读后续写-捕捉和照应续写点

读后续写微探——捕捉和照应续写点可续写点

一篇完整的文章中，作者通常会围绕某个主题来写，在篇首,篇中或篇末设置伏笔(ahintpredictslaterdevelopmentsinastory)，这些统称为可续写点。Para1.IguessDadwasfeelingalittlebettertoo.Iwentdowntobreakfastlate,butassoonasIwalkedintothe

kitchenhesmiledatme.“I'vebeenthinking,”hesaid.“1.

Maybeyou'reright.Youdidearnthemoneyandwhat

Iwantmorethananythingisforyoutobehappyandtolearntobeindependent.Maybeyoushouldbuythecar

ifitmakesyouhappy.”Suddenly,Ididn'tknowwhattosay.Para2.Afteramoment,Iwasabletospeak.

2.Isaid,“Idowantacar,butmaybeIdon'tneedonerightnow.

3.

Youalwaysletmeuseyoursandthatmoneywouldcomeinreallyhandy

whenIstartcollege.And

4.I'mreallysorry

aboutwhatIsaidyesterday.”

“I'msorryforwhatIsaid,too,”hesaid.Atthatmoment,Iknewthatmyfather

onlywantedthebestformeandthatIcouldalwaystrusthim,evenwhenIdisagreedwithhim!与上文衔接Para1.IguessDadwasfeelingalittlebettertoo.Iwentdowntobreakfastlate,butassoonasIwalkedintothe

kitchenhesmiledatme.“I'vebeenthinking,”hesaid.“1.

Maybeyou'reright.Youdidearnthemoneyandwhat

Iwantmorethananythingisforyoutobehappyandtolearntobeindependent.Maybeyoushouldbuythecar

ifitmakesyouhappy.”Suddenly,Ididn'tknowwhattosay.与上文衔接

P2：

Ihadbeensavingmoneyfrommypart-timejobforthreeyearsandnowIwantedtouseittobuyacar.

Para2.Afteramoment,Iwasabletospeak.

2.Isaid,“Idowantacar,butmaybeIdon'tneedonerightnow.

3.

YoualwaysletmeuseyoursandthatmoneywouldcomeinreallyhandywhenIstartcollege.4.

AndI'mreallysorryaboutwhatIsaidyesterday.”

“I'msorryforwhatIsaid,too,”hesaid.Atthatmoment,Iknewthatmyfather

onlywantedthebestformeandthatIcouldalwaystrusthim,evenwhenIdisagreedwithhim!与上文衔接

P3：

IfinallyfellasleepandwhenIwokeupIdidn'treallychangemymind.ButIfeltalittlebetter.

Para2.Afteramoment,Iwasabletospeak.

2.

Isaid,“Idowantacar,butmaybeIdon'tneedonerightnow.3.

Youalwaysletmeuseyoursandthatmoneywouldcomeinreallyhandy

whenIstartcollege.

4.

AndI'mreallysorryaboutwhatIsaidyesterday.”“I'msorryforwhatIsaid,too,”hesaid.Atthatmoment,Iknewthatmyfather

onlywantedthebestformeandthatIcouldalwaystrusthim,evenwhenIdisagreedwithhim!与上文衔接

P3：

HefeltIdidn’treallyneedacar.Afterall,IcouldusehisanytimeIwantedto.

Para2.Afteramoment,Iwasabletospeak.

2.Isaid,“Idowantacar,butmaybeIdon'tneedonerightnow.3.

YoualwaysletmeuseyoursandthatmoneywouldcomeinreallyhandywhenIstartcollege.4.

AndI'mreallysorry

aboutwhatIsaidyesterday.”

“I'msorryforwhatIsaid,too,”hesaid.Atthatmoment,Iknewthatmyfather

onlywantedthebestformeandthatIcouldalwaystrusthim,evenwhenIdisagreedwithhim!与上文衔接

P1：

Butthen,Ihadnevershoutedthewords“Ihateyou!”inhisface,either.与开头衔接Para1.IguessDadwasfeelingalittlebettertoo.Iwentdowntobreakfastlate,butassoonasIwalkedintothekitchenhesmiledatme.“I'vebeenthinking,”hesaid.“1.

Maybeyou'reright.Youdidearnthemoneyandwhat

Iwantmorethananythingisforyoutobehappyandtolearntobeindependent.Maybeyoushouldbuythecar

ifitmakesyouhappy.”

Suddenly,Ididn'tknowwhattosay.Para2.Afteramoment,Iwasabletospeak.

2.

Isaid,“Idowantacar,butmaybeIdon'tneedonerightnow.

3.

Youalwaysletmeuseyoursandthatmoneywouldcomeinreallyhandy

whenIstartcollege.And

4.I'mreallysorry

aboutwhatIsaidyesterday.”

“I'msorryforwhatIsaid,too,”hesaid.Atthatmoment,Iknewthatmyfather

onlywantedthebestformeandthatIcouldalwaystrusthim,evenwhenIdisagreedwithhim!捕捉和照应续写点微技能

1.品读原文首段，捕捉可续写点2.留意细节描写，捕捉可续写点3.关注高频词，捕捉可续写点4.留意原文结尾，捕捉可续写点5.解读续写所给首句，捕捉可续写点捕捉和照应训练

1.提炼原文四要素WhoWhenWhereWhatTom,JaneOneweekendinJulyintheforestJanewaslost.

Team1&2------原文首段

Team3&4&5

------细节描写

Team6

------高频词

Team7

------原文结尾

Team8------解读所给首句Teamwork

捕捉和照应训练

2.仔细品读原文首段背景续写点：

照应方式：July,Jane,Tom,intheforest,startedtoquarrel,walkedaway

Ifitweren'tforthatquarrel,Iwouldn'tbetrappedhere.捕捉和照应训练

2.仔细品读原文，留意细节描写细节描写续写点：照应方式：“Tom,help!”shesaidwithexcitement.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”捕捉和照应训练

2.仔细品读原文，留意细节描写细节描写续写点照应方式：Thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Fortunately,thistime,thehelicopterdidn’tmissher.捕捉和照应训练

2.仔细品读原文，留意细节描写细节描写续写点照应方式：HerangerandtirednessweresweptawaythemomentshesawTom.

Janewassoangry;Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.捕捉和照应训练

3.仔细品读原文，关注高频词高频词续写点：照应方式：helicopter,yellowblouseJanewildlywavedheryellowblouseonhearingthehelicopter.捕捉和照应训练

4.仔细品读原文结尾原文结尾续写点：照应方式：Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.Shecontinuedtolookforanopenarea.Janewildlywavedheryellowblouseonhearingthehelicopter.捕捉和照应训练

6.仔细解读所给首句所给首句续写点：照应方式：Para.1:But

nomorehelicopterscameanditwas

gettingdarkagain.Para.2:

Itwas

daybreak

whenJanewokeup.Duringthefearsomedarkness,Janefeltverycoldintheforest,althoughitwasalreadyJuly.Surroundedbythefearandtiredness,Janefelttiredandfinallyfellintosleep.Shebecameenergeticafteranight’ssleep.Para.1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Para.2:ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Writing

Sample

Butnomorehelicoptercameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Duringthefearsomedarkness,extremelyregretfulforleavingalone,Janefeltverycoldintheforest,althoughitwasalreadyJuly.“Ifitweren'tforthatquarrel,Iwouldn'tbetrappedhere.”shethought