读后续写个人成长类-儿子Jordan和猫咪 讲义 高考英语专题复习

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Myteenageson,Jordan,alwayscomplainedabouthavingtobehomeearlierthanallhisfriends.Hewouldcomplainthathewasalreadyseventeen,butstillhadacurfew(宵禁).Hebelievedhewaspracticallyanadult.Ipointedoutthathewasnotanadultashewasstillinhighschool.“Youdon’ttrustme!”heyelled.BeforeIcontinued,herolledhiseyes,slammedthedoorandwalkedaway.Isighed.HowcouldImakeJordanseethatIonlywantedtokeephimsafe?Idecidedtogoforawalk,hopingtheDecemberairwouldclearmyhead.Iopenedthefrontdoorandnearlysteppedonher:asmallblackcat,justlikeameatball.“Hi,Meatball,”Isaid,bringingherintomyarms.Iwalkedbackin,touchingherneckgently.Meatballseemedhappyenoughtocomeinthehouse,butafteranhourortwo,shesatbythedoor,meowingtogobackoutside.“Whywon’tshejuststayinwithusallthetime?”Nathan,myyoungestsonasked.Iexplainedtohimthatshewashappyherebutshelikedbeingabletocomeandgoasshepleased.“Thatmustbenice,”Jordanmutteredfromtheotherroom,complainingwhythecat,nothim,couldcomeandgo.Meatballbecamearegular.Onenight,temperatureswereunusuallylow.Meatballstoodatthedoor,meowingtogooutside.Ishookmyheadather,afraidthatshemightfreezetodeath.Shestaredatmeandmeowedagain.Ipattedherhead,“Iknowyou’renothappy,butit’sforyourowngood.”“Mom’snotbeingmeantoyou,”Nathantoldthecat.“She’sjusttryingtokeepyoufromturningintoafrozenmeatball.”Webothlaughedathisjoke.Thenextmorning,Icouldn’tfindMeatball.Iaskedthekidsifanyonehadseenher.1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。参考答案：Jordannodded,“Iletheroutlastnight.”

MyjawdroppedwhenIheardthis.“Wassheoutsideallnight?Shecouldbefrozentodeath!”Iraisedmyvoice,asurgeofragestorminginside.“But...”Jordanbitbackhiswords,stunned.Igrabbedmycoatandrushedoutside,prayingthecathadsurvivedthenight.Jordanfollowedwithintenseanxietyonhisface.WelookedintoeveryholeandcornerwhereMeatballpossiblymaygo.Luckily,severalminuteslater,thepoorthingwasfoundshakingandcurlingintoatinyballbeneathacar.Ipickedherupimmediately,unsurewhethershewasaliveordead.Atthesightofthis,Jordanwasclosetotearsandmurmured“Sorry!”allthetimewithguiltandregretgnawinghisheart.“Weneedavet,now!”Iurged.AsIdrovetotheanimalhospital,Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinsidehiscoat.

“Ishouldn’thaveletyouout.I’msosorry,buddy!”heapologizedrepeatedlyinasoftvoice.Aswearrivedattheanimalhospital,

Isawhereyesopenabit.“Thankgoodness.”Ithoughttomyself.Givencarefulexaminationandtimelytreatment,thelittlecreaturewasfinallyrescued.Atthesoundofherfamiliar

meowagain,

webreathedasighofrelief.

Onourwayhome,JordanheldMeatballinhisarmstightlyasifafraidoflosingitagain.“Webotharesupposedtoobservethecurfew.It’sforourowngood.”hejokedtothelittlethingashestrokedherback.Atthatmoment,Isuddenlyrealizedthatitwasthisparticularexperiencethatgavemyteenagesonavaluablelessonandenabledhimtounderstandalovingparent’sgoodintention.续写精析：Jordannodded,“Iletheroutlastnight.”

Jordan和猫咪一样渴望自由，所以他才这样做。接下来要写妈妈的反应，能预测到妈妈的惊讶和生气。前文中有很多伏笔，比如天气冷。妈妈担心猫出去会冻死。MyjawdroppedwhenIheardthis.惊讶的表达很多，还可以用gaspinastonishment;giveacryasurprise.“Wassheoutsideallnight?Shecouldbefrozentodeath!”照应了原文中的这句话Ipattedherhead,“Iknowyou’renothappy,butit’sforyourowngood.”Iraisedmyvoice,asurgeofragestorminginside.生气是肯定的。这里生气还可以多样化的表达，如wasburningwithanger；voicetrembledwithanger

；Therewasaflashofangerinhiseyes“But...”Jordanbitbackhiswords,stunned.妈妈的生气和担心，让Jordan有所畏惧，无法说出自己的真实想法。Igrabbedmycoatandrushedoutside,prayingthecathadsurvivedthenight.语言和动作会暗示接下来的行动。还有根据AsIdrovetotheanimalhospital,Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinsidehiscoat.

我们下一步会出去找猫咪。这三个动作一气呵成，写出了妈妈急迫的心情。Jordanfollowedwithintenseanxietyonhisface.Jordan此刻也是担心猫咪的安危。从第二段开头得知他和妈妈一起。WelookedintoeveryholeandcornerwhereMeatballpossiblymaygo.描写寻找地仔细。Luckily,severalminuteslater,thepoorthingwasfoundshakingandcurlingintoatinyballbeneathacar.shake和curl蜷缩，表明猫咪冻得不轻，为带去animalhospital铺垫。Ipickedherupimmediately,unsurewhethershewasaliveordead.查看猫咪的情况。Atthesightofthis,Jordanwasclosetotearsandmurmured“Sorry!”allthetimewithguiltandregretgnawinghisheart.Jordan为自己的错误举动感到内疚和伤心。“Weneedavet,now!”Iurged.我顾不得许多，急迫地想去救治肉球。AsIdrovetotheanimalhospital,Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinsidehiscoat.

Jordan在开头句出现，接下来还是要写Jordan对小猫的内疚的表现。“Ishouldn’thaveletyouout.I’msosorry,buddy!”heapologizedrepeatedlyinasoftvoice.内疚的表达除了用shouldn’thavedone本不应该做而做了，还可以用其他表达如feelextremelyguiltyfordoingsth；withregretfultearsinone'seyes。Aswearrivedattheanimalhospital,

Isawhereyesopenabit.再次查看，发现猫咪还有救。“Thankgoodness.”Ithoughttomyself.Givencarefulexaminationandtimelytreatment,thelittlecreaturewasfinallyrescued.精心的检查和及时的救治，猫咪活了下来。Atthesoundofherfamiliar

meowagain,

webreathedasighofrelief.

我们如释重负。Onourwayhome,JordanheldMeatballinhisarmstightlyasifafraidoflosingitagain.倍加珍惜可爱的肉球。“Webotharesupposedtoobservethecurfew.It’sforourowngood.”he