救助动物 【高效备课精研+知识精讲提升】 名校真题读后续写话题分类写作指导与训练

读后续写话题写作救助动物“人与动物”的读后续写篇目1.人狼大战：---2017年6月浙江高考2.骑马受惊：---2018年6月浙江高考3.人熊大战：---2020年6月浙江高考4.粉红鸭：母亲买回宠物粉红鸭pinky，多次送回大自然未果后决定收养。5.人狼共舞：好奇狼山坡观望人类，互不干扰，和谐共处画面。6.救助受困小鹿：小鹿fawn被卡栅栏，救助后能否家养。7.解救陷阱中的哺乳期母狼：如何救助有攻击性的护崽狼妈妈。8.拳师狗boxer:主人痛失爱犬后被邻家狗治愈的故事。9.保护鱼鹰：鱼鹰繁殖期，我和朋友极力保护。10.保护.....：(保密)人与动物故事一般围绕两方面展开：1.人与动物和谐相处，相亲互助2.人与动物发生冲突，成功脱险1.旅途偶遇危险凶猛动物本着保护且不能伤害野生动物，不能私自圈养的原则，遭遇时可设法驱赶，或择机躲避，确保双方安全无恙。最终大多依靠外援救助成功脱困。总结具体方法：a.食物引诱驱赶：usegarlicbread/meat,...b.无致命伤害防御：throwabike/astone/astickat...fireblankshotgunshellsintotheair(发射空霰弹)usepepperspray(辣椒喷雾)...makeafiretodriveitawayc.择机躲避:getaboardthehelicoptergetintothecarseekshelter(acave,...)fleetokeepawayfrom...2.旅途遭遇无危险动物或是救助小动物这些动物的出现只是给旅途增添一点乐趣和曲折，体验一次难忘惊险或救助的经历。如rabbit,sheep,cow等。3.家养动物的趣事囧事或是相互治愈dog，cat，duck等和人类交往中产生情感依赖，互相陪伴，安慰或治愈(healalonelysoul)，共同度过艰难黑暗时期(getusthroughgloomydays)。狗或其他有灵性的动物的忠诚和报恩。狗还是人类的好帮手，如导盲犬。甚至可以帮助人类度过灾难（如火灾，地震，溺水等），如搜救犬等。4.解救受困动物A.无危险动物:deerB.危险动物:wolf区别：对前者deer的解救重在方法，比如选择用具（从原文找线索），描述解救操作过程的动作语言和心理等细节描写。对后者wolf的解救，重在不伤害双方的前提下的救助。构思解救方法应适当注意。多多回读原文找线索，增加铺垫，找出两全其美之法。

与动物相关的词汇1.名词：皮毛furandhair羽毛feather翅膀wing爪子claw;paw尾巴tail与动物相关的词汇2.动词短语spreaditswingsandflyaway展翅飞翔flatteritswings扑腾翅膀crouchreadytopounce（狮子等）蹲下来准备猛扑coilup,readytostrike（蛇）盘绕起来准备攻击与动物相关的词汇2.动词短语leaptoitsfeet猛然跳起springtoitsfeet突然站起/一跃而起jump(out)at...扑向comeat...扑向turnon...扑向makeasuddendiveforhisheel/hisleg扑向他的脚跟、腿pounceonthephotographer朝摄影师扑过去与动物相关的词汇2.动词短语bareitsteethinanger因生气龇牙咧嘴tearat...撕扯wagitstail摇摇尾巴prick(up)one'sears竖起耳朵(ofadog)cockitsears竖起耳朵与动物相关的词汇2.动词短语bitethecornerofthecoat咬住衣角scratchyouwithhisfrontpaws用前爪挠你lickyourpalms舔舔你的手心smell/sniffyourfoot闻闻、嗅嗅你的脚fallonitsback摔得四脚朝天与动物相关的词汇2.动词短语chirp（鸟/昆虫）叽叽喳喳bark狗吠howl（狼、狗）嚎叫；（人）大声叫喊roar（狮、虎）咆哮；（人群）哄笑，大笑betrappedinacage被困在笼子里set...free;release...释放动物类续写语料大放送

狗1.Thelittledogwashalfawake,growlingwithsoftvoice.Noamountofsurpriseandhappinesscouldcomparetohislookuponseeingthecutepup.（专题：人狗情未了——Randy的重生）2.Itwashidinginonecornerofthebox,withacuriouslookinitseyes.Waggingitstail,ittriedtoclimboutofthebox,butitfelldownback,unabletostandup.Cheerfulandalittlenervous,Poppykeptrunningandbarkingatthenewfamilymember.Poppythrewherselfathimandlickedhishandandfaceexcitedly,hereyessparklingwithdelightandhertailwaggingfuriously.TherewasacutepuppybesidePoppy,biting,growlingandwaggingitstail.（专题：人狗情未了——给Poppy找朋友）动物类续写语料大放送

