考研英语冲刺作文部分

冲刺作文部分

1.历年考试主要涉及一些generaltopics,如爱心(2001)、成长(2003)、

代沟(1992)、友谊(1994)、家庭(2005)、承诺(1998)、崇拜(2006)、

健康(1996)、资源利用(2000)、文化交流(2002)等话题。考生要以小见大,

从图片细节中提炼升华出大型宏观主题加以议论，分析原因、利弊并得出建议。

命题中的图片和图表往往是单个或局部情况，但只追逐个别现象，分析就没有了

深度，往往要追溯到总体情况。即使2006年考题图画中有英国球星Beckham的

发型,也要升华到对普遍的偶像崇拜(idolworship)现象的评价，而非仅仅针

对Beckham个人。命题从来不在个别事件、具体环节或细枝末节上做文章，决不

会细到介绍北京经济适用房建设情况或点评《满城尽带黄金价》。

2.内容贴近日常生活和简单社会常识：

考题要顾及到全国考生的知识水平，不同专业考生的知识共性，不可能考察太专

业或太偏的话题。所以内容以个人生活体验为主，如爱心、成长、友谊、养老、

健康等等；稍微复杂一点的话题如环保、保护野生动物、文化交流也只需要考生

大致地通过常识进行判断、分析和点评，点到为止就可以，关键要在语言的精确

度和精彩度上下工夫。大作文写作时间只有30-40分钟，不可能象论文一样挖

掘详细的数据、考证具体年代地点或提出标新立异的思想。2000年“世界商业

捕鱼简史”命题有点难度，但考生无须关注商业捕鱼的历史变迁和具体现状，不

用借助数据或案例，只对两张图片中鱼群的多少进行大致对比，并指出人类过度

开发资源的问题就到位了。160-200字的字数限制也只能让考生分析到一般深

3t考生的观点态度要走经过设计的“主流”路线：

图画作文和图表作文的主旨好像是个谜语，命题人已经把自己的观点倾向浓缩到

了图片中，通过图画图表来使主旨模糊化，需要考生在5分钟内审题，进行常

识判断并加以破解。主旨往往具有“positive”的倾向，考生需要在图画寓意中

发现哲理或是思考问题的积极解决方案。绝不可能向国外考试那样，学生可以通

过脑筋急转弯给出另类的观点。在构思的时候往往要走‘‘主流”路线，才能提供

符合命题人思路的正确观点，从而顺利得分。考生准备了一年英语，不可能凭借

奇思异想过度冒险。例如：2001年“爱心是一盏灯”话题，考生通过构思要得

出助人为乐的判断，如果考生论证出要对自己有爱心，为了个人利益而不顾他人,

必然按跑题处理。2004年“终点又是新的起点”，考生必须破解出坚持不懈、

发展与进步的主旨。如果考生持个人观点，认为终点不一定是新的起点，并加以

论证，这样的写作注定要失败，因为违背了命题人的初衷。2005年考题主旨是

养老，如果考生认为父母都要象美国老年人那样独立生活，不依赖子女，这种崭

新的观念是不会被考官接受的。2006年偶像崇拜主题，考生要以成熟的主流心

态，写出'择其优而学之，避免盲目崇拜’的观点，如果考生持认为花300元

理个小贝头很值，展现个性，结果就会由于“不懂事，不明事理”而被阅卷老师

以跑题处理。

4.命题不会涉及时事政治或敏感话题：

正是因为日常生活话题容易判断是非，所以考官尽量通过主旨浓缩来让考生进行

猜谜。而时事政治话题错综复杂，是非曲直一时难以断定，观点倾向缺乏普遍共

识，不方便作为考题，否则争议不断，难为了命题人和阅卷者。敏感的话题还怕

冒政治倾向错误的风险，更不会让考生去乱发议论。最近考生在网站上猜测考题,

居然猜向了伊朗朝鲜核试验、联合国秘书长改选、泰国政变、天下围攻陈水扁、

处决萨达姆、恐怖事件等。说实话，这些政治时事离考研命题太遥远了，国际时

事并非考试关注焦点，而国内民生动态到是还有参考价值，部分民生环保问题如

何解决是读报浏览的关键。某些话题虽不是政治话题，但不利于安定团结，也不

一定成为考题，如腐败猖獗、失业人数增长、爱滋病扩散、自杀现象增多、恶搞

艺术作品、家庭暴力、离婚率提高等等。有些话题涉及到隐私，也属于讨论的禁

区，如性问题，同性恋问题。或许若干年以后，中国民众的意识形态足够开放了，

这些网络话题也就可以在考试中探讨了。

5.命题中的“和谐社会”倾向：

在以上分析的基础上，我们重新审视历年考题的命题，发现以中老年教授组成的

命题团队普遍趋向常规主流观点。那么考题围绕着时代背景和主流思想，已经逐

渐形成了以“和谐社会”为核心的命题思路。只不过总体以和谐作为公式的话题

可以分成和谐的三个不同层次：

个体和谐发展：

自信的重要性、节俭与浪费、如何看待成功、梦想与现实、抄袭（plagiarism）

与诚信、高分低能现象、职业选择和规划、

个人、他人与社会的和谐共处：

个性与团队合作、如何看待竞争、网络的利弊、伪劣商品问题（fake

commodities-商家为牟利而危害社会）、乱收费问题、如何看待中国传统节

日和洋节

人类与自然环境的和谐：

