2022年湖北省黄石市大学英语6级大学英语六级模拟考试(含答案)

2022年湖北省黄石市大学英语6级大学英语六级模拟考试(含答案)学校:________班级:________姓名:________考号:________

一、1.Writing(10题)1.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledMyOpiniononCollegeGraduatesWorkingasVillageOfficials.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.这种做法的意义何在?

2．这些大学生能给农村带去什么?

3．大学生能从中得到什么?

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteathank-youletteronbehalfofthestudentuniontoacompanywhosponsoredtheschoolfootballgame.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.代表学生会感谢×公司对校内足球赛的赞助

2．向该公司赠送一份很有纪念意义的礼物

3．表达美好的祝愿，希望该公司继续支持本校的各项活动

AThank-youLetter

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledSayNotoAvianInfluenza.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.“禽流感”危害的后果及其严重性

2．造成这种突发疫情的原因

3．我们应该如何对待

Usefulwordsandexpressions:

禽流感:avianinfluenza

预警系统:warningsystem

应急机制:emergencyresponsemechanism

SayNotoAvianInfluenza

4.1.留守儿童的现象在农村非常普遍

2.这种现象带来的弊端

3.我诊断该如何时处理这些问题

5.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledSayNotoPiratedProducts.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.目前盗版的现象比较严重

2.造成这种现象的原因及其危害

3.我们应该怎么做

Usefulwordsandexpressions:

盗版:piracy(n.)

盗版产品:piratedproducts

知识产权:intellectualpropertyrights

侵犯版权:infringesb.'scopyright;copyrightinfringement

SayNotoPiratedProducts

6.Directions:Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionaboutDiligenceIstheKeytoSuccess.YouaregiventhefollowingoutlinesinChineseandarerequiredtowritenolessthan150words.Remembertowriteclearly.

1.对“勤奋是成功的关健”涵义的理解；

2.成功不是靠运气；

3.了解成功重要性的意义。

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledMyViewonOnlineShopping.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.网上购物渐渐成为一种时尚，越来越多的大学生选择网上购物

2．分析大学生网上购物的原因

3．我对此现象的看法

MyViewonOnlineShopping

8.1.随着生活水平和医疗水平的提高，我们身边的老人日渐增多。

2.作为大学生，能为他们做些什么

3.这样做的原因

TakingCareoftheOld

9.1.目前在中国，校园安全事故时有发生

2．这种现象造成了恶劣的影响

3．应该如何杜绝这种现象

10.假设你是李明，请你给保护长城志愿者工作指导中心写一封申请信，申请成位保护长城项目的志愿者。信中必须包括以下内容：

1.你从某报纸中得知这个项目招募志愿者的消息，感受到十分的高兴

2.想当这个项目志愿者的原因

3.简单介绍个人的性格和爱好，并表示十分希望自己能成为一名志愿者

ALetterofApplicationforVolunteeroftheGreatWallReservationProject

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10题)11.

Thewaterandnutrientstosupportthebiomassofthetreeareprovidedby______andconductedby______.

12.Youshouldpayspecialattentiontothefirstsixquestionsofthe12questionsbecausetheymakeupthebaseonwhich______.

13.Wal-Mart

Wal-Martismorethanjusttheworld'slargestretailer.Itisaneconomicforce,aculturalphenomenonandalightningrodforcontroversy.ItallstartedwithasimplephilosophyfromfounderSamWalton:Offershopperslowerpricesthantheygetanywhereelse.ThatbasicstrategyhasshapedWal-Mart'scultureanddriventhecompany'sgrowth.

NowthatWal-Martissohuge,ithasunprecedentedpowertoshapelabormarketsgloballyandchangethewayentireindustriesoperate.

HistoryofWal-Mart

SamWaltonopenedhisfirstfive-and-dimein1950.Hisvisionwastokeeppricesaslowaspossible.Evenifhismarginsweren'tasfatascompetitors,hefiguredhecouldmakeupforthatinvolume.Hewasright.

