读后续写：爱与善良-面冷心热的老妇人 讲义-高考英语作文备考

一．原文SandyandJanecametoseethejobotreeonthehilltopagain.Jobosweretheirfavoritefruit,butthetreebelongedtoaladywholivedinthehousebythehill.Theyheardshewasdifficult,butthatsometimesshewouldgivefruitinreturnforanerrand（差使）.Thegirlsfinallygatheredtheircouragetoknockonherdoor.Anelderlywomanwithafiercelookanswered,staringdownatthegirls.“Weheard....,”saidSandy,hervoiceshaky,“thatyou

givejobosinpaymentforrunninganerrand.”Theladyraisedoneeyebrow,thenwentintothekitchenandtooktwobaskets.

Shepushedthemintothegirls'hands.“Gofillthesewithjobos,andcomerightback.”Thegirlsracedupthehilltothetreeandfilledthebasketswiththeripestjobos.Backatthehouse,theladyfilledabagwithriceandhandedittoSandy.“TakethisbagandonebasketofjobostotheBrownfamily.Andaskthemforthepayment,”theladyaddedwithatightsmile.“Ifyoureturnwithoutthepayment,youwon'tgetthefruit.”Thegirlsstruggledallthewaywiththebagandthebasket.Whentheywerethere,Mrs.Brownansweredthedoor.Insideonthefloorwerethreelittlechildren,eachpaintingsomethingonpapers.Mr.Brownwaslyingsickinbed.Timeswerehard.Thegirlshandedherthefood.“Thisisfromtheladywiththejobotree,”saidSandy.“Sheaskedforthepayment,too.”Janesaidawkwardly.“Thepayment!Thepayment!”Thechildrenrepeated,wavingthepaperintheirhandshappily.SandyandJanelookedateachotherstrangely.Withasmile,Mrs.BrownhandedSandyalargesealed（密封的）envelopesofullthatitwasalmoststartingtobreakopen.Thegirlssaidgoodbyeandleftquickly.“Iwonder,”Sandymurmured,“whetherMrs.Browncanaffordtopayforthatfood.”Para1:Worried,thetwogirlsdiscussedwhatwasintheenvelopeastheywalkedback.Para2:Theladyopenedtheenvelope,tookoutapileofpapers,andsmiled.二、1.从第二三四段中找出描写老太太动作和神态的句子。第一段的“difficult”怎么理解?Para2:Anelderlywomanwithafiercelookanswered,staringdownatthegirls.Para3:Theladyraisedoneeyebrow;Shepushedthemintothegirls'hands.Para4:theladyaddedwithatightsmile.+威胁noteasytoplease难以讨好的;难以取悦的原文中有几个basket?2个，老妇人让2个小女孩把2个篮子的jobo装满，一个送给Brown一家人，一个后面给了小女孩们3.payment到底是什么?小孩画的画4，两个人为何会“lookedateachotherstrangely”?小孩听到payment很开心与他们一家的困窘处境很矛盾，觉得他们是付不起钱的三、微情节设计Paral:Worried,thetwogirlsdiscussedwhatwasintheenvelopeastheywalkedback(1)不解1(2)不解2(3)想打开，忍住了(4)继续往老太太家里走Para2:Theladyopenedtheenvelope,tookoutapileofpapers,andsmiled.(1)揭晓信封里到底是啥(2)老太太解释(3)小女孩们明白了一切，被老太太的善良感动了(4)老太太递给小女孩们一篮子jobo作为报酬四、下水文短语(1)不能做某事beincapableof(2)支付，付款makethepayment(3)用一种困惑的语气inatoneofbewilderment(4)提出某人对·.·..·的疑惑raiseone'sconfusionover..(5)表现出兴奋projectexcitement(6)当提到......whenitcametosth...(7)陷入......descendinto...(8)好奇地看着......castcuriouslooksat...(9)抑制住某人做某事的冲动restrainone'surgetodosth(10)打开信封unwraptheenvelope(l1)加快脚步走向·.....hastenone'spacetoward.(12)努力做某事inanattempttodosth(13)让某人万分惊讶的是toone'sastonishment(14)帮助某人做某事aidsbindoingsth(15)度过困难时期weatherthedifficultphase(16)达成协议strikeadeal(17)以一贯的冷酷语气intheusualunkindtone(18)递给某人某物handsthtosb(19)蹦跳跳bounceupanddown(20)咬一口.....·biteinto...(21)泼酒，溅落splash(22)对....··的看法perceptionof...五、连词成篇Paral:Worried,thetwogirlsdiscussedwhatwasintheenvelopeastheywalkedback.(1)“看来布朗家没有能力付款。信封里真的是钱吗?”简疑惑地问道。“ItseemsthattheBrownsareincapableofmakingthepayment,Coulditreallybemoneyintheenvelope?"saidJaneinatoneofbewilderment桑迪摇了摇头，提出了她的困惑，那就是为什么提到报酬时三个小孩会表现得很兴奋Sandyshookherhead,raisingherconfusionoverwhythethreelittlechildrenprojectedexcitementwhenitcametothepayment.他们陷入沉默，好奇地看着那个神秘的信封，但作为差使的责任抑制了他们打开信封的冲动。Descendingintosilcence,theycastcuriouslooksatthemysteriousenvelope,buttheresponsibilityaserrandsrestrainedtheirurgetounwraptheenvelope.(4)然后他们加快了脚步向那位女士的家走去，试图找到答案。Thentheyhastenedtheirpacetowardthelady'shomeinanattempttofindouttheanswer.Para2:Theladyopenedtheenvelope,tookoutapileofpapers,andsmiled.(1)令他们万分惊讶的是，信封里装的是孩子们画的彩色画。Totheirunboundedastonishment,insidetheenvelopewerethecolorfulpaintingsthechildrenhaddrawn意识到他们的困惑，这位女士解释说，为了帮助布朗一家度过困难时期，他们已经达成了一项协议一用孩子们的画“支付”食物和水果。Sensingtheirpuzzlement,theladyexplainedthattoaidtheBrownsinweatheringthedifficultphase,theyhadstruckaidea...“paidthefoodandfruitwithkids’paintings.一股暖流在她们的心中涌动，两个女孩被这个有着金子般的心却有着冷酷面孔的老太太深深打动了Withwarmcurrentsurgingthroughtheirhearts,thetwogirlsweredeeplytouchedbytheoldladywhohadaheartofgoldyetacoldface.(4)“这是你们的报酬，”她以一贯的冷酷语气说道，把另一篮子Jobos递给了姑娘们。“Andhere'syourpayment,theladysaidintheusualunkindtone,handingtheotherbasketofjobostothegirls.(5)两个女孩在回家的路上蹦蹦跳跳，大口大口地嚼着jobos，果汁溅得到处都是，不仅让她们神清气爽，也让她们对老太太的认知焕然一新。Bouncingupanddownontheirwayhome,thetwogirlsbitintojobos,withjuicesplashingeverywhere,whichrefreshedhemselvesaswellastheirperceptionoftheoldlady.六、最终自测Para1:Worried,thetwogirlsdiscussedwhatwasintheenvelopeastheywalkedback.(1)“看来布朗家没有能力付款。信封里真的是钱吗?”简疑惑地问道。(2)桑迪摇了摇头，提出了她的困惑，那就是为什么提到报酬时三个小孩会表现得很兴奋。(3)他们陷入沉默，好奇地看着那个神秘的信封，但作为差使的责任抑制了他们打开信封的冲动。(4)然后他们加快了脚步，小跑着向那位女士的家走去，试图找到答案。Para2:Theladyopenedtheenvelope,too