狗3.Whentearswelledupandblurredmyvision,Icouldfeelhercheekleaningagainstmyfeet.Glancingathersadbrowneyes,Iknewshecouldunderstandmyfeelings.Timeflewbybitterly,butIenjoyedMisty'scompany.（专题：人狗情未了——遛狗）4.Hesniffediteagerly,bushytailwagging.Helickedme."Bama"returned,bondinguswithnewfriendsandhelpingusgothroughthedarkesttimeofmylife.（专题：人狗情未了——Bama再现）动物类续写语料大放送

熊1.Itsearswerepinnedback.ThebearopeneditsmouthandIgraspeditsfur,tryingtopushitaway.Iwasactuallywrestling(扭打)withthebearatthispoint.Myarmcouldnotmove,andIsensedthatmybonesweregoingtobreak.Itshugeheadwaslevelwithmychestandshoulders.(专题：熊出没——熊口逃生）2.Heexposedhissharpteeth,glaringatusasheranforward.Andagainthebearstoodtohisbacklegs,wantingtotearthefencelikeamonster.Itseemedthathismouthwasfullofbloodandhiseyeswereredwithanger.Helookedirritatedandchargedatusagain.（专题：熊出没——熊口脱险）动物类续写语料大放送

熊3.Unfortunately,thebearrushedtohim.Colinwaspushedtothegroundandbittenintheleftleg.“Ah!”hescreamedwiththeunbearablepain.Bloodflowingout,Colinsuddenlyrememberedtheknifeinhispocket.Hestabbedthebear'sneckasfastandstrongaspossible.Thebearroaredwithpainandranaway.（专题：熊出没——人熊大战）动物类续写语料大放送

蛇Assoonasthecurtainwastornoff/pulleddown,hethrewittothesnakeasquicklyaspossible,coveringitfromheadtotail.Thesnakewaswriggling/windingitsbodyinthecurtain,whichmadethefrightenedfamilytremblinginpanic.（专题：人兽“大战”——蛇口脱险）动物类续写语料大放送

猫1.Thatevening,wespottedthesweetyellowcatwanderingaroundinsearchofmice.Cheryl'scatmeowedfreelyinthedistance.（专题：喵星人——智斗土拨鼠）2.Uponarrival,thebodypeeredstraightatStevie,whomeowedhappily.Thelittleboycouldn'thelpwrappingStevieinhisarms,strokingitbacksoftly."Stevie"couldmeanthewholeworldtoalittleboy.Petsaretouswhatwateristofish.Theylightupourspiritsandhealourweakhearts.Animalscanindeedlightalampandwarmaheart.（专题：喵星人——自病症男孩与喵星人）动物类续写语料大放送

猫3.Mr.Quimbylookedaround,findingPicky-pickyunderthekitchentable,whomeowedhappilyandenjoyedthepumpkin.Butwhentheytookacloserlook,theyfoundadifferentworkofartwithpawprintsdecoratingeverywhere.Laughtercreptupontheirfacesandwhatanunforgettabledayitwas.（专题:喵星人——淘气的喵星人）动物类续写语料大放送

狼ThenitattackedthebackofMac'sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Thewolf'steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.Withhismouthwatering,thewolfpacedaroundthecarandhowledfuriouslyatthem,butjustinvain.Realizingitcouldn'tcatchMacanymore,thewolfultimatelygaveupandvanishedgloomily.Onspottingthewolfswallowedbytheroad,Mac,bathedinsweatsandparalysedwithfear,letoutadeepsigh.Whatanarrowescape!（专题：人兽大战——狼口脱险）动物类续写语料大放送

