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给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。

Iwilltellyouthechangesofmylife.Before,wehadmanyclasseseveryday.Ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool.Iwenttobedat11:30intheevening.Ihadnotimetoplay.Iwasverytired.NowIcanvisitmuseums.Icanlearncomputeranddrawing.Intheevening,IcanreadbooksandnewspapersandwatchTV.Igotobedat10:00now.15分满分作文

I’mverypleasedtotellyouthechangesinmylifesinceourhomeworkhasreduced.Beforethat,learningduringthedaywasverysimple.Havingclassanddoinghomeworkwastheonlything

weshoulddo.Intheevening,wealsohadalotofhomeworktodo.Wecouldnotgotobed

until

11:30.Nevertheless,

since

reducingthelearningload,mylifehasbecomemuchmoreinteresting.Ioftenvisitmuseumsandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesinmysparetime.Intheevening,IalsohavetimetowatchTVandreadnewspapers.Inolongerstayuplate;onthecontrary,Igotobedatabout10pm.

Inshort,Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化

1.覆盖了所有的要点

2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇

3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整体三部分Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body

中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending

小结；呼应主题

技巧1.使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式Let’senjoy1,Afterfinishinghishomework,theboyplantedhimselfinfrontoftheTV.2,Thelittleboywhistledhomebecausehegothighgradesinhismathsexam.3,Thepath(小路）lostitselfintheforest.4,Travellinginatrainsurelybeatsdrivingacarbyyourself.5,YoucanlaughaSaturdaynightawaybywatchingacrosstalkshow.1.Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.2.SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.3.Asaresult,theplanwasafailure.4.Inourschool,therearetwenty-sixclassrooms.Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Thankstothegoodweather,

ourjourneywascomfortable.Practice1怎样使用较高级的词汇Agoodideaoccurredtome./Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.Ourschoolismadeupoftwenty–sixclassrooms词组优先1.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)3.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(用虚拟语气）4.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词).What

surpriseshim

isthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice2

怎样使用较丰富的句式WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyourhelp.

Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Practice

3

请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。XiaoMingwaswalkinginthestreet___________heheardsomeonecryforhelp.2.HeadvisedthatIhireacar____________Icouldtravelaroundinthewest.3.Itwasnotlong_______thepolicecame.___________heheardthecryforhelp,hejumpedintothewatertosavethegirl.whensothatbeforeAssoonas

联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：

1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。

2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。

3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。

2）词数：100-120之间。Practice4书面表达：Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②Ithaschangedalotsince1978③.Peoplehere④arericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.①Thisvillageisasmallonewith/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.②However,

ithaschangedalotsince1978③andhasbeendevelopingveryfast.Peoplehere④liveamuchbetterlifethanbefore.书面表达：Nowitistakingonanewlook.

Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤.⑥Nowithasbeenrebuilt.⑦Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys⑧.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.⑩Thankyou.

Inthepast,theschoolherewasverysmall⑤andmostchildrencouldn’taffordtogotoschool.⑥

Butnowithasbeenrebuilt⑦and⑧whichhas4storeysisthemostbeautifuloneinthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.⑨What’smore,

theyenjoyfreeeducation.⑩Mayyouenjoyyourstayherethenewlybuiltteachingbuilding/Mayyouhaveapleasanttimehere!Thankyou.

Ladiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool!①Thisvillageisasmallone

with/whichhasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobevery