历年(1999-2016)上海高考英语作文真题及参考范文

历年(1999-2016)上海高考英语作文及参考范文

1999上海高考作文及范例

一些学生认为学英语很重要；一些学生则认为不必学英语；我认为……(观点、理由)

SomestudentsthinkitisveryimportanttomasterEnglish.Theybelieve“Aforeignlanguageisa

weaponinthestruggleoflife”,OthersconsiderEnglishuseless.TheyfeellearningEnglishis

nothingbutaburdentothem.

Inmyopinion,Englishisoneofthemostimportantsubjectswelearnatschool.OfallsubjectsI

likeEnglishbest.

ThereareseveralreasonswhyEnglishismyfavoritesubject.

First,Englishisoneofthemostwidelyusedlanguagesoftheworld.Nearlyallinformationonthe

Internetandoverhalfoftheworld'stechnicalmaterialsareinEnglish,thusagoodcommandof

Englishwillgreatlybenefitmeinmywork.Secondly,itisbelievedthatgoodEnglishalsoleadsto

greaterchancesandopportunities.Inthecompetitionforawell-paidjob,theonewhocanspeak

Englishhasanadvantageoverthosewhocannot.

ForallthesereasonsweshouldnotonlylearnEnglishbutmasteritintheshortesttimepossible.

(166words)

2000年上海高考作文及范例

lo我最难忘的一课2o具体说明为何难忘3o感想

AnUnforgettableLesson

InmylifeIhaveexperiencedmanyimportantthings.Butperhapsthemostunforgettablething

whichisreallyworthmentioningisthelessongivenbymyChineseteacherjustaftershehadan

accident.

OnemorningjustbeforeourChineselesson,weweretoldourChineseteacher,MissLiu,hadhad

anaccident.Oneofherlegswasbadlyinjuredandshecouldn'tcometoteachus.Whilewewere

planningtovisitherafterschool,wealsothoughtthatmaybewewouldbefreetodowhatever

wewantedduringourChineselesson,andhopedourhomeworkloadwouldbereduced.Butto

oursurprise,shortlyafterthebell,MissLiu,withthehelpofastick,cametothedoorofour

classroom.Withgreatrespectwallstoodupandgreetedher.

Shesatonachairandbeganherlesson.Shespokeslowlybutforcefully.Shepreparedherlecture

quitewellanddemandedthatwedothesame.Towardstheendofthelesson,wegotlotsof

homeworkfromher.

Agoodteacherismanythingstomanypeople.Everyonehasdefiniteideasaboutwhatagood

teacheris.Inmyopiniontheteacherswhodemandedthemostfromthestudentsareperhaps

likedbest.(210words)

2001年上海高考作文及范例

请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭、环境和经济可能产生的影响。

Nowadaysthenumberofpeoplewhoownprivatecarsisontherise.Likeeverythingelse,

privatecarshavebothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.Generally,thefavorableaspectscanbe

listedasfollows.

First,privatecarscanbringconvenienceandmobilitytoowners.Acarallowsapersonto

movecomfortablyandsafelyaswellasquicklyandfreely.Becausemyfamilyownsacar,weare

abletomakeextensivejourneyseveryyear.Therefore,IbelievethetouristindustryinChina

willdevelopmorequicklywiththeincreaseinthenumberofprivatecars.Secondly,ifmore

peoplebuycars,theautomobilesindustrywilldevelopdramatically.What'smore,thegrowthof

theautomobileindustrycantriggertheboomofotherimportantandrelatedindustriessuchas

ironandsteelproduction,energyandtechnologicalapplication.

Everycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Tobeginwith,toomany

carswillgiverisetoaseriesofproblems,suchasseriousenvironmentalpollutionandmore

trafficaccidents.Inaddition,thedrivermayhavedrivearoundandaroundlookingforavailable

parkingspaces.

Throughaboveanalysis,wecanseethatprivatecarsshouldberestrictedratherthan

encouraged.(199words)

2002年上海高考作文及范例

2002年的作文题提供了一幅图片，图片上女儿在学骑自行车。奶奶、父亲和一手拿着急救

箱的母亲三人满头大汗地扶着车，深怕女儿摔着了。图片下面有一行字：你们让我骑好吗？

简述图片内容，结合生活实际，就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。

Duototheone-childpolicyinChina,mostfamilieshaveonlyonechildandthereforethischildis

regardedasthetreasureofthewholeworldfamily.Boththeparentsandgrandparentsusually

overindulgethechild.

