2022年中考英语真题分类汇编专题21 书面表达 考点4 叙事描写类（教师版）

专题21书面表达考点4叙事描写类（一）（2022·新疆·中考真题）初中生活即将结束，静坐在考场中的你，回想三年的学习和生活，一定有许多事情给你留下美好的记忆，请选择一件你最难忘的事情写一篇短文。例如：1.一次难忘的旅行2.一次难忘的比赛3.一次难忘的志愿服务……要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范；2.文中不得出现真实人名、校名：3.词数：80-120，开头已给出，开头及标点符号不计入总词数。Lookingbackatthesepastthreeyears,Ihadalotofsweetmemories…________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Lookingbackatthesepastthreeyears,Ihadalotofsweetmemories.Lastsummervacation,Idecidedtolearntoswim.Atfirst,Iwasafraidofswimminginthewater.Ididn’tfeelgoodinthewater.Butthecoachsaidhewouldprotectme.ThenIstartedswimming,butIcouldn’tswimforwardatall.Withthecoach’shelp,Iknewhowtomoveandswimwithmyhandsandlegs.Afewdayslater,Icouldswimbymyself.Iwasveryexcitedandproudofmyself.WhatIlearnfromthisexperienceisthatnothingisimpossibleifIputmyheartintoitandtrytodoitbravely.【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要讲述一件令你最难忘的事情，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段主要讲述令你难忘的事情是什么；最后一段讲述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。（二）（2022·甘肃武威·中考真题）以“beinglost”为主题，根据以下提示信息写一篇80词左右的短文。Thepicturesareprovidedtohelpyouthinkaboutthistopic.Payattentiontothefollowingpointswhenyouplanyourcomposition.●WherewasMary?●WhatwasMarydoing?●Whathappenedtoher?●WhatdidMaryfeelwhenseeinghermother?Thefollowingwordsmayhelpyou:●crowdedwithvisitors●sointerestedintheanimals●noonearound●turnto…要求：1.条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；2.文中不能出现其他人名和地名等信息；3.在答题卡的相应位置作答。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:MarywenttothezoowithhermotheronalovelySundayafternoon.Thezoowascrowdedwithvisitors.Nearthegateofthezoostoodtwoprettygiraffes.Maryhadneverseensuchamazinganimalsbefore.Shewassointerestedintheanimalsthatshelookedateverysmallmovementofthemcarefully.Afterawhile,shewantedtotellhermotherwhatshe’dfoundabouttheseanimals.However,shenoticedtherewasnoonearound.Shewasafraidandworried,butsherememberedthathermothertoldhernottomovewhenbeinglost.Soshewaitedforhermotherjustatthegateofthezoo.Soonafter,shesawhermotherwalkingtothegateanxiously.Whenseeinghermother,Marywashappyandrantohermother.【详解】1.

题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，结合图片提示进行详细地描述故事的发生以及过程及结果，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.

写作指导：写作时要紧密结合所给出的要点内容，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。（三）（2022·湖南湘潭·中考真题）亲爱的同学，恭喜你即将毕业。在过去的三年初中学习中，你的老师教导、关心、帮助过你。请你选择一位老师，表达你对他（她）的感激之情。内容包括：1.你对这位老师的印象；2.你感谢他（她）的原因；3.你对他（她）的祝福。注意：1.词数在80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当举例或拓展；3.文中不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，师生名字等）。It’stimeformetosaygoodbyetomyjuniorschoollife.I’mheretosaythanksto_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：It’stimeformetosaygoodbyetomyjuniorschoollife.I’mheretosaythankstomyEnglishteacherMr.Zhang.Sheisverykindandpatient.ShehashelpedmealotinmystudiessinceIcametothisschool.WhenIwasintrouble,sheusedtoencouragemeandgivemesomegoodadvice.AtonetimeIfailedtopassanEnglishtestandIwasverysadaboutit.Shecameandcheeredmeup.ShetoldmesomegoodwaystoimprovemyEnglish.Withherhelp,IhavemadegreatprogressinEnglish.I’msothankfultoherforherkindhelpthatIwillworkharderandtrytodobetterinthefuture.Ihopeshewillbecomebetterandbetter.【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，本文开头已经给出，选择一位你想要感谢的老师，表达感激之情，根据提示要点进行写作，可以适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文主要用第一人称和第三人称来描述，时态以一般过去和一般现在时为主。本文可以采用一段式写作，要求描述对老师的印象，感谢的原因以及对老师的祝福。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。（四）（2022·天津·中考真题）假如你是李华，请你给美国笔友David写一封信，讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受。（1）上周五，一棵树被大风吹倒，挡住了道路。（2）王红看到后，捡起地上的树枝，又去移动树干。（3）树干太沉，她搬不动。（4）人们过来帮忙。（5）你认为……参考词汇：被吹倒beblowndown