私家车的利弊（噪音空气污染、交通阻塞）、环境污染话题（空气、水、噪

音、土壤、人类食品）、乱砍滥伐问题、人类对历史古迹的破坏及保护

另外，不论何种命题，都要从简洁的图画中寻找线索并推理解决。针对很少练习

图画作文构思的考生，建议近期可上网查寻一下中国新闻漫画网，寻找一些幽默

讽刺图画，练习快速推理，查找问题所在，同时进行相关词联想，熟能生巧。稍

加练习，便会发现一些惯性推理技巧，考试时就会大大减轻紧张感，从容不迫地

进行构思和创作。

评分标准：本题以总体评分法，通篇分档计分，计分标准如下：

20—17分内容切题，包括题中所列的各项要求：清楚表达其内涵，文字连

贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。文章长度符合要求。

16—13分内容切题，包括题中所列的各项要求；比较清楚地表达其内涵，

文字基本连贯；句式有一定变化，句子结构和用词错误较少。文章长

度符合要求。

12-9分内容切题，基本包括题中所列的各项要求；基本清楚地表达其内

涵：句子结构和用词有一些错误。文章长度符合要求。

8—5分内容基本切题，基本包含题中所列的各项要求，语句可以理解，但

有较多的句子结构和用词错误。文章长度基本符合要求。

4一1分基本按要求写作，但只有少数句子可理解。

0分文不切题，语句混乱，无法理解。

第一章

A词汇

一语天然万古新

豪华落尽见真醇

A1

1Differentdiversecolorfulvariousalargevarietyof

2.finishachieveaccomplishimplementfulfill

3refuserejectobjectdeclinethelastthinganythingbut

4.followseekchasepursueexploretrace

5.samealikeequivalentidenticalsimilar

6.smallslimtinyminuteminorinsignificant

7.clearobvioustransparentknowntoallwell-believedwidely-held

8.emptyvacantblankidlebarehollow

9.encourageinspirestimulateimpulsemotivate

10.badluckdisastermisfortunetragedygriefsorrow

11.onlysoleuniquesinglelonelyunique

12.troubleconfusedisturbpuzzle

13.showillustratedemonstrateindicaterevealilluminate

14.mistakeflawerrorfaultweaknessdefect

14.dutyobligationresponsibilityliabilitycharge

15.copysimulateimitateduplicate

16.joinassemblycrowdaccumulateassemble

17.missneglectignorediscardabandoncancelbypass

18.nowpresentup-to-datecontemporarynowadays

19.worrymercybitternesssympathyconcern

20.valuabledesirableadvisablepricelessfeasible

21.greatgiantextraordinarytremendous,considerable

22.argumentdebatecontroversydiscussion

23.provepileuptoshowjustifypointtolendsupporttoillustrate

24.payattentiontobringintofocusinthelimelightemphasizeon

putimportanceon

25.deepmeaningsymbolicmeaningimplicationsocialmessage

understanding

26.hardcomplexcomplicatedinterrelated

27.producecreateleadtocausegiverisetobringabout

28.mainunderlyingrootleadingfundamentalprimary

29.seriousdreadfulterriblehorribleawfulalarmingpernicious

30.becauseonthegroundsthatgivenconsideringowingtothanksto

dueto

31.succeedindoingtrysuccessfullytodobetriumphantindoing

