专题202021新高考英语读后续写典例分析20AGiftOfLove

专题202021新高考英语读后续写典例分析202021新高考英语AGiftOfLove目录01表达积累02原文分析03续写扩展04续写赏析01表达积累表达积累1.愤怒、沮丧和自怜2.她还是那么脆弱，那么生气3.眼泪从他的脸上流下来4.脸上露出忧虑的表情5.某人想到了..anger,frustrationandself-pityshewasstillsofragile,soangrytearsrunningdownhisfacehaveaworriedlookonherfaceMomoriesof...filledone'smind表达积累6.突然地7.总在思考这个问题8.头低得更低了9.低着头10.没有比教育更重要的事了allofasuddenconstantlyponderingthequestionbenthisheadevenlowerhangone’sheadThereisnothingmoreimportantthaneducation.表达积累11.心里充满着惭愧与伤感12.吃惊地摇头13.永远记得的一天14.他跳起15.第二天一大早befilledwithshameandsadnessshookherheadinamazementadayhewouldalwaysrememberjumpedtohisfeetEarlythenextday表达积累16.眼里充满泪水17.转身直奔CardiffHill18.他们悄悄地走到门口19.咬了那个人的手20.等了好像好久的时间hereyesfilledwithwater.turnedandheadedupCardiffHill.Theysilentlyapproachedthedoor.bitthemanonthehandwaitedforsbforwhatseemedtobeaverylongtime02原文分析AGiftOfLoveIthadbeenayearsinceSusan,anattractiveyoungwomanof34,becameblindandshewassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarkness,anger,frustrationandself-pity.Andallshehadtoclingtowasherhusband,Mark.Mark,anAirForceofficer,lovedSusanwithallhisheartandhewasdeterminedtohelphiswifegainthestrengthandconfidencesheneededtobecomeindependentagain.原文分析细节描写的积累Finally,Susanfeltreadytoreturntoherjob,buthowwouldshegetthere?Markvolunteeredtodrivehertoworkeachday,eventhoughtheyworkedatoppositeendsofthecity.Atfirst,thiscomfortedSusan.Soon,however,MarkdecidedthatSusanhadtostarttakingthebusagainonherown.Butshewasstillsofragile,soangry-howwouldshereact?原文分析Susan眼睛看不见后变得脆弱敏感，丈夫决定帮她重拾自信。Justashepredicted,Susanwashorrifiedattheideaoftakingthebusagain."HowamIsupposedtoknowwhereIamgoing?Ifeellikeyou'reabandoningme."sherespondedbitterly.Mark'sheartbroketohearthesewords,butheknewwhathadtobedone.HepromisedSusanthathewouldridethebuswithher,foraslongasittook,untilshegotthehangofit.

原文分析掌握了窍门Fortwosolidweeks,Mark,inmilitaryuniformandall,accompaniedSusantoandfromworkeachday.Hetaughthereverythingtoadapttohernewenvironment,includingbefriendingthebusdriverswhocouldwatchoutforher,andsaveheraseat.Finally,Susandecidedtotrythetriponherown.Mondaymorningarrived,shesaidgood-byetoMark,andforthefirsttime,theywenttheirseparateways.原文分析渐渐的Susan开始一个人独自做公交车上班。Monday,Tuesday,Wednesday,Thursday...Eachdayonherownwentperfectly,andSusanhadneverfeltbetter.Shewasdoingit!OnFridaymorning,asshewaspayingthefaretogetoffthebusasusual,thedriversaid,"Younglady,Isuredoenvyyou."Surprisedandcurious,sheaskedthedriver,"Whydoyousaythatyouenvyme?"原文分析注意形容词的感情色彩没有比这感觉更好的了Paragraph1：

Thedriverresponded,"Itmustfeelgoodtobetakencareofandprotectedlikeyouareeveryday."_______________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：

TearsofhappinesspoureddownSusan'scheeks._______________________________________________________________________原文分析司机的话证明她其实每天都有人照顾，后面续写可以对每丈夫都在远远的关注她而展开。她得知真相后，感动，也更加自信坚定的走下去。后面续写可以对她回报丈夫的动作描写（给他一个拥抱、kiss等）展开。03续写扩展Paragraph1Paragraph1：

Thedriverresponded,"Itmustfeelgoodtobetakencareofandprotectedlikeyouareeveryday."Sheconfusedandaskedwhysayso…Thedrivertoldherthedetails…Herhusbandwaitedtoseeheracrossthestreetsafelyeveryday…Paragraph2Paragraph2：

TearsofhappinesspoureddownSusan'scheeks.Shestoodstill…Sheblewakisstothedirectionherhusbandstood..Shefeltlucky…句子润色被司机说的话弄糊涂了，她问：“你什么意思？”Confusedbywhatthedrivertalkedabout,sheasked,"Whatdoyoumean?"Confusedby句子润色司机回答说：“在过去的一个星期里，每天早上，一个穿着军装的英俊绅士站在街对面看着你下车。Thedriveranswered,"Everymorninginthepastweek,afinelookinggentlemaninamilitaryuniformhasbeenstandingacrossthestreetwatchingyougettingoffthebus.Everymorninginthepastweek句子润色他会确保你安全过马路，然后一直看着你进入办公楼。Hemakessureyoucrossthestreetsafelyandhewatchesuntilyouenteryourofficebuilding.crossthestreetsafely句子润色然后他给你一个飞吻，给你一个礼节性的敬礼，然后走开了。你真幸运Thenheblowsyouakiss,givesyoualitesaluteandwalksaway.Youareoneluckylady.'blowsyouakissalitesalute句子润色她眼里含着幸福的泪水，一动不动地站在街对面,好像凝视着某人。Withtearsofhappinessinhereyes,shestoodmotionlesslyfacingtheoppositesideofthestreet,asifgazingatsomeone.Withtearsofhappinessshestoodmotionlessly句子润色虽然她不能亲眼看到他，但她确实感觉到了马克的存在。Althoughshecouldn'tphysicallyseehim,shedefinitelyfeltMark'spresence.physicallyseehimdefinitelyfelt句子润色苏珊认为她真的很幸运，因为他给了她一份比视力更强大的礼物，一份爱的礼物，可以在黑暗的地方带来光明。Susanthoughtshewasactuallylucky,forhehadgivenheragiftmorepowerfulthansight,agiftoflovethatcanbringlightwherethereisdarkness.giveheragiftmorepowerfulthansight,句子润色就在马克有点担心的时候，他看到妻子突然露出灿烂的笑容，朝他方向飞吻。JustasMarkgrewalittleworried,hesawhiswifebreakintoaradiantsmileandblowakisstohisdirection.grewalittleworriedbreakintoaradiantsmile句子润色最后，她发现自己失明了，但仍像以前一样有魅力和自信。Finallyshefoundbackherselfblindbutattractiveandconfidentassheusedtobe.attractiveandconfident04续写赏析续写赏析Thedriverresponded,"Itmustfeelgoodtobetakencareofandprotectedlikeyouareeveryday."Confusedbywhatthedrivertalkedabout,sheasked,"Whatdoyoumean?"Thedriveranswered,"Everymorninginthepastweek,afinelookinggentlemaninamilitaryuniformhasbeenstandingacrossthestreetwatchingyougettingoffthebus.Hemakessureyoucrossthestreetsafelyandhewatchesuntilyouenteryourofficebuilding.Thenheblowsyouakiss,givesyoualitesaluteandwalksaway.Youareoneluckylady.'过去分词的妙用续写赏析TearsofhappinesspoureddownSu