九年级曾鸣英语课件An unforgattable experience

ThingsHappenedinthepastWhatcanyourememberaboutlastweek?Doyourememberdoingsomethinginterestinglastweekandcanyoushare?Iwentswimming.Iplayedcomputergames...Yes,Irememberdoingthevolunteerworkwithmyclassmateslastweek.Whatdidyoudolastweek?Iwenttothefarmandfedthesheep.Whatdidyoudolastweek?Ipickedsomecherriesandtastedthem.樱桃Whatdidyoudolastweek?Irodeahorse.Whatdidyoudolastweek?Iplayedsoccerwithmyclassmates.Whatdidyoudolastweek?Ireadsomebooksandsolvedamathproblem.Whatdidyoudolastweek?Ihelpedmymomwiththehousework.ThisisLiHua.Lastweek,heandhisclassmatestookactivepartinthevolunteerwork.OralPracticeA:Hey,LiHua.Longtimenosee!Howareyoudoingtoday?B:Prettygood.Howaboutyou?A:Notsobad!IhearthatyouwenttotheChildren'sHouselastweek.B:Yes,Iwenttheretohelpthingsoutwithmyclassamtes.A:Whatdidyoudothere?B:Wetoldstoriestothekidsandmadethemlaugh.ThenIgaveawaysomeofmybookstothem.Later,weplayedgameswiththechildrenhappily.A:Soundslikeyouhadawonderfultime!假如你是李华。请给你加拿大的笔友Eric写一封80词左右的邮件，介绍你和你的同学的一次志愿者活动的情况。要点如下：时间上周日地点学校附近的街区活动内容1.打扫街道2.帮助老人做家务3.给老人讲笑话4.给小朋友们讲故事5.捐赠书籍6.玩游戏感受帮助别人是快乐的注意：1.短文包括以上要点，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名及地名。3.词数：80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。DearEric,How'sitgoing?_______________________________________________________________________________________（审题：体裁，时态，人称及结构）1.体裁：_______________;时态_____________,人称___________字数：80词左右2.文章的整体思路根据提示，可知主题：__________________________从文章内容来看，要包含相应的时间、地点以及参加人员（withmyclassmates）。正文部分应采用_______的结构。3.注意信件的格式：称呼，正文，结束语，审记叙文(Narration)过去时(Simplepasttense)第一人称(thefirstperson)描述志愿活动的具体内容及感受总分总_______签名Structure:（结构）BeginningBodyEndingIntroduceyourrecentsituationsandletEricknowwhatyouaregoingtotellWhatvolunteerworkdidyoudo?(contents)Talkaboutyourfeelingstowardsthevolunteerwork.常见的信件的开头句：1.How'sitgoing?I'mgladtoreceiveyourletterofApril9th.2.HowtimefliesIt'sbeenthreeyearssinceIsawyoulast.3.I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthelecturetobegivennextmonth.4.Now,letmetellyousomethingaboutthisactivity.常见的谈论感受的句子：1.I'mgladtohelpyouwiththechores.2.Ifelttiredbutveyhappy.3.Ithinkhelpingotherscannotonlybringhappinesstoothers,butalsobringhappinesstoourselves.英语作文中的连词：and,but,or,so,however,if,while…first,second,then,next,finally…e.g.1.ThisexperiencewaspainfulbutIwashappy.2.IwatchedascarymovieandIcouldn’tfallasleep.3.Ifyouworkhardenough,youcanmakeprogress.4.First,peelthreebananas.Thencutthemintopieces.

假如你是李华。请给你加拿大的笔友Eric写一封80词左右的邮件，介绍你和你的朋友的一次志愿者活动的情况。要点如下：时间上周日地点学校附近的街区活动内容1.打扫街道2.帮助老人做家务3.给老人讲笑话4.给小朋友们讲故事5.捐赠书籍6.玩游戏感受帮助别人是快乐的注意：1.短文包括以上要点，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名及地名。3.词数：80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：志愿者活动：volunteerwork街区：neighborhood捐赠书籍：giveawaybooksDearEric,How'sitgoing?_______________________________________________________________________________________WritebyyourselvesRevise从评分细则看得分规则

ASSESSMENT（评价标准）Structure（结构）１分Isthearticledividedintoparts?Content（内容要点）6分Areallthedetailsstated?Ifnot,addthemissingdetails.wordlimit（字数）1分awordlimitof80Anylinkingwords?Ifyes,circlethem.Language（语言）1分Anygoodvocabularyorsentences?Ifyes,underlinethem.Handwriting1分Isitcleanandtidy?时间上周日地点学校附近的街区活动内容上午：1.打扫街道2.帮助老人做家务3.给老人讲笑话下午：4.给小朋友们讲故事5.捐赠书籍6.玩游戏感受帮助别人是快乐的从评分细则看得分规则

ASSESSMENT（评价标准）Structure（结构）１分Isthearticledividedintoparts?Content（内容要点）6分Areallthedetailsstated?Ifnot,addthemissingdetails.wordlimit（字数）1分awordlimitof80Anylinkingwords?Ifyes,circlethem.Language（语言）1分Anygoodvocabularyorsentences?Ifyes,underlinethem.Handwriting1分Isitcleanandtidy?DearEric,How'sitgoing?YouwanttoknowthethingsI'vedonethesedays.Nowletmetellyou.LastSunday,Iwithmyclassmatesdidsomevolunteerworkintheneighborhoodofourschool.First,wecleanedthestreets.Second,wewenttotheoldpeople'shomeandhelpedthemdohousework.Afterthat,wetoldjokestotheoldpeople.Intheafternoon,wetoldstoriestothechildreninthechildren'shouseandgaveawaysomebookstothem.Besides,weplayedgameswiththekidsandwehadagreattime!Thatday,Iwasbusybutveryhappy.Ithinkhelpingot