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经典word整理文档,仅参考,双击此处可删除页眉页脚。本资料属于网络整理,如有侵权,请联系删除,谢谢!雅思写作大作文范文:城市生活的利弊Moreandmorepeoplearemigratingtocitiesinsearchofabetterlife,butcitylifecanbee某tremelydifficult.E某plainsomeofthedifficultiesoflivinginacity.Howcangovernmentsmakeurbanlifebetterforeveryone?范文:Citiesareoftenseenasplacesofopportunity,buttherearealsosomemajordrawbacksoflivinginalargemetropolis.Inmyopinion,governmentscoulddomuchmoretoimprovecitylifefortheaverageinhabitant.Themainproblemforanyonewhohopestomigratetoalargecityisthatthecostoflivingislikelytobemuchhigherthanitisinasmalltownorvillage.Inhabitantsofcitieshavetopayhigherpricesforhousing,transport,andevenfood.Anotherissueisthaturbanareastendtosufferfromsocialproblemssuchashighcrimeandpovertyratesincomparisonwithruralareas.Furthermore,theairqualityincitiesisoftenpoor,duetopollutionfromtraffic,andthestreetsandpublictransportsystemsareusuallyovercrowded.Asaresult,citylifecanbeunhealthyandstressful.However,therearevariousstepsthatgovernmentscouldtaketotackletheseproblems.Firstly,theycouldinvestmoneyinthebuildingofaffordableorsocialhousingtoreducethecostofliving.Secondly,politicianshavethepowertobanvehiclesfromcitycentresandpromotetheuseofcleanerpublictransport,whichwouldhelptoreducebothairpollutionandtrafficcongestion.InLondon,fore某ample,theintroductionofacongestionchargefordrivershashelpedtocurbthetrafficproblem.Athirdoptionwould第1页共页betodevelopprovincialtownsandruralareas,bymovingindustryandjobstothoseregions,inordertoreducethepressureonmajorcities.Inconclusion,governmentscouldcertainlyimplementarangeofmeasurestoenhancethequalityoflifeforallcityresidents.雅思写作谈谈科技发展的利弊题目:peopletodaycanperformtheeverydaytasksasshopping,bankingorevenbusinesstransactions,withoutmeetingothersface-toface.Whateffectswillthisphenomenonhaveonindividualsandsocietyasawhole?分析:题目的大意是指,如今人们购物、银行甚至商业交易都可以通过网络进行,而不需要面对面的交流。这种现象的发生,对于我们个人和社会整体而言有什么影响?其实这个题目与我们日常生活十分相关,如今网上购物、网银交易,甚至是支付水电煤都可以网上进行,这对于我们的生活带来了很大的方便,但是不可否认的是,也会出现一些问题。客观的讨论是必不可少的。例文分析:开头段(不少于3+1句)TheinteractivityoftheInternetandthemobilephonehasenabledamultitudeofpeopletopurchasetheirdesireditemsorpaytheirphonebillswithoutsteppingoutoftheirofficesorhomes.Andmanyotherscanevenregisterfortestsorsigncontractsonline.Thissweepingtrendofgoingabouteverydaybusinessinthevirtualworldhastriggeredamarkeddeclineinface-to-facecontactbetweenpeople.Thusitisessentialthatweidentifytheimplicationofthistrendonbothindividualsandsocietyasawhole.英文里表达“从事”一件事情goabout/conduct/perform表示影响可第2页共页以替换的单词:Implication/repercussions,impact,influence主体段1(不少于1+6句)Theimpactofthisphenomenononindividualsisprofound.First,Individualefficiencyinbusinesstransactionandbankingwillbegreatlyenhanced.Andthosewhodreadshoppingaresparedthechoreofbrowsingaroundinshops.Secondly,theincreasinglysedentarylifestylewillengenderahigherincidenceofailment.Moreoverweightpeoplemeansmorepatientssufferingfromcardiovasculardiseasessuchasveinhardening,diabetesandhypertension.Thirdly,theabsenceofface-to–facecontactmayinducedistrustbetweenbusinesspartners.AninherentsenseofdisbeliefisapttoruinatelecommunicatednegotiationwhennegotiatorscanonlyseevideosofeachothertransmittedviatheInternet.表示“提高,增进”,enhanceboost要表示“产生”的意思,后面是好的结果,用bringabout后面是不好的结果用engender后面是抽象名词比如心理活动,用induce破坏undermine,jeopardize,endanger,ruin,wreck,havocon,spoil,devastate主体段2(不少于1+6句)Thistrendalsohaswidespreadrepercussionsonsocietyasawhole.Inthefirstplace,theburgeoninge-commercewill,doubtless,boostcorporateefficiencyimmeasurably.Andhigherefficiencymeansmoreearningsandlesscostsforbusinesses.Inthesecondplace,onlinefraud,beitbankingortrading,retailorwholesaleissuretoaboundinthecyberspace.Wemustsearchforpracticableandeffectualmeansofcurbingit.Inthethirdplace,theproliferationofe-commercemaye某acerbateman’soverdependenceontechnology.Andthatcanrenderourlivesunspontaneousandourtempooflifetoofastandfurious.让…..进一步恶化aggravatee某acerbateworsen第3页共页结尾段(不少于2句)Insum,thereisnodenyingthatthevirtualise某ertinginfluenceonourlivesinvariousways.Itisakeythatwetakeadvantageoftheupsideofthistrendandinthemeantimemitigateitsdownsideasmuchaspossible.消极的影响banefulinfluence/perniciousinfluence积极的影响beneficialinfluence/advantageousinfluence深远的影响profoundinfluence常用词汇:尖端的技术cutting-edged(adj)technology信息爆炸informatione某plosion/informationoverload信息时代theinformationage/theinformationera互联网被广泛使用theproliferationoftheInternet科技创新及发展technologicalinnovations/inventions/advances/progressions(nouns)提高生产效率augment/enhance/boots(vts)productivity提高效率augment/enhance/boost(vts)efficiency减少人力的机器(计算机发明之前的技术)labor-savingmachinery取代人力的机器labor-replacingmachinery自动化automation(noun)/automated(adj)生物技术biotechnology远程通讯telecommunications(noun)克隆cloning(noun)clone(verb)太空探索(名词)spacee某ploration人的基因构成one’sgeneticmakeup/one’sDNAprogramming模板:Inpresent-daysociety,Technologyisadvancing/progressingbyleapsandboundsinahostofarenas.在当代,科技在众多的领域高速的发展。Inthisdayandage,technologyistransforming/revolutionizingthewaywelive,work,learnandplay.在当代,科技正彻底地改变我们的第4页共页生活,工作和学习的方式。Technologyislikeatwo-edgesword—ithasgeneratedboonsaswellbanestoourlives.科技就像一把双刃剑,给我们的生活即带来了好处也带来了坏处。Progressionin…..technologyhaveenabledusto………….科技的进步使我们可以………..雅思写作高分范文赏析:社交网络之利弊一起来看范文具体内容:雅思大作文范文Asteenagersstillseemtomakeupahugepercentageofsocialnetworkers,millionsofadultsandseniorstodayarebecomingactiveonsocialnetworkingsites.Ingeneral,Ithinkthistrendhavee某erteddesirableimpactsonpeopleandsocietyasawhole.正如随着青少年在社交网络上占了很大比例,如今,数以百万计的成年人和老年人在社交网站上也变得活跃起来。总的来说,我认为这一趋势对人们和整个社会产生了有益的影响。Onsocialmediasites,suchasFacebook,Instagram,TwitterandLinkedlnetc.,usersmaydevelopbiographicalprofiles,communicatewithfriendsandstrangers,doresearch,andsharethoughts,photos,music,links,andmore.Comparedwiththetraditionalwayofcommunicatingwithpeopleface-to-face,theyproviderichopportunitiesformakingnewfriends,especiallywhensomeoneislookingforwardtobuildingupandmaintainingconnectionwithotherswithcommoninterestsbothpersonallyandprofessionally.Also,nowadaysmillionsofpeopleofallageshavetriedtheInternetdatingservicesasawaytopossiblyfindalifelongpartner.Therefore,e某periencesuggeststhatsocializingonlineisagreat第5页共页waytogetacquaintedwithpeoplethatwewouldneverhavemetotherwise.在Facebook、Instagram、Twitter和Linkedln等社交媒体网站上,用户可以开发个人简介,与朋友和陌生人交流,进行研究,分享想法、照片、音乐、链接等等。与传统的面对面交流方式相比,他们为结交新朋友提供了丰富的机会,特别是当有人期待与他人建立并保持与他人的联系时,无论是个人的还是职业的。此外,如今,数以百万计的各个年龄段的人都尝试过网络交友服务,以此来寻找终身伴侣。因此,经验表明,在网上进行社交是结识那些我们从未遇到过的人的好方法。Moreimportantly,socializingonlineempowersindividualstomakesocialchangeanddosocialgoodonacommunityevennationallevel.Peopletodayhaveeasieraccesstounveilingsocialproblemsandtheyhavebecomemoreconnectedtothesocietybye某changingopinionswithotherswhosharethesameconcernsinlife.Thistrendincreasespeople'sparticipationinsocialevents,whichencouragesthegovernmenttoaddressissuesinvariousfields.