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教师简介教师简介：胡凡义乌市佛堂镇中一级教师好学义乌·名师云课Module7MypastlifeWriting义乌市佛堂镇中胡凡审核人：义乌市教育研修院陈清伟七年级英语下册·Let’stalk1.Whenandwherewereyouborn?3.Whatwas

your

first

school

like?2.Whatwasyouroldhouselike?Past

lifeBrainstormingdate/placeofbirtholdhousefirstschoolyoufriendsteachersroomsgardenvillage/cityfeelingsLet’sthinkPossiblewritingstructure

(结构)Opening(开头)Body（正文）Ending（结尾）dateofbirthIwasbornin/on….placeofbirthIwasbornina…village/city.oldhouseIlivedina…house.Therewere/was…oldschoolMyfirstschoolwas…./Iwentto...Myfirstteacher/friendwas….Iwas…Imiss....Let’swrite写作任务假如你是Tom,你目前在中国学习，请根据表格中的内容提示，讲述一些你在美国过去的生活，适当扩展，以“MyPastLife”为题，写一篇文章。Dateofbirth2002年6月18日Placeofbirth纽约House住在一个公寓（apartment）不大，但舒适，有三个房间；自己的房间很整洁Others在家附近上小学，学校的人都很友好，很多孩子都是自己的朋友；第一位老师是格林小姐，她很漂亮。firstschool第一人称时态，一般过去（was/were）Let’swriteIwasbornon…Iwasbornin…Ilivedin…Itwas…Therewere…Myroomwas…Iwentto...near...Thechildren...Myfirstteacherwas...Dateofbirth2002年6月18日Placeofbirth纽约House住在一个公寓（apartment）不大，但舒适，有三个房间；自己的房间很整洁Others在家附近上小学，学校的人都很友好，很多孩子都是自己的朋友；第一位老师是格林小姐，她很漂亮。Iwenttotheprimaryschoolnearmyhome.Peopleintheschoolwereallfriendly.Manychildrenweremyfriends.MyfirstteacherwasMsGreen.Shewasverybeautiful.Ilivedinanapartment.Itwasnotbigbutverycomfortable.Therewere3roomsMyroomwascleanandtidy.IwasbornonJune18th,2002.IwasborninNewYork.PossibleWriting1MyPastLifeI’mTomandIwasbornonJune18th,2002.IwasborninNewYork.Ilivedinanapartment.Itwasnotbigbutverycomfortable.Therewere3rooms.Myroomwascleanandtidy.Iwenttotheprimaryschoolnearmyhome.Peopleintheschoolwereallfriendly.Manychildrenweremyfriends.MyfirstteacherwasMsGreen.Shewasverybeautiful.Imissmyfriendsverymuch.Greatarticlesarenotwritten.Theyarerewritten.（好文章不是写出来的，是改出来的）Howcanwewriteitbetter？PossibleWriting2I’mTomandIwasbornonJune18th,2002.IwasborninNewYork.Opening(开头)MynameisTom.OnJune18th,2002,IwasborninNewYork,thebiggestcityofAmerica.TherewerelotsofthingstodoinNewYork,soIwasneverboredthere.Writingtip1:Writebrieflyaboutyourdateandplaceofbirth.Writeasentencetolinktherestofthepassage.Body（正文）PossibleWriting2Ilivedinanapartment.Itwasnotbigbutverycomfortable.Therewere3rooms.Myroomwascleanandtidy.Iwenttoaprimaryschoolnearmyhome.Peopleintheschoolwereallfriendly.Manychildrenweremyfriends.MyfirstteacherwasMsGreen.Shewasverybeautiful.Ilivedinanapartmentwith3rooms.Itwasnotbigbutverycomfortable.Andmyroomwascleanandtidy.Attheageofsix,

Iwenttothe

primaryschoolnearmyhome.Childrenintheschoolwereallfriendly.Manyofthemweremyfriends.MyfirstteacherMsGreenwasbeautifulandkind.But

inclass,shewasstrictwithus.Anaughtyboylikemewasalwaysgoodinherclass.Writingtip2:Addsomedetails,usesomelinkingwords,phrasesandpropersentencestomakeyourwritingcolorfulandrich.（适当增加一些连接词,短语和句子使文章更丰富）PossibleWriting2:Imissmyfriendsverymuch.

