英语写作汉堡式段落HamburgerParagraphfinal

DoYouKnow?ParagraphMainideaDetailwhatthestoryorparagraphismostlyaboutsentencesthatsupportthemainideaagroupofsentencesthatincludesamainideaanddetails第1页/共14页第一页，共14页。IntroductionSentenceMainIdeaDetailsClosingSentence第2页/共14页第二页，共14页。TopBunIntroductorySentenceTheintroductorysentenceintroducesthereader

tothetopicofyourparagraph.Trytomakeitexciting!

Onwarmsummerdays,Ilovetryingtocatchbutterflies.Ihavesomuchfunrunningaroundinmybackyardchasingaftertheprettybutterfliesthatgozoomingby!IfIamluckyenoughtocatchone,Ineverkeepitforverylong.Afterall,butterfliesbelongintheirnaturalhabitat.Isurelycan’twaituntilnextsummersothatIcangrabmynetandcatchsomebutterflies!

第3页/共14页第三页，共14页。Besuretoaddatleastthreereasons,examples,ormainpointsthatsupporttheintroductory/topicsentence.Thesereasons,examples,orpointsarethelettuce,tomato,cheese,andmeatoftheparagraph.MAINPOINTS,REASONS,OREXAMPLES第4页/共14页第四页，共14页。AddDeliciousDetailsBesureto…AgoodparagraphincludesdetailsthatDESCRIBEorTELLABOUT

themainpointsorreasons.Detailsshouldbe“delicious”orinteresting.Whenyouwriteahamburgerparagraph,compareyourdetailstoalloftheyummypartsofahamburgersuchas: *Lettuce *Tomato *Cheese *Meat(Elaboration)第5页/共14页第五页，共14页。AddDeliciousDetailsAgain,yourelaborationshoulddescribeortellaboutyourmainpoints.

Theyshouldsticktothetopic.Whichdetaildoesn’tquitebelong?

Ireallylovemybrother!HisnameisJeffandheissuperfunny.Oneofmyfavoritethingstodowithmybrotherisplayvideogames.Healwaysbeatsme!Sometimesmysistercriesatnight.Maybemybrotherwillplayavideogamewithmetonight!

第6页/共14页第六页，共14页。TooMuchDetailTheTroubleWithHowwouldahamburgertasteifithadketchup,

mustard,

mayonnaise,

pickles,

lettuce,

tomatoes,

barbecuesauce,

Swisscheese,

spicycheese,

andolivesontop?Toomuch,right?Awritercanaddtoomuchdetailtoaparagraphaswell.Paragraphsshouldbeabout5-8sentenceslong.Ifyourparagraphispagesandpageslong,youwilleventuallylosetheinterestofyourreader.第7页/共14页第七页，共14页。JustRightDetailAnExampleof

Myfavoriteschoollunchischickennuggetswithmashedpotatoes.OnereasonwhyIlovethislunchsomuchisthatittastessogreat!Ialsolovebeingabletosmelltheyummynuggetshoursbeforeit’sevenlunchtime.Thecreamymashedpotatoesandgravyjustslidedownmythroat.Ican’tWAITuntilthenextchickennuggetday!第8页/共14页第八页，共14页。SofarwehavelearnedthatahamburgerparagraphneedsatopbunorINTRODUCTORYsentence.Theintroductionshouldintroducethereadertoyourtopic.Wealsolearnedthatgoodparagraphscontainthreetosixsupportingsentencesthattellmoreabouttheintroductorysentence.Thesemainpoints,examples,ordetailscanbecomparedtotheingredientsofahamburger,suchasthelettuce,tomato,cheese,andhamburgerpatty.Butwhat’smissing?Hmm…

Let'sReview第9页/共14页第九页，共14页。BottomBunConcludingSentenceThebottombunofahamburgerhelpsholdalloftheingredientstogether.Itworkswiththetopbuntokeepthemeat,cheese,tomato,andlettucefromfallingonthefloor!Theconcludingsentenceofaparagraphhelpsholdallofthesentencestogether!Itworkswiththeintroductorysentencetokeepthedetailsfromfallingapart.Theconcludingsentenceshouldbeinterestingandletyourreaderknowthatyouarefinishedwriting.Itwrapseverythingup!

第10页/共14页第十页，共14页。Myhometownisfamousforseveralamazingnaturalfeatures.

First,itisnotedfortheWheatonRiver,whichisverywideandbeautiful.Also,ontheothersideofthetownisWheatonHill,whichisunusualbecauseitisverysteep.ThethirdamazingfeatureistheBigOldTree.Thistreestandstwohundredfeettallandisprobablyaboutsixhundredyearsold.Thesethreelandmarksaretrulyamazingandmakemyhometownafamousplace.第11页/共14页第十一页，共14页。Myhometownisfamousforseveralamazingnaturalfeatures.

First,itisnotedfortheWheatonRiver,whichisverywideandbeautiful.Oneithersideofthisriver,whichis175feetwide,aremanywillowtreeswhichhavelongbranchesthatcanmovegracefullyinthewind.

Inautumntheleavesofthesetreesfallandcovertheriverbankslikegoldensnow.

Also,ontheothersideofthetownisWheatonHill,whichisunusualbecauseitisverysteep.

Eventhoughitissteep,climbingthishillisnotdangerous,becausetherearesomefirmrocksalongthesidesthatcanbeusedasstairs.

Therearenotreesaroundthishill,soitstandsclearlyagainsttheskyandcanbeseenfrommanymilesaway.

ThethirdamazingfeatureistheBigOldTree.Thistreestandstwohundredfeettallandisprobablyaboutsixhundredyearsold.

Thesethreelandmarksaretrulyamazingandmakemyhometownafamousplace.第12页/共14页第十二页，共14页。1.Peoplecanavoidburglariesbytakingcertainprecautions.

2.Thereareseveraladvantagestogrowingupinasmalltown.

3.MostUSuniversitiesrequirea550pointTOEFLscoreforanumberofreasons.

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5.ThereareseveralenjoyablewaystotravelbetweentheUSandQueretaro.

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