Intheearly1960s,WaltonopenedhisfirstWal-MartinRogers,Arkansas.Thecompanycontinuedtogrow,goingpublicin1970andaddingmorestoreseveryyear.In1990,Wal-MartsurpassedkeyrivalKmartinsize.Twoyearslater,itsurpassedSears.

Waltoncontinuedtodriveanoldpickuptruckandsharebudget-hotelroomswithcolleaguesonbusinesstrips,evenafterWal-Martmadehimveryrich.Hedemandedthathisemployeesalsokeepexpensestoabareminimum—amentalitythatisstillaltheheartofWal-MartculturemorethanadecadeafterWalton'sdeath.Thecompanyhascontinuedtogrowrapidlyafterhisdeathin1992andnowoperatesfourretaildivisions—Wal-MartSupercenters,Wal-Martdiscountstores,NeighborhoodMarketstoresandSam'sClubwarehouses.

Wal-MartStrategy

Let'sstartwithtechnology.Wal-Martpushedtheretailindustrytoestablishtheuniversalbarcode,whichforcedmanufacturerstoadoptcommonlabeling.Thebarallowedretailerstogenerateallkindsofinformation—creatingasubtleshiftofpowerfrommanufacturerstoretailers.Wal-Martbecameespeciallygoodatexploitingtheinformationbehindthebarcode.Andthusitisconsideredapioneerindevelopingsophisticatedtechnologytotrackitsstockandcutthefatoutofitssupplychain.

Recently,Wal-Martbecamethefirstmajorretailertodemandmanufacturersuseradiofrequencyidentificationtechnology(RFID).Thetechnology,usesradiofrequenciestotransmitdatastoredonsmalltagsattachedtopallets(货盘)orindividualproducts.RFIDtagsholdsignificantlymoredatathanbarcodes.

Thefrugalculture,establishedbyWalton.alsoplaysintoWal-Mart'ssuccess.Thecompanyhasbeencriticizedfortherelativelypoorwagesandhealthcareplansthatitotterstorank-andfileemployees.Ithasalsobeenaccusedofdemandingthathourlyworkersputinovertimewithoutpay.Storemanagersoftenworkmorethan70hoursperweek.

Thiscultureisalsopresentatthecompany'sheadquarters.Wal-MartisheadquarteredinBentonville,Arkansas,insteadofanexpensivecitylikeNewYork.Thebuildingisunattractiveanddull.Youwon'tcatchexecutivesinqualitycarsandyouwon'tseethemdraggingintoworkat9:30a.m.Executivesflycoachandoftensharehotelroomswithcolleagues.Theyworklonghours,typicallyarrivingatworkbefore6:30a.m.andworkinghalfdaysonSaturdays.

ThecentralgoalofWal-Martistokeepretailpriceslow—andthecompanyhasbeenverysuccessfulatthis.ExpertsestimatethatWal-Martsavesshoppersatleast15percentonatypicalcartofgroceries.Everything—includingthetechnologyandcorporateculture—feedsintothatultimategoalofdeliveringthelowestpricespossible.Wal-Martalsopushesitssuppliers,somesaycruelly,tocutprices.InTheWal-MartEffect,authorCharlesFishmandiscusseshowthepriceofafour-packofGElightbulbsdecreasedfrom$2.19to88centsduringafive-yearperiod.

ThePower

BecauseofWal-Mart'smassivesize,ithasincrediblepower.Ithasdrivensmallerretaile

A.productsatlowerprice

B.anykindofgoodsthecustomersmaywant

C.amorecomfortableshoppingenvironment

D.free-of-chargepackaging

14.

Thehydrogencanbegeneratedfrom__________________orproducedbyreformingfossilfuels.

15.

Aseriesofexperimentsdescribedinthepassageistoexaminewhetherthoughtandbehavior.can______.

16.

Duringanearthquake,totakeanelevatoristhefastestwaytorunawayfromafallingbuilding.

A.YB.NC.NG

17.

The______ofthosecaloriesisofsignificancewhennutritionistakenintoconsideration.

18.