小鸟1.ThebirddidnotmoveuntilBencameclose.Thenittriedtoflyaway,butonewingwasbroken.Benliftedthebirdandhelditcloseagainsthisbody.Thebirdfoughttoescape,butsoonlayquietlyinBen'sarms.（专题：人兽大战——猎人与小鸟）2.（孟戎宬）Silently,hetiptoedtothegrass,findingthatabirdwashelplesslyflappingitswingsbutfailedtofly.Hetookthebirdinhishands,strokingitsfeather,buthadnoideahowtohelpwithit,sympathetically.Seeingthebirdweaklyopeningitsmouth,Ben'sheartbrokeintofragments.（2023秋·山东滨州·高三统考期末）Itwasinthebleakmidwinter,andthetravellingcouplestruggledthroughthecoldnight,seekingshelter.Thefather-to-bescannedtheroadsideforsomehome,someinnwherehisstrugglingcompanionmightrestsafelyforthenight.Helookedoveratherfrequently.Shelaboredalong,herwaymadeheavierbythenewlifegrowinginsideher.Theyneededawarm,dryplacesafefromthebitterwind.Whenhertimecame,itmustnotbeoutherealongtheroadway.TheirnameswerenotMaryandJoseph,butPepperandCooper.Norweretheymanandwife,butratherapairofdogs,andtheplacewasonaruralhighwayoutsideoftown.ThatDecembernight,GusKiebel,acountywildlifeofficer,wasdrivinghomefromworkwhenhespottedthepairintheflashofhisheadlights.Itwassnowingsohardthatitwasdifficulttosee,buthecouldtellthedogswerewearingcollarsandtags.Whatweretheydoingouthereonthisroad?Heparkedhistruckandapproachedtheanimals.Gussquatted(蹲下)andstretchedouthishandstothedogs,whichmadenoefforttoescape,Gusreadtheirtagsbyhistruck’sheadlights.Hepulledouthisphonetocallthenumberlisted,butitwassnowingsohardthathisscreenblurred(模糊不清的).Heplacedthedogsinhistruck,onthefloorofthepassengerside.Bythetimehecamearoundtothedriver5sside,hefoundthattheyhadclimbedontothepassengerseatandweresnuggled(依偎)togetherthere.Gusdriedhisphone,tookapictureofthepairandsentittohiswife,KatieKiebel.Thenhedialedthenumberfromthedogs’tags.AmanansweredandimmediatelygrewdefensivewhenGustoldhimwhyhewascalling.“Igavethosedogsaway,”themansaid.“They’renotmineanymore.”“Well,doyouwantthemback?”Gusasked.“No.Ican’ttakecareofthem.”Themananswered.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Thenthemanhungup._________________________________________________

“Youcannotputthembackinthesnow,”Katiesaid._________________________________________________（2023秋·山东滨州·高三统考期末）县野生动物官员格斯·基贝尔在回家的路上，遇到了两只流浪狗，以及如何和妻子一起帮助它们。

Thenthemanhungup.________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Youcannotputthembackinthesnow,”Katiesaid.________________________________________________________________________________________________________遇到两只狗——发现被遗弃——需求帮助，但失败——带回家——帮助它们度过寒冷的夜晚Thenthemanhungup.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Youcannotputthembackinthesnow,”Katiesaid.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________然后那个人挂了电话你不能把它们放回雪里，”凯蒂说。格斯想办法处理这两只狗，但是失败了，最后给妻子打电话。格斯和凯如何帮助这两只狗。Thenthemanhungup.

Gusthentriedcallingthecountydogwarden’soffice.Beingafterhours,thebesthecoulddowasleaveamessage,butwhattodonext?Gushadalwayswantedbeaglesaspets,butheandhiswifealreadyhadadogandcouldn’ttakeontwomore.Withnothinglefttodo,hecalledKatie.“Youcannotputthembackinthesnow,”Katiesaid.

KatietoldGustobringthemhome,whichisprobablywhathewashopingtohearanywaybutjustwantedconfirmation.Oncethere,thegood-heartedcouplepreparedabedfortheCooperandPepperontheirwarm,enclosedporch.Theyalsosetoutfoodandwaterforthemtoreplenishtheirenergy.Theexhausteddogssnuggledtogether,CooperliftinghiswearyheadfromtimetotimetofussoverPepper.Thetwowouldspendthenightthere,safeandwarm,untilmorningcame.（2023·浙江·高考真题）Iwasinvitedtoacookoutonanoldfriend’sfarminwesternWashington.Iparkedmycaroutsidethefarmandwalkedpastamilkinghousewhichhadapparentlynotbeenusedinmanyyears.Anoiseatawindowcaughtmyattention,soIenteredit.Itwasahummingbird(蜂鸟),desperatelytryingtoescape.Shewascoveredinspider-webs(蛛网)andwasbarelyabletomoveherwings.SheceasedherstruggletheinstantIpickedherup.Withthebirdinmycuppedhand,Ilookedaroundtoseehowshehadgottenin.Thebrokenwindowglasswasthelikelyanswer.Istuffedapieceofclothintotheholeandtookheroutside,closingthedoorsecurelybehindme.WhenIopenedmyhand,thebirddidnotflyaway;shesatlookingatmewithherbrighteyes.Iremovedthestickyspider-websthatcoveredherheadandwings.Still,shemadenoattempttofly.Perhapsshehadbeenstrugglingagainstthewindowtoolongandwastootired?Ortoothirsty?AsIcarriedheruptheblackberry-linedpathtowardmycarwhereIkeptawaterbottle,shebegantomove.Istopped,andshesoontookwingbutdidnotimmediatelyflyaway.Hovering(悬停),sheapproachedwithinsixinchesofmyface.Foraverylongmoment,thistinycreaturelookedintomyeyes,turningherheadfromsidetoside.Thensheflewquicklyoutofsight.Duringthecookout,Itoldmyhostsaboutthehummingbirdincident.Theypromisedtofixthewindow.AsIwasdeparting,myfriendswalkedmetomycar.Iwasstandingbythecarwhenahummingbirdflewtothecenterofourgroupandbeganhovering.Sheturnedfrompersontopersonuntilshecametome.Sheagainlookeddirectlyintomyeyes,thenletoutasqueakingcallandwasgone.Foramoment,allwerespeechless.Thensomeonesaid,“Shemusthavecometosaygoodbye.”注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain._____________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·浙江·高考真题）我被邀请去一个农场野餐，发现一个房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了，我把蜂鸟救了，把蜂鸟带出去的时候它迟迟不肯走，当我走到一条布满黑莓的小路时，它开始动了，但是却不肯飞走，徘徊着，后来终于飞走了，当我准备离开时，蜂鸟又飞到我面前，好像是在和我告别。

Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.想起救蜂鸟的时候——回到那个房子——想到那只蜂鸟——看见蜂鸟——蜂鸟的表现——作者的感想

Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________几个星期后，我又去了农场。我正要离开，这时蜂鸟出现了。回到农场时所看到的和所想到的。蜂鸟是如何对作者的以及作者的感想。

Afewweekslater,Iwenttothefarmagain.

AsmycarneareditmythoughtsdriftedbacktothemomentwhenIrescuedthehummingbirdfromthespider’sweb.Irushedbacktothedesertedhouse.Itwasagreatcomfortthattheoriginalholeinthewindowwasnowheretobefound.Leavingthehouse,Icouldn’thelpwonderinghowitwasgettingonnow.Haditmanagedtofinditswaybackhome,orwasitstillouttheresomewherestrugglingtosurvive?Iwasjustabouttoleavewhenthehummingbirdappeared.

Aflashofmovementcaughtmyattention.Iturnedaroundtoseethesamehummingbirdhoveringintheair.Itseemedthatthebirdwaswaitingforme,itsbeadyeyeslockedonmineasiftryingtoconveysomedeep,unspokengratitude.Ifeltasurgeofreliefandaweatthesightofthissoundandgratefulcreature,andIknewthatIwouldalwayscherishthememorieswesharedasIclimbedintomycaranddroveaway.（2023秋·湖南永州·高三永州市第一中学校考阶段练习）Ihadjustchangedintomyrunningclothesandwasleavingmyoffice,offforaruneventhoughitwaswellover38℃outside.Icouldn’texplainit,butIfelttheneedtorundespitetherecordheat.Aquarter-mileintomyjog,Iwasexhausted.Iadmitteddefeatandturnedaround.AsIapproachedmycar,Isawadogcirclingit.WhenIreachedforthedoorhandle,thedogdisappearedbeneaththecarintotheshade.Igrabbedmybottleandtookadrinkofwater.Ithengotdownonmykneestolookforthedog.WhenIstoodup,Ifoundhimsittinginthedriver’sseat,panting(喘息).Ireachedoverandstartedthecar,turningtheairconditioningonhigh.Heturnedhisfacetowardthevents,enjoyingthecoldair,hismoustacheblowing.Ipouredsomewaterintothebottlecapandofferedittothedog.Hedraineditinafewdesperategulps(一大口).Irefilleditseveraltimesbeforehehadhisfill.Heworenocollar.Iwalkedaroundbuttherewasnooneinsight.Istoodthere,lookingatthedogstaringbackatmethroughthewindow.Hewaitedpatientlyasifhe’dbeeninmycardozensoftimesbefore.Ididn’tknowwhattodo.Leavinghiminthatheatwasoutofthequestion.Hewoulddie.Idecidedtodrivehimhome.Beforewewereoutoftheparkinglot,hehadclimbedontomylap.Helookedupatme,andthenlickedmysweatyface.“Ugh!Nolicking!”Ihadneverbeenadogperson.Theysmelt,theywereloud,andtheyweremessy.Mynewly-marriedhusbandhadalreadyresignedtothefactthatwewouldneverhaveadog.Andnowonewasinmycar,onmylap!Ipulledintomydrivewayandshruggedasmyhusbandsawthedog,hiseyeswideatthisnewdevelopment.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。ItoldhimIwascallingtheanimalshelter,liftingthedogoutofthecar._________________________________________________

Tendayslater,Iwenttothesheltertobringthedoghome.（2023秋·湖南永州·高三永州市第一中学校考阶段练习）我下班后在高温的天气坚持去慢跑，慢跑1/4英里后有些筋疲力尽，回到自己的车旁，发现了一只避暑的小狗，这只小狗上了作者的车，作者在车上照顾着它，虽然作者不喜欢狗，但善良的她不忍心将它抛弃在高温之中，所以带它回家，结果作者的丈夫见后感到很惊讶。

ItoldhimIwascallingtheanimalshelter,liftingthedogoutofthecar.Tendayslater,Iwenttothesheltertobringthedoghome.给收容所打电话——狗的表现——有些不舍得感觉——决定收养小狗——去收容所带狗回家——感悟ItoldhimIwascallingtheanimalshelter,liftingthedogoutofthecar.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Tendayslater,Iwenttothesheltertobringthedoghome.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________我告诉他我正在打电话给动物收容所，把狗从车里带出来。十天后，我去收容所把狗带回家。决定把狗送到收容所后狗狗的表现以及作者的决定。去接狗回家时，小狗的表现以及以后与狗相处的情况。

ItoldhimIwascallingtheanimalshelter,liftingthedogoutofthecar.Wesattogetherwaitingforshelterworkers,whilethedogdidn’tmoveexcepttolickmyface.Strangely,Iwasalreadystartingtolikethisfeeling.Ipettedhim,comfortinghimthateverythingwouldbeokay.Whentheshelterworkersarrived,herosesuddenly,andthenloweredhiseyesdisappointedly.Seeingthesweetdogloadedontothevan,pattingonthewindowhelplessly,Ifeltamixtureofreliefandsadness.MyheartspokebeforeIknewit,“Ifheisn’tclaimed,I’lladopthim.”Tendayslater,Iwenttothesheltertobringthedoghome.

Atthesightofme,hecircledaroundme,wagginghistailandlickingmyhandscheerfully.AsIopenedthedoor,hecouldn’twaittojumpontotheseatashedidonthedaywefirstmet.Onourarrival,myhusbandhadalreadypreparedacozyhutforhim.Inthefollowingdays,hefollowedmeeverywhere,expressinghisgratitudetohaveahome.ButIfeltIwastheonetobegrateful,fortheopportunitytoexperiencesuchanunexpectedbondwithananimal.（2023广东二模）Itallbeganwhenmyyoungerbrother,Chris,andIwentovertoUncleHoward’sforThanksgiving.Whenwefinallygottomyuncle’s,ChrisandIwentoutsidetoseeifUncleHowardneededhelpwithanything.SinceChriswasonlynine,hegottheeasierjobofcleaningupthewateringcans.Iwastwelve,oldenoughtohelploadthewheelbarrow(手推车).ButwestillfoundtimetoaskUncleHowardalotofquestionsaboutturkeys.Hemusthavebeenimpressed,becausewhenwewerefinished,hewinkedatmydadandhandedusoneturkeyegg.“Youkidsputthisunderahatchinghen,”hesaid,“andintwenty-fivedays,you’llhaveafineturkey!”Chriswassoexcitedthathenearlydroppedtheeggonthewayhome.Dadputtheeggunderanoldhen,andeverydayChrisandIwouldchecktoseeifithadhatchedyet.Twenty-fivedaysseemedlikeforever.Finally,onthetwenty-sixthday,ChrisandIwalkedintothecoop(鸡舍)afterschooltofindtheoldhenscratchingonthefloor.Behindherwasoneballoffluff(绒毛),fallingoveritsfeetandlookingsortofconfusion.Whenitgotolder,wecouldtellthatitwasatom.WenameditTimothy.Timothygrewandgrew,dashingtowardsthefeedwethrewout.Helikedtowanderinthewoodsandfindtastyberriesandweedseeds.MomkepttellingusnottogettooattachedtoTimothy,becauseweweregoingtohavehimforThanksgiving.Butweneverpaidtoomuchattentiontowhatthatreallymeant.Then,onedaytowardtheendofOctober,DadgaveChrisandmeinstructions.“Iwantyoutostartgivinghimcornalongwithhisregularfeed,”hesaid.“Wewantanice,thick-fleshedbirdforThanksgiving.”AfterDadturnedandwalkedaway,Chris’sfacebegantowrinkle,justasitdoesbeforehestartstocry.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。IcomfortedChris,sayingwecouldhideTimothywherepeoplecouldn’tfindhim.________________________________________________________________