Wecanseeinthepicture,Whenachildislearningtorideabicycle,theparentandthe

grandparentaresweatingfromrunningalongsidethebikeandaretryingtheirbesttoprotectthe

childforfearthattheyshouldfallandhurtthemselves.

Weallknowthegreatestgloryconsistsnotinneverfalling,butinrisingeverytimewefall.So

Ithink,fortheparents,theyshouldbeawareofthenegativeeffecttoomuchpamperinghason

theirchild.Undertheparents'protection,thechildknowsonlycomfortandease.Iftheydon't

learnhowtoliveindependently,howcantheycopewiththeadversitieswhichtheywillmeetin

thefuture?

Forthechildren,theyshouldlettheirparentsknowthattheyhaveconfidenceinthemselves

andareabletoexistinthecompetitivecommunitywithouttheconstantwatchfuleyeofaneager

parent.

Thepathtosuccessisfilledwithvariouskindsofdifficultiesandobstacles.Onlywhenwe

havelearnedtostandonourowntwofeet,canwesurviveinthe21stcentury.

(219words)

2003年上海高考作文及范例

你的好友因家境一般买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。给他写信，谈谈你的看法和建议。

受信人：徐海青寄信人：黄平写信日期：2003年六月八日

June8,2003

DearXuHaiqing,

Yousaidinyourletterthatmanyofyourclassmateswerewearingfashionableclothes,butyou

couldn'taffordtobuythebestbrands.Soyoufeltverydepressed.Therearedifferentviewson

people'swear.Thefollowingaremyideasaboutit.

Firstly,youshouldn'tputtoomuchemphasisonphysicalappearance.Youmustalwaysremember

themostimportanttaskforyoutodayistoconcentrateyourattentiononyourstudies.No

matterwhatyouwear,youwillreallylookyourbestwhenyoucomeoutfirstinyour

examinations.

Afamoussayinggoes,"'Frugalityisthemotherofvirtue/So,secondly,youmustunderstandthat

itisafinevirtuetolearnliveinfrugality.Sinceyourfamilyisnotabletoprovideyouwithenough

moneytobuyclothesofthebestbrands,itisallthemorenecessaryforyoutotryeverymeans

tolightenthefinancialburdenofyourfamily.Youwillfindthevirtueoffrugalitywillbenefityoua

lotinyourlaterlife.

IhopeyouunderstandwhatImean.Iamsureyouwilltakeapositiveattitudetowardslifeand

willbehappyagainwhenyoureadmyletter.(205words)

2004年上海高考作文及范例

老师要求你负责班级墙报(wall-newspaper)工作并征求你的意见。在日记中表述你的决

定并谈谈想法。

TodayMissWangaskedmetobeinchargeofthewallnewspaperofourclass.Iwassogladat

that.ButnowIdon'tknowwhetherIshouldacceptthetaskornot.

ThoughIhavebeeninClass4fornearlytwoyears,Ihavehardlydoneanythingforit.Ithinkit

willbeagoodopportunitytodevotemyeffortstoclassifItakethejob.Ontheotherhand,Km

goodatdrawing.Thejobwillalsoprovidemewithagoodchancetoshowmytalent.

However;Iknowthattakingthejobmeanshavinglesstimetorelaxandstudy.Perhapsitwill

takemeseveraldaystocompleteanexcellentwallnewspaper.Perhapsitwillaffectmystudiesas

well.Perhaps...

No!No!No!Ishouldbelievemyability.Icangeteverythingarrangedwell:relaxing,study,wall

newspaper...Itwillbeanhourformetodosomethingformyclass.Iwanttobeapersonwhois

gladtochallengehimself.

Now,I'vedecidedI'llacceptthejob.I'IItellmydecisiontoMissWangtomorrow.(187)

2005年上海高考作文及范例

古人云：“天生我材必有用“(Theremustbeauseformytalent)。通过描述你

生活中一件事，说明人各有所长，无论才能大小都能成为有用的人。

ThereisanoldEnglishsayingthattheremustbeuseformytalent.Ihaveregardedit

asmymottoformanyyears.Frommypointofview,thereisnodifferencebetweenoneperson

andanother.Withsomeusefultalent,youwillmakeyourcontributionstothissociety.

WhenIwastenyearsold,therewasanoldmanlivingatthecornerofxxRoad.He

didn'thavetheopportunitytostudyinschool,buthelearnedhowtomakewoodfurniture.Every

timepeoplewenttoaskhimtosolvesomeproblemsoffurniture,hewaswillingtohelpthem.

