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概要写作经典3+23年高考+2年模拟经典3+2Writing1

[2022山东青岛调研]Wateringiskeytogrowingplantswell,soherewelookathowtogetitjustright.Thismeansnotonlyprovidingthewaterourgardensneedbutusingitwisely.WaterisapreciousresourceandsuppliesintheUKareunderpressurefromtheeffectsofclimatechange,populationincreaseandtheneedtoprotecttheenvironment.Generally,severalaspectsneedtobeconsidered.WhentowaterplantsWaterplantsinthemornings,ifyoucan,asthisiswhenthesuncomesupandplantsstarttotranspire(蒸腾)insunlight,drawingwaterfromthesoil,throughtheirroots,uptheirstemsandtotheirleaves.Eveningwateringisalsofine,asthecoolerconditionsmeanlesswaterislosttoevaporation(蒸发).Wateringintheheatofthedayisnotagoodidea,asmuchwaterislostthroughevaporationfromthesurfaceofthesoil.Plantswillusewatermoreefficientlyifwateredinthecoolerpartsoftheday.HowtowaterplantsWateringplantsthoroughlymatters.Ithelpsgetthewaterdowntothedeeperroottipswhereit’sneeded.But,equallyimportant,thesoildoesn’thavetobereallywetallthetimebecauseplants’rootsneedairaswellaswatertogrowwell.Otherwise,theremightbenoflowerorfruit,andevenaworseresultmightcomealong.经典3+2OthertipsTousewaterinthemosteconomicalway,it’sgoodtolearndifferentplants’wateringrequirements.Forexample,acontainerplantinhotsunnyweathermayneedwateringdaily,whereasamatureshrubmightonlyneedadrinkinextremedrought.Annualflowersandvegetablesproducedinthespringarelikelytoneedmorewateringthanself-sownorautumn-grownplantsastheyhavenewandshallowrootsystems.So,don’ttreatalltheplantsinthesameway.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________经典3+2写作指导

答案1.通读全文,明确脉络。文章首段写明主题,说明给植物浇水的重要性;第二段介绍了给植物浇水的时机;第三段介绍了浇水的方式;第四段介绍了其他浇水建议:根据不同的植物浇水要求进行浇水。2.抓住要点,连句成文。在通读全文的基础上,明确本文要点:要点1,给植物浇水很重要;要点2,何时浇水;要点3,如何浇水;要点4,根据不同的植物浇水要求进行浇水。恰当使用连词,将以上要点连句成文。经典3+2佳作展台Itisveryimportantforgrowingplantstobewatered.Notonlycanwewatertheminthemornings,wecanalsowaterthemintheevenings(notonly位于句首构成倒装语序).Don’twaterintheheatoftheday.Althoughwateringplantsthoroughlymatters(although引导让步状语从句),pleaserememberthatthesoildoesn’thavetobereallywetallthetime(that引导宾语从句).Lastbutnotleast,weshouldlearndifferentplants’wateringrequirementsanddon’ttreatalltheplantsinthesameway.答案经典3+2Writing2

Peopleallfeellonelyfromtimetotime.Feelingsoflonelinessarepersonal,soeveryone’sexperienceoflonelinesswillbedifferent.Lonelinessisnotalwaysthesameasbeingalone.Apersonmaychoosetobealoneandlivehappilywithoutmuchcontactwithotherpeople,whileothersmayfindthisalonelyexperience.Onecommondescriptionoflonelinessisthefeelingpeoplegetwhentheirneedforrewardingsocialcontactandrelationshipsisnotmet.Feelinglonelyisn’tinitselfamentalhealthproblem,butthetwoarestronglylinked.Havingamentalhealthproblemcanincreasepeople’schanceoffeelinglonely.Forexample,peoplewhohaveamentalhealthproblemmayexperiencesocialphobia—alsoknownassocialanxiety—andfinditdifficulttoparticipateineverydayactivitiesinvolvingotherpeople,whichcouldleadtoalackofmeaningfulsocialcontactandcausefeelingsofloneliness.Feelinglonelycanalsohaveaharmfuleffectonpeople’smentalhealth,especiallyifthisfeelinghaslastedalongtime.Someresearchsuggeststhatlonelinessisassociatedwithanincreasedriskofcertainmentalhealthproblems,includinganxiety,depressionandincreasedstress.经典3+2Lonelinesshasmanydifferentcauses,whichvaryfrompersontoperson.Wedon’talwaysunderstandwhatitisaboutanexperiencethatmakespeoplefeellonely.Forsomepeople,certainlifeeventsmaymeantheyfeellonely,suchasgoingthrougharelationshipbreak-up,changingjobs,movingtoanewareaorcountrywithoutfamily,friendsorcommunitynetworks.Somepeoplemayexperiencedeepandconstantfeelingsoflonelinessthatcomefromwithinanddonotdisappear,regardlessoftheirsocialsituationorhowmanyfriendstheyhave.Althoughreasonsforpeople’sexperienceoflonelinessarevarious,thinkingaboutwhatismakingthesepeoplefeellonelymayhelpthemfindawayoffeelingbetter.Forexample,iftheyarefeelinglonelybecauseofalackofsatisfyingsocialcontactintheirlife,theycouldtrytomeetmore,ordifferentpeople,likejoiningaclassorgroupbasedontheirhobbiesorinterests.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________经典3+2写作指导

