仁爱版英语八年级下册期末作文预测-暑期安全-演讲稿

审审题圈划关键词确定人称时态确定写作对象和内容列列出不同的句式列出文章结构恰当使用连接词改检查语法、拼写等错误并改正010204030506定连抄字丑多扣分认真抄正如何写好一篇好作文仁爱英语八下期末作文练笔讲评根据提示，以“HowtoKeepSafe“为题写一篇80词左右的演讲稿。范文讲解：暑期安全暑假即将到来，鉴于以往假期中各种事故频发，同学们，请你以“Howtokeepsafe”为主题，用英语写一篇短文，给同学们一些建议。

Hello,everyone!Asweknow,safetyisveryimportantforus.Asteenagers,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.Herearesomeofmysuggestions.

Firstofall,it'ssaidthatmanypeoplegethurtorlosetheirlivesintrafficaccidentsinChina.SoIthinkit'simportantforustoobeythetrafficrules.Also,weoughttoeathealthilyandsafely.Eatingfoodthatgoesbadwilldoharmto(beharmfulto)ourhealth.(吃坏的食物对身体有害)Besides,it’sdangeroustoswimintheriver.____________Lastbutnotleast,ifyougotocrowdedplaces,remembertoputonyourmaskstoavoidthespreadofdiseases.Inshort,weshouldvalueourlivesandkeepawayfromthedanger.亮点词拓展-value/ˈvæljuː/珍爱1.Theyplaceahighvalueonsafety.他们对安全极为重视。2.Ireallyvaluehimasafriend.我真的把他视为好朋友。遵守交通规则健康、安全饮食吃坏的食物对身体有害带上口罩阻止疾病传播

珍爱生命远离危险obeythetrafficruleseathealthilyandsafely.Eatfoodthatgoesbaddoharmtoourhealthbeharmfultoourhealthbebadforourhealth.putonyourmasksavoid/stopthespreadofdiseases.valueourliveskeepawayfromthedanger.相关短语小练笔：根据提示，以“HowtoKeepSafe“为题写一篇80词左右的演讲稿。

审认真读题，圈划出关键信息。定文体时态人称演讲稿（开头结尾）一般现在时we(you)写作对象：写作目的：写作要点：观众，同学们给建议，保持安全！安全！3+1自拟网络交友遇险报警饮食安全……(请补充一条)HowtoKeepSafe网络交友遇险报警饮食安全……(请补充一条)HowtoKeepSafe列:逻辑顺序词+提示词+句式makefriendsonline/ontheInternetcall110whenweareindangereatsafelyswimsafely/dosportssafelyTostartwith,Next,What'smore,Last,...mattersalotthereisnodoubtthatit'sa..ideatodosth.remembertodosth.it's+dangerousforsb.todosth.列:逻辑顺序词+提示词+句式演讲稿格式-开头Beginning：____________+________________________问候、寒暄引出主题和下文Hello(Goodmorning),everyone!It'smyhonortogiveaspeechhere.

Asweknow,safetyisveryimportantforus.Asteenagers,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.Buthowcanwekeepsafe?Herearesomeofmysuggestions.

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Asweknow,nothingismoreimportantthansafety.Herearesomesuggestionsonhowtokeepsafe.

一个亮点即可。演讲稿格式-结束语该结束语并非对正文建议！而是演讲的结束语That'sall.Thankyou.Tobeginwith,wearesupposedtobecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.Next,ifweareindanger,wemustcallthepoliceforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.

Moreover,eatinghealthilyandsafelymatteralottous.Eatingfoodthatgoesbad(Eatingbadfood)willbeharmfultoourhealth.Bytheway,junkfoodisalsoakillerofhealth.Lastbutnotleast,summeriscoming,andwemustremembernottoswimintheriver.Inshort,safetymustcomefirst!Pleasekeepitinmind范文-1...It'simportantforustokeepsafeindailylife.Butdoyouknowhowtodoit?Firstofall,youaresupposedtothinkitoverbeforeyouwanttomakefriendswithothersontheInternet.Noteveryoneiskindtoyou.Secondly,ifyouareintrouble,youmustcall110forhelp.What'smore,eatingfoodthatgoesbadwilldoharmtoourhealth,soweshouldmakesurethatthefoodisfreshandclean.Lastbutnotleast,youmayfeelhotandcan'twaittogoswimmingintheriver.Infact,it'sdangerousforus!Inshort,takemyadviceandI'mtrulybelieveyouwilllivesafely.That'sall.Thankyou.范文-2佳句赏析Ifyouareindanger,whynotturntothepolice.Theyarewillingtohelpyou.Wearesupposedtomakefriendsonlinecarefullybecausewedon'tknowalotaboutthem.Thebestwaytokeepyousafeistofindapolicemanforhelp.佳句赏析Asweknow,makingfriendsontheInternetispopularwithyoungpeople.However........Thefoodmustbecleanandweshouldcookitinarightway.Youshouldsaynotoswimmingintheriver.Nooneknowwhatdangeriswaitignforus.片断赏析Tostartwith,asthesayinggoes,”Everycoinhastwosides.”TheInternetplaysanimprotantpartinourlifebutit'salsofullofdanger.Sowe'dbetterbecarefultomakefriendsonline.What'smore,thereisnodoubtthatfoodsafetymattersalot.Wearesupposedto....学生作品-找出可取之处Hello,everyone!It'smyhonortogiveaspeechhere.Tostartwith,wearesupposedtobecarefulwhenmakingfriendsontheInternet.Remembernottotalkmorepersonalquestionswiththem.Next,ifyouareindanger,youmustcall110forhelp.Meanwhile,tryingtobecalmmattersalottoyou.Thenit'snecessaryforyoutoeatregularly.Themorefruiltandvegetablesweeat,themorehealthywewillbe.Lastbutnotleast,asastudent,wemustlearntrafficrulesandobeythem.Bydoingso,wecanprotectusmoresafely.That'sall.Thankyou.Hello,everyone!It'smyhonortogiveaspeechhere.Tostartwith,wearesupposedtobecarefulwhenmakingfriendsontheInternet.Remembernottotalkmorepersonalquestionswiththem.Next,ifyouareindanger,youmustcall110forhelp.Meanwhile,tryingtobecalmmattersalottoyou.Thenit'snecessaryforyoutoeatregularly.Themorefruiltandvegetablesweeat,themorehealthywewillbe.Lastbutnotleast,asastudent,wemustlearntrafficrulesandobeythem.Bydoignso,wecanprotectusmoresafely.That'sall.Thankyou.缺演讲主题句缺文章总结句Inshort...talkmuchpersonalinformationwiththem扣题不紧人称不一致！

找出不足之处:1.结构方面2.用词方面3.扣题方面wecanprotectourselves