浙江新高考作文续写公开课

Tocontinueastory续写之如何构思2021/5/91WhatisaSTORY

/WhydowemakeSTORIES?Astoryistoentertian,toamuse,toeducate,toenlighten.Basically,astoryistodeliverapieceofmindtous.So,howtodeliveritwell?2021/5/92Whatmakesastory?Simplyput:WhoWhereWhatWhenHowWhyLiterarilyput:Characters(Main&Minor)

Plot(Beginning,RisingAction,Climax,FallingAction&Resolution)2021/5/93Think

Foragoodstory,whichismoreimportant,

thecharacter,ortheplot?2021/5/941.CaoRuiiseasy-goingandheisneverseengettingangry,but__________________________________________.2.ShenMengyanisalady-likegirlwhenshe_________________________________,butwhen_______________shewill________________.3.LiJinyingisverygentletoherdeskmateandshe______________________________________________.hewasalittleannoyedwhenhisfoodwastakenbyChengSihan

isintheclassroominthedormbetotallyacrazyonealwaysspeakssoftlytohimCharacterizationPractice(Writing)2021/5/954.WangChenhaoisaquietboy,he________________.5.ZhaoHanbinconsidershimselfTHEmosthandsomeintheworld,andhe___________________________________________.6.AfterdiscoveringZhangKaihengisafterthesamegirlhelikes,thefearlessZhaoYonghao_____________________________________.cansitsilentlyforadaywithoutawordtohisdeskmate.looksdownuponalltheotherboysintheclasswhohethinksugly.felthemustdosomething2021/5/96

Makeitaone-sentencestory!

1.FramtonwantedtoclamhisnervesinMrsSamptons'house,onlyto_____________________________________.2.Matildaputonthenecklaceandlookedfowardtothecomingoftheparty.Herdreamwas______________________________.3.AlthoughLauriewantedtowinverymuch,whenshefoundJinny'stape,______________________________.bemadelosehisnervesbyalittlemischievousgirltobecomethequeenofthepartyoftheupperclassdidn'tletthedesiretowingetthebetterofherandreturnedittoJinny2021/5/974.Larryangrilyopenedthecardoor,tryingtorushawayfromhisterribleboss,buttofind_______________________5.Timwasagoodstudentintheteachers'eyes,yethe__________________.6.Itwasverylate,andHelenwasveryanxiousforherhusbandtoreturn,whenthedoorbellrang,she__________________.aChristmasgiftfromtheboss

neverlikesanyteacher'sclass2021/5/98Let'sreadandpayattentiontotheredpart.

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”andwalkedaway.

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.

2021/5/99Whatwouldshedoorexperience

next?criedforhelp?regrettedwhatshehaddone?triedtogobackonherown?waitedforherhusband?cameacrosssomebadorgoodguy?...2021/5/910Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.BegantoregretThingsgotworsemissherhusbandandfamily2021/5/911Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.

Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.1.It'sluckyshehadsometingtodrinkandeat,butwouldtheluckcontinue?2.Whyweretheberriesmostdelicioustoher?2021/5/912Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpe