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书面表达之建议信

HowtoWriteLetterofSuggestion?

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3Properlinkwords恰当的连接词MissWanghasreceivedaletterfromXiaoDong.Heisalsoaskingforsomeadvice.ReadthelettercarefullyandhelpMissWanganswerit.ReadingandwritingDearMissWang,I’mastudentfromHuzhouSeniorHighSchool.Ihaveaproblem,I’mnotverygoodatcommunicatingwithpeople.AlthoughItrytotalktomyclassmates,Istillfindithardtomakegoodfriendswiththem.SoIfeelquitelonelysometimes.Idowanttochangethissituation,butIdon’tknowhow.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldgivemesomeadvice.Yours,XiaoDong养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：确定文体主体时态主体人称内容要点应用文—书信一般现在时第二人称问题介绍、建议一、建议二、建议三、我的愿望注意：恰当使用连接词，使各个要点之间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。

针对内容要点的剖析首段，回应来信中提出的问题，并分析原因I’msorry(that)…………..

I’mgladtoreceiveyourletter……..

Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter常用套语A．建议信开头常用句式

(照应材料,表明写作意图)1．AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2．Iamveryglad／sorrytohearthatyouwantto…3．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter4.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof-----5.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon…andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.将下列汉语翻译成英语1．AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper，——————————（很遗憾/高兴得知）that…2、——————————（我知道你在…上遇到了麻烦）…afterreadingyourletter3、_______________________________-----（我写这封信的目的是…）4、Youhave______________________________(向我征求关于…的建议）…andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.IamsorrytoknowIknowyouhavetroubleinIamwritingtoyouforthepurposeofaskedmeformyadviceon正文，针对该问题，提出2-3条合理的建议并说明理由。

ideaswhy1、to

ask

their

likes

and

dislikes1、to

find

classmates

with

the

same

interests2、to

join

in

discussion

and

show

interests

in

other

people’s

ideas2、to

get

to

know

different

people

and

let

them

see

you

are

friendly3………3……….将下列汉语翻译成英语

______________(...怎么样）tryinganewmethod?_______________（如果我是你的话）,Iwould…Inmyopinion,_______________(这将会很明智），takethefollowingaction._____________(为什么不.....)findanewway?____________(你最好）changeyourformerplan.What/HowaboutIfIwereyouitwouldbewisetoWhynotYou’dbetterB.表达建议（body）1.

What/Howabouttryinganewmethod?2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…(我认为如果你能…将会更好)3.Istronglysuggest/recommendthat…（我强烈建议）4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…5.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.6.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthat

youcan…（当遇到这种情况的时候）7.Whynotfindanewway?8.

You’dbetterchangeyourformerplan.9.

Youmightaswelltakethisway.你不妨采取这种方式尾段，写一两句结束语，如：希望我的建议对你有帮助等等。

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hopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.C.建议信结尾常用句式

1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.2.Idohopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestionspractical/useful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.4.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.5.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.将下列汉语翻译成英语1、I________(我真的希望）youwill_______________________(你会发现这些建议对你有帮助）findthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful2、Intheend,_____________________(我将会无比高兴）ifyoufindmysuggestionsusefulIwillbegladdohopeLinkwords连词Illustration(阐述)Addition(递进)Contrast(转折)Summary(总结)Ithink…Ibelieve…Isuggest…InmyopinionSecondly…And..then…Besides…Inaddition…What'smoreBut…However…Ontheotherhand…Inshort…Inaword…Therefore…So…InmyopinionTheformofLetterofSuggestion（一）Dear________，

I‘m

glad

to

receive

your

letter

asking

for

my

advice

on

how

to

________（引出主题）

Here

are

a

few

suggestions

to

help

you.

First,why

not

________.If

you

do

this,_______（第一条建议及理由Then,

,itwouldbewiseto________.（第二条建议及理由）Besides,

it

should

be

a

good

idea

to________．（第三条建议及理由）

I

dohopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouintofurtherdetails.

I‘m

looking

forward

to________(表达愿望)

Yourssincerely,

MissWangTheformofLetterofSuggestion（二）Dear________，Having

received

your

letter,I

know

that

（问题）Which

is

common

phenomenon（常见现象).My

suggestions

are

as

follows.

First

of

all,

you

should（建议一）.In

this

way,(理由一）What’s

more,If

I

were

you,I

would(建议二）。So

that(理由二）。Last

but

not

least,you

might

as

well(建议三）。（理由三）I

do

hope

that

you

will

find

my

suggestions

practical.Wish

you

all

best.Yourssincerely,

MissWangModelVersionDearXiaoDong,

I’msorryyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.

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