ItwasgreattoliveinNewYork.Ienjoyedmylifetherealot.NowImissmyfriendsandfamilyverymuch.Iamlookingforwardtogoingbackthissummer.Ending（结尾）Writingtip3:Expresssomeofyourfeelingsaboutthepastlife.（表达感受）WritingsampleMyPastlifeMynameisTom.OnJune18th,2002,IwasborninNewYork,thebiggestcityofAmerica.TherewerelotsofthingstodoinNewYork,soIwasneverboredthere.Ilivedinanapartmentwith3rooms.Itwasnotbigbutverycomfortable.Andmyroomwascleanandtidy.Attheageofsix,

Iwenttothe

primaryschoolnearmyhome.Childrenintheschoolwereallfriendly.Manyofthemweremyfriends.MyfirstteacherMsGreenwasbeautifulandkind.But

inclass,she

was

strictwithus.

Anaughtyboylikeme

wasalwaysgoodinherclass.ItwasgreattoliveinNewYork.Ienjoyedmylifetherealot.NowImissmyfriendsandfamilyverymuch.Iamlookingforwardtogoingbackthissummer..Possiblewritingstructure

(结构)Body（正文）dateofbirthIwasbornin/on…placeofbirthIwasbornina…village/city.oldhouseItwasa…house.Therewere/was...oldschoolMyfirstschoolwas…./Iwentto...Myfirstteacher/friendwas….Iwas…Imiss....Let'ssummarize

Writingtip1:Writebrieflyaboutyourdateandplaceofbirth.Writeasentencetolinktherestofthepassage.Writingtip2:Addsomedetails,usesomelinkingwords,phrasesandproperpatternstomakeyourwritingcolorfulandrich.Writingtip3:Expresssomeofyourfeelingsaboutthepastlife.（表达感受）Opening(开头)Ending(结尾)usefulexpressionsandpatterns:Expressions:naughty,outgoing,hardworking,gentle,

manyofthem,befriendly/nice/kindtosb,bestrictwithsbbereadytohelpothersenjoy…alotPatterns:Itwasa...house/apartmentwith....ItbeadjtodosthAttheageof...,I...=WhenIwas...,I...Let'ssummarizeLet’spractice写作任务请根据下面关于Jimmy的信息，发挥想象，写一篇作文介绍一下Jimmy，描述一下他过去的生活。1.出生地：法国巴黎。2.出生时间：1995年4月10日。3.现在和父母一起居住在北京。4.他经常回忆起自己在法国的生活，比如：和爷爷奶奶居住；老师对他很好；有许多朋友等。时态，大量使用一般过去时态（was/were），提到现在的信息，要灵活运用一般现在时态。第三人称一般现在时请根据下面关于Jimmy的信息，发挥想象，写一篇作文介绍一下Jimmy，描述一下他过去的生活。1.出生地：法国巴黎。2.出生时间：1995年4月10日。3.现在和父母一起居住在北京。4.他经常回忆起自己在法国的生活，比如：和爷爷奶奶居住；老师对他很好；有许多朋友等。OnApril10th,1995,JimmywasborninParis,thecapitalcityofFrance.NowJimmystaysinBeijingwithhisparents,buthemisseshispastlifealot.Whenhewasachild,JimmylivedwithhisgrandparentsHisteacherswerekindtohim.Hehadmanygoodfriendstoplaywith.

(have)Let’spracticeJimmy’sPastLifeOnApril10th,1995,JimmywasborninParis,thecapitalcityofFrance.Therewere

some

world-famousplacesofinterest

and

allkindsofshopsinParis.SoJimmywasneverbored.Hewasveryhappythere.Whenhewasachild,Jimmylivedinanoldhousewithhisgrandparents.Behindthe