dosthwithflyingcolorsvictory

32.ifgivenprovidedthatsolongasonconditionof

33.dealwithcopewithcorrectfightstruggleagainst

34.situationcircumstancephenomenoncondition

35.methodapproachwaymeansremedystepsmeasure

36.beliefawarenessrecognitionrealizationperspective

37.longpersistentcontinuoussustainedconsistentpersevering

38.famousprominentoutstandingexcellentaccomplished

39.manyhostofagoodmanyplentyofacrowdofalargesum

ofaseriesofasetofasuccessionof

40.symbolizeepitomizerepresentberelatedtostandfor

热门和时鬣词汇

•素质教育educationforall-rounddevelopment

•豆腐渣工程jerry-builtprojects

•可持续性发展sustainabledevelopment

•风险投资riskinvestment

•通货紧缩deflation

•通货膨胀inflation

•扩大内需toexpanddomesticdemand

,计算机辅助教学computer-assistedinstruction(CAI)

•网络空间cyberspace

,虚拟现实virtualreality

,电脑犯罪computercrime

•电子商务thee-business

•网上购物shoppingonline(on-lineshopping)

•应试教育exam-orientededucation

•学生减负toreducestudyload

•全国人民代表大会(简称全国人大)NationalPeople飞Congress(NPC)

•全国人大代表deputytotheNationalPeople'sCongress

•中国人民政治协商会议全国委员会(简称全国政协)NationalCommitteeofthe

ChinesePeople'sPoliticalConsultativeConference(CPPO

•中国政协委员memberoftheNationalCommitteeofCPPCC

•政府工作报告government'sworkreport

•新闻发布会pressconference

•弱势群体disadvantagedgroups(例句：Specialemployment

,assistanceshouldbegiventomembersofdisadvantagedgroups.应对弱

势群体给予特殊的就业援助

•加快经济结构调整accelerateeconomicrestructuring

•城镇社会保障体系urbansocialsecuritysystem

•下岗职工基本生活费subsistenceallowancesforlaid-offworkers

,离退休人员基本养老金basicpensionsforretirees

•特困行业和企业industriesandenterprisesindirestraits

•全球经济衰退theglobaleconomicslump

•医疗改革healthcarereform

•扩大内需,刺激消费expanddomesticdemandandconsumption

•乡镇企业townshipenterprises.

•关贸总协定(世界贸易组织的前身)GATT(GeneralAgreementonTariffsand

Trade)

•世界贸易组织WTO(WorldTradeOrganization)

,最惠国待遇(现通常称“正常贸易关系”)MFN(most-favored-nation)treatment

•实行国民待遇grantthenationaltreatmentto

•粮食安全foodsecurity

•知识产权IPRs(Intellectualpropertyfights)

・最不发达国家LDCs(Least-developedcountries)

•AA制Dutchtreatment；goDutch

•奥委会OlympicCommittee

•艾滋病(获得性免疫缺陷综合征)AIDS(AcquiredImmuneDeficiencySyndrome)

•爱心工程LovingCareProject

•爱鸟周Bird-LovingWeek.

