浙江省2018届高考英语二轮复习写作提升练(五)含答案

学必求其心得，业必贵于专精写作提升练（五)读后续写1(2017·浙江一般高中学业水平考试仿真模拟）阅读下面短文，依照所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完满的短文。Wanttoknowhowtosurviveaplanecrash?Whataboutaterroristattack?Toputyourmindateaseinnearlyanysituation,youcanalmostguaranteeyoursurvivalifyouneverleavethehousewithout3necessaryitems，i.e.alighter(打火机),alifestraw（救命吸管）andaraincoat。Rightofftheplacefullofdanger，yourfirstinstinct（本能)mightbetosearchforhelptheminuteyourealizeyou’reintroubleButsurvival。expertsinsistyoushouldstaywhereyouareuntilhelpfindsyou,instead；doingsowillmakeiteasierforthesearchandrescueteamstolocateyourlocation。Whatshouldyoudountilthen,youask?Preparetohunkerdown（盘腿坐下）forthelongrun.That’wheresyourthreepiecesofsurvivalnecessitiescomeintoplay，Stewartsays。Forone，youshouldhavesomethingtostartafireonyouatalltimes.Fire-startingtoolsareinexpensivetopurchase,andyoucaneasilycarrythemaroundinabackpackorpantpocket.Butevenwithoutafancyitem，allyoureallyneedissomethingtolightthefirstflame.“Youcanusecottonballscoveredinpetroleum（jelly凡士林油）asafirestarter,"StewarttoldUSATODAY。“Theyarewaterresistantandwillstartafirewithjustaspark.”学必求其心得，业必贵于专精Second，you’llneedsomethingtomakeyourdrinkingwaterfittodrink,suchasacanteen（饭盒）thatcanboilwater.Stewartrecommendsbuyinga＄20lifestraw，which“canbestruckintothemuddiestpoolofwateryoucanfindandyousuckthewateroutlikeastraw.Itcouldstillsaveyourlife，Stewartsays。注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的要点词语;3。续写部分分为两段，每段的开头词或句子已为你写好;4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的要点词语。Paragraph1：“Ialwayssaythatyourlifedependsonyourwatersource,”hesaid。Paragraph2：Youcankeepallthreeitemswithyouwhenyouareawayfromyour学必求其心得，业必贵于专精home.2阅读下面短文,依照所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完满的故事.Tomappearedonthesidewalkwithabucketofwhitewashandalong—handledbrush.HestoppedatthefenceinfrontofthehousewherehelivedwithhisauntPolly。Helookedatit，andalljoylefthim。Thefencewaslongandhigh.Heputthebrushintothewhitewashandmoveditalongthetopofthefence。Herepeatedtheoperation.Hefeltitwasdifficultforhimtocontinueandsatdown。Heknewthathisfriendswouldarrivesoonwithallkindsofinterestingplansfortheday。Theywouldwalkpasthimandlaugh.TheywouldmakejokesabouthisworkonabeautifulsummerSaturday.Thethoughtburnedhimlikefire。学必求其心得，业必贵于专精Heputhishandsintohispocketsandtookoutallthatbelongedtohim。Perhapshecouldfindsomewaytopaysomeonetodothewhitewashingforhim。Buttherewasnothingofvalueinhispockets-nothingthatcouldbuyevenhalfanhouroffreedom。Soheputthebitsoftoysbackintohispocketsandgaveuptheidea。Atthisdarkandhopelessmoment，awonderfulideacametohim。Itfilledhismindwithagreat，brightlight.Calmlyhepickedupthebrushandstartedagaintowhitewash.WhileTomwasworking,BenRogersappeared.Benwaseatinganappleashewalkedalongthestreet。Ashewalkedalong，hewasmakingnoiseslikethesoundofariverboat。Firstheshoutedloudly，likeaboatcaptain.Thenhesaid“Ding-Dong—Dong”，“DingDong—-Dong"againandagain,likethebellofariverboat.Andhemadeotherstrangenoises.WhenhecameclosetoTom，hestopped。Tomwentonwhitewashing.HedidnotlookatBen.Benstaredforamomentandthensaid：“Hello!I’mgoingswimming，butyoucago,canyou?”Noanswer.Tommovedhisbrushcarefullyalongthefenceandlookedattheresultwiththeeyeofanartist.Bencamenearer.Tom’smouthwateredfortheapple，buthekeptonworking。Bensaid,“Hello,oldfellow，you’vegottowork,hey?"Tomturnedsuddenlyandsaid,“Why，ityou’s，Ben!Iwasn’tnoticing.”学必求其心得，业必贵于专精“Say—I’mgoingswimming.Don’tyouwishldyou？Butcouofcourseyou’dratherworkwouldn't—you？Ofcourseyouwould。”Tomlookedattheboyabit，andsaid“Whydoyoucallwork?"“Why,isn’tthatwork"Tom？wentbacktohiswhitewashing,andansweredcarelessly。“Well,maybeitis,andmaybeitisn’tAll。Iknowis,itsuitsTomSawyer."“Ohcome，now,youdon’tmeantosaythatyoulikeit?”Thebrushcontinuedtomove.“LikeitWell？，Idon’tseewhyIshouldn'tlikeDoesitaboyget。achancetowhitewashfenceeveryday?”Benstoppedeatinghisapple.Tommovedhisbrushbackandforth,steppedbacktolookattheresult，addedatouchhereandthere,andsteppedbackagain.Benwatchedeverymoveandgotmoreandmoreinterested.Soonhesaid，“Say，Tom,letmewhitewashalittle."Tomthoughtforamoment，wasabouttoagree;buthechangedhismind。“No—no-itwon’tdoBen，.Yousee，AuntPollywantsthisfencetobeperfect.Ithasgottobedoneverycarefully。Idon’tthinkthereisoneboyinathousand,maybetwothousand，thatcandoitwellenough。”“No-isthatso？Ohcome,now—letmejusttry。Onlyjustalittle.“Ben，I’dliketo，butifitisn’tdoneright,I’afraidmAuntPolly。。。”学必求其心得，业必贵于专精“Oh，I’llbecareful.Nowletmetry.Say—I’llgivemyapple。”“Well,hereNo—，Ben，nowdon’t.I'mafraid。。"。“

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150左右;2。应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的要点词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；4。续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的要点词语.Paragraph1:Tomgaveupthebrushwithunwillingnessonhisface,butjoyinhisheart.Paragraph2：Andhehadnotworked.Hehadhadaniceidletimeallthetime,学必求其心得，业必贵于专精参照答案写作提升练五读后续写1Paragraph1:“Ialwayssaythatyourlifedependsonyourwatersource,"hesaid。“Ifyouareinabadsituationandhavetodrinkwaternotfittodrink，youtaketheriskofdrinkingwildpoisonouswater，whichcanquicklykillyou.”Inthiscase,lifestrawwillcomeintoplay。Finally，Stewartrecommendshavingaraincoat，oranythingthatcanbeusedtoprotectyouagainsttheweather.Evenfoodshouldtakeabackseattothesethreenecessaryitems，hesays。“Everyonegetsreallyworriedaboutfood,butthehumanbodyisdesignedtolastalongtimewithoutfood。Whenitcomestosurvivalnecessaryitems,food’sonthebottomofthelist,said。Paragraph2：Youcankeepallthreeitemswithyouwhenyouareawayfromyourhome。Youcankeeptheminabackpackifyou’rehikingo学必求其心得，业必贵于专精evenacarifyou’retravelingontheroad.Butinaword,thebestthicandotoensureyourownsurvivalhappensbeforeyouevenleave.2Paragraph1：Tomgaveupthebrushwithunwillingnessonhisface,butjoyinhisheartAnd.whileBenworkedatthefenceinthehotsun，Tomsatunderatree,eat