Tomysurprise,inhissparetime,hewouldmakesometoyswithsmallpiecesof

wood.Someofthemweresoldtothetoystoreandothersweregiventous.ThemomentIsee

thelovelytoysmadebythisoldman,Iwouldrememberthehappychildhood.

Fromthisoldman,wecanseewhateverkindoftalentyouhave,youcanfindyour

ownmethodtodisplayyourtalent.Themostimportantfactorisyourconfidence.Ifyoubelieve

thattheremustbeauseformytalent,youwillsucceed.(200words)

2006年上海高考作文及范例

下表提供了你所心仪的南、北两所大学的招生信息。通过比较作出选择，并结合个人情况说

明理由。

南方大学北方大学

学费8000元/年5000元年

招生人数20人10人

优惠政策无加20分

Idreamtobecomeanastronaut.TwouniversitiesinChinacanmakemydreambecometrue.

Theyarebothverygood,butIcanonlychooseone.

FromtheInternet,Ilearnedthattherearemoreadvantagesofferedbythenorthernuniversity

thantheonesbythesouthernone.Forexample,thefeechargedbythenorthernoneislower.

Anditwilladd20markswhilethesouthernuniversitywillnot.Incontrast,thesouthern

university'sgoodpointisthatitenrollsmorestudents.

Aftercomparingtheaboveinformation,IthinkIwillchoosethenorthernuniversityforthe

followingreasons.Firstly,myparentsmaynotbeabletoaffordmystudyandlivingexpenses.

Secondly,anadditionoftwentymarksiscertainlyanirresistibleattraction.Moreimportantly,

fouryearsofindependentlifeinthenorthwillobviouslyhelpdevelopmypersonalityrequiredas

anastronaut.

2007年上海高考作文及范例

以“礼物”为主题写一篇作文。该文章必须包括以下内容：

1、你送礼物的对象及所送的礼物；

2、该礼物对他(她)可能产生的影响或带来的变化。

APresentforFather'sDay

TheFather'sDaywillcomesoon.andIwanttogivemyDadapresent.ThatisaVIPcardofa

healthclub.WhenIwasalittleboy,Dadworkedhardasateacher.Duringterm,MotherandI

sometimesaccompaniedDadinhisofficetillalatehour.Fromthenon,IunderstoodthatDad

workedwithgreateffort.TherearestilltoomanypreciousmemorieswhichI'llcherishinmy

heart.AndIwanttogivethispresenttoexpressmythankstohim.

TimefliesandI'm18now.AsIgrowup,Fatherisgettingolder.Heisnowstilldivingintopilesof

books.Withthehealthclubmembership,Ihopethathewillmaketimetodomoreexercises.I

thinkthathewillrelaxinthehealthclubandmakemorefriends.

2008年上海高考作文及范例

你班将组队参加学校组织的集体舞比赛(groupdancingcooipetition),班长希望大家积极参

加。对此谈谈你的看法。

你的文章必须包括以下内容：

•你是否会参加比赛

•你做出该决定的具体理由

Version1:

Agroupdancingcompetitionwillbeheldinourschoolandthemonitorcallsoneverybodyto

takeanactivepartinit.Whilemostofmyclassmatesarestillhesitatingwhethertoparticipate,I

havesaidyestoourmonitorwithgreatpleasure.

Generallyspeaking,therearetworeasonsformydecision.First,itisagoodopportunityforme

torelaxmyselfwhichwillenablemetostudymoreefficiently.AllworkandnoplaymakesJacka

dullboy,sogoesthesaying,whichclearlyshowsustheimportanceofrelaxation.Besides,Ithink

Iamagooddancerafterlearningdanceformorethanfiveyears.Participatinginthecontestwill

beagoldenchanceformetoshowmydancingskillsandmakesomecontributionstotheclass.

Forthetworeasonsmentionedabove,itisnosurprisethatIhavesuchastrongenthusiasmon

thegroupdancingcompetition.

Version2:

Todaythemonitorcallsoneverybodytotakeanactivepartinthegroupdancingcompetition

whichwillbeheldinacoupleofdaysinourschool.Butaftersomecarefulconsideration,Ihave

decidednottoparticipate.