•爱国统一战线patrioticunitedfront

•安理会SecurityCouncil

•按劳分酉己distributionaccordingtoone'sperformance

•按揭购房tobuyahouseonmortgage；tomortgageahouse

,BP机beeper；pager

•手机mobilephone

,霸权主义hegemonism

•脱贫shakeofpoverty；liftoneselffrompoverty

•拜金主义moneyworship

•版权法copyrightlaw

•白色污染whitepollution

•笔记本电脑notebookcomputer

・贬值devalue,devaluate,depreciate(ofacurrency)

•毕业生分配制度assignmentofgraduates

•闭关政策closed-doorpolicy

•蹦迪discodancing

•保持国民经济发展的良好势头maintainagoodmomentumofgrowthinthe

nationaleconomy

•保护生态环境preservetheecologicalenvironment

•保护主义protectionism

,保健食品health-carefood

•北约NATO(theNorthAtlanticTreatyOrganization)

•不明飞行物unidentifiedflyingobject(UFO)

•重复建设buildingredundantprojects；duplicationofsimilarprojects

•菜篮子工程shoppingbasketprogram

,产权明晰、权责明确、政企分开、科学管理clearlyestablishedownership,

welldefinedpowerandresponsibility,separationofenterprisefrom

administration,andscientificmanagement

•产品科技含量technologicalelementofaproduct

•(奥运)筹备委员会(Olympic)preparatorycommittee

•充值卡rechargeablecard

•畅通工程SmoothTrafficProject

•从粗放经济转变为集约经济shiftfromextensiveeconomytointensive

economy

•促进全球经济-一体化fosterintegrationwiththeglobaleconomy

•春运(passenger)transportduringtheSpringFestivalaroundtheChinese

lunarnewyear

•大学生仓ij业universitystudents9innovativeundertaking

,(食物)打包usedoggybagstotakefoodhome

•打假crackdownoncounterfeitgoods/fakeproducts

•带薪假期paidholiday

•盗版VCDpiratedVCD

•电话会议teleconference

•第三产业tertiaryindustry；servicesector

•倒计时countdown

•地球村globalvillage

•地方保护主义regionalprotectionism

•多媒体multimedia

,恶性循环viciouscircle

•厄尔尼诺现象ElNinophenomenon

,防伪标志anti-fakelabel

,防洪工程flood-preventionproject

•风险投资venturecapital；riskinvestment

•疯牛病madcowdisease

•扶贫povertyalleviation

•反弹道导弹条约Anti-ballisticMissileTreaty(ABM)•

•反腐倡廉combatcorruptionandbuildacleangovernment

•福利彩票welfarelotteries

•福利分房welfare-orientedpublichousingdistributionsystem

•复合型人才inter-disciplinarytalent

•个人所得税personalincometax

•高新技术产业开发区highandnewtechnologyindustrialdevelopmentzone

,国民生产总值grossnationalproduct(GNP)

,国民经济支柱产业pillarindustriesinnationaleconomy•

•国内生产总值grossdomesticproduct(GDP)

一.说明现象

1.Recentlythephenomenonofhasarousedgreatconcernand

shouldbegivenenoughconsideration.

2.Recentlytheproblemofhasbeenbroughtintofocus/broughttopublic

attention.

3.Avirtualepidemicoftheisnowunderinthesociety

4isanotherofthenewandbittertruthswehavetofacenow.

5.Manisnowfacingwithabigproblem,whichisbecomingmoreand

moreserious.

6.Withthedevelopmentofmodernindustry,moreandmorepeopleare

concernedabouttheproblemof

7.Inthepastfewyears,atendofhasbeenbecomingmoreandmore

clear.

二.发表现点与看法

1.IfullyagreewiththestatementthatThereasonsarechieflyasfollows.

2.AlthoughmanypeoplebelievethatIdoubtwhethertheargumentbears

muchanalysis.

3.Althoughthepopularbeliefisastudyindicates

4.somepeoplesuggestButwhatthesepeoplefailtounderstandis

5.fromapersonalperspective,Ipreferto

6.Itistruethatbutapointisbeingleftoutofour

consideration.

7.Inordertoanswerthequestionofapersonmustweightwosides.

三..对立观点

l.Differentpeoplehave(hold)differentviews(opinions/pointsofview)onthis

issue(problem/matter/question)

2.Somebelieve...Othersthink,Stillothersclaim(assume9have,hold,claim,

believe,maintain,takeastandon)

3.Theyarequitedifferentfromeachotherininterpretingtheissue.

4.AsfarasIamconcerned(AsfarasIknow)

5.1havetotakeotherfactorsintoconsiderationifIamconfrontedwithsucha

difflcultchoice.

四.主题句常用句型

Litisimportant(necessary,urgent,difficult,easy,convenient,comfortable,

expensive,desirable,advisable)forsb.todosth.(that)

Eg.

Itisinevitablethatthenaturalresourcesthroughouttheworldarediminishing

asthedemandforthemisontheincrease

Itisobviousthatthestrengthofacountry'seconomyisdirectlyboundupwith

theefficiencyofitsindustryandagriculture.

Itisurgentforthegovernmenttotakemeasurestocontrolthebirthrateinour

country.

Itisdesirabletobuildmorehospitals,shoppingcenters,recreationcenters,

cinemas,andotherpublicfacilitiestomeettheincreasingneedsofthepeople.

2.Nothingintheworldcandelightmesomuchas

3.Intheageofinformationandcommunication,thecomputerplaysasignificant

role.

4.Nothingismoreimportantthan

5.onecannotemphasizetheimportanceofsomuch

6・・Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...

Itgoeswithoutsayingthatexercisesareagoodwaytokeephealthy.

五.原因解释

1.Itmaybeattributedtothefollowingthreepoints.

2.Thedeteriorationofecologicalsystemmaybeattributedtothefollowing

leadingfactors.Firstofall,...

Secondly,Lastbutnotleast...

3.Acarefulanalysisofthechartsabovemayexplainwhythenumberofspecies

ofwildlifeisonthedeclineandtherateofwildlifeextinctionisaccelerating.

4.Itisnoeasyjobtofindthereasonforthistendencywhichinvolvesseveral

complicatedfactors.

5.Therearemanyreasonsresponsibleforthisinstance,andthefollowingarethe

typicalones.Foronething,Inaddition,Themainreasonisthat

6.Oneofthereasonsthatisgivenfor...isthat

7.AfurtherreasonwhyIadvocateanattitudeof...isthat

8..Anincreaseindemandcauses(resultsin/leadsto/produces)higherprices,

whichaggravatespeople'sfinancialburden.

六.列举、举例表达方式

l.Forexample,womenareholdinghigherpositionsinpoliticalandeconomic

power.

2.Forinstance,theeconomicstatusofthepeoplehasbeengreatlyimproved.

3.Take...forexample,...

4.Acaseinpointis….

S.Thefollowingexamplemaywellillustratethepoint,(show,demonstrate)

6….isagoodcaseinpoint.

7.Thischartshows(diagram,table,graph,form,picture,cartoon,bars)

七.结论性

1.Fromwhathavebeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelyarriveatthe

conclusion

2.Takingintoaccountallofthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusionthat

3.Tosumuptheaboveargument,Ithinkaproperattitudetowardsis

that

4.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iwillchoosetobecausethechoicefitsmy

personalityandmylife-longbelief.

5.judgingfromalltheevidenceavailable,wemaysafelycometotheconclusion

that..

6.Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoutweighthe

negativeones.

Therefore,Iwouldlike

八.后果性

1Nodoubt,ifweignoretheproblem,thereiseverychancethatwill

beputindanger.

