高中英语高考二轮复习二轮复习 二轮复习 高考英语建议信写作学案

作文展5：建议信假如你的朋友李华已经在美国留学三年，现在正面临着毕业后是留在美国还是回到中国的问题，请你用英语给他写一封信，给出你的建议并写清原因。要求：1词数100左右：2可以适当加細节，以使行文连贯。DearLiHua,HearingthatyouarewonderingwhetheryoushouldreturntoChinaorstayinUSA,I'mwritingtooffersomeadvice.Frommystandpoint,it’scomingbacktoChinathatisthebestchoiceforyou.Andthereasonsareasfollows.Initially,Chinaisenjoyingaperiodofprosperityandpeace,whichmeansthatyoucanacquirenumerousgoldenopportunities.Additionally,aftercomingback,notonlycanyouattendtoyourparentsmoreeasily,butalsoyoucanworkandliveinafamiliarenvironment,givingyouasenseofbelonging.Mostimportantlyofallit,it’sourdutytomakeeveryendeavortoserveourmotherland.Lastlybutnotleast,sooutstanding/distinguishedareyouthatIbelieveyouareboundtocutastrikingfigureinChina.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyandmayyouembraceabrightprospect.YoursWangWeDearLiHua,ScarcelycouldIcontainmyconcernwhenIheardthatyouareconfrontedwithanimportantdecision.Frommystandpoint,youaresupposedtoreturntoChina.Somereasonsareasfollows.Initially,withthedevelopmentofChina,thereareanabundantofwell-paidpositionstochoosefrom.Thusitisanythingbutdifficultforyoutohuntforagoodjob.Ontopofthat,youexcelat(擅长)technology,whichcontributestothedevelopmentofChina.NowthetechnologyistoChinawhatsunshineistoplantsandyouareboundtobeoccupiedwithahighly-paidvocation.Lastbutnotleast,yourparentsaregettingolder.It'syourdutytoreturntolookafterthem.Onlywhenyoucomebackcanyourparentsleadahappyandsweetlife,soitpaystoregress(回归).I'mfirmlyconvincedthatyouwillachievealotifyoureturn.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursWangWeDearLiHua,MyhonorwasbeyonddescriptionwhenIheardthatyouturntomeforsomeadviceontheupcominggraduationchoice.Takingallthefactorsintoconsiderconsideration,I’dliketoofferwhatIcomeupwith.Frommyperspective,goingbacktoChinaishighlyrecommended.Reasonsareasfollows.Firststatedisthejobhuntingaspect.ItwouldbemoreconvenientandalternativetofindjobsinChina.Furthermore,whatdeservesspecialattentionisthatyoucanstayclosetoyourfamilyandfriends,withoutwhichlifewouldbequiteboringandmeaningless.AllabovearemyadviceIhopeallthesecandosomegoodtoyouandwishyouabrightfuture.YoursWangWeiDearLiHua,IamwritingtorecommendyoutoreturntoChinaforabrighterfuture.Reasonsareasfollows.Consideringthefactthatyouhaveboastedtonsofknowledgeandpotential,I’minthefirmbeliefthatyouareboundtoderive(获得)abundantopportunities.Besides,yourexperienceofstudyinginAmericaalsocontributestomakingyoucutastrikingfigureinjobinterviews.Inaddition,withthefastdevelopmentofChinacomenumerousfields’blossom.Youcan'taffordtomissthisbrillianttime.InChina,notonlycanyouluxuriate（茂盛的生长）inaharmoniousatmosphere,butalsoyouhaveaccesstosuccessinmanyaspects.IhopethatyoucanfulfillyourdreaminChina.Shouldmyadviceberewarding,Iwouldbemorethandelighted.YoursWangWeiDearLiHua,How'sitgoing.Aftera3-yearstudyinAmericayouarefacedwiththedilemmawhetherstayinginAmericaorreturningtoChina.Inviewofthefollowingreasons,comingbacktoChinaisregardedasthebestchoiceforyou.Ononehand,withtimepassing,anincreasingnumberoftremendousimprovementsareshininginourhomeland.Bathedinaboomingatmosphere,itcanbesaidwithcertainthatyouwillacquirenumerouspossibilitiestofulfillyourdream.Ontheotherhand,whatcallsforspecialattentionisthatourcountryisingreatneedofdistinguishedpersons.ItishightimethatyoushouldpourwhatyouhavelearntintotheconstructionofamorepowerfulChinaanditisbelievedthatyouwillmakegreatcontributionstoit.