帮助乞丐过马路意外收获乞丐赠送的汽车读后续写练习课件-2023届高三英语二轮专题+

高考英语读后续写语篇练习善举类——帮助乞丐过马路，意外收获乞丐赠送的汽车1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Peoplethinkbeingadeliverypersoniseasy,butit’smorecomplexthananyonecanimagine.AlthoughHarryalwaysdidhisbest,hewasnotabletoaffordacar.Heusedhismotorbiketodeliverordersandusuallyitwasconvenientexceptforsevereweatherconditions.Oneday,hewastryingtogetoffthehighwaywhenhesawanoldbeggartryingtocrosstheroad.Hewasweakandlookedcoldinhisdirtyjacket.Thehonks(鸣笛)ofcarsechoedastheypassedhim,andthemanbackedawaywithfear.Ifthatkeptgoing,someonewouldrunovertheman,soHarrystoppedtohelphimcross.Harrygrabbedtheman’sarmtoguidehimandstartedleadinghimthroughit.Luckily,theyreachedtheothersideafterafewminutes,andtheoldbeggarsmiledbrightlyathim.“Thankyousomuch,youngman.Ican’tbelieveIfinallycrossed.Canyoutellmeyouraddress?Iwanttosendathank-yougift.”theoldermansaid,reachingforHarry.4续写原文“Oh,that’snotnecessary.”Harrysaidandstraightenedhismotorbiketogetbackonit.“Please.Icouldn’tlivewithmyselfifIdidn’trepaythiskindgesture,”heinsisted,andHarrynodded,tellinghimhisaddress.Still,hedidn’texpectanythingfromthispoorolderman.“Thankyouagain!”theseniorbeggarwavedasHarryrolledawaytocontinueworking.Harrylivedinaniceneighborhoodbutbecausethepandemiccosthimhisjob,andnowfooddeliverywashisentirelivelihood.Somedayshehadtowork18hourstomakeendsmeet.Hewashischildren’sonlyparentbecausehiswifehadabandonedthemlongago,andHarrywasdeterminedtobuildapromisingfutureforthem,evenifhedidn’thaveacartomakethosedeliveriesproperly.Hewassavingforthat.5段首句Para1：However,hefoundabrandnewcarinhisgaragethefollowingday.

Para2：Thesincerityintheoldman’sfacecouldn’tbedenied.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Harry一次帮助了一个老乞丐过了马路，次日，这位老乞丐送给了Harry一辆崭新的汽车。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：However,hefoundabrandnewcarinhisgaragethefollowingday.由第一段首句内容“然而，第二天他在车库里发现了一辆崭新的汽车。”以及第二段首句“老人脸上的真诚是不可否认的。”可知，第一段可描写老人坚持要把这辆车送给Harry，并解释了原因。10续写思路分析Para2：Thesincerityintheoldman’sfacecouldn’tbedenied.由第二段首句“老人脸上的真诚是不可否认的。”可知，第二段可描写Harry最终接受了老人的善意。11续写思路分析续写线索Harry帮助老人过马路——老人索要Harry的地址，说要回报Harry的善意——Harry由于没有汽车，一直在努力工作——次日，Harry在车库里发现了一辆崭新的汽车——老人坚持要Harry收下汽车，并解释了原因——Harry收下了汽车，老人也成了他的家人12续写素材可用词汇：行为类①注意到：notice/observe/spot②珍视：value/treasure③玩得很开心：enjoyoneself/havefun/haveagood/great/wonderfultime情绪类①感激地：gratefully/thankfully②极好的：wonderful/excellent/fantastic13续写素材可用句型：【高分句型1】Thenhenoticedtheoldbeggarhehadhelpedcrosstheroadstandingbythegarage.（运用了省略关系代词的定语从句）【高分句型2】Theoldmanexplainedthathiswifehadlefthimwiththeironlysonwhenhiscompanywentbankrupt.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和when引导的时间状语从句）14Part3范文呈现15范文呈现However,hefoundabrandnewcarinhisgaragethefollowingday.“What’sgoingon?”hewonderedwide-eyed,throwinghismotorbikeonthegrass.Thenhenoticedtheoldbeggarhehadhelpedcrosstheroadstandingbythegarage.“Sir!Whatareyoudoinghere?Isthatyourcar?How?What?Why?”Harrystumbledthroughquestionsasheapproachedtheoldman.Theoldmanexplainedthathiswifehadlefthimwiththeironlysonwhenhiscompanywentbankrupt.Andthiscarboughtyearsagohadbeenforhisgrandsonasabirthdaygift,who,however,haddiedofaseveredisease.“Icouldtellfromyourworkuniformthatyoudeliverfood,andthoughtthatyoucouldreallyusethevehicle.Please,acceptit!”,theoldmaninsisted.16范文呈现Thesincerityintheoldman’sfacecouldn’tbedenied.Harryswallowedthicklyatthemoisturegatheringintheoldman’seyesandfinallynodded.“Thankyou,”hesaidgratefullyandhuggedtheoldbeggar.“Howaboutsomedinner?”,Harryoffered,brighteningthemood.Theyhaddinnerandawonderfultime.Thenextday,Harrydeliveredeverythinginthenewcarandgothomeearlytospendmoretimewithhiskidsandactuallyenjoyedhimself.HeinvitedtheoldmantocomeeveryFridayforaspecialdinner,andhebecamelikeamemberoftheirfamily—afamilywhovaluedeachotherafteranythingmoneycouldbuy.Sobenicetoothers,andyou’llgetrepaidinunusualways.17范文译文不仅仅是烟，还有一场大火！大卫简直不敢相信自己的眼睛。他突然想到，那是他曾经在一家餐馆做兼职的，所有的员工都可能在观众中。他回头看了看海滩，那里所有的观众都太关注比赛了，没有意识到火灾。就在那时，他下定决心转身，从其他帆板运动员身边经过，向岸边而不是终点线冲刺。18范文译文当时其他的帆板运动员远远领先于他。显然，这个有前途的少年退出了比赛。许多困惑的人注意到了他的奇怪行为，也发现了