英语九年级Unit4IusedtobeafraidofthedarkUnit4书面表达

Watchandtelldifference.

Heisaboy.HeisHanGeng.Heusedtohaveshorthair.Heusedtobelikeagirl.

appearance（外貌）personality(性格)

hobbies

habit

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现在你已经是一位九年级的学生了，你感觉自己和以前有变化吗？请根据自己的体会，多角度，多方面谈谈自己的变化。请以“HowIhavechanged!”为题写一篇文章。要求：

1.至少谈3个方面的变化;

2.语句通顺、连贯;3.词数100词左右。

HowIhavechanged!

Ihavechangedalotinthelastfewyears.Mylifeisdifferent!

WhenIwasyoung,Iusedtobeshy,butnowI’moutgoingandIenjoytalkingwithothers.Inthepast,IusedtobeinterestedinChinese,however,nowIlikeEnglish.IthinkEnglishisusefulandimportant.AndIamanEnglishteachernow.Ioftenwentfishingwithmyfriends,nowI’musedtogoingshoppinginfreetime.What’smore,Iusedtoridethebiketoschool,nowIwalkthereinstead.WhatgreatchangesIhave.BeginningEnding

HowIhavechanged!Ihavechangedalotinthelastfewyears.Mylifeisdifferent!WhenIwasyoung,Iusedtobeshy,butnowI’moutgoingandIenjoytalkingwithothers.Inthepast,IusedtobeinterestedinChinese,however,nowIlikeEnglish.IthinkEnglishisusefulandimportant.AndIamanEnglishteachernow.Ioftenwentfishingwithmyfriends,nowI’musedtogoingshoppinginfreetime.What’smore,Iusedtoridethebiketoschool,nowIwalkthereinstead.

WhatgreatchangesIhave.BodySomanychanges…

youcandoitthisway:...usedto…nowThinkaboutyourchanges!过去与现在的生活情况Iusedto...,butnow.....Inthepast,Ioften...Now....Inthepast,Iusedtobe...butnowIam....总结观点Mylifehaschangedalotinthelastfewyears.自我感受WhatgreatchangesIhave!Ireallymisstheolddays!....outline自评标准：大声朗读自己的文章，从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。Task1自我欣赏与修正

同伴互赏欣赏角度：

1.写作基本要求:人称,时态，语法等。

2.

要点齐全。

3.结构:开头，正文，结尾。

4.好词好句。注意：作文通用修改字符：优美句子～；漏词∧；错处：○；去掉／