高一英语概要写作材料选编

欢迎下载欢迎下载高一英语故事续写训练（1）Gettingridofdirt,intheopinionofmostpeople,isagoodthing.However,thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercouldopenuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublicbaths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.SodidthekingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEuropelivedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Uponlearningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackofdisease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.Thoughthebeliefinthemerit（好处）ofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18century.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingarepracticalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshavemovedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWarII.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea:clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehatefordirt,however,gonetoofar?Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervouslytrytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsibleforthespreadofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist（免疫学家）,encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthelatter（后者）positionisgainingsomeground.Onepossibleversion：Peoplehavemixedopinionstowardsdirtonourskin.（要点1）Foralongtimeinhistory,peopleofsomeEuropeancountries,suchasFrance,believedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill.（要点2）However,peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtabout200yearsago.Peoplehavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepushealthy.（要点3）However,somescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem.（要点4）【范文点拨】（一）要点分析1.文章第一段就是本篇文章的主题句，亮明了总的观点：However,thereisnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.换句话说：Differentpeoplehavedifferentattitudestowardsdirt.再结合下文谈到的主题可知Differentpeoplehavedifferentattitudestowardsdirtontheskin.范文中的要点1“Peoplehavemixedopinionstowardsdirtonourskin.”概括非常精炼。第二段主要谈到了在16世纪，人们认为dirtontheskinwasameanstoblockoutdisease，尤以英、法两国的贵族为代表。结合第三段第一句Thoughthebeliefinthemeritofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolongerbeenregardedasaniceneighboreversince18century.可知，直到18世纪之前，人们都认为dirt是很“友好的”，有助于预防疾病。范文中的要点2“Foralongtimeinhistory,peopleofsomeEuropeancountries,suchasFrance,believedthatdirtprotectedpeoplefromgettingill.”很好地总结了这些要点。第三段用Though引出人们对dirt观点的转变“…巧incethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth."再结合本段最后一部分Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea…可得出要点3“However,peoplebegantochangetheirattitudestodirtabout200yearsago.Peoplehavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffourbodycankeepushealthy.”文章最后一段第一句指出，现在人们对于dirt的态度还是有所不同，Onthecontrary引出专家的观点，一位免疫学家认为dirt有助于增强免疫系统。这一观点获得了一些支持。范文中的要点4“However,somescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirtmayhelpourimmunesystem."表达很恰切。（二）要点连接文章概要，在写完了要点之后，下一步的工作就是要把这些要点用适当的连接词进行连接，使上下句之间具有连贯性。本篇文章整篇结构是总分的结构，要点2和要点3在观点上截然相反，因此，之间需要表示转折的连接词，范文用了However恰到好处。要点3和要点4在观点上又存在不同，因此，还是用表转折的连接词However。不过小编认为，此处用Nevertheless可以避免三句话内出现两次However。（三）关键词汇第一段：fixed（确定的；不变的）第二段：means（手段，方法）,blockout（挡住）,openup（打开）,upon（之后；立即）第三段:long-lived（长期存在的）,selltheidea（说服某人接收某个观点）第四段：warnoff（警告某人不要靠近）,position（观点）,gainsomeground（取得优势）以上这些关键词对于整篇文章的理解与转化成自己的语言都很关键，如果不能准确领会其用意，语篇理解的效果会大打折扣。所以，概要写作的基础是理解语篇，而读懂语篇的基础是词汇，尤其是对关键词汇的掌握与运用。在此基础上，综合运用语法与句法结构，按照行文逻辑组织语言，形成概要。