高考英语写作分类训练：感谢信（含答案）

感谢信/祝贺信1．假定你是学生李华，你在学校组织的第三届用英语讲中国故事挑战赛(“StoriesofChinaRetoldinEnglish”Challenge)中获得冠军。请撰写一封英语邮件给外教David，分享这一喜讯并感谢他在赛前给予你的帮助。内容包括：1.告知喜讯;2.回忆外教提供的帮助并表达感谢。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearDavid,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua2．假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动(WorkCreatesaBetterLife)得到了外教Patrick的大力支持。活动已经圆满结束，请你给他写一封感谢信。内容包括：1.表示感谢；2.外教的帮助；3.活动的反响。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearPatrick,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua3．假定你是李华，在你们班英国交换生Chris的帮助下你获得了学校举办的“温暖春日”主题摄影竞赛活动的一等奖。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.表示感谢;2.回顾他对你的帮助;3.邀请他参加下次摄影展。注意：写作词数应为100左右。DearChris,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua4．假定你是李华，你的美国好友Jack在学校篮球比赛中被评为MVP，请你给他写封祝贺信。要点如下：1.表示祝贺；2.肯定他的付出；3.希望学习他的篮球技术。注意：1.写作词数应为80词左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李华，昨天在学校不慎丢失钱包。今天你接到学校学生会的电话，称外教Mr.Smith捡到你的钱包并上交学校，让你速去认领。请你给Mr.Smith写一封电子邮件表示感谢，内容包括：1．表示感谢的原因；2．丢失的过程和物品；3．对Mr.Smith作出评价。注意：1．词数100左右，邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMr.Smith,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua6．假定你叫李华，你和你的团队即将结束在新西兰某中学的文化交流活动。请代表团队准备一篇答谢辞在答谢会上致辞，内容包括：1.感谢；2.收获；3.愿望。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．毕业之际，请你根据以下要点用英语给你的一位老师写封信，感谢他多年来给予你的教育和帮助。要点包括：1．写作的目的；2．老师给予你的教育和帮助；3．你所取得的成绩。注意：1．词数100左右；2．信件的开头和结尾已经给出，请接着往下写；3．可适当增加细节，使文章过渡自然。DearMr.Li,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua8．假如你是李华，目前在爱尔兰进行交流学习。上周末你受当地学生Chris邀请参加了“爱尔兰传统音乐节”活动。请你写一封邮件给Chris，内容包括：1)感谢邀请；2)分享你的活动收获；3)表示期待。注意：1.词数80个左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假如你是班长李华，你们班举办了以“ProtectOurEarth”为主题的班会活动，并邀请了王教授给同学们做了讲座，请你在活动结束后给王教授写一封信表示感谢。内容包括：1.表达感谢；2.活动的反响和同学们的收获；3.再次表达感谢。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearProfessorWang,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua10．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Alex给你推荐了一部英文电影。你观看后收获很大，因此想给他写一封信表示感谢，内容包括：1．表示感谢；2．介绍你的收获；3．希望获得更多推荐。注意：1．词数应为100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________1．OnePossibleVersion:DearDavid,Fullofjoy,Ican’twaittosharewithyouthisexcitingnews!Ihavebeencrownedwiththechampionshipinthethird“StoriesofChinaRetoldinEnglish”Challengeinmyschool.Mygratitudeforyouisbeyonddescription.WhenIwasrackingmybrainsforthedraft,itwasyouwhohelpedmepolishitandcorrectgrammarmistakescarefully.Withthedraftcompleted,itwasyouwhohelpedmerehearsethespeechandkindlypointedouthowtopauseandarticulateinabetterway.Inthetryout,whenIstutteredduetoextremeanxiety,itwasyouwhoencouragedmetocontinue.Withoutyourconstantencouragement,mymoralewouldhavebeendampened.Thanksagainforyourgeneroushelpandwishyouallthebest.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生撰写一封英语邮件给外教David，分享自己获得学校组织的中国故事挑战赛的冠军这一喜讯并感谢他在赛前给予你的帮助。【详解】1.词汇积累令人激动的：exciting→thrilling感激：gratitude→appreciation初稿：draft→sketch完成：complete→accomplish2.句式拓展同义句原句：Withthedraftcompleted,itwasyouwhohelpedmerehearsethespeechandkindlypointedouthowtopauseandarticulateinabetterway.拓展句：Whenthedraftwascompleted,itwasyouwhohelpedmerehearsethespeechandkindlypointedouthowtopauseandarticulateinabetterway.【点睛】【高分句型1】WhenIwasrackingmybrainsforthedraft,itwasyouwhohelpedmepolishitandcorrectgrammarmistakescarefully.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和强调句式)【高分句型2】Withthedraftcompleted,itwasyouwhohelpedmerehearsethespeechandkindlypointedouthowtopauseandarticulateinabetterway.(运用了with的复合结构和强调句式)2．