提供作品。信的内容包括:1.主题:环境保护;2.展览时间;3.投稿邮箱:。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案[写作提示]1.本文属于应用文,按照要求写一封书信,应使用第一人称。基本时态用一般现在时。2.本文要点:1)主题:环境保护;2)展览时间;3)投稿邮箱。Onepossibleversion:DearPeter,OurschoolphotographyclubisgoingtoholdanInternationalHighSchoolStudentPhotographyShow.Thethemeoftheshowisenvironmentalprotection.ItwillstartfromJune15thandlastfor

threeweeks.Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate.Iknowyoutakegoodpic-

turesandyouvealwayswantedtodosomethingforenvironmentalprotection.Irememberyoushowedmesomephotosonthatthemethelasttimeyouvisitedourschool.Thisissurelyagood

chanceformorepeopletoseethem.Ifyouwanttojoin,youcansendyourphotostointlphoto-

.Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua高级表达

1.environmentalprotection环境保护2.hearfrom收到……的来信;听到……的消息精彩语句Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate.(who引导定语从句)Writing17(2016课标全国Ⅲ)假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。答案[写作提示]1.本文为提纲式作文,体裁为应用文——电子邮件。主要人称为第一人称,时态主要用一般现

在时。2.文章要点为告诉对方你不能赴约的原因并表示歉意和另约时间,虽然题干中已经给出要点,

但重在适当地发挥。Onepossibleversion:DearBob,ImsorrytosaythatIcannotgotothebookstorewithyouonFridayafternoon.Ihavejustfound

thatIhavetoattendanimportantclassmeetingthatafternoon.Ihopethechangewillnotcauseyou

toomuchtrouble.ShallwegoonSaturdaymorning?Wecansetoutearlysothatwellhavemoretimetoreadand

selectbooks.Ifitsconvenientforyou,letsmeetat8:30outsidetheschoolgate.Ifnot,letme

knowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimeafterschoolnextweek.Yours,LiHua高级表达

1.availableadj.可获得的;有空的2.setout动身,出发3.itisconvenientforsb.对某人来说方便精彩语句Ifnot,letmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.(Ifnot为省略句;what引导宾语从句)Writing18(2015天津)假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津,你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请

根据以下提示,写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系,并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令

营时带去赠书。(1)自我介绍;(2)拟捐赠图书的类型