2.wemustsearchforaquickaction,becausethepresentsituationofJf

allowedtoproceed,willcertainlyleadto

3.Ifwecannottakeusefulmeans,wemaynotcontrolthistrend,andsome

undesirableresultsmaycomeoutunexpectedly,sowhatweshoulddo

is

4.Inordertocrackthenuts,youneedconfidence,perseveranceandalso

courage.Whatismoreimportant,carefulconsiderationshouldbegiven

beforeyoucarryoutmeasures.

九.建议性“

1.ItishightimethatHerearesomeofthemeasuresthatmightbetaken

immediately.

2.Althoughitisaffectedbymanyfactors,stilltherearecertainwaysthatcan

makethesituationbetter.ThemostimportantisAnotherway

isstillanotherwayis

3.NoeasymethodcanbeathandtosolvetheproblemofButthe

commonrecognitionoftheimportanceofmightbethefirststepon

therightway.

4.Manysolutionsareofferedhere,allofthemmakesomesense,butnonis

adequateenough.Theproblemsshouldbestudiedindepth.

5.However,itiseasiersaidthandone.Practiceisthemostimportantfactor.

Onlywhenyoupayattentiontoitcanyouholditsoonerorlater.

6.Butthisproblemisverycomplicated.Perhapspeoplecanhardlyrelyononly

onewaytosolvetheproblemcompletely.

经典句子

1)Therehasbeenadiscussionrecentlyinthenewspaperaboutthe

picture_Simplydesignedasitis,the

symbolicmeaningthepictureconveysisdeepandprofound.Justas

thepictureshows,.

2)Drawingscanbeusefultools;asimplepicturemayrevealaprofound

truth.Theillustrationabove,forinstance,isfarfromcomplicated,

andyetcarriesdeepimplications:.Needlesstosay,

3)Withtheremarkabledevelopmentineconomyinourcountry,itis

obviousthatourlivingstandardshavebeengreatlyimproved.However,

toourgreatsurprise,theeconomicdevelopmentatthesametimeleads

tosevereenvironmentalpollution.Therefore,wearepossiblyheading

foravarietyofenvironmentaldisastersthoughitisnotourdesire

todoso.

4)Withthereformandopening-uppolicyinourcountry,peopleall

overthecountryarebecomingbetterandbetteroff.However,the

opening-uppolicyatsametimecontributestothefactthatmany

talents/technologistsandscientistsaregoingabroadfortheir

furtherdevelopment.Asamatteroffact,thebraindrainmeansagreat

lossofhumanresourcestoourcountryaswellastothedevelopment

oftheourcountry.

5)TakethefirstPresidentGeorgeWashingtonforexample.Itis

honestythathelpshimtowinhisfather'strust.Anothercasein

pointisthecriminalswhohavejustbeenarrestedbythepolice.It

theytellthetruth,theywillbemorelikelytostayinprisonfor

feweryearsthantheydeserve.Otherwise,theywillbepunishedmore

severelybylaw.

6)Sincethesocialproblemisquitetroublesome,weshouldtake

effectivestepstochangethecurrentsituation.Foronething,it

ishightimethatthepeoplealloverthecountryrealizedthe

seriousnessoftheproblem.Foranother,thegovernmentshouldissue

strictlawsandregulationssoastoputtheproblemundercontrol.

Onlywhenthegovernmentandthecitizensjointheirhandsinthe

effortscanwehopetosolvetheproblemsatisfactorily.

7)Allthathasbeendiscussedabovepointsoutanindisputablefact

that.Inotherwords,weshould,withoutanydoubt,

.However,isnottobetestifiedbythe

tongue;insteaditismanifestedinaction.Inotherwords,weshould

nothesitateamomenttotakeactionsinourdailylife.

8).Throughtheanalysisabove,itisobviousthatthepositiveaspects

faroutweighitsnegativeaspects.Whatevereffectsithas,onething

iscertain:thethingitselfisneithergoodnorbad.Itistheusage

towhichitisputthatdeterminesitsvaluetooursociety.