DearPatrick,IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpintheWorkCreatesaBetterLife,whichhasturnedouttobeanamazingsuccess.Itissoniceofyoutohaveofferedusavarietyofpresentationskillsandcreativesuggestionsonourshow.Itwasunderyourprofessionalguidancethattheparticipantsshowedtheirskillsofcooking,gardening,etc.Theirimpressiveperformancesdefinitelyfueledtheirpassionfordailylifeskills.Mostimportantly,thisactivityhelpedstudentsreceivewideadmirationandgaintheirtremendousconfidence.Manythanksforyourtimeandsupport.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封感谢信，感谢外教Patrick对学生会举办的首届生活技能云端展示活动的大力支持。【详解】1.词汇积累衷心的：sincere→heartfelt感激：gratitude→appreciation惊人的：amazing→fascinating提供：offer→provide2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Theirimpressiveperformancesdefinitelyfueledtheirpassionfordailylifeskills.拓展句：Theirperformanceswhichimpressedpropledefinitelyfueledtheirpassionfordailylifeskills.【点睛】[高分句型1]IamwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpintheWorkCreatesaBetterLife,whichhasturnedouttobeanamazingsuccess.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Itwasunderyourprofessionalguidancethattheparticipantsshowedtheirskillsofcooking,gardening,etc.(itis...that强调句型)3．DearChris,I’mgladtotellyouthatIhavewonfirstplaceincurschool’s“WarmSpring”PhotographyCompetition.I’mwritingtoexpressmygratitudeforyourhelp.WhileIwaspreparingforthecompetition,youtaughtmewhatmakesagoodphoto.Besides,Ilearnedhowtoadjusttheshootingmodesandchoosethebestsettingsforagoodphotofromtheshortvideosyourecommendedtome.Asaresult,Iwonthecompetition.Ihopeyoucantakepartinthenextphotographycompetition.Ibelieveyouwilldefinitelybethewinner.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国交换生Chris写一封邮件，感谢他对自己参加摄影竞赛活动的帮助。内容包括：1.表示感谢；2.回顾他对你的帮助；3.邀请他参加下次摄影展。【详解】1.词汇积累感谢：gratitude→thanks为……做准备：preparefor→makepreparationsfor此外：besides→what’smore参加：takepartin→participatein2.句式拓展运用形容词作状语合并句子原句：I’mgladtotellyouthatIhavewonfirstplaceincurschool’s“WarmSpring”PhotographyCompetition.I’mwritingtoexpressmygratitudeforyourhelp.拓展句：GladtotellyouthatIhavewonfirstplaceincurschool’s“WarmSpring”PhotographyCompetition,I’mwritingtoexpressmygratitudeforyourhelp.【点睛】【高分句型1】WhileIwaspreparingforthecompetition,youtaughtmewhatmakesagoodphoto.（运用了while引导的时间状语从句以及what引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Ilearnedhowtoadjusttheshootingmodesandchoosethebestsettingsforagoodphotofromtheshortvideosyourecommendedtome.（运用了“疑问词how+动词不定式”作宾语）4．参考范文：DearJack,I’mveryexcitedtoknowthenewsthatyouwereawardedMVPinthebasketballmatchheldinschoollastSunday.Ishowmycongratulationssincerely.Thisisagoodevidencetoshowwhathardworkyou’vedevotedtopracticingandimprovingyourskills.Whenyoufirstlearnedtoplaybasketball,youwereatalossaboutthebasicskillsandfeltembarrassed.Butitwasn’tlongbeforeyoucaughtupandbecameanexcellentplayer.ThatyouwereawardedMVPshowsyourgreatdeterminationandpainstakingeffortsinpractisingbasketball.Ihopethatonedaywecanhaveagameofbasketball,sothatIcanlearnfromyou.Bestwishes.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给美国好友Jack写一封祝贺信，祝贺他在学校篮球比赛中被评为MVP。【详解】1.词汇积累兴奋的、激动的：excited→thrilled表达祝贺：showcongratulations→expresscongratulations/extendcongratulations致力于：devotedto→committedto提高：improve→enhance2.句式拓展同义句原句：ThatyouwereawardedMVPshowsyourgreatdeterminationandpainstakingeffortsinpractisingbasketball.拓展句：ThefactthatyouwereawardedMVPshowsyourgreatdeterminationandpainstakingeffortsinpractisingbasketball.