【课件】读后续写精彩结尾课件-2023届高三英语二轮复习

TheLastSentenceHastheFinalSayTeachingobjectives根据正面、积极、和谐原则明确文章主题；运用三种策略和常见句式，写好第二段最后一句；运用ACT原则，确定第一段最后一句

Mydad,George,onlyhadaneighthgradeeducation.Aquietman,hedidn’tunderstandmyworldofschoolactivities.Fromage14,heworked.Andhisdad,Albert,tookthemoneymydadearnedandusedittopayfamilyexpenses.Ididn’treallyunderstandhisworldeither:Hewasalivestock(牲畜)trucker,andIthoughtthatIwouldsurpass(超过)anythinghehadaccomplishedbythetimeIwalkedacrossthestageathighschoolgraduation.Summersinthemid-’70swerespentathomeshootingbaskets,hittingabaseball,orthrowingafootball,preparingformyfutureasaquarterback(四分卫)onafootballteam.Inpoorweather,Ireadaboutsportsorpracticedmytrombone(长号).ThesummerbeforemyeighthgradeIwasoneofagroupofboysthataneighboringfarmerhiredtoworkinhisfield.Heexplainedourbasictask,thetractor(拖拉机)firedupandwewereoff,ridingdownthefieldlookingforweedstospray(喷洒)withchemicals.Afterashortway,thefarmerstoppedandpointedataweedwhichwemissed.Thenwebeganagain.Thishappenedoverandover,butwesoonlearnedtoidentifydifferentgrasseslikecockleburs,lamb’s-quarters,foxtails,andthekingofweeds,theprettypurplethistle.Itwastiringwork,butIlookedforwardtothepay,eventhoughIwasn’tsurehowmuchitwouldamountto.

Athome,mydadsaid,“Ajob’sabigsteptogrowingup.I’mgladyouwillbecontributingtothehousehold.”Mydad’swordsmademerealizethatmyearningsmightnotbeminetodowithasIwished.

Mylaborslastedabouttwoweeks,andthefarmersaidtheremightbemorework,butIwasn’tinterested.IdecideditwasnotfairthatIhadtocontributemymoney.Thepaydayarrivedat

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_____________________________________________________________________Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.__________________________________________readexplorewritecharactersplot…thelogicthemecharactersplottheme…Threestepsofcontinuationwriting近三年读后续写分析卷别情节主题2022年全国卷身体残疾学生参加越野跑bravery2022年1月浙江卷与不喜欢的人分在一组做研究shareandrespect2022年6月浙江卷参与社区慈善服务love/kindness2021年全国卷为母亲做早餐love2021年1月浙江卷万圣节雕南瓜被卡住harmoniousfamilylife2020年1月浙江卷主人上大学后，狗狗伤心consideration2020年6月浙江卷与熊对抗脱险calmnessconflict/problemSolution学校生活、人间大爱、亲情……HowtoexplorethethemeTopicConflictEmotionDanger

系列和危险的动物Scaredcalmrelieved/happy…和危险的环境和危险的人Quarrel系列误解Disappointed/angrymutualunderstanding背叛观念、性格或兴趣不一致Frustration系列贫困、残疾、孤独…...失败、自卑……Sad/lonely/自卑的confident/brave…

正面、和谐、积极……Howtoexplorethetheme正面、和谐、积极……总原则成功脱险了战胜困难了和好如初了自信勇敢了……Tip1

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主题升华Paragraph1Thepaydayarrivedat

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_______________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Howtomakeagoodendinggood?策略一：首尾呼应AfunnythinghappenedtoArthurwhenhewasonthewaytoworkoneday.Whatafunnyday!Arthurcouldn'tstoplaughingwheneverhelookedbackonthisfabulousexperience.开头：结尾：策略二：名言警句Itisduringourdarkestmomentsthatwemustfocustoseethelight.Greatworksareperformednotbystrength,butperseverance.Don'tjudgeeachdaybytheharvestyoureapbutbytheseedsthatyouplant.Howtomakeagoodendinggood?策略三：情感升华Apatient,inhis80s,hurriedtothenursinghometoeatbreakfastwithhiswife,whohadaspecialdiseaseandcouldn’trecognizehimforfiveyears.Hesaid:“Shedoesn’tknowme,butIknowwhosheis.”ThemetrueloveTrueloveisacceptanceofallthatis.Thehappiestpeopledon’tnecessarilyhavethebestofeverything.Theyjustmakethebestofeverythingtheyhave.Lifeisn’tabouthowtolivethroughthestorm,buthowtodanceintherain.Howtomakeagoodendinggood?常用句式Onlythen____itdawnonmethatweshouldnevertakeloveforgranted.Itwasthisunforgettableexperience_____mademerealizethatonlybyteamwork/byworkinginateam______wewinthecompetition.Determinationandoptimismare______ittakestoconqueryourfearandaccomplishyourgoal.Tough_____theprocesswas,shepersistedonitdesperately.Ourfamilyis______thebranchesofatree.Wemaygrowindifferentdirections,yetourrootsremainasone.It'snevertoolatetogoforyourdream.____________yougraspeveryopportunityandtakefulladvantageofit,youwillstandachancetorealizeyourdreams.7.______________histimelyhelp,Iwouldn’thavesucceeded.Howtomakeagoodendinggood?didthatcanwhataslikeAslongasWithout/Butfor倒装强调虚拟从句…fromthenon+行动Fromthenon,Iplacedajackandsomecommontoolsinmycar.Whenmeetingpeopleinneedontheroad,Iwouldtrymybesttohelpthemlikethefamily.Onlyinthisway,couldmoreandmorepeoplehelpeachotherinthefuture.Howtomakeagoodendinggood?半路车坏，好心人帮忙动作+感动+感悟Sheheldthepaperbagtightly,tearsrollingdownwithoutcontrol.Itislovethatmakestheworldgoaround,whichshefeltdeepinherheart.Exercise1Paragraph1Thepaydayarrivedat

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________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2Iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout._________________________________________________________________________Howtomakeagoodendinggood?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourversion我们在改变之前，可能会有一些自卑的心理阻碍着我们成长，比如自己的外貌的缺陷，性格内向等，如何克服自卑，实现人生逆袭？IsmiledasIeventuallyrealizedtherealsourceofconfidence.Now,IamproudofwhatIlooklikeandmuchhappier,becauseIhaverealizeditisyourpersonalitythatdecideswhoyoutrulyare.Exercise2Yourversion______________________________________________________________________________________________________________HowtowritethelastsentenceofthefirstparagraphAnalyzethefirstsentenceofthe2ndparagraphCirclethekeywordsThinkaboutthecohesion(衔接)andtakethesente