Thereareanumberofreasonsformydecision.Firstandforemost,astheCollegeEntranceExam

isjustaroundthecorner,studyisthetoppriorityforme.Participatinginthegroupdancing

competitionhastogivewaybecauseitmighttakemetoomuchtime.What'smore,withoutany

experienceofdancing,Idon/tthinkIcanbeagooddancingpartner.Iamafraidmypoordancing

skillswillprobablyspoiltheperformanceofthewholeclass.Inthiscase,it'sbetterformetobea

spectatorcheeringformyclassmates.

Forthesereasons,itseemsmoreappropriateformetowatchthecompetitionthantodance

myself.

2009年上海高考作文及范例

某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺(gardening),烹饪(cooking)，防身术

(self-defence),护理(nursing)。假如你是王跃华(不可以用自己的真实姓名)，写一封申

请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习。信的内容必须包括：1、你感兴趣的课程2、你期望

从这门课程中学到什么3、为什么想学这些内容

模板：

Receiver'saddress

Dear…，Iamextremelypleasedtohearfromyou./toseeyouradvertisementfortheposition

in....AndIwouldliketowritealettertotellyouthat.../IamconfidentthatIamsuitableforthe

kindofthejobyouareadvertising---.../IfeelIamcompetenttomeettherequirementsyou

havelisted.Ontheonehand,....Ontheotherhand,....Iamenclosingmyresumeforyourkind

considerationandreference.Ishallbemuchobligedifyouwilloffermeapreciousopportunity

toaninterview.Iwillgreatlyappreciatearesponsefromyouatyourearliestconvenience/Iam

lookingforwardtoyourrepliesatyourearliestconvenience.Bestregardsforyourhealthand

success.Sincerelyyours,XXX

范文

Itissaidthatasummercampistobeheldbyyourschoolandafewcoursesareavailableto

choosefrom.Iaminterestedingardening,inthatIbelieveitfeaturesmycharacterandpersonal

benefits.

Duringthelearningperiod,Iexpecttogainsomeunexpectedknowledge.Aradical

techniquerdliketoobtainistoknowhowtotelldifferencespeciesofplantsandflowersapart.

Thishelpsmetohaveacleareroutlookofthoseinmygarden.Furthermore,thepropercutting

timeandfrequencytowateraresomeotherskillsIwanttolearn.Alittleknowledgeconcerning

choosingsuitablesoilorreasonablepositionswillalsobeagoodchoice.

ThemainreasonwhyIchoosegardeningisthatIwanttohelpmyparentswiththeirworkin

thedomesticgarden.Inaddition,Ifindthatwestudentsgenerallylacktheknowledgeof

gardening,missingachancetohaveawordwithnature,sothatknowingthesurroundingsis

imperative.Lastbutnotleast,byattendingthecourses,Iwillhaveameaningfulsummervacation,

anddrowningmyselfbetweenplantswillbyallmeansaddabrillianttouchtomylife.

2010上海高考英语作文

下图是小学新生的课堂一角，对照你当时的上课情况，作出比较并谈谈你的感

受。你的作文必须包括：

•描述图片里学生上课的场景

・比较你同时期的上课情况

・简单谈谈你的感受

范文:

Wearingexcitedandeagerexpressions,thechildreninthepictureraisetheir

handsashighastheycanfortheopportunitytoanswerthequestionmetforwardby

theteacher.Apparently,allofthem,whetherboysorgirls,sociableorshyaretotally

fascinatedandinspired,andarealwaysfullofingenious（新颖的）ideas.

Onseeingthepicture,Ican7helprecallinsmyfirstdayintheelementary

school.7bthebestofmy（就我记忆所及，如果我没记错的话）,wepupilsat

thattimeallfeltexceedinglymotivatedtoanswerthequestionsaskedbyourteacher.

Moreoftenthannot（通常'）,weraisedourlittlehandsalmostatthesamemomentas

ourteacherputforwardaquestion,alldesperatetograbthechancetoanswer

questionsholdingappealtous.Judgingfromtheexcitementonourfaces,theteachers

alldeduced/triggeredourauthenticyearningforknowledgeinvariousrespects（方面）

andoursubstantial（大量的）curiosity.Moreover,savoring（品尝）thepleasureof

acquiringknowledgewithobviousrelish（滋味，风味）,wefoundthattheuleasureof

gainingknowledgefaroutweighed（远远大于;比…重要）theembarrassmentofthe

failuretoanswerthequestioncorrectly.

Quitehonestly,Iinterpretmyunvarying（不变的）curiosityandyearningstohave

playedanindispensableinmyongoing（不间断的）studyinthefollowingtwelve

years.Had/notbeenblessedwithsuchenormousycarninqforknowledge./

couldn'thavebeensomotivatedtodelveimo（钻研）therealm（领JQofscience,

literatu】eandcultureandletmypotentialsbeexploitedtofull.