挡住block

树枝branch

树干trunk要求：（1）词数：80~100个。（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。DearDavid,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareastorywithyou.LastFriday,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Doyouhaveastorytotell?Hopetohearfromyou.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearDavid,Howareyou?I’dliketoshareastorywithyou.LastFriday,onWangHong’swayhome,shesawabigtreewasblowndownbywindanditblockedtheway.AfterWangHongsawit,shepickedupthebranchesonthegroundandthenmovedthetrunkagain.Butthetrunkwassoheavythatshecouldn’tmoveitbyherself.Whenotherpeoplesawwhatshewasdoing,theyweremovedbyherandcametohelpher.Finally,theysucceededinmovingthetrunkaway.Ithinksheisaverykindperson.Andfromthisstory,Ilearnthatweshouldoffertohelpwhensomeoneneedshelp.Itnotonlyhelpsothers,butalsomakesourselveshappy.Doyouhaveastorytotell?Hopetohearfromyou.Yours,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求根据题干中的提示内容讲述你班同学王红回家路上做的一件好事，并谈谈感受，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出，第二段具体描述她做好事的过程；第三段描述自己的感受。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。（五）（2022·云南·中考真题）ILearnedHowto________提示：人生是一个不断学习、进步的过程。通过学习，你掌握了某种技能，明白了某些道理……请以“ILearnedHowto________”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述你的一次学习经历，并谈谈你的感受。要求：1.请先将题目补全后，再作答；2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文ILearnedHowtoLearnEnglishWellAtthebeginningofmiddleschool,IalwaysgotbadgradesinEnglish.Iwasveryupsetanddidn’tknowhowtolearnitwell.Oneday,myEnglishteachertalkedtomeandunderstoodmyproblem.Shegavemesomeadvicelikespeakingmore.Fromthatday,ImadeanEnglishstudyplan.First,IlistenedtoEnglishsongsorwatchedEnglishmovies.Second,Ilistenedtoteacherinclasscarefullyandtooknotes.Thirdly,ItookpartintheEnglishcorner.IcommunicatedwithothersasmuchaspossibleinEnglish.Finally,IhavegreatprogressinEnglish.Fromthisexperience,Iknowthatwhenyoufacesomedifficulties,don’tgiveupeasily.Youshouldfindsomewaystodealwiththem.Youwillsuccessoneday.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我学会了如何学好英语”为题写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍自己在学习英语的经历；最后一段介绍自己从这次经历得到了什么感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。（六）（2022·浙江宁波·中考真题）为弘扬中华民族“劳动最光荣”的传统美德，这学期你校组织了一系列劳动实践活动(aseriesoflabouractivities)，假如你是李华，请根据表格中的信息并结合自身经历，写一篇英语短文向学校英语报投稿。注意：（1）短文必须包括表格中的所有要点，并适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（3）词数80-100；标题已给出，不计入总词数。TimeThingsIlearnedMyfeelingsMarchgrowvegetablesandplanttrees…Aprilrepairthingslikeelectricfans…May…Let’sEnjoyWorking________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Let’senjoyworking!Thisterm,Itookpartinaseriesoflaboractivitiesinourschool.IwashappythatIlearnedalot.InMarch,Ilearnedtogrowvegetablesandplanttreesonourschoolfarm.InApril,Ilearnedtorepairthingslikeelectricfansandbicycleswiththehelpofourteachers.InMay,Ilearnedtodomuchhousework,suchasmakingthebed,sweepingthefloorandfoldingclothes.Ithinkthelabouractivitiesarenotonlyeducationalbutalsouseful.I’msurethemorelifeskillsIhave,themoreindependentIwillbe.【详解】1.

题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，介绍自己参加的学校组织的一系列劳动实践活动的情况，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.

写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。（七）（2022·重庆A卷·中考真题）科学研究发现，快乐可让我们身体更健康、思维更敏捷、心态更阳光。独乐乐不如众乐乐。某英语网站以“传递快乐”为主题发起故事分享活动，请讲述生活中你通过传递快乐（直接或间接的），感染他人的小故事。要求：1.80-120词；2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考信息：1.起因，经过；2.结果，感悟；3.……_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Astudyshowsthathappinesscanmakepeoplehealthierinmindandmental.Ourpositivemoodhasaninfluenceonothers.Iwanttosharemyexperiencewithyou.

IhaveagoodfriendandhernameisLucy.Shewassoshortthatotherclassmatesalwayslaughedather.Shewasveryupset.AtthattimeIalwaystoldhersomefunnystoriestocheerherup.Andtobecometallandstrong,Ialsotaughthertokeepahealthydietanddosomeexercise.Littlebylittle,shebecameconfident.Fromthisexperience,Ilearnthathappinessisimportantanditcanbringusalotlikeamoresunnymindset.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“传递快乐”为题写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文主要采用第三人称和第一人称，时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段讲述自己传递快乐的经历；最后表达自己从这次经历的感悟。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。（八）（2022·重庆B卷·中考真题）有效控制愤怒能帮助我们恢复理智，找回方向，解决问题。你校EnglishConer将进行“ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblem”的成长分享。请你写一篇发言稿，讲述你通过有效控制愤怒，成功解决某一问题的小故事，并分享你的感悟。要求：1.80—120词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。参考词汇：angern.[U]愤怒1.有效控制愤怒，成功解决问题的小故事（起因、经过、结果）2.你的感悟（保持冷静、学会反思、有效沟通……）3.……ControlYourAngerandSolveYourProblemHaveyouevercontrolledyourangerandsolvedaproblembetter?______________________________________________________________________________________________