英语观点对比类作文写作分析资料

英语观点对比类作文写作分析

观点对比类作文

写作技巧

高三英语写作-----Howtowriteanargumentation（议论文）词汇,句型,语法多样化

1.覆盖了所有的要点

2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇

3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？1.(因为)_____hishelp,Ifinishedtheworkatlast.ThankstoAsaresultofOwingtoDueto因为Becauseof/with2.Moreroadswillhavetobebuiltwithmorecars,__________（所以）we’llhavelessfieldtogrowrice.thereforeSoasaresult/consequencethus结果3.Therentisreasonable,__________,thelocationisperfect.

房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。what’smoremoreover/furthermoreinadditionbesides另外(递进）4.Theyoungmandidn’tenjoyhisoldjob._________(相反

)hefindsthenewjobveryinteresting.

Onthecontrary,However,转折But/yet/while5.__________(总之),weshouldmakegooduseofcomputer.IngeneralInaword/allinall总结Inshort/briefGenerallyspeaking6.______________(我认为),studentshadbetternotbuyacellphone.weshouldspendtimeandmoneyonothermoreimportantthings.AsfarasI’mconcernedInmyopinion/it’smyopinionthat个人观点Ithink/believe

thestructureofthearticle

topicsentence

fortheopinion

againsttheopinionendingsentence

介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：1.我们举行了一场讨论/调查，讨论内容是……Recentlywehadaheateddiscussionon/about…Wehadadiscussion/surveyon…Accrodingtoarecentsurvey,…Thereismuchdiscussiontodayabout…2.当说到…时Whenitcomesto…，3.…问题引起了越来越多的关注Thetopicof…isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat…Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.Opinionsaremainlydividedintotwogroups.Differentpeople,however,hold/havedifferentopinionsonthismatter.Differentpeople,however,thinkquitedifferentlyonthismatter.People,

however,

differ

in

their

opinions

on

this

matter.People,

havetaken/adopteddifferent

attitudes

towards

this

matter.过渡句介绍正方观点：Somepeopleagreewith/approve/supporttheopinion/decision/idea/viewthat…Someofthemholdtheopinion/viewthat…Mostofthenareinfavoroftheideathat…Peoplewhoarefortheideathinkthat…Thosewhosupportitthinkthat…Sixtypercentofthestudentsarefor

theidea.Supportersthink/believethat…介绍反方观点However/But/Onthecontrary/Incontrast/Oncontrast/Ontheotherhand/…,othersareopposedto/areagainst/disagreewiththeopinion.Peoplewhoareagainstitdon’tthinkso.However,…ofthemholdadifferentview.Differentfromthose…,peoplethink……ofthestudentsthink

that…However,othershavedifferentopinions.Othersarguethatidea,intheiropinion,theythink/believethat...进一步介绍观点What’smore…Furthermore/moreover,...Meanwhile,…What’sworse…Inaddition,…Besides,…Plus,…First,…Second,…Third,…总结句(未达成一致)Inshort,noagreementhasbeenreachedyet.Sofar,noagreementhasbeenreached.Inshort,thestudentshavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.本人观点：AsfarasIamconcerned,Inmyopinion,Frommypointofview,Personally,Forme,It’smyopinionthat…,because/thereasonisthat/foronething,...foranotherthing,...Ithink...I

firmly

support

the

view

that…I’mforthefirst/secondview.对比类写作

实战模版

过渡句观点一论据一论据二论据三观点二论据一论据二总结可以看出，这类文章的写作，首先要提出问题，即双方讨论的问题。接下来提出观点一(支持)，并用一系列论据进行阐明。说明完观点一之后，再提出观点二（反对），继续用论据进行说明。最后总结自己的观点。你班同学组织了一场讨论。主题是：城市是否可以养宠物。请根据以下信息，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点和建议。Recentlywehadaheateddiscussiononwhetherpeopleshouldkeeppetsathomeincities.__________________________________________支持饲养宠物反对饲养宠物安慰孤寡老人人与动物和谐相处，增添生活情趣促进体育锻炼，提供人与人交流的机会造成环境污染吵闹声，甚至伤人花钱赞成：

安慰孤寡老人和谐相处，增添生活乐趣促进锻炼，提供交流机会反对：环境污染噪音，伤人花费大myopinionbebadforenvironmentmaketoomuchnoiseattackpeoplecostalotofmoneygetcomfortfrompets/getalonggetonwellwithanimals/makelifeinteresting/keepfit/communicatewithothershavedifferentviewsonsthreacttosthindifferentways.differintheirattitudestowardssth.Recentlywehadaheateddiscussiononwhetherpeopleshouldkeeppetsathomeincities.BeginningconclusionRecentlywehadaheateddiscussiononwhetherpeopleshouldkeeppetsathomeincities.Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.Someofthestudentsthinkitisagoodideatokeeppetsbecausemanyoldpeoplewholivealoneathomecangetmorecomfortfrompets.What’smore,gettingalongwellwithanimalswillmakeourlifeinteresting.Peoplewhoownpetswillhavemorechancestowalk,thusgivingthematimetocommunicatewithothers.Ontheotherhand,theotherstudentsareagainsttheidea.Intheiropinions,iftoomanypeoplekeeppetsathome,itisbadfortheenvironment.What’sworse,petsmaymaketoomuchnoiseandevenattackpeople.Inaddition,itcostslotsofmoneytokeeppets.Inshort,theyhavenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.some过渡句观点一论据一论据二论据三观点二论据一论据二论据三Inmyopinion,Ilikeanimals,soIdon’tthinkitisbadtokeeppetsathome.Butwemusttakesomemeasurestopreventthemfrompollutingourenvironment.总结

作文模板1

__________hadadiscussionaboutwhether__________.Opinionsaredividedonthisissue.________ofthestudentsthink______________________.What’smore,_______.

Ontheotherhand,______ofthestudentsthink_____________.What’sworse,______.

Inshort,_______havenotarrivedatanyagreementyet.本人观点：AsfarasIamconcerned……./(Inmyopinion,…….;It’smyopinionthat……),Foronereason,……….Foranotherreason………Inaword,…….

模板2Wehadaheateddiscussionabout/on___________.Students’views/ideas/opinionsonitvary/differfrompersontoperson.Somestudentssay/think/believethat…,However,othersholdtheviewthat……AsfarasIamconcerned,Iaminfavorofthefirst/secondview/Iwouldliketo…./Thereasonsareasfollows.Firstly,……Secondly,……Inconclusion/Inaword,……模板3

Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat（作文题目）Butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.

Amajorityofpeoplethinkthat_观点一_.Intheirviewstherearetwofactorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows:inthefirstplace,原因一.Furthermore,inthesecondplace,原因二.Soitgoeswithoutsayingthat观点一.People,

however,

differ

in

their

opinions

on

this

matter.

Some

people

holdtheideathat观点二.Intheirpointofview,foronething，原因一.Foranotherthing,原因二.Therefore,there

isno

doubt

that观点二_.

AsfarasIamconcerned,I

firmly

support

the

view

that观点一或二.

It

isnotonlybecause____,butalsobecause____.……对比观点题型

（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。1．有一些人认为...2．另一些人认为..3．我的看法..

Thetopicof__________（主题）isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.Somepeoplesay__________（观点一）.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonthat__________（支持的理由一）Whatismore,__________理由二).Moreover,__________(理由三).

Whileothersthinkthat__________(观点二）inthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly,__________(支持的理由一).Secondly(besides),__________（理由二）.Thirdly(finally),__________(理由三).

Frommypointofview,Ithink__________（我的观点）.Thereasonisthat__________(原因).

Thetopicof

usingcellphonesinschool

isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.Somepeoplesaycellphonescandogoodtousstudents.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonthatcellphonescanbeusedtohelpuskeepintouchwithothers.Whatismore,theycanhelpuswhenweareindanger.Whileothersthinkthatcellphonescandoharmtousstudentsinthefollowingreasons.Firstly,

wewouldspendtoomuchtimeonthemandaffectourstudy.Secondly,

theycandestroyourbodyhealth.Frommypointofview,Ithink

weshouldnotusecellphonesinschool.Thereasonisthatasstudents,weshouldpaymoreattentiontostudy.

最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。2、词数：100左右。3、参考词汇：门票：entrancefeeDearEditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.60%的同学认为40%的同学认为1、不应收门票2、公园是公众休闲的地方3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，

会影响城市形象1、应收门票，但票价不宜高2、支付园林工人工资3、购新花木2002年高考题范文DearEditor,I'mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe'vehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks(提出问题).Opinionsa