Thefirstuseoftheterm"organicfarming"isusuallycreditedto______inhis1940book,LooktotheLand.

19.

Americans'shortcomingsinsciencearevast,andunfortunately______ismakingeffortstodefeatthem.

20.Howfarwaterdropstotheturbinesinapowerstationisknownas______.

A.theheads

B.theflowrate

C.theverticaldistance

D.theheights

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10题)21.(25)

A.Abusinesswoman.

B.Abusinessadministrator.

C.Awildlifeworker.

D.Anaccountant.

22.

【B4】

23.(24)

A.Itisasubconsciousthing.

B.Itreflectsalackofself-consciousness.

C.Itisunnecessaryindeed.

D.Itisakindofconsciousact.

24.听力原文：W:Frank,what'syourimpressionofEnglishpeople?

M:Well,theyarethemostreserved,themostsuspicious,themostunreceptive,themostunfriendly,thecoldest-h,andthemostdomineeringofallwesternpeople.

W:Why?Itseemsyou'reyouarereallyprejudicedagainsttheEnglishpeople.

M:Notnecessarily.ThisisthejudgmentbyallotherEuropeanpeople.AskaFrenchman,anItalian,aGermenlikeme,orevenanAmerican,whathethinksaboutEnglishman;andeveryonewilltellyoutheverysamething.

W:Don'tyouhaveanycomplimentsfortheEnglishpeople?

M:Oh,yes.YouwouldfindontheotherhandthatnearlyallnationswouldspeakhighlyofcertainotherEnglishqualifiesenergy,courage,honor,andjustice.Althoughnomanissodifficulttomakefriendswith,thefriendshipofanEnglishmanoncegainedismorestrongandtruethananyother.Whatdoyouthinkofthemanyway?

W:Idon'tknowmuchaboutEnglishpeople.Butlastsemester,wehadateachernamedMr.McCourtteachinguswriting,heisfromLiverpool.Heisrathersilent,reserved,andnotamiable.Someofuswerereallyafraidofhim.Buthewasagreatteacher,andhastaughtusmanywritingtechniques.Ihavemademuchprogress.

M:ThenheisatypicalEnglishman,fortheEnglishmanofthebesttypeismuchmoreinclinedtobejustthanbeistohekind.

W:That'sfight.Mr.McCourtoftentoldusthatkindnessisanemotionalimpulse,andweshouldbeonourguardagainsteverykindofemotionalimpulse.

M:Butwithallthis,thecharacterisagoodone,anditssuccesshasbeentheveryproofofitsvalue.

(23)

A.TheEnglishmen'shabits.

B.TheEnglishmen'saccent.

C.TheEnglishmen'scharacter.

D.TheEnglishmen'steachingstyles.

25.(43)

26.(41)

27.【B5】

28.听力原文：W:Ifyoudon'tmind,I'dliketohavealittlemoretimetolookoverthecontractbeforeIsignit.

M:Certainly.Ifyoudecidetosign,youwillbethefirsttobeacceptedbythecompany.

Q:Whatisthewomanpreparingtodo?

(17)

A.Signacontract.

B.Workoutaplan.

C.Takeaninterview.

D.Applyforajob.

29.听力原文：M:HowdoJaneandBillliketheirnewhome?

W:It'sreallycomfortable,butthey'retiredofhavingtohearthejetsgoovertheirhouseatallhours.

Q:WhatislocatedclosetoJaneandBill'snewhome?

(14)

A.Anairport.

B.Abusstation.

C.Asuperhighway.

D.Atrainstation.

30.(32)

A.Theearlydinosaurremains.

B.Ancientpicturesofdinosaurs.

C.Thebodybonesofsauropods.

D.Asauropodskulldiscovered.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3题)31.

Welearnedfromthepassagethat______.

A.evenin2030,obstaclesstillexistinreadingandinterpretinghumanthought

B.nowadayspeoplefeelangrywiththedominationofthehistorybyelites

C.bytheyear2050,humanbeingscanleadaneverlastinglifebiologically

D.peoplecanonly"livein"silicontogetanimmortallife

32.