读后续写训练六篇：一、读后续写（25分）Afarmergrewsomevegetablesinhisgarden.Onedayhiswifewasillandhehadnomoney.Hehadtosellsomecabbagesandcarrotsinthemarket.Thenextmorninghetooktwobasketsofvegetablestotown.Butitwasraininghardthatafternoonandtherewerefewpeopleinthestreet.Whenhisvegetablesweresoldout,itwasdark.Heboughtsomemedicineandhurriedtohisvillage.Onhiswayhomehesawapersonlyingonthesnow.Heplacedhisbasketsonthegroundandwasgoingtohelpthepersontogetup.Atthattimehefounditwasadeadmanandtherewasmuchbloodonhisbody.Hewassoafraidthatheranawayquickly,withouttakingthebasketswithhim.Thenextafternoonthefarmerwassenttothepolicestation.Havingshownthebaskets,anofficerasked,“Aretheseyours”“Yes,sir.”thefarmeransweredtimidly（胆怯地）.“Haveyoukilledtheman”“No,no,sir.”thefarmersaidinahurry.“Whendidyouseethedeadman”“Aboutsevenlastevening.”“Didyouseewhokilledtheman”“No,sir.”Theofficerbroughtoutaknifeandasked,“Haveyouseenityet”“No,sir.”Theofficerbecameangryandtoldthepolicementobeathimupandsenthimintoprison.theofficerwantedtotrapthefarmerintotheconfession（供认），butthefarmerdidn'tadmithewasthemurderer.、:I.注意：所续写的短文词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Theofficerwassoangrythatheaskedthepolicemantobeathimupagain.Thefarmerwaslucky.Afewdayslater,参考范文:Paragraph1Theofficerwassoangrythatheaskedthepolicemantobeathimupagain.Thefarmerwasveryafraid,hethoughthewouldbesentencedtodeathbykillingpeople,buthedidn't,hewasinnocent.Hemusttellpeoplethetruth,butnoonecouldhearhisvoice.hehopedthatsomeonecouldcomeandsavehim.Paragraph2Thefarmerwaslucky.Afewdayslater,ayoungmancametothepolicestationwithalotofjournalists,sayingthathesawthemurderer.Itwasthepoliceofficerwhokilledthemanonthesnow!Hesawthepoliceofficeusedaknifekillingthemanlateintheevening.hewassofrightenedandranaway.Buttheyoungmanthoughtthefarmerwasinnocent.Sohetookthegreatcouragetoexposetherealcriminal.Aftertheinvestigation,theyoungmanwasright.Thepoliceofficerwassentintoprisonandthepolicemanwhobeatupthefarmerwasfired,andthebraveyoungmanwasregardedastheherobythevillagers二、读后续写（25分）Iwasrespondingtoacallfromasmallbrickflatinaquietpartoftown.IassumedIwasbeingsenttopickupsomeparty-goers，orsomeonewhohadjusthadafightwithalover，oraworkerheadingtoanearlyshiftatsomefactoryfortheindustrialpartoftown.WhenIarrivedat2：30a.m.，thebuildingwasdarkexceptforasinglelightinagroundfloorwindow.Undersuchcircumstances,manydriversjusthonk（按喇叭）onceortwice，waitaminute，thendriveaway.ButIhadseentoomanyweakpeoplewhodependedontaxisastheironlymeansoftransportation.Unlessasituationsmelledofdanger，Ialwayswenttothedoor.Thispassengermightbesomeonewhoneedsmyassistance，Ireasonedtomyself.SoIwalkedtothedoorandknocked.“Justaminute，”answeredafrail，elderlyvoice.Icouldhearsomethingbeingdraggedacrossthefloor.Afteralongpause，thedooropened.Asmallwomaninher80sstoodbeforeme.Shewaswearingaprintdressandapillboxhat，likesomebodyoutofa1940smovie.Byhersidewasasmallnylonsuitcase.Theapartmentlookedasifnoonehadlivedinitforyears.Allthefurniturewascoveredwithsheets.Therewerenoclocksonthewalls，noequipmentonthecounters.Inthecornerwasacardboardboxfilledwithphotosandglassware.“Wouldyoucarrymybagouttothecar？”shesaid.Itookthesuitcasetothecab，thenreturnedtoassistthewoman.Shetookmyarm，andwewalkedslowlytowardthecab.Shekeptthankingmeformykindness.“It'snothing,”Itoldher.“IjusttrytotreatmypassengersthewayIwouldwantmymothertreated.”、:I.注意：所续写的短文词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Havinggivenmeanaddress,ahospice,sheasked.“Couldyoudrivethroughdowntown?”Paragraph2:wedroveinsileneetotheaddressshehadgivenme,andit…参考范文：Paragraph1:Havinggivenmeanaddress,ahospice,sheasked.“Couldyoudrivethroughdowntown?”Askedwhywedidn'ttaketheshortestway,thesmallwomantoldmeitwasthelastchanceforhertovisitthecity.Wedrovethroughtheneighborhoodwheresheandherhusbandhadlived.Besides,sheaskedmetoslowinfrontofaparticularbuildingorcornerandwouldsitstaringintothedarkness,sayingnothing.Atlast,shesaidshewastiredandwantedtogotothehospice.Paragraph2:wedroveinsilencetotheaddressshehadgivenme,anditwasalowbuilding,wheretheoldladywouldlivetherestofherlife.Twonurseswhomusthavebeenexpectinghercameouttothecabassoonaswepulledup.Iopenedthetrunkandtookthesuitcasetothedoorandthewomanwasalreadyseatedinawheelchair.Whensheaskedhowmuchsheowedme,withoutthinking,Isaidnothingandbenttogiveherabug.Itwasmyassistancethathelpedoneofweakpeoplerealizeherwish.三、读后续写（25分）Myfiance（未婚夫）andIwereexcitedaboutshoppingforourfirsthome.Butourfundswerelimited,andnoneofthehousesinourpricerangeseemedsatisfactory.Oneagentrecommendedahouseinparticular.Althoughherdescriptionsoundedwonderful,thepricewasbeyondourrange,sowedeclined.Butshekepturgingustohavealookatleast.Wefinallydidanditwasloveatfirstsight.ItwasOurHome,smallandcharming,overlookingaquietlake.Walkingthroughtheroomsandtalkingwiththeowners,aniceelderlycouple,wefeltthewarmthandhappinessofthemarriagewithinthathome.Asperfectasitwas,thepriceremainedtoohighforus.Buteveryday,wewouldsitbythelake,lookingatthehouseanddreamingofwhatitwouldbeliketolivethere.Dayslater,wemadea（n）offer—farbelowtheaskingprice.Surprisingly,theydidn'tlaughatus.Theyrenewedtheirofferinstead.Itwasalsomuchmorethanwecouldafford,butfarlessthantheoriginalaskingprice.Thenextday,wegotadisappointingmessagethatanotherbuyerhadofferedamuchhigherprice.Evenso,wedecidedtotalkwiththeownersdirectly.Wemadeourfinaloffer,whichstillwasthousandsofdollarslessthantheotherbuyer'sbid.Weknewit,butwehadtotry.Nobodyknewifwecouldgetit.注意：所续写的短文词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Paragraph2:参考范文：Paragraph1Wewenttotheowners'homeafterwemadeourfinaloffer,theotherbuyercametovisittheowners,hesaidthepriceheofferedwasmuchhigherthanours,hebeggedtheownerstosellittohim,thentheowneraskedthebuyer,“whydoyouwantthishouse?”thebuyersaid,”becauseitisnearthecity,Iwanttobuyitforinvestment.Icanrentittoearnmoney…”theownerthoughtforawhileandthenlookedathimandsaid,I'msorry,sir,Ican'tsellmyhousetoyou,becauseIamlookingforsomeonewhotrulylovesmyhouse,notjustformoney.”Paragraph2:Theownerlookedatusandsaid,“Iwanttosellmyhousetoyou!”thenheexplained:He'dseenussittingbythelakeallthosetimes;heknewhowmuchwelovedtheplaceandthatwe'dappreciatetheyearsofworktheyhadputintotheirhome;herealizedhewouldtakealossbysellingittous,butitwasworthwhile;wewerethepeopletheywantedtolivethere.Hetoldustoconsiderthedifferenceintheprice“anearlyweddingpresent.”That'showwefoundourhomeandhowIlearnedthatwhenpeoplearekindtheyarenotstrangers,onlyfriendswehaven'tyetmet.四、读后续写（25分）Afriendofmine,namedJack,receivedanexpensivecarfromhisbrotherasaChristmaspresent.OnChristmasEvewhenJackcameoutofhisoffice,astreeturchin（顽童）waswalkingaroundtheshiningcar."Isthisyourcar,sir?"heasked.Jackanswered,“Yes,mybrothergaveittomeforChristmas.”Theboywassurprised."Youmeanyourbrothergaveittoyouanditdidcostyounothing?Sir,Iwish・・"Hehesitated（犹豫）,Jackthoughtofcourseheknewwhattheboywanted,butwhattheboysaidsurprisedhimgreatly.“Iwish,"theboywenton,“thatIcouldbeabrotherlikethat."Jacklookedattheboyinsurprise,andthenhesaidagain,“Wouldyouliketotakearideinmycar?"“Ohyes,I'dloveto,"theboyanswered.Afterashortride,theboyturnedandwithhiseyesshining,said,“Sir,wouldyouminddrivinginfrontofmyhouse?"Jacksmiledalittle.Hethoughtheknewwhattheboywanted.Hewantedtoshowhisneighborsthathecouldridehomeinabigcar.ButJackwaswrongagain.“Willyoustopwherethosetwostepsare?"theboyasked.、:I.注意：所续写的短文词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1Hegotoutandranuptothesteps.Paragraph2Jackgotoutandliftedtheboytothefrontseatofhiscar.参考范文：Paragraph1Hegotoutandranuptothesteps.TheninashortwhileJackheardhimcomingback,buthewasnotcomingfast.Hewascarryinghislittlecrippled（残疾的）brother.Hesatdownonthestepandpointedtothecar.“Thereheis,Buddy,justlikeItoldyouupstairs.HisbrothergaveittohimforChristmasanditdidn'tcosthimacent.AndsomedayI'mgoingtogiveyouonejustlikeit・・・thenyoucanseeforyourselfallthenicethingsintheChristmaswindowsthatI'vebeentryingtotellyouabout”Paragraph2Jackgotoutandliftedtheboytothefrontseatofhiscar.Theshining-eyedelderbrotherclimbedinbesidehimandthethreebegananunforgettableholidayride.,lookingatallthosebeautifulthings.ThatChristmasEve,Jacklearnedtherealmeaningofthewords:“It'smoreblessedtogivethantoreceive.”Healsolearnedwhatitmeanstobe“anelderbrotherlikethat.”五、读后续写（25分）Twentyyearsago,Idroveataxiforaliving.OnenightIwenttopickupapassengerat2:30a.m.WhenIarrivedtocollect,Ifoundthebuildingwasdarkexceptforasinglelightinagroundfloorwindow.Iwalkedtothedoorandknocked,"Justaminute,"answeredaweak,elderlyvoice.Afteralongtime,thedooropened.Asmallwomaninhereightiesstoodbeforeme.Byhersidewasasmallsuitcase.Itookthesuitcasetothecar,andthenreturnedtohelpthewoman.Shetookmyarmandwewalkedslowlytowardsthecar.Shekeptthankingmeformykindness."It'snothing,"Itoldher."IjusttrytotreatmypassengersthewayIwouldwantmymothertreated.""Oh,you'resuchagoodman."Shesaid.Whenwegotintothetaxi,shegavemeanaddress,andthenasked,"Couldyoudrivethroughdowntown?""It'snottheshortestway,"Iansweredquickly."Oh,I'minnohurry,"shesaid."I'monmywaytoahospice（临终医院）.Idon'thaveanyfamilyleft.ThedoctorsaysIdon'thaveverylong."Iquietlyreachedoverandshutoffthemeter（计价器）.Forthenexttwohours,wedrovethroughthecity.Sheshowedmethebuildingwhereshehadonceworked,theneighborhoodwhereshehadlived,andthefurnitureshopthathadoncebeenaballroomwhereshehadgonedancingasagirl.Sometimesshe'daskmetoslowdowninfrontofaparticularbuildingandwouldsitstaringintothedarkness,sayingnothing.Atdawn,shesuddenlysaid,"I'mtired.Let'sgonow."WedroveinsilenceLotheaddressshehadgivenme."HowmuchdoIoweyou?"sheasked."Nothing."Isaid."Youhavetomakealiving,"sheanswered."Oh,thereareotherpassengers,"Ianswered.Shesaidthankstome,butshelookedsosad.、:I.注意：所续写的短文词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语Paragraph1Almostwithoutthinking,Ibentandgaveherahug.Paragraph2Iwasonmywaytovisither.参考范文:Almostwithoutthinking,Ibentandgaveherahug.Sheheldontometightly.Beforethewomanleft,Isaidtoher,“Mymothertreatedeveryonekindly,sheisagreatperson,butshepassedawayyearsago.youarelikemymother,”thewomansaid,“thankyou.Ifyouwanttovisitme,I'lltellyoumystory.”Thenthewomanleft.Afteralongpause,Idrovethetaxitogohome.Paragraph2Thenextday,Iwasonmywaytovisither.Theoldwomantoldmethatsheusedtobeamillionaire.Shebecameimmersedinmakingmoney.Shewastheownerofaparticularbuildingwesawlastnight.Butsheneglectedherfamily.heronlysondiedoneyearagobecauseofcancer.Shesoldeverythingtosavehim,butfailed.Howsad！Atlast,theoldwomansaidtome,“Lifeisshort,butpleasebeinnohurry.Thougheveryonehastoearnmoneytomakealiving,alwaysrememberthatfamilyisthemostimportantthingtoyou,”Isaidnothingbutnoddedhard.六、读后续写（25分）Manyyearsago,whenIwasfreshoutofschoolandworkinginDenver,Iwasdrivingtomyparents'homeinMissouriforChristmas.Istoppedatagasstation（加油站）about50milesfromOklahomaCity,whereIwasplanningtostopandvisitafriend.WhileIwasstandinginlineatthecashregister（收款台），Isaidhellotoano