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Aletterofappreciation假如你叫李华,你的英国笔友Jack在你因病住院期间经常在网上帮你辅导英语,鼓励你积极面对病情、学习和生活。请给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.回顾帮助并感谢2.邀请来中国游玩3.表达期待。Requirementsoftheletter审题四问一问类型:二问人称:三问时态:四问要点:感谢信---感谢朋友以第二人称为主一般现在时+一般过去时回顾帮助并感谢,邀请来中国游玩,表达期待。思考1.感谢和邀请的比例?2.需要自我介绍吗?哪个要点使用一般过去时?期待的内容是什么?Thestructureoftheletter段落要点遣词造句Para1.Para2.Para3.写信目的:问候+表达感谢感谢原因(帮你辅导英语+鼓励你积极面对)+回报(邀请Jack来华/也可放最后)再次感谢+期待他的到来I'mwritingtoexpress/convey..强调句,虚拟语气,定语从句,非谓语ThanksagainLookforwardtoyourarrival1.审题偏题,比重不合理,感谢信写成了邀请信2.格式错误,人称后没有逗号3.单词拼写错误较多,如writing,appreciation,4.语法错误,主要出现在虚拟语气的运用和词性混乱5.时态错误,帮助时用了一般现在时6.非智力错误,后面还有位置没有看到导致字数不够7.句式使用单一、低级,不够多样化导致分数不高OurproblemsHowtoexpressthanks动词thank/appreciate/acknowledge(正式)
sb.形容词begratefulto/thankfulto名词短语搭配3.express/convey/show/extendone’sthanks/gratitude/appreciationtosb.forsth.Writingpurposes常见的感谢内容whatyouhavedoneformeyourkindnessandassistanceyourgeneroushelp/generosityyourselfless
dedicationanddevotion.1.I’mwritingthislettertothankyoufor/appreciateeverythingyoudidduringmystayinhospital.2.Iamwritingto
extend/express/convey/showmysincere/heartfelt/cordial/deepest
thanks/gratitude/appreciation
toyouforyourselflessdedicationanddevotion.3.I’mwritingtosayhowgratefulIamforwhatyouhavedoneforme.4.Iamdroppingthesefewlinestoshowmycordialappreciationforwhatyouhavedone.5.Iwouldliketothankyoufromthebottomofmyheart
foryourgeneroushelpandencouragementtome.帮你辅导英语
helpmewithmyEnglishstudy/helpmelearnEnglishofferedmepractical/professional/patientguidancehone/tutormyEnglishyourteachingandguidanceonEnglish鼓励你积极面对encouragemetofacechallengeswithgreatcourageencouragemetoembracelifeactively/positivelyheartenmetoregardlifeinapositiveattitudeinspiremetoholdapositiveattitudetolifeDetailedreasonsofyourthanks
感谢信中可用句式有:强调句和虚拟语气常用的虚拟语气句式有:Butforyourhelp,Iwouldneverhavemadesuchremarkableprogress.
Withoutyourprofessionalassistance,Iwouldnothavemadesuchasuccess.Ifithadn'tbeenforyourassistance,Iwouldn'thavemademuchprogress.Detailedreasonsofyourthanks
appreciatingandlearningappreciatingandlearning感谢信中可用句式有:强调句和notonly…butalso…appreciatingandlearning感谢信中可用句式有:倒装,定语从句和虚拟语气Detailedreasonsofyourthanks
感谢信中常用句式有:强调句和虚拟语气,notonly…butalso…,倒装,定语从句帮你辅导英语WithoutyourtimelyhelpwithmyEnglishonline,Icouldn’thavegotalongwithmyEnglishstudy.ButforyoureffectiveguidanceonmyEnglish,icouldn'thavemadeupformymissingclassessoquickly.ItisyouwhoconstantlyandpatientlyhelptohonemyEnglishonlinewhenI'mseverelysickinhospital,encouragingmetoembracelifeandbravetheillnesswithenthusiasm.ThankyouforyourilluminatingguidanceonmypoorEnglish,fromwhichihavelaidasolidfoundationformyfuturestudyinEnglish虚拟语气虚拟语气强调句定语从句Detailedreasonsofyourthanks
感谢信中常用句式有:强调句和虚拟语气,notonly…butalso…,倒装,定语从句鼓励你积极面对Itwasyourconstantencouragementandpositiveattitudetowardslifethatenabledmetogothroughthetoughtime.Itwasyourpositiveattitudethatselflesshelpthatignitedmypassiontofacechallengesinmylifeandstudybravely.Ifithadn'tbeenforunreserveddevotionandconstantencouragement,Iwouldn'thavebeensopositivetomyillness,studyandlife.虚拟语气强调句强调句邀请来华I'dliketoinviteyoutovisitChinasometimeandletmeshowyouaroundmyhometown.Ifpossible,ihopeyoucanvisitChinainthenearfuture.Inreturn,IwanttoinviteyouandyourfamilytopayavisittoChina.
Idohopeyouwouldpayavisittochinasomeday,sothatIcouldhavetheopportunitytorepayyourkindness.
IsincerelyinviteyoutovisitHangzhou,myhometown,whereIcanguideyouaroundthespectacularviewabouttheWestLakeandwelcomeyouwarmlyinreturn.Reward
Thanksagain
1.Again,millionsofthanksforwhatyouhavedone.2.Pleaseacceptmysincerethanksagainforyourgeneroushelp.Goodluckandstaywell!3.Again,Iwouldliketoexpressmysincerethankstoyou!Mayyoubeingoodhealth.4.Mygratitudeisbeyondwords/description./Wordsfailtoexpressmydeepestgratitude.Bestwishestoyou!5.Sincerethanksagainforwhatyouhavedone.WishyouahealthyandhappylifeDearJack,I’mwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudeforyourgeneroushelp
duringmystayinhospital.
WithoutyourtimelyhelpwithmyEnglishonline,Icouldn’thavegotalongwithmyEnglishstudy.Besides,itwasyourconstantencouragementandpositiveattitudetowardslifethatenabledmetogothroughthetoughtime.NowIsincerelyinviteyoutocometoChina,whosebreathtakingsceneryandsplendidculturewillsurelyguaranteeanenjoyablejourney.Thankyouagain.Lookingforwardtoyourarrival.Yours,LiHua
Appreciation
DearJack,
I'mwritingtoconveymyheartfeltgratitudetoyouforyourgenerousassistanceduringmystayinhospital.
NeverwillIforgetyourpracticalandpatient
guidanceonmyEnglishonline,whichmadeitpossibleformetomakegreatprogressinEnglishstudy.Additionally,Ifithadn'tbeenfordevotionandconstantencouragement,Iwouldn'thavebeensopositivetomyillness,studyandlife.Inreturnforyourkindness,I’dliketoinviteyoutotravelinChinanextsummervacation.
Thanksagainforallyourhelp.Lookingforwardtoyourarrival.Yours,LiHuaAppreciation
假定你是李华,暑期在英国旅游时得到当地导游Mr.Smith的悉心照顾,回国后给他写一封邮件表达谢意。主要内容:1.回忆旅行中美好时光;2.遇到的困难和得到的帮助;3.邀请他来中国旅游。注意:1.词数
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