2011上海高考英语作文：

若你是明启中学李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以

下启示写一封申请信。

启示

国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申

请成功者将获得项目经费2000元。有意者请来信告知。

信中请包括：

1.你个人基本情况

2.你对申请项目具体设想

3.项目经费使用计划

联系方式：2011hope@

2011年6月7日

Dear...,

I'mwritingthise-mailtoapplyfortheprojectaimedathelpingchildreninpoor

areas.MynameisLiMing,astudentfromMingQimiddleschool.Lastyear,Iwas

grantedanopportunitytovisitaschoolinthedepthofamountainandthe

experiencekeptflashingoverandover,whichhadtriRReredtheintentionto

shouldertheresponsibilityofhelpingthemovercomethehardshipsandstruggle

theywouldgothrough.

Thereisaseriesofstepsinmyprojectthatwillbedemonstratedasfollows:

Ofthetoppriorityisourorganizinganactivitytointroducethelivingandlearning

conditionsofkidsinpoorareasandthustobringhometothepublictheurgencyof

immediateactiontobetakentohelpthemout.Whetherbydonatingmoneyorby

sendingdailynecessitiesfromclothestobooks,everyoneshoulddohisbit.Besides,

avideoplaywillbeshottoconveythewishes,cheersandencouragementfromus

citypeopletothem.Equallysignificantly,Ialongwithmyteammateshaveplanned

tovisitthosekids,toplayandchatwiththem,whichisboundtoestablishasolid

connectionbetweenus.

IfIwereluckyenoughtobegrantedthe2000yuanfund,aquarterofitwould

besparedforthetrafficandothercosts,whiletherestwouldbeaddedtothemoney

collectedtobedonatedcontributingtomodernizingandimprovingtheteaching

devices.

Thanksfortakingtimetoreadmye-mailandKmlookingforwardtobeingpart

ofyourproject.

Sincerelyyours,

LiMing

2012上海高考英语作文:

上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课（如图所示）,

回家后你用英语写了一篇日记，内

•对两堂绘画课的具体描：

•你从中获得的启发。

范文：

Monday,May28th

Today,IpaidavisittoaprimaryschoolwhereagirlnamedAmystudiesto

observe2artlessons.Inthefirstclass,theteacherpresentedeveryonewithalarge

pieceofpaperandrequiredthemtopaintwhatevertheylikedonit.Soexcitedwas

/mythatsheappliedthecolorstoherfeet,usingthemaspaintbrushes.Onthe^

contrary,intheotherclass,theteacherjustinstructedthemtocopythemodel

painting.DespitethefactthatAmvalsopaintedherpicturesearnestly,Idiscovered

thatshewasn'tinvolvedinthepaintingaspnssionatelv./ma/ntaMitwosthe

creativityandimaginationthatmadethestrikingdifferencebetweenthe2dosses

FirstlywhatimpressedmemostwasAmy'ssweetsmileinthefirstclass.It-oes

withoutsavingthatthehappinessfromone'screationandimaginationwillallow

himtoreceivetherealsenseofachievementandsatisfactionfromhiswork.Only

whenwefeelpleasedwithourworkscanwecreatesomethingbrilliant.

（同时地）,equippedwithinnovationspirit,wewillbemorelikely

todevelopourpotentialabilities.Giventhateveryoneofussaythesamewordsor

dothesamethings,ourcountrywillbedestinedtobecomelessdynamicand

prosperous.However;itisafairbetthatmoreamazingcontributionswillbeachieved

withou门initiative.

Ashasbeendiscussedabove,/firmlyholdthebeliefthadcreativityand

imaginationaretwoinvaluabledualitieswhichsuccessfeedsTherefore,Iwillgo

toanvlengthtocultivatemycreativityandimaginationtomakegreater

contributionstomycountry.

2013上海高考英语作文：

上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征

集公众意见，假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须

满足以下要求：

1.简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；

2.说明你的理由（从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）

DearSirorMadam,

I'vereadaboutyourposteraboutselectingthelocationofanexhibitionof

famouspaintings,andIthinkthatthemuseumisaniceplace.

Firstofall,comparedwiththoselibraries,themuseumisanexcellentplace

whichinspiresoureagernessforknowledge.Itiscertainthatvisitorswillbemore

absorbedirthefantasticsurroundings.Bycontrast,Idon'tthinkthosenormal

librariesincommunitiesmatchwellwiththepaintingswithgreatfameandhigh

prices.

