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如何进行概要写作当前第1页\共有19页\编于星期日\21点rear-ending追尾
runofftheroadcrashintotreecrashintohouseturnoverTrafficaccidentsaredangerous.
当前第2页\共有19页\编于星期日\21点Reasons:SpeedingTireddrivingDrunkdrivingCarelessdrivingUsingcellphones
whiledriving......?当前第3页\共有19页\编于星期日\21点Topic:Usingcellphoneswhiledriving
1.It'sadangerousdistractiontodrivers.
2.Itshouldbeforbidden.Para2:Argument(论点)1Para3:Argument(论点)2Para4:SuggestionPara5:ConclusionTip1:StructureisaguidetofindthemainpointsPara1:Viewpoint(观点)当前第4页\共有19页\编于星期日\21点Para1Cellphonesareusedeverywhere,butontheroadtheyareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.afactaviewpointPara1:ViewpointTip2:Theviewpointofanargumentativewriting(议论文)shouldbeincludedinasummary.当前第5页\共有19页\编于星期日\21点Point1:Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Mainpointsofthesummary当前第6页\共有19页\编于星期日\21点1.Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodrivers.Para2:Argument(论据)1usinganotusingaonthephoneontheroadunpredictablecarefulIt'sdangerous.It'ssafe.Driversusingaphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusing.DriversAttentionDrivingResult(Support)当前第7页\共有19页\编于星期日\21点Point1:Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Point2:Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.Mainpointsofthesummary当前第8页\共有19页\编于星期日\21点Para3:Argument(论据)22.Cellphonesusedontheroadshouldbeforbidden.①②atleast1,000deathsperyearagainstthelawandstrictlyenforcedlawsareneedtoforbidtheuseofcellphonesincarsAnexample:phonesusedbydriversdrunkdrivingSimilarly(Support)当前第9页\共有19页\编于星期日\21点Point1:Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Point2:Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.MainpointsofthesummaryPoint3:Justlikedrunkdriving,Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.当前第10页\共有19页\编于星期日\21点Q1:Beforeusingacellphone,whatquestionshoulddriversaskthemselves?Para4:SuggestionSuggestion1:Suggestion2:Isthiscallreallythatimportant?Yes.No.Driversneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones.UseaphonewiselyNotuseaphone(Support)当前第11页\共有19页\编于星期日\21点Point1:Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Point2:Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.MainpointsofthesummaryPoint3:Justlikedrunkdriving,Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.Point4:Driversatleastneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones.当前第12页\共有19页\编于星期日\21点Para5Cellphonescanbeaveryimportantlinkinemergencies,butdriversneedtousethemwisely.AsprofessionalracerJohnAndrettisays,“Drivingsafelyisyourfirstresponsibility.”Thebestroadtosafetyistojusthangupanddrive.Para5:Conclusionaquote(引语)Tip3:Aquoteisusuallyusedtosupportanideaand
shouldbenotincludedinasummary.当前第13页\共有19页\编于星期日\21点Point1:Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Point2:Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.MainpointsofthesummaryPoint3:Justlikedrunkdriving,Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.Point4:Driversatleastneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones.Point5:Cellphonescanbeaveryimportantlinkinemergencies,butdriversneedtousethemwisely.Thebestroadtosafetyistojusthangupanddrive.当前第14页\共有19页\编于星期日\21点1.Cellphonesusedontheroaddangerouslydistractthedriversandshouldbebanned.Skills:1.词性转换法2.近义替换法3.正话反说法4.语态互换法5.句式变化法Skillsofrestatement(重述):“Point1”asanexamplePoint1:①Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodrivers
and②shouldbeforbidden.2.Usingcellphoneswhiledrivingdangerouslydrawawaydrivers'attentionandshouldnotbeallowed.3.Weshouldforbidusingcellphonesontheroad
fortheirharmfuldistractiontodrivers.4.Driversshouldbepreventedfromusingcellphoneswhiledrivingbecausetheycanbedangerouslydistracted.并列句复合句简单句6.主语变身法当前第15页\共有19页\编于星期日\21点Haveatry:workingroupsof4tocreateagoodsummaryPoint1:Cellphonesusedontheroadareadangerousdistractiontodriversandshouldbeforbidden.Point2:Driversusingacellphonewere4timesmorelikelytohaveanaccidentthanthosenotusingaphone.Point3:Justlikedrunkdriving,Californianeedlawstorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.Point4:Driversatleastneedtobemoreresponsiblewhenusingcellphones.Point5:Cellphonescanbeaveryimportantlinkinemergencies,butdriversneedtousethemwisely.Thebestroadtosafetyistojusthangupanddrive.当前第16页\共有19页\编于星期日\21点Factors
Checkingpointscompleteconcisecoherentcorrectobjective2.Nodetailsin40~80words1.Coverthemainpointsusingyourownwords4.Nogrammaticalmistakes5.Nopersonalopinion3.UsetransitionalwordsifpossibleLearntousethechecklist:4C+1O当前第17页\共有19页\编于星期日\21点Usingcellphoneswhiledrivingcandistractthedriversandshouldbebaned.Drivershaveahigherrateofaccidentswhenusephones.Accidentsaredanger,whichincluderunningoffaroadandcrashingintotrees,fences.Justlikedrunkdriving,lawsareneededtorestricttheuseofcellphonesincars.Driversshouldusephoneswithgreaterresponsibilityforsafe.Inconclusion,cellphonesareimportantinemergenciesandshouldbeusedwisely.Afterall,weonlyhaveonelifeatall.(89words)copyoriginalwordsΛToensuresafedriving,drivershadbetternotuset
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