【点睛】【高分句型1】I’mveryexcitedtoknowthenewsthatyouwereawardedMVPinthebasketballmatchheldinschoollastSunday.(运用了that引导的同位语从句)【高分句型2】Ihopethatonedaywecanhaveagameofbasketball,sothatIcanlearnfromyou.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和sothat引导的目的状语从句)5．DearMr.Smith,I’mLiHua,astudentofNo.2HighSchool.Itakethisopportunitytoexpressmyappreciationforyourreturningmywallet.Herearesomedetails.Firstandforemost,onmywayhometotheschooldininghall,Ilostmywalletduetomycarelessnessyesterday.Inthewallettherewassomemoney,myIDcardandstudentcard.Asyouknow,myIDcardandstudentcardareveryimportanttome.Iwasveryworriedandevensleepless.Moreover,IwasstillfeelinganxioustodaywhenIwasinformedtogototheStudentUnionandtakebackwhatIhadlost,whereIlearnedthatitwasyouwhopickedupmywalletandkindlyhandeditintimely.ItwassuchapleasantsurprisethatI’dliketoexpressmythankstoyou.Whatagoodexampleyouhavesettometolearnfrom!Bestwishes!Yourssincerely,LiHua【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给外教Mr.Smith写一封感谢信，感谢他捡到你的钱包。【详解】1.词汇积累机会：opportunity→chance感谢：appreciation→thanks归还：return→giveback而且：Moreover→what’smore2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstandforemost,onmywayhometotheschooldininghall,Ilostmywalletduetomycarelessnessyesterday.拓展句：Firstandforemost,whenIwasonmywayhometotheschooldininghall,Ilostmywalletduetomycarelessnessyesterday.【点睛】【高分句型1】Asyouknow,myIDcardandstudentcardareveryimportanttome.（由As引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Moreover,IwasstillfeelinganxioustodaywhenIwasinformedtogototheStudentUnionandtakebackwhatIhadlost,whereIlearnedthatitwasyouwhopickedupmywalletandkindlyhandeditintimely.（由when引导的时间状语从句，what引导的宾语从句，where引导的定语从句，that引导的宾语从句和who引导的强调句型结构）6．OnePossibleVersion:Goodevening!Dearfriends,I’mverypleasedtostandhereonbehalfofmyteamtoaddressyou.Firstly,I’dliketoexpressoursinceregratitudetoyouforyourthoughtfulcareofus.Yourkindnesshasleftadeepandbeautifulimpressiononus.Secondly,fromtheculturalexchangeactivities,eachofushasgainedalot.We’reheretospreadourtraditionalChineseculture,suchasPekingOpera,andyou’refondofthem,whichmakesusextremelyproud.Meanwhile,you’vealsoshowcasedusyourexcellentculture,whichhasbroadenedourhorizons.Finally,Ihopeourfriendshipwilllastforever.IalsosincerelyinviteyoutoChinaandonceagainexperienceourexcellentculture.Thankyouall!【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你叫李华，你和你的团队即将结束在新西兰某中学的文化交流活动。请代表团队准备一篇答谢辞在答谢会上致辞。【详解】1.词汇积累代表：onbehalfof→represent首先：Firstly→Firstofall喜欢：befondof→bekeenon极好的：excellent→wonderful2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：IalsosincerelyinviteyoutoChinaandonceagainexperienceourexcellentculture.拓展句：IalsosincerelyinviteyoutoChina,whereyoucanexperienceourexcellentcultureagain.【点睛】【高分句型1】We’reheretospreadourtraditionalChineseculture,suchasPekingOpera,andyou’refondofthem,whichmakesusextremelyproud.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Meanwhile,you’vealsoshowcasedusyourexcellentculture,whichhasbroadenedourhorizons.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）7．Onepossibleversion:DearMr.Li,I’mgoingtoleavethisschoolsoon.SoI’mwritingthislettertoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyouforwhatyouhavedoneformeinthepastthreeyears.WhenIfirstcametothisschool,IwaspoorinmyEnglish.Withyourpatientteachingandtimelyguidance,IhavebecomeoneofthetopthreestudentsinEnglishintheclass.What’smore,IevengotthefirstprizeintheEnglishspeechcontestinthecitylastterm.Withoutyourhelp,Iwouldn’thavemadesuchgreatprogress.Thankyouagainforwhatyouhavedoneforme.Bestwishes.

