高考英语书面表达高分写作指导

英语书面表达高分写作指导BeautifyyourComposition书面表达在评阅时遵循三原则语言第一位（语言高级）内容第二位（要点齐全）结构第三位（文章分段）一、高级词汇和句式二、修辞手法三、有效的连词四、名人名言或谚语语言第一位（语言高级）漂亮、地道高考作文的美1.高级词汇短语词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。词汇使用的原则人靠衣装，文靠词装

1、词组优先原则2、地道原则。3、避免重复原则

4、后、高、长原则—

后学到、较高级、较长词汇。四项原则

1、词组优先原则［原文］Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.［修正］Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.

2、地道原则［原文］Throughtraveling,Ilearnedalotofknowledge.［修正］Throughtraveling,Igained／obtainedalotofknowledge.

4、后高长原则—后学到、较高级、较长词汇。原词替换词

harddiligently

veryratherextremely

payattentiontoattachimportanceto

happydelightedenjoyable

moreandmoretheincreasingnumberof3、避免重复原则［原文］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.［修正］Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision.Adj.聪明的、脑筋好的clever→smart→wise→bright→intelligent电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。1.Computersareveryimportantinourlife.2.Cputersareofgreatimportanceinourlife. EX、运用高级词汇：Asaresult,theplanfailed.(一般)ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.(一般)SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.(一般)Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.(高级)ShewenttoAustriaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic.(高级)Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme(高级)Atthenewsofherdeath,hewent….

(高级)Shehastroubleinpronouncingtheword.

(高级)Whenheheardshehaddied,hewentpalewithsorrow.(一般)Shecan’tcorrectlypronouncetheword.(一般)运用高级词汇：2，句式多样，文章增“靓”使用较丰富的句式：运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉

他昨天下午来的。1.Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.2.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.3.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.4.Itwasyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.思考：什么样的作文会成为一篇好作文

无遗漏信息点（审题）篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词句式多样地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？

强调句倒装句

with复合结构advancedsentences定语从句名词性从句非谓语动词常用谚语被动句…化腐朽为神奇十式一、将两个简单句合并为并列句。

操作难度★★写作效果★★1.Youcandoit.Icandoit.Oneofusmustdoit.

you

Imustdoit.

EitherorIfyougothroughthegate,you’llfindtheentrancetoBearCountry.(一般)Gothroughthegate,andyou’llfind….

(高级)Igotuplatethismorning,otherwiseIcouldhavecaughttheearlybus.

(高级)Igotuplatethismorning.Ididn’tcatchtheearlybus.(一般)Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.

(高级)Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(一般)二、主动句与被动句的互换。

操作难度★★★写作效果★★★Thegovernmentshouldtakeimmediatemeasurestodealwiththepresentfinancialcrisis.Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(一般)Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff.(高级)Immediatemeasuresshouldbetakentodealwiththepresentfinancialcrisis.三、将陈述句改为感叹句。

操作难度★★★写作效果★★★1.Topreventthepollutionisveryimportant．

How

！2.Sheisaclevergirl．

What

!Howimportantitistopreventthepollution!whataclevergirlsheis!四、将陈述句改为倒装句。

操作难度★★★★写作效果★★★★1.IcouldhardlyunderstandtheimportanceofEnglishatthattime.

HardlycouldIunderstandtheimportanceofEnglishatthattime.2.Wedidnotrealizeourmistakesuntilatthattime.Notuntilatthattimedidwerealizeourmistakes.3.ThoughI’mweak,Iwillmaketheeffort.(一般)WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

(高级)五、将简单句改为强调句。

操作难度★★★写作效果★★★★1.Smokingdidgreatharmtohishealth.

2.Ourmoneyisearnedthroughhardworkbyourparents.Itwassmokingthatdidgreatharmtohishealth.Itisthroughhardworkthatourmoneyisearnedbyourparents.六、将两个简单句合并为复合句。

操作难度★★★★★写作效果★★★★★1.同位语和同位语从句（常用于描述人物、地点等介绍性文段）1)LiuXiangisanexcellentathlete.HewonthefirstprizeinMen’s110HurdleRaceinthe2004OlympicGames.(用同位语改写)

,

,wonthefirstprizeinMen’s110HurdleRaceinthe2004OlympicGames.2)Thewordistrue.Thepresidentwillgiveourschoolaspeech.

istrue

thepresidentwillgiveourschoolaspeech.

2.定语从句（限制性/非限制性）1)The2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinBeijing,anditssloganisOneWorld,OneDream,The2008OlympicGames,.2)Inmyopinion,theGreatWallandtheSummerPalacearewellworthvisiting.Inmyopinion,theGreatWallandtheSummerPalace

.3)Yesterday,wewenttotheEastGate,andweboughtalotofclothes.Yesterday,wewenttotheEastGate,.WhosesloganisOneWorld,OneDream,willbeheldinBJarethetwoplaceswhicharewellworthvisiting.Whereweboughtalotofclothes.3.主语从句1)Hiswonderfulperformanceonthestageimpressedme.

mostwashiswonderfulperformanceonthestage.2)Itsatisfiedme.Ourschooldininghallprovidesuswithalargevarietyofkindsofdishes.

ourschooldininghallprovidesuswithalargevarietyofkindsofdishes.3)Ilearnedfromthestorythataslongaswehavepatience,confidenceandperseverance,wecanrealizeourdreams.

aslongaswehavepatience,confidenceandperseverance,wecanrealizeourdreams.WhatimpressedmeWhatsatisfiedmeisthatWhatIhavelearntfromthestoryisthat【推荐句型】：Whatsurprises\astonished\satisfied\impressedmeisthat…WhatIwouldliketosuggest\advise\putforwardisthat…Whatmattersmostisthat…WhatIlearn\concludefromthestoryisthat…4.表语从句【推荐句型】：

…isnolongerwhatitusedtobe.我的家乡不再像以前那样了。Myhometownisnolongerwhatitusedtobe.5.状语从句【推荐句型】

结果、程度so…that…;such…that…让步nomatterhow\what\when\where….=whatever,however,whenever,wherever时间…wasdoing…when…1)不管前面有多少困难，我们都要学会独立的克服他们。

,weshouldlearntoovercomethemindependently.2)我正沿着马路走，突然我听到有人叫我。I

alongtheroad

suddenlyIheardmynamecalled.Nomatterhowmanydifficultiesthereareaheadofus,

waswalkingwhen七、将两个简单句合并为一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句

操作难度★★★★★写作效果★★★★★1.Recentlymanymiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsaboutit.Recentlymanymiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirmoneyonunnecessarythings,whicharousespeopletothinkdifferently2.Manyboyslearntosmoke.Itdoesharmtotheirhealth.Manyboyslearntosmoke,.whichWhichdoesharmtotheirhealth.八、It作形式主语或形式宾语句型

操作难度★★★写作效果★★★1.Youpretendtoknowwhatyoudon’tknow.It’snogood.

2.ItiseasytogetonwithPam.Ifind.It’snogoodpretendingtoknowwhatyoudon’tknow.IfinditeasytogetonwithPam.九、分词结构代替状语/定语从句

操作难度★★★★★写作效果★★★★★1.Ifyouworkharder,youwilldobetterintheexamnexttime.

,youwilldobetterintheexamnexttime.2.Becausemyfriendwasfrightenedoflosinghisjob,hesaidnothingtothepolice.

,myfriendsaidnothingtothepolice.Workinghard

Frightenedoflosinghisjob

2.Themoontravelsroundtheearthonceeverymonth.Themoonisanaturalsatelliteoftheearth.Themoon，travelingroundtheearthonceeverymonth，isanaturalsatelliteoftheearth.十、with引导的短语或者复合结构

操作难度★★★★写作效果★★★★★With+宾语+adj./adv./介词短语/todo\doing\done常用句型withapopulationof….withatotalareaof…withalonghistoryof…years1)这个地区占地2000平方千米，人口10万。Thisareacoversanareaof2000squarekilometers,.2)我们学校周围种了很多花和树，吸引了大量的学生来参观。

,itattractsalargenumberofpeople.3）没有做完作业，这个小孩不敢去上学。

,theboydarednotgotoschool.4)这两个男人早早就睡了，蜡烛烧了一个晚上。Thetwomenwenttobedearly,

.

withapopulationof100,000.

Withsomanytreesandflowerssurroundingourschool

.

withcandlesburninganightlong

Withhomeworknotfinished

一、肯定不如双否好二、陈述不如倒装妙三、主动不如被动巧四、从句不如分词傲高级句式使用的原则：抓住高考阅卷老师的心理的秘诀四“不如”誊写规范不要少

修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞，而且对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。一、肯定不如双否好Icouldn’thavemadesomuchprogressinEnglishwithouthishelp.IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglishwithhishelp.Thepostmancomesontimeeveryday.

