2022届高考英语题型读后续写好词好句积累进阶拔高二讲义

读后续写一拔高体验一、情绪描写（此部分的讲解老师可以通过让学生对例句进行翻译，去感知普通写法和高级写法所带来的的感觉上的冲击，另外，在好词好句部分，最后强制要求学生背诵，才容易出效果）主人公情绪状态的描写是使得续写形象生动的关键所在。在续写过程中常见的情绪有：生气，害怕，悲伤、羞愧，后悔，开心，感动，好奇，希望等（一）“感到悲伤”的细节描述【好词好句积累】好词：astrongsenseofloss强烈的失落感fallintodespair 陷入绝望bedowninspirits 情绪低落好句:Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn'thelpcryingbitterly.（被——股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣）Arippleofsadnesswelledupinsidehim涌起阵阵悲伤sobbedbitterly,tastingthesaltfromthetearsthatstreameddownmyface.我痛苦地抽泣着，品尝着从我脸上流下的咸咸的泪水。feltsosadthatIfoundmyselfcryingunconsciously,unabletoholdbackmytears.我感至U彳艮伤心，我发现自己不知不觉地哭了，无法抑制我的眼泪。（二）“感到害怕”的细节描述【好词好句积累】好词：withapoundingheartandcold心砰砰直跳，浑身冰凉chewone'slip 咬嘴唇tossandturnallnight. 彻夜难眠好句：AtthesightofIwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorandmypalmsweresweating•（被7采］采土也恐惧感所控制，手心出汗）Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.（吓呆了，不敢动弹）（三）“感到生气”的细节描述【好词好句积累】好词：stampone'sfootinanger 气得直跺脚runoutoftheroominaburstofanger怒气冲冲beredwithrage 面红耳赤boilwithrage 怒火中烧befilledwithfury（愤怒） 怒气冲冲好句:Thereplyofthemanagainfueledthefoolishofficer'sanger（火上浇油、更加愤怒）.Shethrewtheinvitationonthetablewithannoyance,murmuring...Myteacher9seyeswereshiningwithanger.Hisfriend,whosepatiencehadwornthin（耐心被消磨光了）,phonedtocomplain.（四）“感到羞愧”的细节描述【好词好句积累】好词：feelthebloodrushtoherface满脸涨红dropone飞eyes 垂下眼好句：Mythroatwasdryandmyfacewasburningup.MyfaceflushedradishredandIstaredatmyfeet,hopingnoonewouldnoticehowembarrassedIwas.我的脸涨得像萝卜一样红，盯着脚，希望没有人会注意到我有多尴尬。Shefeltsoashamedthatshecouldfeelherfacebiwning.（脸上滚烫）Ifroze.Icouldfeeltheheatrisingintomycheeks,didIreallyjustdothat?我僵住了。我能感觉到热流到我的脸颊，我真的这么做了吗？（五）“感到焦虑”的细节描述Shewaslikeanantonhotbricksbeforeherdrivingtest.在她驾驶考试时，她像热锅上的蚂蚁。【好词好句积累】好词：goblank 一片空白nervousnesstakeholdofone'swholebody.紧张占据了整个身体withpalmssweating,heartbeatracingandbloodrushinginherears手心出汗，心跳加速，耳朵的血在奔腾。好句：Inhernervousnessshestumbledoverherwords.她紧张得说不出话来。Sheshookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.她全身发抖，感觉如坐针毡。IhavebutterfliesinmystomacheverytimeIspeakinpublic.我每次在公众场合讲话都会感到紧张。Shewaslikeanantonhotbricksbeforeherdrivingtest.在她驾驶考试时，她像热锅上的蚂蚁。（六）“感到开心”的细节描述例如：Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,thebabywashappy/delighted/fullofjoy.Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,itseemedasifthebabywereontopoftheworld.Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hisfacebeamedandhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.（眉开眼笑;笑容照亮房间）【好词好句积累】好词：amixtureofexcitementandhappiness既兴奋又开心incheerfulspirits 心情愉快keepupone'sspirits 振作精未申dance/jumpforjoy 高兴地跳起来tearsofhappinessflowingdown 流下幸福的泪水eyeslightup. 精神振奋、高兴好句：When ,hereyesdancedwithjoyandsweetness.（欢欣雀跃）When ,hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.（激动得两眼放光）When ,herheartwasthumpingwithexcitement.（激动得心砰砰跳）When,awideexcitementtookholdofher.（兴奋不能自己）Bathedinsunshine,weallcheeredandjumpedwithjoy.（七）“其他情绪”的细节描述【震惊】shocked/startled/stunned/surprised震惊Motherfaintedaway,withtheshockofthebadnews.坏消息带来的震惊让妈妈昏过去了。Hearingthebadnews,Maryfrozewithshock,asifrootedontheground.（僵住了，像扎根在地上一样）Thecarwasgoneinseconds,leavingAliceshakingherheadindisbelief.难以置信士也摇头Isensedaflashofsurpriseinhiseyes.我感觉到他眼里的一丝惊讶。【孤单】Hefeltastrongsenseoflossafterhisdivorce.Iendedupfeelingcompletelylostandabandoned.EversinceIlosthim,Ihavebeenfacedwithadeepsenseofloss（失落感）一afeelingwhichisdifficultformetodescribeinwords（难以用语言描述）.【好奇】Burningwithcuriosity,sheranacrossthefieldafterit.