9)Tosolvetheproblem,boththegovernmentandsociety,Ithink,

shouldmakeasustainedeffort.Inotherwords,ifthegovernmentand

thesocietyworkhardtochangethecurrentsituation,thereiscertain

tobeanencouragingprospectinthefuture.Otherwise,theprospect

willberatherdepressingindeed.

10)Suchchangeshavehadapositiveimpactonindividualsaswell

asonthesociety.Ontheonehand,theyarefairlybeneficialtothe

rapiddevelopmentofourcountry.Ontheotherhand,theycontribute

favorablytotheimprovementofpeople'slivingstandards.

11)Itgoeswithoutsayingthattoday'sremarkabledevelopmentin

ourcountrycallsfor/appealstothechangeofthecurrentsituations

becauseproblemslikethesenotonlygreatlydisappointthepeople

butalsohamperthefuturedevelopmentofourcountry

批判危害性的框其

总共写十七个句子.

第一段四个句子,第一句宏观描述图画，并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思.

第二句写出图画最强烈的视觉效果,第三句是主题句,谈用二十个单词的

爆发力句型谈该现象对个人的发展和进步有破坏性,并引发思考,第四句

是用贬义词批判这个现象是强烈的指责.

第二段七个句子,首先第一句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点

危害或者原因，第二句谈这个现象的第一个危害，用“notonly,but

also"的五星级句子，通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性，第三个句子

谈第二个危害，通常是用一个豪华级的比较级的句子,让老师耳目一新,

通常是谈这个现象对社会的危害.第四个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害.第

五个句子谈一个代替“forexample”的十五个单词的好句子，意思是说

没有更好的例子来证明正如下文.第六个句子是例子群体的出现,谈根据

一项调查表明,80%以上的人只要从事经历过这个消极的现象一定会对个

人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句话是预测趋势的二十五个单词的钻

石级的句子,谈以下预测趋势,表明这种现象再这样下去,就会导致恶劣

的结果出现,甚至是毁灭性的后果.

第三段六个句子，第一个句子是下个结论,谈解决问题的必要性.第二个

句子是第一个建议谈的是加强立法惩治这个现象，第三个句子谈提高人

们的觉悟关于着这个现象能提高人们对这个现象的觉悟.第四个句子谈

个谚语,谈一下实践我的建议的重要性.五个句子谈解决的任重道远.第

六个句子是解决问题之后的美好的未来.

批判危害性的框架(适用大学生的心里问题).|

第一段

(1)Generallyspeaking,theillustrationaboveisfarfrom

complicatedandthemostunforgettablefeaturethatarisesin

myeyesisthat,which

seemstobecommonaroundusbutquitedisastrous.

(2)Unbelievably,thissillybutcompellingpicturedrawsattentionto

thefactthat____________________________________________________________

(3)Thereisnodenyingthatrecentfewyearshaswitnessedadeteriorating

phenomenonof(A)whichhasinducedheightenedconcernsandshouldcall

forimmediatesolutions

(4)Undoubtedly,theproblemofAasthefocusofpublicconcernmainly

resultsfromitsharmfulinfluenceonourindividual,familialandsocial

development.

第二段

(1)Asfortheissueof卜__itiscommontohearonTVandradiothatso

manycountrieslistitastheirprimaryapprehensionsinmaintainingthe

nationalsurvivalandharmoniousdevelopment.

(2)Tobeginwith,Ainourschoolsandpublicplacescannolonger

beignored.Overtheseyears,thepeople'slivingstandardshavegreatly

improved,butthedevelopmentofourcivilizationseemstofallfarbehind.

Nomatterwhereyouliveandwork,BandCareeasilyspotted.

(3)Inaddition,nothingisasdestructivetoourphysicalandmental

healthandevenourmoralvaluesasA.

BandCarethecasesinpoint,whicharedefinitelyconvincingtomake

usgainabetterinsightaboutwhathashappened.

(4)What'smore,Ainourlifeshouldberegardedassocial

malignanttumorandthegrimstatuscontradictswithoureffortstobuild

upaharmonioussociety.

(5)Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthanthecases

mentionedbelow.

(6)AccordingtoasurveymadebyDaily,83%ofyoungpeoplewhohave

everexperiencedthesituationofAwillseverelyaccusethe

phenomenonandcallforimmediatesolutions

(7)Ifwecannottakeusefulmeans,wemaynotcontrolthistrend,andsome

undesirableresultsmaycomeoutunexpectedly,wewillseethegloomy

futureof_____________

第三段

(1)NoeasymethodcanbeathandtosolvetheproblemofA.Butthecommon

recognitionoftheimportanceofeliminatingAmightbethefirststep

ontherightway.

(2)Ontheonehand,itisurgentforustostrengthentheenforcement

oflawsandregulationsandsocialsupervisionstosavesboutoftheevil

handsofA.

(3)Ontheotherhand,apublicizingeducationalcampaignshouldbe

carriedouttoenhancepeople'sawarenessabouttheharmfulnessofA.

(4)However,itiseasiersaidthandone.

(5)Althoughthefightagainstitisalong-standingandtremendoustask,

oureffortswilleventuallypayoffifwetakeactionswithourhandsand

brain.

预测范文一

第一副图一个学生在疯狂的做作业,头上冒汗,匆忙做完一些题，又马上做另外

一些，面色憔悴

一第二副也描述了这个学生在考试那天居然在住院，而且身心憔悴，并声称不想

再上学

第一段

(1)Generallyspeaking,theillustrationaboveisfarfrom

complicatedandthemostunforgettablefeaturethatarisesin

myeyesisthat,which

seemstobecommonaroundusbutquitedisastrous.

(2)Unbelievably,thissillybutcompellingpicturedrawsattentionto

thefactthat____________________________________________________________

(3)Thereisnodenyingthatrecentfewyearshaswitnessedadeteriorating

phenomenonof(excessiveburdens)whichhasinducedheightenedconcerns

andshouldcallforimmediatesolutions

(4)Undoubtedly,theproblemofstressfulassignemntsasthefocusof

publicconcernmainlyresultsfromitsharmfulinfluenceonourindividual,

familialandsocialdevelopment.

第二段

(1)AsfortheissueofoverburdensitiscommontohearonTVandradio

thatsomanycountrieslistitastheirprimaryapprehensionsin

maintainingthenationalsurvivalandharmoniousdevelopment.

(2)Tobeginwith,stressfulworkinourschoolsandpublicplacescan

nolongerbeignored.Overtheseyears,thepeople'slivingstandards

havegreatlyimproved,butthedevelopmentofourcivilizationseemsto

fallfarbehind.Nomatterwhereyouliveandwork,becomingwornout

anddevelopinganxietydisordersareeasilyspotted.

(3)Inaddition,nothingisasdestructivetoourphysicalandmental

healthandevenourmoralvaluesastoomuchpressure.

BandCarethecasesinpoint,whicharedefinitelyconvincingtomake

usgainabetterinsightaboutwhathashappened.

(4)What'smore,toomanyburdensinourlifeshouldberegardedas

socialmalignanttumorandthegrimstatuscontradictswithourefforts

tobuildupaharmonioussociety.

(5)Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthanthecases

mentionedbelow.

(6)AccordingtoasurveymadebyChinaDaily,83%ofyoungpeoplewho

haveeverexperiencedthesituationofexceedingworkwillseverely

accusethephenomenonandcallforimmediatesolutions

(7)Ifwecannottakeusefulmeans,wemaynotcontrolthistrend,andsome

undesirableresultsmaycomeoutunexpectedly,wewillseethegloomy

futureofourcitizens.

第三段

(1)NoeasymethodcanbeathandtosolvetheproblemofA.Butthecommon

recognitionoftheimportanceofeliminatingAmightbethefirststep

ontherightway.

(2)Ontheonehand,itisurgentforustostrengthentheenforcement

oflawsandregulationsandsocialsupervisionstosavesboutoftheevil

handsofA.

(3)Ontheother