What'stheprospectofhomeschooling?

A.Moreandmoreparentswillrecognizethehadsidesofthepubliceducation.

B.Moreandmoreparentswilladopthomeschoolingfortheirchildrentalentedinartorsports.

C.Thegovernmentwillsetupmorereligiousschoolstosatisfytheneedsofreligiousparents.

D.Thegovernmentwillbanhomeschoolingandforceparentstosendtheirchildrentopublicschools.

33.

【C10】

五、5.ErrorCorrection(3题)34.

【S8】

35.【S6】

36.

【S2】

六、6.ErrorCorrection(3题)37.

【S8】

38.

【S4】

39.Itishardtopredicthowscienceisgoingtoturnout,

andifitisreallygoodscienceitisimpossibletopredict.

Ifthethingstobefoundareactuallynew,theyareby

definitionunknowninadvance.Youcannotmakechoices

inthismatter.Youeitherhavescienceoryoudon't,ifyou【S1】______.

haveityouareobligedtoacceptthesurprisingand

disturbingpiecesofinformation,alongwiththeneat

andpromptusefulbits.【S2】______.

TheonlysolidpieceofscientifictruthaboutwhatI【S3】______.

feeltotallyconfidentisthatweprofoundlyignorant【S4】______.

aboutnature.Indeed,Iregardthisasthemajordiscovery

ofthepasthundredsyearsofbiology.Itis,initsway,an【S5】______.

illuminationpieceofnews.Itwouldhaveamazedthe

brightermindsofthe18thcenturyEnlightenment(启蒙【S6】______.

运动)tobetoldbyanyofushowlittleweknowandhow

bewilderedseemsthewayahead.Itisthissudden【S7】______.

confrontationtothedepthandscopeofignorance【S8】______.

thatrepresentthemostsignificantcontributionofthe【S9】______.

20thcenturysciencetothehumanintellect.Inearlier

times,weeitherpretendtounderstandhowthings【S10】______.

workedorignoredtheproblem,orsimplymadeup

storiestofillthegaps.

【S1】

参考答案

1.MyOpiniononCollegeGraduatesWorkingasVillageOfficialsNowadaysmanycollegegraduatesfindithardtofindajobupongraduation.EventuallysomeofthemchoosetoworkasvillageOfficialsintheruralareas.Ithinkitisagoodidea.Whatcancollegegraduatesofferthecountryside?Inmyopiniontheycanbringtheadvancedscienceandtechnologytothebackwardruralareas.Forexampletheycanhelpthevillagersinvariousaspectssuchashowtofarmscientificallyandeffectivelyhowtomakeuseofthelocalresourcesthusleadingthepeasantsonthewaytoawell-offlife.Atthesametimecollegegraduatesmaygainagreatdealfromtheirvillagepositions.Bygoingdeepintothemassesinthecountrysidetheymaylearnsomegoodqualitiesofthelaboringpeoplesuchasindustrioushard-workingetc.Inthiswaytheywillbeabletotrainthemselvesandaccumulatenecessaryexperiencefortheirfuturework.InconclusionIaminfavorofthisidea.Foritnotonlycaneasethejob-huntingpressureinthebigcitiesbutalsoprovidethecollegegraduateswithachancetoservethesociety.(186words)MyOpiniononCollegeGraduatesWorkingasVillageOfficialsNowadaysmanycollegegraduatesfindithardtofindajobupongraduation.Eventually,someofthemchoosetoworkasvillageOfficialsintheruralareas.Ithinkitisagoodidea.Whatcancollegegraduatesofferthecountryside?Inmyopinion,theycanbringtheadvancedscienceandtechnologytothebackwardruralareas.Forexample,theycanhelpthevillagersinvariousaspects,suchashowtofarmscientificallyandeffectively,howtomakeuseofthelocalresources,thusleadingthepeasantsonthewaytoawell-offlife.Atthesametime,collegegraduatesmaygainagreatdealfromtheirvillagepositions.Bygoingdeepintothemassesinthecountryside,theymaylearnsomegoodqualitiesofthelaboringpeople,suchasindustrious,hard-working,etc.Inthisway,theywillbeabletotrainthemselvesandaccumulatenecessaryexperiencefortheirfuturework.Inconclusion,Iaminfavorofthisidea.Foritnotonlycaneasethejob-huntingpressureinthebigcities,butalsoprovidethecollegegraduateswithachancetoservethesociety.(186words)解析：按照指令所给出的3个问题，我们可以将这篇作文写成4段。第1段指出，在新的严峻就业形势下，大学毕业生当村官显然是一个很有意义、值得肯定的做法。第2段回答问题：这些大学生能给农村带去什么?他们可以将利。技知识带到农村，改变农村的落后面貌，带领农民走上致富的道路。第3段回答问题：大学生能从中得到什么?通过深入农村基层，接触广大农民群众，他们可以学到劳动人民勤劳苦干、艰苦朴素的优秀品质，为将米的工作积累宝贵的生活经验。第4段作为结论，应当首尾呼应点题，扼要重复自己的看法：大学毕业生当村官不但能够减轻国家的就业压力，而且可以回报社会、服务社会，不失为一个好主意。