【希望】Atthisdarkandhopelessmoment,awonderfulideacametohim.在这个黑暗而绝望的时刻，他想到了一个绝妙的主意。Itfilledhismindwithagreat,brightlight.他的脑子里充满了明亮的光。二、背景描写要求学生背诵【早上】（部分描写也可用于其它时间）（此部分的讲解老师带学生翻译佳句，生词讲解，语法结构剖析，帮助孩子记忆，最后强制二、背景描写要求学生背诵【早上】（部分描写也可用于其它时间）Snowblanketedeveryrooftopandweighedonthebranchesofoldtrees.雪覆盖了每一个屋顶，压在老树枝上。Kissedbytherainandshining,thewetgroundiscoldunderfoot.Thebirdsbusythemselvesaroundme,notcaringthatTmthere.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。鸟儿们在我周围忙碌着，不关心我在那儿。Adenseearthlysweetsmellrosefromtheground,envelopingeverythingwithinitssoftembrace.——月殳浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.阳光倾斜而入.ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.Therewasasongineveryheart.Therewascheerineveryfaceandaspringineverystep.Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.【黄昏】（部分描写也可用于其它时间）Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,（天空越来越黑，光线越来越暗）hequickenedhissteps.Thesunhidhimselfbehindthemountains,makingithardtoseeanythinginthethickdarkness.Theraindrummedonthewindow,biddingfarewelltothelastbeamofsunlight.雨敲打在窗户上好像敲起了小鼓，向最后一缕阳光告别.TheleavescrunchedbeneathmyfeetasIstrolleddownthestreet.我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。Thesunsetwaslikeorangepaintonabluecanvas.日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料.Thesundroppedthroughandlaidonhisheadandshoulders.太阳下山，温和的光线落在肩头。Theclearblueskywasdottedwithflutteringlarks.天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩起舞。【晚上】（部分描写也可用于其它时间）Fromthedistance,hesawsomedimlight（昏暗的灯光）inthevillage.从远处，他看到村子里有些昏暗的灯光。Thedark,rainyevening,thewind,thethunderingcloudsheldmeentirelyintheirpower.漆黑的雨夜，狂风大作，雷声隆隆，我完全被它们的力量控制住了。Theskyisovercast,darkenedwithgloomyclouds,andthewholeworldseemedtobeenvelopedinahugegrayquilt.乌云密布、黑云压顶，整个世界仿佛都被一块巨大的灰色棉被笼罩。【即学即练】Astheskygraduallydarkenedandthelightdimmed,（天空越来越黑,光线越来越H音）hequickenedhissteps.Thegentlebreeze（微口I）strokedhishead,asifcomfortingallhistiredness.3.1closedmyeyesinthespeedingcar.Windingrivers,loftymountains,deepvalleys（蜿蜒的小溪，高耸的山，深深的ill谷）andsunnybeachesheldmeentirelyintheirfascination.过关检测2020年浙江卷Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears——likeallwildanimals——shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI'mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws（爪子）.Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter•（相遇）,Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn'tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear'spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears'eyes,butdoesn'thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar（吼叫）,thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.注意：L所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Para1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Para2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.【解析】本文主要讲述了人与熊对抗，之后成功脱险的故事。主人公的感情线变化为：兴奋渴望一惊恐一放松。剧情线以主人公如何与北极熊周旋并成功摆脱它展开。由第一段的段首提示句可知：几分钟后，熊又回到营地。接下来可通过场景渲染，描写当时令人颤栗惊恐的画面，例如“Roarsandscreamspiercedthesilencewithneedle-likeshrillness.n这不仅合理地描写了熊的反应，也描绘出让人战栗的场景。由第二段的段首提示句可知：此时，直升机到了。如果想要进行续写两段的合理衔接，第一段的结尾可描写成“Afterthoroughlyscrutinizingthearea,thebeartrottedforwardafewsteps.”这样可以营造出危急的场景。“我们”看到直升机的到来，感到绝处逢生的喜悦，可以以人物心理描写作为第二段的开头，重点描写喜极而泣的状态，例如“MyheartleapedwithjoyasIknewwewerelikelytobesaved.”最后，结尾部分需要迅速收束，并说明成功逃脱的结局。关于画线词：EHi作为女主人公，是续写内容中应该出现的画线词，noises,pictures,fence,spray与熊有关，也在两段续写内容中出现。最终，两人回归安全状态，因此画线词safe也可自然而然地出现在续写内容中。由此划分画线词，可迅速锁定需使用的画线词范围，辅助构思。【范文】Afewminuteslater,thebearhe