Yours，LiHua【导语】本文是应用文写作。要求考生用英语给自己的一位老师写封信，感谢他多年来的教育和帮助。【详解】1.词汇积累表达：express→extend衷心的：heartfelt→sincere在……不好：bepoorin→beweakin另外：what’smore→inaddition2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：What’smore,IevengotthefirstprizeintheEnglishspeechcontestinthecitylastterm.拓展句：What’smore,IevengotthefirstprizeintheEnglishspeechcontestwhichwasheldbythecitylastterm.【点睛】[高分句型1]SoI’mwritingthislettertoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudetoyouforwhatyouhavedoneformeinthepastthreeyears.(运用了what引导宾语从句)[高分句型2]WhenIfirstcametothisschool,IwaspoorinmyEnglish.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句)8．DearChris,ThankyouforinvitingmetotheIrishTraditionalMusicFestivallastweekend.ItwasanamazingexperienceandIthoroughlyenjoyedspendingtimewithyou.ThefestivalleftmewithadeeperappreciationforIrishmusicandculture.Whatimpressedmemostwerethetalentofthemusiciansandthelivelyatmosphereoftheevent.OldIrishmelodiesgentlytouchedmysoul,mypressuremeltingaway.Iamsogratefulforthechancetohaveaclosetasteofthelocalculture.AndIamlookingforwardtomoreopportunitiestoexploreIrelandwithyouinfuture.Bestregards,Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给爱尔兰当地学生Chris写信感谢他邀请你参加了“爱尔兰传统音乐节”活动并分享收获。【详解】1.词汇积累令人惊讶的：amazing→surprising活泼的、生动的：lively→vivid感激：begratefulfor→bethankfulfor期盼：lookforwardto→expect2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：AndIamlookingforwardtomoreopportunitiestoexploreIrelandwithyouinfuture.拓展句：AndIamlookingforwardtomoreopportunitiesthatcanhelptoexploreIrelandwithyouinfuture【点睛】【高分句型1】Whatimpressedmemostwerethetalentofthemusiciansandthelivelyatmosphereoftheevent.（运用了what引导的主语从句）【高分句型2】Iamsogratefulforthechancetohaveaclosetasteofthelocalculture.（运用了不定式作后置定语）9．DearProfessorWang,I’mwritingtoexpressmysinceregratitudeforyourkindhelpinourclassmeeting“ProtectOurEarth”.Yourlectureissuchagreatsuccessthatwearedeeplyimpressedbyit.Theactivityhasfueledourpassionforourearth,andraisedourawarenessofprotectingtheenvironment.Realisingthegreatharmcausedbythesmogandtheimportanceoftheenvironment,manyofourstudentshavetakenimmediateactionsuchasplantingmoretreesandvolunteeringtoeducatethepublictolearnrecyclingtoprotecttheearth.Manythanksforyourtimeandsupport,andwe’lldoourparttomakeourearthbeautiful.Yours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给王教授写一封感谢信，并告知活动的反响和同学们的收获。【详解】1.词汇积累真诚的：sincere→honest/frank/earnest增强：fuel→enhance/streng