2023年黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市大学英语6级大学英语六级测试卷(含答案)

2023年黑龙江省齐齐哈尔市大学英语6级大学英语六级测试卷(含答案)学校:________班级:________姓名:________考号:________

一、1.Writing(10题)1.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnDialectalTVPro-grams.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.现在电视上出现了很多方言类的节目

2．对这种现象有人表示支持，也有人并不赞成

3．我的看法

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowedthirtyminutestowriteallopenlettertothemajorofthecitybasedonthefollowingsituation:

Youshouldwriteatleast150words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.1.近年来,本市空气污染情况越来越严重

2.你认为造成空气污染的主要污染源在哪里?应该采取哪些措施?

3.呼吁所有市民积极行动起来,治理空气污染

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledShouldtheStateInterferewithPeople'sSmokingHabits?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.现在许多国家和地区纷纷颁布禁烟法令，禁止公民在餐厅、酒吧、商店、办公场所等吸烟

2.我对政府颁布禁烟令是支持还是反对，并说出理由

ShouldtheStateInterferewithPeople'sSmokingHabits?

4.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledFoodSafety.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.食品安全事故屡有发生

2．人们对食品的安全越来越担心

3．怎样才能解决好食品的安全问题

5.Directions:Farthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic:OverseasStudyatanEarlyAge.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.目前很多父母在子女高中毕业前就送他们出国学习

2．形成这种趋势的原因

3．我对此的看法

6.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnPrivateTutoring.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.为孩子聘请家教目前非常普遍

2．有人认为这对孩子有帮助，有人则不以为然

3．我的看法

OnPrivateTutoring

7.CollegeReadingRoomPhenomenon

1．描述图表中的两个循环(cycle)所反映的问题

2．分析引起该变化的原因

3．你的结论

(Sept:newtermstarts,Jan:vacation,June:exams,July:vacation)

8.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitled"TheFirstImpressionofMyRoommate"Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1．这是我在大学的第一天。

2．他(她)就是我的同学。

3．我仔细打量了他(她)，发现……

9.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicShouldWeStartOurWork-lifeorGoonwithOurEducation.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:

1.许多大学生毕业生面临着就业和深造的两难境地

2．有人认为他们应该继续深造，有人认为他们应马上就业

3．你的看法

10.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicWealthandHealth.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below.

1.有人认为财富比健康重要:

2．也有人认为健康比财富重要；

3．我的观点是______。

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10题)11.

Yourcaloricintakeforbuildingmassisdeterminedby______.

A.multiplyingyourbodyweightby24

B.multiplyingyourbodyweightby17

C.yourmetabolicrate,physicalactivitylevelandthermiceffectoffood

D.yoursleeppatterns,age,gender,bodymassandbodysize

12.

TodayabouthalfofallPCsarestillnotconnectedtotheweb;oneelementthatpeopleunderestimateisthedegreetowhichthe______willimprove.

13.Untilthenineteensixties,blackpeopleinmanypartsoftheUnitedStatesdidnothavethesamecivilrightsaswhitepeople.LawsintheAmericanSouthkepttiletworacesseparate.Theselawsforcedblackpeopletoattendseparateschools,liveinseparateareasofacityandsitinseparateareasonabus.

OnDecemberfirst,nineteenfifty-five,inthesoutherncityofMontgomery,Alabama,aforty-twoyearoldblackwomangotonacitybus.Thelawatthattimerequiredblackpeopleseatedinoneareaofthebustogiveuptheirseatstowhitepeoplewhowantedthem.Thewomanrefusedtodothisandwasarrested.ThisactofpeacefuldisobediencestartedprotestsinMontgomerythatledtolegalchangesinminorityrightsintheUnitedStates.ThewomanwhostarteditwasRosaParks.Today,wetellherstory.

ShewasbornRosaLouiseMcCauleyinnineteen-thirteeninTuskegee,Alabama.Sheattendedlocalschoolsuntilshewaselevenyearsold.ThenshewassenttoschoolinMontgomery.Shelefthighschoolearlytocareforhersickgrandmother,thentocareforhermother.Shedidnotfinishhighschooluntilshewastwenty-one.RosamarriedRaymondParksinnineteenthirty-two.Hewasabarberwhocutmen'shair.Hewasalsoacivilrightsactivist.Together,theyworkedforthelocalgroupoftheNationalAssociationfortheAdvancementofColoredPeople.Innineteenforty-three,MissusParksbecameanofficerinthegroupandlateritsyouthleader.

RosaParkswasaseamstressinMontgomery.Sheworkedsewingclothesfromthenineteenthirtiesuntilnineteenfifty-five.ThenshebecamearepresentationoffreedomformillionsofAfrican-Americans.InmuchoftheAmericanSouthinthenineteenriffles,thefirstrowsofseatsoncitybuseswereforwhitepeopleonly.Blackpeoplesatinthebackofthebus.Bothgroupscouldsitinamiddlearea.However,blackpeoplesittinginthatpartofthebuswereexpectedtoleavetheirseatsifawhitepersonwantedtositthere.RosaParksandthreeotherblackpeoplewereseatedinthemiddleareaofthebuswhenawhitepersongotonthebusandwantedaseat.Thebusdriverdemandedthatallfourblackpeopleleavetheirseatssothewhitepersonwouldnothavetositnexttoanyofthem.Thethreeotherblacksgotup,butMissusParksrefused.Shewasarrested.SomepopularstoriesaboutthatincidentincludethestatementthatRosaParksrefusedtoleaveherseatbecauseherfeetweretired.Butsheherselfsaidinlateryearsthatthiswasfalse.Whatshewasreallytiredof,shesaid,wasacceptingunequaltreatment.Sheexplainedlaterthatthisseemedtobetheplaceforhertostopbeingpushedaroundandtofindoutwhathumanrightsshehad,ifany.

AgroupofblackactivistwomeninMontgomerywasknownastheWomen'sPoliticalCouncil.Thegroupwasworkingtoopposethemistreatmentofblackbuspassengers.Blackshadbeenarrestedandevenkilledforviolatingordersfrombusdrivers.RosaParkswasnotthefirstblackpersontorefusetogiveupaseatonthebusforawhiteperson.ButblackgroupsinMontgomeryconsideredhertobetherightcitizenaroundwhomtobuildaprotestbecauseshewasoneofthefinestcitizensofthecity.

Thewomen'sgroupimmediatelycalledforallblacksinthecitytorefusetorideoncitybusesonthedayofMissusParks'trial,Monday,Decemberfifth.Theresultwasthatfortythousandpeoplewalkedandusedothertransportationonthatday.Thatnight,atmeetingsthroughoutthecity,blacksinMontgomeryagreedtocontinuetoboycottthecitybusesuntiltheirmistreatmentstopped.Theyalsodemandedthatthecityhireblackbusdriversandthatanyonebepermittedtositinthemiddleofthebusandnothavetogetupforanyoneelse.TheMontgomerybusboycottcontinuedforthreehundredeighty-onedays.ItwasledbylocalblackleaderE.D.Nixo

A.YB.NC.NG

14.

Generallyspeaking,therearetwodestructivetsunamiseveryyeararoundtheworld.

A.YB.NC.NG

15.

AccordingtotheUN'sprediction,thegrowthpopulationfromnowto2050isnearlyallin______.

A.westerncountries

B.Africancountries

C.developedcountries

D.developingcountries

16.

VulnerabilitiesofBluetoothlike"bluejacking"are_______________inthedevelopmentoftechnology.

17.

Cropinsurancecannotbeprovidedbyinsurancecompaniesbecause______doesnotworkinthiscase.

18.

Theauthorwasviolentlysickbecausehefelt______.

19.Whatwillhappeninthemiddleofthe21stcentury,ifweconsumeresourcesmuchfasterthantheirreplacement?

A.WecanhaveanotherplanetcalledtheEarth.

B.WewilluseupresourcesonEarth.

C.Wewillworkoutreplaceableresources.

D.Wewillmigratetoanotherplanettolive.

20.Accordingtotheprogramin2002,caregiverswereexpectedtoreducestressby______.

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10题)21.

【B3】

22.(34)

A.Becausehewasoncebeatenblackandblue.

B.Becausehewasveryold.

C.Becausehewasknockedtotheground.

D.Becausehesufferedfromalongseriousdisease.

23.(26)

A.Thedirectorprobablyisn'tabletomakeanexception.

B.Thedirectorprobablywon'tseeher.

C.Thedirectorusuallyisn'tveryhelpful.

D.Thedirectorusuallyisn'tresponsibleforpart-timestudents.

24.(28)

A.Becausetheirenvironmentisbecomingmoreandmoredirty.

B.Becausethetraditionalwaysoftreatingwastesarenotefficient.

C.Becausetheyareshortofusefulmaterials.

D.Becausetheyneednewmaterialsmadefromgarbage.

25.听力原文：OneofAmerica'smostimportantexportsishermodemmusic.Americanpopularmusicisplayedallovertheworld.Itisenjoyedbypeopleofallagesinallcountries.Thereasonsforitspopularityareitsfastpaceandrhythmicbeat.ThemusichasmanyoriginsintheUnitedStates.CountrymusiccomingfromtheruralareasintheSouthernUnitedStatesisonesource.Countrymusicfeaturessimplethemesandmelodies,describingday-to-daysituationsandfeelingsofcountrypeople.Manypeopleappreciatethismusicbecauseoftheemotionsexpressedbycountrymusicsongs.AsecondoriginofAmericanpopularmusicistheBlues.ItdescribesmostlysadfeelingsreflectingthedifficultlivesofAmericanblacks.ItisusuallyplayedandsungbyBlackmusiciansbutitispopularwithallAmericans.Rockmusic.isanewerform.ofmusic.Itwasfirstknownasrock-and-tollinthe1950s.Sincethen,therehavebeenmanyformsofrockmusic;hardrock,softrock,poprock,discomusicandothers.Manyperformersofpopularrockmusicareyoungmusicians.Newpopularsongsareheardontheradioseveraltimesaday.PeopleheardthesesongssungintheiroriginalEnglishorsometimestranslatedintootherlanguages.Thewordsmaydifferbuttheenjoymentofmusicisuniversal.

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A.Itsfastpaceandrhythms.

B.Itssimplethemes.

C.Itsbeautifulmelodies.

D.Itsfeatures.

26.(29)

A.It'ssimilartoplayingnotesonapiano.

B.Itrequiresanight'ssleep.

C.It'ssimilartothewayacomputerstoresinformation.

D.Itrequiresnosleep.

27.(44)

28.(35)

A.Whenhewas17.

B.Whenhewas19.

C.Whenhewas21.

D.Whenhewas24.

29.听力原文：M:Hello,"FlyingParadise".HowcanIhelpyou?

W:Ohhi.I'minterestedindoingacourseinyourclub.

M:Whichcourseareyouinterestedin?

W:Well,I'mnotsure.What'savailable?

M:Well...we'vegottheintroductorycoursewhichlastsfortwodays.

W:OK.

M:Orthere'sthe4-daybeginners'coursewhichiswhatmostpeopledofirst.I'dtendtorecommendthatone.Andthere'salsotheelementarypilotcoursewhichtakesfivetosixdaysdependingonconditions.

W:Wemighttrythebeginner'scourse.Whatsortofpricesarewelookingat?

M:Theintroductoryis＄190;thebeginner'scourse,whichiswhatyou'dprobablybelookingat,is＄320—no,sorry＄330—it'sjustgoneup—andthepilotcourseis＄430.

W:Right.

M:Andyoualsohavetobecomeamemberofourclubsothatyou'reinsured.That'llcostyou＄12aday.Everyonehastotakeoutinsurance,yousee.

W:DoesthatcovermeifIbreakaleg?

M:No,I'mafraidnot—it'sonly3rdpartyandcoversyouagainstdamagetootherpeopleortheirbelongings,butnottheftorinjury.Youwouldneedtotakeyourownpersonalaccidentinsurance.

W:Isee!Andwhat'sthebestwaytogettoyourplace?Bypublictransportorcouldwecomebybike?We'reprettykeencyclists.

M:It'sdifficultbypublictransportalthoughthereisabusfromNewcastle:mostpeoplegettherebycar,becausewe'realittleoffthebeatentrack.ButyoucouldridehereOK.I'llsendyouamap.Justletmetakedownafewdetails.What'syourname?

W:MariaGentle.

M:Andyouraddress,Maria?

W:Well,I'mastudentstayingwithafamilyinNewcastle.

M:Soit'scareof...

W:CareofMr.andMrs.McDonald.

M:Likethehamburgers!

W:Yes,exactly.

M:McDonald...

W:Thepostofficeboxaddressisprobablybest.It'sPObox676,Newcastle.

M:Isthereafaxnumberthere,becauseIcouldfaxyoutheinformation?

W:Yes,actually,thereis.It's0249that'sforNewcastleandthendoublesevenfivefourthreeone.

M:OK.Nowifyoudecidetodooneofourcourses,you'llneedtobookinadvanceandtopaywhenyoubook.Howwouldyoubepaying?

W:Bycreditcard,ifthat'sOK.DoyoutakeVisa?

M:Yes,fine.Wetakeallmajorcards,includingVisa.