.Thepostmanneverfailstocomeontime

倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，足以应对书面表达，如何应用倒装，有很多方法和技巧。1.Onlywhenwerealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectioncanwesolvetheproblemofpollution.2.Sopreciousistimethatwecan’taffordtowasteit.3.Diligentashewas,hefailedinpassingtheexam.4.Bynomeansshouldteenagersgetintothehabitofsmoking.二、陈述不如倒装妙1.否定词开头：2.Notuntil/till5pm.didhecomehereyesterday.3.Itwasnotuntil/till5pm.thathecamehereyesterday.1.Hedidn’tcomehereuntil5pm.yesterday.把地点状语放在句首后面主谓倒装。这样做的好处之一是倒装本身就是高级结构，第二是倒装后把真正的主语放到了句子的末尾，后面还可以继续加从句，使整个句子再呈现更多的亮点。2.地点状语开头Ourlibraryisinthecenterofourschool.Inthecenterofourschoolliesourlibrary.Onthebankstandsomeflowers.Intheskyhanglittlestars.Ourlibraryliesinthecenterofourschool.

Itisbetweenthegardenandtheteachingbuilding.Inthecenterofourschoolliesourlibrary，whichisbetweenthegardenandtheteachingbuilding.Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.3.Only的倒装句：OnlyinthiswaycanIimprovemyEnglishOnlybytakingexercisescanwekeephealthy4.as：1.YoungasIam,Icanmanageit2.Richasourcountryis,wehavealotofproblems3.Badlyinjuredashewas,hemanagedtotakedownthecar’snumber.Tryasyouwill,youwon’tmanageit三、主动不如被动巧英语中经常用被动语态，汉语经常用主动语态；英语中经常用是事物或形式主语开头，强调一件事发生在什么人身上，而汉语经常用人称开头强调一个人发生了什么事。所以使用被动语态符合英语的习惯，如果能将整个文章中两个句子变成被动语态，就会呈现句型的变化，使整篇文章句型丰富。每次可以借五本书最多借十天(2006NMET)Wecanborrowfivebooksatmost,andwecankeepthemfortendays.Atmostfivebookscanbeborrowedatatimeandtheycanbekeptfortendays.哪种表达法分数会更高？几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，时间状语从句，原因状语，条件状语等。例如条件状语从句：Ifsuchisthecase,youshouldapologizetoher.如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢？学会下面的口诀，如果你的作文中有状语从句，马上可改成独立主格或分词结构这个最大的亮点。四、从句不如分词傲口诀：一去，二看，三改。一去：去连词；二看：看主语；三改：改分词。

第一步，去掉连词if；Ifsuchisthecase,youshouldapologizetoher.第二步，看前后两句话的主语，前后主语不一致，所以要改成独立主格；第三步，改分词，is变成分词是being最后变成Suchbeingthecase,youshouldapologizetoher如果前后两句话主语一致，就变成分词结构。[原文]Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.[修正]Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.[原文]

Ifeverythingistakenintoconsideration,weoughttohaveanotherchance.[修正]Everythingtakenintoconsideration,weoughttohaveanotherchance.1Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）Onhisarriving,pleasegivemeane-mail.What

surpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice

改写句子

Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.

5.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)

6.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.

（用并列句）7．HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.

(使用倒装句)NosoonerhadhecomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.1.通过使用网络与家人联系是很方便的（2010南通模拟）ItisconvenienttokeepintouchwithyourfamilybyusingtheInternet.2.我们所需要做的是冷静下来,反思我们的学习方法。

（2010扬州模拟）

Whatweneedtodoistocalmdownandreflectonourlearningmethod.3.只有以这种方式，我们才能进步。（2010潍坊模拟）Onlyinthisway,canwemakeprogress.熟能生巧Translatethesentences4.我们对自己的态度才是最关键的。（2010苏州模拟）

Itisourattitudetoourselvesthatmatters(counts).5.坐在一盘子粽子前，这个男孩不知道如何打开他们。（unwrap)（2010淄博模拟）

Sittingbeforeaplateofzongzi,theboydidn’tknowhowtounwrapthem.6.正如图中所示，爱就像黑暗中的一盏灯。

（2008北京模拟）

Asisshowninthepicture,loveislikealampinthedark.但是值得提醒的是，同学们在使用复杂的句型和结构时，要有把握能正确地表达；也要注意分寸，应根据书面表达的内容和篇章结构而定，做到地道得体，千万不能生搬硬套，画蛇添足。多看多背多模仿多翻译1.Tohis