答案文章大意:本文主要介绍了有关孤独感的内容,包括人们感到孤独的原因、解决方法等。Paragraph1:孤独感很常见且因人而异,一般是指当人们对社交和社会关系的需求得不到满足时而产生的一种感觉。Paragraph2:孤独感与精神健康关系紧密,精神疾病会增加孤独感产生的概率。同样,长期的孤独状态会增加焦虑、抑郁等心理问题产生的风险。Paragraph3:孤独感的产生缘由多种多样,一些人因换工作、搬到新的地区或国家等外部事件而产生孤独感,一些人可能会产生来自内心深处、无法消除的深刻而持久的孤独感。Paragraph4:辨明孤独感的产生缘由有助于对症下药,缓解孤独。经典3+2佳作展台Onepossibleversion:Loneliness,quitecommonandvaryingwitheachindividual,isoftendefinedasafeelingproducedwhenone’ssocialinteractionneedisunfulfilled(过去分词短语作后置定语,其中when引导时间状语从句).(要点1)Itiscloselyrelatedtomentalhealth—mentalhealthproblemsmeangreaterlikelihoodofsufferingfromloneliness—andtheconverseisalsotrue(地道表达"反之亦然").(要点2)Variousfactors,externalorinternal,contributetoloneliness.(要点3)Therefore,it’sadvisabletofigureoutreasonsbehinditandrelievethefeeling(it作形式主语).(要点4)答案经典3+2Writing3

Imaginelivingontheedgeofavastdesert,whichismovingquietlyclosertoyourvillageeverydayandcoveringyourfields.Thedesertisexpanding.Thisiscalleddesertification.Desertificationoccursinregionsclosetoanalreadyexistingdesert.Itgenerallyarisesfromtworelatedcauses.Thefirstisoveruseofwaterinthearea.Thereisnotenoughwaterinanycase,andifitisnotcarefullyused,disasterscanfollow.Astimegoeson,watershortagesmakefarmingmoreandmoredifficult.Insomeplaces,localscanrememberlocallakesandmarsheswhichwereoncethehometoallkindsoffishandbirds.Theyhavebeencompletelyburiedbythesandnow.Farmersleavetheland,andfieldsarereplacedbydeserts.Thesecondcauseismisuseoroveruseoftheland.Thismeansthatthewrongcropsareplantedandneedmorewaterthanwhatisavailable.Ploughinglargefieldsandremovingbushesandtreesmeanthatthewindwillblowawaythesoil.Oncethesoilislost,itishardtoreplace,andifthereisrain,ithasnowheretogo,andbringsnobenefit.Itisnotonlythefarmersandvillagerswhosuffer.Everyspring,theskiesoversomeofeasterncities,thousandsofkilometersawayfromthedeserts,canbedarkenedbysandstorms.Dustfromdesertscanhaveagreateffectonweathersystems.Whiledesertificationisperhapspartlycausedbyglobalwarming,thesesandstormscanmakeglobalwarmingworsebyaddingtowhatisknownasthegreenhouseeffect.经典3+2Whatcanbedonetoslowdownorstoptheprocessofdesertification?Obviouslyfirstfindnewwatersources.Treeplantingcanhelpbyprovidingbarriersbetweendesertsandrichfields.Sometypesofgrassalsoholdthesoiltogether,andstopthewindtakingit.Withouttheseefforts,itwillbeharderandhardertostoptheworld’sdesertsontheirway,andmoreandmorefarmerswillgiveupandheadforcities.Thelessontobelearntliesbeneaththesand.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________经典3+2写作指导

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第一步:列举要点

主要点1:Thedesertisexpanding.Thisiscalleddesertification.

主要点2:Thefirstisoveruseofwaterinthearea.

主要点3:Thesecondcauseismisuseoroveruseoftheland.

主要点4.1:Itisnotonlythefarmersandvillagerswhosuffer.

主要点4.2:Dustfromdesertscanhaveagreateffectonweathersystems.

主要点5:Whatcanbedonetoslowdownorstoptheprocessofdesertification?

主要点5的次要点如下:

次要点1:Obviouslyfirstfindnewwatersources.

次要点2:Treeplantingcanhelpbyprovidingbarriersbetweendesertsandrichfields.

次要点3:Sometypesofgrassalsoholdthesoiltogether,andstopthewindtakingit.经典3+2写作指导

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第二步:概括要点

根据主要点1可知,第一段介绍沙漠化,说明沙漠化就是沙漠的面积在扩大,也就是说沙漠化是沙漠覆盖土地的过程。

根据主要点2可知,沙漠化的第一个原因是当地过度用水。

根据主要点3可知,第二个原因是对土地的误用或过度使用。

根据主要点4.1可知,沙漠化的受害者不只是农民和村民;由主要点4.2可知,沙漠化对天气系统有影响。主

要点4.1和主要点4.2可综合为沙漠化不仅使人们遭受苦难,而且对天气系统也有不好的影响。

根据主要点5可知,本段主要介绍要采取措施阻止沙漠化,结合三个并列的次要点,可综合为:为了阻止沙漠化,我们必须寻找新的水源,种植草木。经典3+2写作指导

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第三步:提炼要点,重组表达

要点1:Desertificationistheprocessthatdesertiscoveringland(expanding的具体表述).

要点2:Thefirstcauseisoveruseofwaterinthearea.

要点3:Thesecondcauseismisuseoroveruseoftheland.

要点4:Desertificationnotonlymakespeoplesufferbutalsohasabadeffect(greateffect的具体表述)onweathersystems.

要点5:Inordertostopdesertification,wemustfindnewwatersourcesaswellasplanttreesandsometypesofgrass.

第四步:连句成篇

要点1提出现象,要点2和要点3是导致这种现象的原因,所以我们可把要点2和要点3转换成定语从句。要点4与要点5之间为因果关系,可用so连接。经典3+2佳作展台Desertificationistheprocessthatdesertiscoveringland,whichismainlycausedbyoverusingwaterandmisusingoroverusingtheland.Itnotonlymakespeoplesufferfromsandstormsbutalsohasabadeffectonweathersystems.Soinordertostopit,wemustfindnewwatersourcesaswellasplanttreesandsometypesofgrasses.答案经典3+2Writing4

Forstudents,it’sunavoidablethatschoolworkandgradesarealwaysatthetopoftheirstresslist.Eveniftheiracademicperformanceisnotterrible,theymaystillfearthattheyarelikelytofailtheexams,nottodoaswellasbefore,orletteachersandparentsdown.Theymayalsobeconcernedaboutnothavingenoughfriendsinschool,ornotbeinginthesameclasswiththeirbestfriends.These,alongwithotherissuessuchaspeerpressure(同辈压力)andinterpersonalconflict,areothercommonstressors.Eatingtoomuchfastfoodandjunkfoodcanleadtomoodswings,lackofenergyandothernegativeeffectsthathaveanimpactonstresslevels.Somestudentssufferfromsleepshortagetoo.Whenthathappens,theyperformpoorlyinclass,andbecomestressed.Alittlebitofstresscanactuallybeagoodthing.Indeed,thebodyandbrain’snormalreactiontoeverydaystressiswhatallowspeopletohandledailyproblems,suchaswakingupwhenanalarmclockgoesoffinthemorning,orpreparingforanimportanttest.Butwhenstressbecomeschronic(长期的)orhappensallthetime,itcanbelessthanbeneficial,andcanimpactpeople’smentalandphysicalhealthinanegativeway.Stressmayevencontributetoseriousillness,suchasheartdisease,loweredimmunity,orchangesinthebrain.经典3+2Fortunately,therearemanywaysforstudentstopreventstressfrompushingthemtoohard.First,focusonthebasicsofahealthylife,suchasregularlyeatingfreshfruitandvegetables,gettingseventoninehoursofsleepanightandtakingregularexercise.Besides,puttheirmindateasebysettingasideextratimeforstudyandtakefrequentbreakstoavoidburnout.Anddon’tforgettom