W:OKthen.Thanksverymuch.

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A.＄190.B.＄320.C.＄330.D.＄430.

30.听力原文：M:Ihopethereweren'tmanyvisitorswhenIwasawayyesterday.

W:Therewasn'tasingleone,Mr.Green.ButIreceivedfourphonecallsbeforeIlefttheofficeatabout5:30.

Q:HowmanypeoplevisitedMr.Green'sofficeyesterday?

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A.One.B.Four.C.Five.D.None.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3题)31.

Theauthorstatesthat"Ontheaverage,peoplecankeepaboutsevenideasintheirmindsatonce"toexplainthat______.

A.mostdecisionsinvolvesevensteps

B.humanmentalcapacityhaslimitations

C.somepeoplehavedifficultymakingminoraswellasmajordecisions

D.peoplecanlearntokeepmorethansevenideasintheirmindswithpractice

32.

【C5】

33.

Whohadgas-masks?

五、5.ErrorCorrection(3题)34.

【S5】

35.

【S3】

36.

【S7】

六、6.ErrorCorrection(3题)37.

【S10】

38.

【S3】

39.

【S2】

参考答案

1.①Itseemsthatinrecentyears．dialectalTVprogramsareemerginginvariousformssuchasnewsandtalkshowsandtheyaregainingpopularityamongaudiencesboththeretiredandteenagers．②However。thephenomenonhasarousedmuchcontroversy．③SomeexpertsholdthattheseprogramsarehelpfulinpreservinglocallanguageswhichareanindispensiblepartandapreciouslegacyofChinesecultureandhumancivilization．④Onthecontrary．someauthoritiesarguethatthethrivingdialectalprogramsgoagainstournationalpolicytopromoteMandarin．Theystressfurthermorethattheseprogramswillexertanegativeinfluenceonstudents'useofMandarin．⑤PersonallyspeakingIdolikesomeoftheseprograms.Foronethingnewsisofferedinanentertainingway.Thusviewersgainbothinformationandpleasure.andtheyfeelrelievedfromeverydaypressure.Foranother.thespeakingofacertaindialectbringstheappealedaudienceasenseofclosenessnottomentionthelire-centeredcontentoftheseprograms.⑥TosumupIseenothreattheyposeagainstMandarinandnoreasonthattheyshouldhebanned.①Itseemsthatinrecentyears．dialectalTVprogramsareemerginginvariousforms，suchasnewsandtalkshows，andtheyaregainingpopularityamongaudiences，boththeretiredandteenagers．②However。thephenomenonhasarousedmuchcontroversy．③Someexpertsholdthattheseprogramsarehelpfulinpreservinglocallanguages，whichareanindispensiblepartandapreciouslegacyofChinesecultureandhumancivilization．④Onthecontrary．someauthoritiesarguethatthethrivingdialectalprogramsgoagainstournationalpolicytopromoteMandarin．Theystress，furthermore,thattheseprogramswillexertanegativeinfluenceonstudents'useofMandarin．⑤Personallyspeaking,Idolikesomeoftheseprograms.Foronething,newsisofferedinanentertainingway.Thus,viewersgainbothinformationandpleasure.andtheyfeelrelievedfromeverydaypressure.Foranother.thespeakingofacertaindialectbringstheappealedaudienceasenseofcloseness,nottomentionthelire-centeredcontentoftheseprograms.⑥Tosumup,IseenothreattheyposeagainstMandarinandnoreasonthattheyshouldhebanned.解析：①开门见山指出当前方言类电视节目盛行于荧屏。以复合长句开篇．且固定句型使用恰当。此外，emergeinvariousforms和gainpopularityamong为加分词组。

②意义的转折引出争议；固定句型运用恰当。

③引出专家的观点和理由：方言是中国文化不可缺少的一部分，也是人类文明宝贵的遗产，这些节目有利于方言的保存。preserving，indispensible，preciouslegacy都是加分词。

④意义的转折，引出官方的意见：方言节目与推广普通话的政策相悖．而且会给学生使用普通活带来不良影响。

⑤陈述自己喜欢方言类节目的原因：一是以娱乐的方式提供新闻，观众喜欢，释放了压力，一举两得；二是方言类节目贴近生活，有亲切感。relievedfrom，appealed，nottomention和life-centered体现丰富的词汇量。