2.AThank-youLetterJune19th[l]DearSirorMadam[2]OnbehalfoftheStudentUnionofouruniversityIsincerelythankXcompanyAThank-youLetterJune,19th[l]DearSirorMadam,[2]OnbehalfoftheStudentUnionofouruniversity,IsincerelythankXcompany解析：这篇作文属于应用文写作。在写信的时候，首先必须把自己置于相关的情境中：明白写信人(“我”)是谁，收信人(“你”)是谁，二者关系如何，写这封信的目的是什么。在此基础上，再根据outline的要求考虑如何把相关信息融入信中。这样的信，才能得体。

以本作文为例，我们可以判断：①写信人是代表学生会动笔的，不应看做私人信件。这种信可以用DearSirorMadam作抬头，也可以直接称呼对方DearMr.Smith之类(当然可以假定写信人是认识对方X公司的经理或老总的了)。落款则应写自己的名字。②写信的目的有两个，首先是感谢对方的赞助(送礼也是表示谢意的方式)，其次是表达良好的祝愿。要辨明重点，应该以表示谢意为主，祝愿的内容只需最后简短表示即可。③学生会这样的学生团体如果要给赞助过自己的企业表示感谢，应该会送什么礼物呢?outline没有明确说明，需考生没身处地杜撰一个——这是本作文题的难点!绝不能太贵；一定要有纪念意义；该礼品注重精神价值而非物质价值；该礼品应该可以为公司收藏，可以放入公司“陈列室”里。从这些要求出发设想一个礼品出来吧!范文用记录足球赛颁奖典礼的DVD作礼品，就很好，很得体。(此外还可以考虑送什么礼物呢?书画作品、相册、都可以吧!)

Analysis

[1]这是公函的格式。

[2]把outline的第1点开门见山说出来。应用文忌套话空话，直接点题是最好的办法。注意“代表……表示感谢”的说法。

[3]写信时的必背句型。无论求职求学还是别的场合，都有可能需要随信附送别的文件/物件之类，就要用到attached/enclosedpleasefind…。

[4]说明送礼意图。remembrance，用得好。此处也可以用gift等。

[5]对礼物的含义加以说明是必要的。下面的几句话都是说明该礼物与公司赞助的活动之间的关系的。

[6]再次表示感谢。

[7]紧扣outline的第3点。表示祝愿。注意文中“感谢”的表达方法：thank,gratitude，appreciate。词语富于变化才能显得有文采。

3.SayNotoAvianInfluenzaAvianInfluenzaknownasaninfectiousdiseaseswiftlysweepthewholecountry.SounexpectedlyandpowerfullydoesitcomethatitsoonbecomepervasivearoundAsiaandallovertheworld.Suchkindofdiseaseoccursnotonlyinthedevelopingcountriesbutalsointhedevelopedcountries.Peoplewhohavecaughtthediseasewillsufferfromhighfevermuscleacherunnynoseandsorethroat.Somemayevengeteyeproblemandhavedifficultybreathingatalaterstage.AvianInfluenzabecomesanepidemicwhichhasseriouslyaffectedpeople'sdailylifeandnationaleconomyaswell.Itisevidentthatsuchphenomenoncanbeattributedtothefollowingreasons.Directcontactwiththeinfectiouspoultrywhichmakespeoplefallillisviewedasthemajorreason.Furthermorecontaminatedobjectsincludingdailynecessitiesmaycastamalignantshadowonpeople'slifethroughwhichpeopleeasilygetinfected.Finallybreathandfoodtransmissionmakespeoplehorrifiedinthemulti-organfailure.AvianInfluenzafactuallyprovokesfearandpanicamongthenativesandtouristsaswell.InmyopinionAvianInfluenzamaycausetheglobaloutbreakofthediseaseifitisnotbroughtunderthecontrol.Governmentshouldmonitorthewholesituationestablishingthewarningsystemtopreventthepeoplefrominfectionandadoptingtheemergencyresponsemechanismtoreducethedeathrate.Moreimportantpeoplemustberesponsibleforthemselves.Theyshouldenjoygoodhabitandlifestylesuchasself-cleaningandprotectionthoroughcookingofpoultrymeatseparationofrawfoodfromthecookedfoodandetc.Onlyinthiswaycanwereallyavoidthedisaster.SayNotoAvianInfluenzaAvianInfluenza,knownasaninfectiousdisease,swiftlysweepthewholecountry.SounexpectedlyandpowerfullydoesitcomethatitsoonbecomepervasivearoundAsiaandallovertheworld.Suchkindofdiseaseoccursnotonlyinthedevelopingcountriesbutalsointhedevelopedcountries.Peoplewhohavecaughtthediseasewillsufferfromhighfever,muscleache,runnynoseandsorethroat.Somemayevengeteyeproblemandhavedifficultybreathingatalaterstage.AvianInfluenzabecomesanepidemicwhichhasseriouslyaffectedpeople'sdailylifeandnationaleconomyaswell.Itisevidentthatsuchphenomenoncanbeattributedtothefollowingreasons.Directcontactwiththeinfectiouspoultrywhichmakespeoplefallillisviewedasthemajorreason.Furthermore,contaminatedobjectsincludingdailynecessitiesmaycastamalignantshadowonpeople'slife,throughwhichpeopleeasilygetinfected.Finally,breathandfoodtransmissionmakespeoplehorrifiedinthemulti-organfailure.AvianInfluenzafactuallyprovokesfearandpanicamongthenativesandtouristsaswell.Inmyopinion,AvianInfluenzamaycausetheglobaloutbreakofthediseaseifitisnotbroughtunderthecontrol.Governmentshouldmonitorthewholesituation,establishingthewarningsystemtopreventthepeoplefrominfectionandadoptingtheemergencyresponsemechanismtoreducethedeathrate.Moreimportant,peoplemustberesponsibleforthemselves.Theyshouldenjoygoodhabitandlifestyle.suchasself-cleaningandprotection,thoroughcookingofpoultrymeat,separationofrawfoodfromthecookedfood,andetc.Onlyinthisway,canwereallyavoidthedisaster.

4.Left-behindChildrenintheCountrysideEveryyearmillionsofpeoplefromruralareas①pourintocitiestofindjobs.①Andthephenomenonofleft-behindchildrenisprevalent.②Left-behindchildrenaresufferingaseriesofproblems.Theyarenottakengoodcareofbytheirparentsbecauseofthedistance.Thereforemanyofthemareratherweakphysicallyandpsychologically.Besidestheyareeasilyledastrayduetotheabsenceofparentalloveandguidance.③Inmyopinionmeasuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblem.FirstlybothpeopleintheCitiesandcountrysideshouldendeavortoofferloveandconcerntothesechildren.Theparentsinparticularshouldnotmakemoney③atthesacrificeofignoranceoftheirchildren.Secondlypoliciesshouldbeimplementedsothatchildrenfromcountrysidecanalso③haveaccesstoeducationalopportunitiesmedicalcareandotherservicesinthecity.Finallyitisurgenttodevelopeconomyintheruralareassothatpeoplecangetwell-paidjobsneartheirhomes.Left-behindChildrenintheCountrysideEveryyear,millionsofpeoplefromruralareas①pourintocitiestofindjobs.①Andthephenomenonofleft-behindchildrenisprevalent.②Left-behindchildrenaresufferingaseriesofproblems.Theyarenottakengoodcareofbytheirparentsbecauseofthedistance.Therefore,manyofthemareratherweakphysicallyandpsychologically.Besides,theyareeasilyledastrayduetotheabsenceofparentalloveandguidance.③Inmyopinion,measuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblem.Firstly,bothpeopleintheCitiesandcountrysideshouldendeavortoofferloveandconcerntothesechildren.Theparentsinparticularshouldnotmakemoney③atthesacrificeofignoranceoftheirchildren.Secondly,policiesshouldbeimplementedsothatchildrenfromcountrysidecanalso③haveaccesstoeducationalopportunities,medicalcareandotherservicesinthecity.Finally,itisurgenttodevelopeconomyintheruralareas,sothatpeoplecangetwell-paidjobsneartheirhomes.解析：①审题及布局。根据提纲，这篇作文的第一段阐述现象，第二段阐明此现象的弊端，第三段提出解决办法。这三个部分的论述要有侧重点，我们可以把重点放在第二段或第三段。第一段阐明留守儿童现象是随着大批进城务工者的出现而出现的。第二段阐述留守儿童所遭遇的问题：缺少父母的关爱，他们的身心都很有可能得不到健康的发展。第三段可以根据弊端的根源即缺少关爱人手，提出一系列建议，让他们感受到关爱，得以健康成长。②语言。这篇文章讨论的是当前的情况，用一般现在时即可。在第二、三段的论述中，为了达到表意清晰，逻辑性强，要使用各种关联词，同时注意用词的鲜明、准确。

5.SayNotoPiratedProductsPiracyisaseriousproblemwithwhichthiscountryisconfronted.Inmanyplacesweseepeoplepeddlingpiratedbooksordisks.ActuallypiracyhasbecomesowidespreadthatithassevSayNotoPiratedProductsPiracyisaseriousproblemwithwhichthiscountryisconfronted.Inmanyplacesweseepeoplepeddlingpiratedbooksordisks.Actually,piracyhasbecomesowidespreadthatithassev

6.DiligenceIstheKeytoSuccessDiligenceisthekeytosuccess.Itmeansthatsuccessinvolvespersistentworkbutdoesnotimplythatwearetoexertourselvesaroundtheclockwithoutfooddrinkorsleep.Thetruemeaningofdiligenceisthecarefuluseofone'stimeforthepurposeofsuccessortoworkpersistentlywithoutwastingtime.Somepeoplebelieveinluck.Thisisaseriousmistake.Ifthereisreallyanyluckatallitwillnevercometoalazyperson.Ifafarmerplowshisfieldonedayandthenremainsidlefortherestoftheseasonthebestofluckwillnotbringhimanything.Therewouldbenoharvestforhimatall.Thosearecleverwhounderstandtheimportanceofdiligenceandmakeittheirhabit.Itistheywhoareontherightwaytosuccess.Therearealsopeoplewhoalwaysthinkthatluckismoredecisiveinbringingaboutsuccessandthereforethereisnoneedforworkinghard.Buttheyfailtorealizethatdiligenceisthekeyandonlydiligencewillbringthemluckandsuccess.DiligenceIstheKeytoSuccessDiligenceisthekeytosuccess.Itmeansthatsuccessinvolvespersistentworkbutdoesnotimplythatwearetoexertourselvesaroundtheclockwithoutfood,drinkorsleep.Thetruemeaningofdiligenceisthecarefuluseofone'stimeforthepurposeofsuccess,ortoworkpersistentlywithoutwastingtime.Somepeoplebelieveinluck.Thisisaseriousmistake.Ifthereisreallyanyluckatall,itwillnevercometoalazyperson.Ifafarmerplowshisfieldonedayandthenremainsidlefortherestoftheseason,thebestofluckwillnotbringhimanything.Therewouldbenoharvestforhimatall.Thosearecleverwhounderstandtheimportanceofdiligenceandmakeittheirhabit.Itistheywhoareontherightwaytosuccess.Therearealsopeoplewhoalwaysthinkthatluckismoredecisiveinbringingaboutsuccessandthereforethereisnoneedforworkinghard.Buttheyfailtorealizethatdiligenceisthekey,andonlydiligencewillbringthemluckandsuccess.

7.MyViewonOnlineShopping(1)Intheeraofnetworkonlineshoppinghasbecomeoneofthemodernmeansbywhichpeopledotheirshopping.MoreandmorecollegestudentsareenjoyingtheconvenienceandfunthatnetwoMyViewonOnlineShopping(1)Intheeraofnetwork,onlineshoppinghasbecomeoneofthemodernmeansbywhichpeopledotheirshopping.Moreandmorecollegestudentsareenjoyingtheconvenienceandfunthatnetwo解析：本文是一篇六级作文考试中常见的议论文，要求考生就“大学生网上购物”展开讨论。题目要求考生首先描述这一现象，其次分析原因，最后表达自己的看法，是典型的现象解释型作文。

[写作提纲]

一、描述背景，引出现象

1．描述背景：网络时代，网上购物成为一种流行趋势(network，onlineshopping，modern)

2．引出现象：大学生选择网上购物，享受其带来的方便和乐趣(collegestudents，enjoy，convenience，fun)

二、分析原因

1．原因一：网上购物价格便宜，能省钱(lowerprice，savemoney)

2．原因二：网上购物资源丰富，能买到商场里买不到的东西(awealthofcommodityinformation，available，everythingconceivable)

3．原因三：网上购物不用排队，只需点鼠标(insteadofqueuingup，afewclicksofmouse)

三、“我”的看法：更多人将接受网购，享受到选择多、价位低的好处(accept，cheapershopping，moreselections)

(1)intheeraof意为“在…时代”。

(2)过渡句，提出问题。

(3)分析原因的常用表达。

(4)Firstofall，Besides，Moreover，分析网上购物流行的三条原因。

(5)Inotherwords意为“换言之”，进一步解释上文所表达的意思。

(6)常用来引出个人观点。

8.TakingCareoftheOld(1)Agingisbecomingaglobalissue.Thedevelopmentofmedicaltechnology(2)makesitpossibleforpeopletolivelongerthaninthepast.Andtakingcareoftheoldhasbecomeamajorconcernforall(3)thatliveinanagingsociety.(4)Asundergraduateswhatshouldwedofortheold?(5)Firstofallwecanbeginfrom(6)caringforourelderrelatives.It'shelpfulthatwevisitouraginggrandparentsregularlytakethemoutforawalkandtalkabouttheolddays.(5)What'smoreitisagoodideatofilloursparetimeworkingasvolunteersto(7)lookaftertheelderatnursinghomes.(5)Lastbutnotleastwemayjointheeffortwithourknowledgeinconstructinganelderlycaringsystemwiththeintegrationoffamiliescommunitieswelfareinstitutionsandgovernments.(8)Thereisnodoubtthattakingcareoftheoldisademandingandtime-consumingtask.(9)Howeverthelivingconditionofseniorcitizensreflectsanation'slivingstandardandsocialmorals.Moreimportantlylivingwiththeelderandcaringforthemisarewardingexperience.TakingCareoftheOld(1)Agingisbecomingaglobalissue.Thedevelopmentofmedicaltechnology(2)makesitpossibleforpeopletolivelongerthaninthepast.Andtakingcareoftheoldhasbecomeamajorconcernforall(3)thatliveinanagingsociety.(4)Asundergraduates,whatshouldwedofo