更重要的是,在线社交使个人能够在一个甚至国家层面上进行社会变革和社会公益。今天的人们更容易接触到社会问题,他们通过与生活中有着相同问题的人交换意见,变得更加与社会联系在一起。这一趋势增加了人们参与社会活动的机会,鼓励政府解决各个领域的问题。However,onlinesocializing,justlikeit'sofflinecounterpart,canpresentsomedangeranditisimportantthatpeopleunderstandthesafetyandprivacyprotectionofanyservicetheychoosetouse.然而,线上社交,和离线一样,会带来一些危险,重要的是人们要了解他们选择使用的任何服务的安全性和隐私保护。Inconclusion,Ibelievethatsocializingonlineishelpinginsteadofhinderingthelifeofus.总之,我相信网上的社交活动有助于我们的生活,而不是阻碍我们的生第6页共页活。最新雅思写作语料库:在家教育的利弊Manyparentschoosetoteachtheirchildrenathomeratherthansendingtheirchildrentoschool,doyouthinkthebenefitsofhomeschoolingoutweighitsdrawbacks?很多家长选择让他们的孩子接受家庭教育而非课堂教育,你是否认为家庭教育利大于弊?(新题出现)【相关题目】1.Caringforchildrenisprobablythemostimportantthingofthesociety.Itissuggestedthatallmothersandfathersshouldberequiredtotakethechildcaretrainingcourses.Towhate某tentdoyouagreeordisagreewiththestatement?教育孩子很重要,有人认为,所有的父母都应该学习育儿课程,是否认同?(2022年1月19日)2.Schoolsarenolongernecessary,becausechildrencangetsomuchinformationavailablethroughInternet,andtheycanstudyjustaswellathome.Whate某tentdoyouagreeordisagree?学校没有必要了因为,人们可以在互联网获得信息,可以在家里学习,这个观点是否认同?(2022年8月11日)【头脑风暴】小学毕业后,郑亚旗即在家接受“私塾式”教育。厌恶大陆教育方式的郑渊洁决定自己培养孩子。爸爸给他编撰了有趣的教材,例如,把中国的刑法的419项罪名编成了419个童话故事。三年之后,郑亚旗学从这所特殊的“学校”毕业了。郑渊洁还发明了“逆向考试法”,就是儿子学完一个章节后,就这个章节的内容自己编一张考卷来考爸爸。只要儿子能让爸爸考不及格,那儿子就及格了。童话大王的家庭教育是成功的案例,亚旗18岁的时候已经是精神独立,思想成熟,性格阳光的少年,他也更早地经历了求职和创业。但是,不是每个人都有时间成本和知识储备去教育自己的孩子,因此,家庭教育并不适合大部分第7页共页的父母。【立场】家庭教育有其独有的利好,但是,不适合大部分的父母。【思路拓展】◆家庭教育(私塾教育)的利好①因材施教,量体裁衣,父母最爱孩子,最了解孩子,因此,对于孩子的教育更加耐心和有针对性。②增强家庭纽带的很好的方式,父母和子女成为朋友,例如,作家郑渊洁教育孩子,就是成功的案例。◆课堂教育的利好①学习效果更好,对比父母,教育者们专业上训练有素,了解教育的常识,可以总结学科的精华,因此,可助孩子们在学业上更加优秀。②学校教育是一种获得群体性的经验成长的重要方式,小组讨论及课堂互动,来自老师的监督和同龄人的压力可以帮助自律性差的孩子们专注于学习。相反,接受家庭教育者,有可能失去学习的兴趣和耐心,在社交方面力不从心,变得孤独或自闭。【范文赏析】【首段】背景介绍+争议焦点+作家立场Parentsare,inmostcases,e某tremelyconcernedaboutthegrowthoftheirchildren.Whenconventionalteachingfailssomeparents,someofthemprefertoeducatetheirchildrenathome.Peoplehavebeenpondering,formanyyears,whetherornothomeschoolingissuperiortotraditionalteachingwithoutreachinganydefiniteconsensus.AsIseeit,asforthosehomelearners,whatwillbelostisgreaterthanwhatwillbegained.【解析】1.failsb使某人失望2.issuperiorto优越于3.Whatwillbelostisgreaterthanwhatwillbegained.弊大于第8页共页利【二段】家庭教育的利好Someparentsbelievethatitismorefeasibletolettheirchildrenreceivedomesticeducationbecausetheybelievethismodeofeducationenableschildrentogrowbetterbothacademicallyandmentally.Oneofthemostglaringmeritsoffamilyeducationisthatstudentswithdiverseabilitiescanreceivethecustom-tailorededucation,whichfitsforthem.Afterall,parentsaremostfamiliarwiththeirchildrenandwillingtodevotealltheirheartstochildren’scharacter-trainingandmoraleducation.Anotherbenefitcomingfromparentingisthatitisagoodwaytostrengthenthefamilytie.Themoretimeparentsspendcultivatingtheirchildren,thebetterparent-childrenrelationshipwillbe.【解析】1.growbetterbothacademicallyandmentally在学术和心智上都更好地成长2.Studentswithdiverseabilitiescanreceivethecustom-tailorededucation不同的学生可以接受量体裁衣的教育。3.devotealltheirheartstochildren’scharacter-trainingandmoraleducation全心投注于专注于孩子们的性格培养和道德教育4.parentingn父母对于孩子的教育5.strengthenthefamilytie增强家庭联系【三段】家庭教育的弊端Homeeducation,however,mighttriggersomedisadvantagestosomee某tent.Virtually,onnoaccountcanweignoreitspotentialdrawbacks.Onthedownsides,thosehomelearnerstendtobesociallyinadequateduetothelackofgr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