⑥总结全文：这些节目既不构成对普通话的威胁，也没有理由禁止播出。poseathreatagainst为加分短语。

2.October232005DearMr.MajorAsacitizenofourcityIamverymuchconcernwiththeengravingproblemofairpollutioninourcity.Especiallyinrecentyearwiththerapiddevelopmentofeconomyairqualityinourcityisrapidlydeteriorating.Accordingtomyinvestigationtherearetwomajorsourcesofpollution.Themostseriouspollutioniscausedbyvehicles.Asmoreandmorevehiclessuchascarsbusestrucksandmotorbicyclesarerunninginthecitytheyhavebeenpollutingtheair.Toalleviatethisproblemthemunicipalgovernmentshouldmakerulestoenoughthepopularizationofenvironment-friendlycatandgasoline.Thesecondsourceofairpollutionisfromconstructionsites.MostoftheconstructionsitestakenomeasurestocontrolthedirtydustandtheareasnearbyareblanketedwiththickdustTherefore;regulationsshouldbemadetoforcetheconstructorstoregulatetheiroperationssoastoreducedust.WithallthemeasuresandregulationsandwiththejointeffortsofallthecitizensIamveryoptimisticthatwewillhavefreshandclearairsoon.Ialsoavailmyselfofthislettertocalluponallcitizenstotakepartinthecampaignagainstairpollutioninourcity.SincerelyyoursDavidZhaoOctober23,2005DearMr.Major,Asacitizenofourcity,Iamverymuchconcernwiththeengravingproblemofairpollutioninourcity.Especiallyinrecentyear,withtherapiddevelopmentofeconomy,airqualityinourcityisrapidlydeteriorating.Accordingtomyinvestigation,therearetwomajorsourcesofpollution.Themostseriouspollutioniscausedbyvehicles.Asmoreandmorevehiclessuchascars,buses,trucks,andmotorbicyclesarerunninginthecity,theyhavebeenpollutingtheair.Toalleviatethisproblem,themunicipalgovernmentshouldmakerulestoenoughthepopularizationofenvironment-friendlycatandgasoline.Thesecondsourceofairpollutionisfromconstructionsites.Mostoftheconstructionsitestakenomeasurestocontrolthedirtydustandtheareasnearbyareblanketedwiththickdust,Therefore;regulationsshouldbemadetoforcetheconstructorstoregulatetheiroperationssoastoreducedust.Withallthemeasuresandregulations,andwiththejointeffortsofallthecitizens,Iamveryoptimisticthatwewillhavefreshandclearairsoon.Ialsoavailmyselfofthislettertocalluponallcitizenstotakepartinthecampaignagainstairpollutioninourcity.Sincerelyyours,DavidZhao

3.ShouldtheStateInterferewithPeople'sSmokingHabits?NowadaysmanycountriessuchasFranceGreatBritainhavepromulgatedtheprohibitionofsmokingatpublicplacesincludingrestaurantsbarsstoresandworkplacesShouldtheStateInterferewithPeople'sSmokingHabits?Nowadays,manycountries,suchasFrance,GreatBritain,havepromulgatedtheprohibitionofsmokingatpublicplaces,includingrestaurants,bars,storesandworkplaces,解析：[写作点拨]论说文。①审题及布局。这是一篇比较典型的提纲式作文。按照文章提示的要求，首先应该对政府颁布禁烟令这一事件进行简单介绍，然后说明自己对政府这一举措的态度，支持还足反对，并说明理由。在布局上，根据题目中给出的提纲来展开，采用三段式结构即可。第一段介绍许多国家和地区纷纷颁布禁烟法令，禁止公民在公共场所吸烟；第二段说明自己对这一举措持支持还是反对态度；第三段进行小结，重申自己的观点。这篇文章写作难点在于第二部分，说明支持和反对此举的理由。为了增强说服力，建议作者先交代清楚自己是吸烟者还是不吸烟者，这样有利于展开陈述。②语言。作为论说文，论证要富有条理，论据要有说服力，词汇选择要丰富，句式可以多样化。

4.FoodSafetyWiththeincreaseofthenumberofcasesrelatedtofakefoodsandfoodsofpoorqualityproblemsremainseriousinthemarket．The2008ChinesemilkscandalbeginningwithrevelationsofcontaminatFoodSafetyWiththeincreaseofthenumberofcasesrelatedtofakefoodsandfoodsofpoorquality,problemsremainseriousinthemarket．The2008Chinesemilkscandal,beginningwithrevelationsofcontaminat