Whilesomeofmyfriendsinsistthatlibrariesaremoreconvenient,Imaintain

thatsincethetransportationsysteminShanghaiisveryadvancedandthemuseumis

locatedinthecitycenter;it'snotabitdifficultforustoreachtheshow.

Allinall,Iamfirmlyconvincedthatthemuseumisabetterplaceforthisgrand

paintingexhibition,andit'llbeagreathonorifIcouldstudythosewonderful

paintingsinthebestmuseuminShanghai.Ihopeyouwillacceptmysuggestion.

Yoursfaithfully,

WangMin

2014高考英语作文：

学校英语报正在酝酿改版，拟从现有的三个栏目（健康，娱乐，文化）中

去除一个，并从三个备选栏目（时尚，职业规划，读者反馈）中挑选一个纳入该

报。假设你是该校学生程飞，给校报编辑写一封电子邮件，表达你的观点。邮件

必须包括以下内容。

你建议去除的栏目及去除的理由；

你建议增加的栏目及增加的理由。

DearEditor,

I'mwritingtoexpresssomeofmyopinionstowardsourschooEsEnglish

newspaper.

Inmypointofview,amonghealth,entertainmentandculture,Iwouldchoose

“entertainment“tobetheonetobeeliminated.Althoughit'snecessaryforstudentsto

getsomerelaxation,I'mworriedthatthemainnewsthattheentertainmentcolumn

offerswillcventuaHyturnintocelebritygossip,whichisneitherhelpfultothegrowth

ofstudentsnortothedevelopmentofourschool.Wearealreadylivinginaworldthat

iscrammedwithuselessinfonnation,andthere9snoneedtoaddsomemore.The

mainfbcusofthenewspaperissupposedtobeplacedonthestudents—notBradPitt's

newmovie.

Asfbrthecolumntobeadded,Ihighlyrecommendthe"careerplanning^^.Iknow

thatrightnowalargenumberofstudentsstillhaveabsolutelynoideaaboutwhatthey

trulywanttobecomeinthefuture,soit'squiteurgentandnecessarytogivestudents

basicunderstandingofwhatdifferentkindsofjobsarelikeandwhatkindsofqualities

arerequiredfordifferedjobs.Thismayhelpstudentsgainabetterunderstandingof

theirstrengthsandweaknessandthusfigureouttheirgoals.Tome,it'smuchmore

meaningfulthan“fashion"or“readers':feedback”.

I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Faithfullyyours,

ChengFei.

2015年上海高考英语作文解析，及，作文范文

II.GuidedWriting（25分）

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtothe

instructionsgivenbelowinChinese.

学校即将举办“读书节”，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘

阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括

以下内容：

1.简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；

2.阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。

作文解析：

今年的英语作文题目同样重点考察了主观理由型作文的写作手法，这篇文章要求学生在

三幅学校读书节宣传图片当中选出自己最喜欢的一幅，对图片进行描述并说明原因。这也是

继2013年和2014年连续两年考察书信体与主观理由型文章的结合体之后出现的第三篇主观

理由型文章。

整体来看，今年的作文题目似乎与往年没有什么区别，但细细分析，我们会发现今年英

语作文的难度，不管是在文章内容、还是在形式上面，都有了大幅提升。因为考生需要同时

兼顾三个难点：1、书信体正确的的书写格式；2、对图片内容进行细节的描述：3、找出恰

当的理由（2-3点）进行论证，说理充分，同时注意论点和论据相结合，以及文章语句之间的

逻辑严密性。可以说，近三年来英语作文虽然都在考察主观理由这个大的方向，但是考察的

难度确实是在逐年递增。

对于考生来说，要想在短短的20分钟之内写好这篇作文，首先需要拿捏好这篇文章的

结构。一般来说，文章第一段用来引出话题，第二段可以对所选择的图片进行描写，描写时

要格外注意的地方是对细节的详细描述，基本内容讲清楚就可以开始第三段的理由阐述了。

写好重头戏理由之后，在尾段我们无需过多笔墨，基本上通过三句话就可以收尾了。也

就是总结加升华，由于这是一篇征集建议的书信体文章，所以需要最后有一句客套话，考生

可以通过Lookingforwardtoyourreply或者Iwillappreciateitverymuchifyou

cantakemysuggestionsintoconsideration进行文章自然收尾。这样整篇文章便达到

了内容统一，结构完整，说理充分了

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