5.OverseasStudyatanEarlyAgeNowadaysmoreandmoreparentsareeagertosendtheirchildrentostudyabroadbeforetheyfinishhighschoolbywhatevermeansandatwhatevercost.Itisquiteunderstandableforparentstosendtheftchildrentostudyoverseasbecausetheyplacehighexpectationsontheirchildren.Theyareencouragedbythesuccessstoriesofthosewhohavecompletedtheiroverseasstudy.Withthedevelopmentofeconomycompaniesandinstitutionsathomearegivingmoreandmoreemphasisonoverseasexperiencestoo.Consequentlypursuingoverseasstudyhasbecomeakindofshortcutingainingabetterfuture.Moreoverthereisstilloneunderlyingreasonforthisrush-economicreason.TherapideconomicprogressinthepastfewyearsinChinahasenabledmoreandmoreparentstoaffordthehugecostfortheirchildren'soverseasstudy.Asformeoverseasstudyissurelyahelpfulwaytogetbothadvancedknowledgeandnecessaryexperiencesbutoverseasstudyatanearlyageisneithernecessarynorbeneficial.Thestudentsmaybetooyoungtoeithertendforthemselvesorthinkforthemselves.Idothinkthatoverseasstudycancontributetoone'sself-improvementbutit'sbettertobepursuedafteronehasfinishedhiscollegestudyathomewhenheismorecapableoflearningandlivingonhisown.OverseasStudyatanEarlyAgeNowadays,moreandmoreparentsareeagertosendtheirchildrentostudyabroadbeforetheyfinishhighschoolbywhatevermeansandatwhatevercost.Itisquiteunderstandableforparentstosendtheftchildrentostudyoverseasbecausetheyplacehighexpectationsontheirchildren.Theyareencouragedbythesuccessstoriesofthosewhohavecompletedtheiroverseasstudy.Withthedevelopmentofeconomy,companiesandinstitutionsathomearegivingmoreandmoreemphasisonoverseasexperiences,too.Consequently,pursuingoverseasstudyhasbecomeakindofshortcutingainingabetterfuture.Moreover,thereisstilloneunderlyingreasonforthisrush-economicreason.TherapideconomicprogressinthepastfewyearsinChinahasenabledmoreandmoreparentstoaffordthehugecostfortheirchildren'soverseasstudy.Asforme,overseasstudyissurelyahelpfulwaytogetbothadvancedknowledgeandnecessaryexperiences,butoverseasstudyatanearlyageisneithernecessarynorbeneficial.Thestudentsmaybetooyoungtoeithertendforthemselvesorthinkforthemselves.Idothinkthatoverseasstudycancontributetoone'sself-improvement,butit'sbettertobepursuedafteronehasfinishedhiscollegestudyathome,whenheismorecapableoflearningandlivingonhisown.

6.[l]Nowadaysit'sverycommonforparentstohireprivatetutorsfortheirchildren.[2]Somepeoplebelievethatprivatetutoringishelpfulforachildtomakerapidprogressinhisstudywhileothersholdoppositeviews.[3]AsfarasIamcon[l]Nowadaysit'sverycommonforparentstohireprivatetutorsfortheirchildren.[2]Somepeoplebelievethatprivatetutoringishelpfulforachildtomakerapidprogressinhisstudy,whileothersholdoppositeviews.[3]AsfarasIamcon解析：这篇作文要求讨论“请家教”的问题。Outline足“现象—正反两种观点-自己的观点”模式。这种题目有两种写作思路。

第一种思路，把重点放在“不同的看法”上，然后略写自己的观点(支持其中一个观点，或者当“和事佬”，说具体问题具体分析)。这时，要重点考虑：支持请家教的观点有什么?(激发学生学习兴趣、培养学生交际能力、提高成绩、充分利用时间，等等。)反对请家教，有什么理由?(没有必要，课堂上学好的话，不必请家教；作用不大，如果学生自己没有主动性，请厂家教也没有用；占用过多学生自主学习、游玩的时间，不利于学生的健康发展；等等。)

第二种思路是把写作重点放在“我”的看法上。就如范文那样，先简要介绍存在的不同看法，然后着重论述自己的观点。当然，自己的观点可以是支持，也可以是反对，但总的说来，要言之成理，要有逻辑性，沿言要衔接、连贯、自然。

Analysis

[1]对应outline的第1条，简要说明现象

[2]对应outline的第2条，说明存在两种不同的看法。

[3]对应outline的第3条，提出自己的看法。文章剩余部分就用来论证自己的看法。

[4][6]是[3]的支持句。用first，second关联。

[5][7]分别对两个分论点予以展开；

[8]用inoneword总结自己的观点。

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