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YoursWangWeiDearLiHua,OnhearingthefactthatyouareatalosswhethertostayinAmericaortocomebacktoChinaI'mwritingtoprovidesomesuggestionsforyou.Frommypointofview,it’sabetterchoiceforyoutoreturntoChina.Heregothereasons.FirststatedisthatwhileinAmericaitisnotasconvenientasinChinatokeepyourfamilyaswellasyourfriendscompany,whichislikelytobringaboutyourhomesickness.Additionally,withtheeconomydevelopingrapidly,Chinaiscallingfortalentslikeyou.Asaconsequence,sovaluableisthischancethatyoucannevermissit.Ontopofthat,I'mfirmlyconvincedthatitisthefantasticpoliciesmadebythegovernmentforthebenefitofoutstandingindividualsthatappealtoyou,asaresultofwhichyourcapabilitywillbemadefulluseof.I'minthehopethatmyadvicewillbebeneficialtoyou.YoursWangWeiDearLiHua,HearingthatyouareconfusedaboutwhethertostayinAmericaorreturntoChinaaftergraduation,I'mwritingtoadviseyoutocomebacktoyourmotherland.ReasonsareasfollowsInitially,withChina’ssoar-awaydevelopment,whoeverhasadreamisboundtoachieveitaslongasheoffershistoilandsweet.Soitpaystocomeandspareyoureffortstomakeit.Furthermore,Chinaisinneedofmoreoutstandingpeoplelikeyoutoflourishitself,thusmakingitapowerfulcountryintheworld.Moreover,giventhatyouweredrownedinthemarvelousChinesecultureinyourchildhood,itsenvironmentmustbemorefamiliartoyou.Lastbutnotleast,ifcomingback,youcanalsoattendtoyourparentsandhangoutwithyourfriendsoften,whicharereallypleasantandwarm.Chinaistouswhatsunshineistoplants.Itdeservesourcontributionstomakeitabettercountry.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursWangWeiDearLiHua,I'mdelightedtohearfromyou.Ithasbeen3yearssinceyoustudiedabroad.AndyouareconfrontedwiththeproblemofwhetherreturntoChinaornot.Whatisstronglyrecommendedisthatyou'dbettercomeback.Initially,asitknowntoall,the21stcenturyhaswitnessedtherapiddevelopmentofChinaInaddition,thegovernmenthasconductedmanylawstomotivatepeoplewhoareoutstandingtomakecontributionstoourcountry.Therefore,manyemploymentchancesarewaitingforyouandChinawillneverfailtolivetouptoyourexpectations.Whatismore,ifyoucomeback,moretimecanbespentwithyourparents.Theycanalsoassistyouwheneveryouhavetrouble.Additionally,Chinesepeoplearefriendlyandhelpful,whichmakesiteasytogetalongwellwiththem.AndIbelieveyouwillleadahappylife.Shouldmyadviceberewarding,youcouldtakeitintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursWangWei建议信—suggestionletter第一段：写作背景和写作目的(明确表明观点态度)第二/三段：提出建议及理由第三/四段：表达希望时态：一般现在时人称：第一、二人称A：建议信首段PurposeandProblems我很高兴收到你的来信询问关于...的意见。1.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceonhowto…andI'lltrytomakesomesuggestions.’mgladtoreceiveyourletter,askingformyadviceonhowto...3.I'vereceivedyourletter,saying...4.AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat…5.Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.6.Iamwritingtoyouinreplyto...7.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson/concerning…8.It'smypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceon...我的建议如下：Herecomesomesuggestionsforyou./Mysuggestionsareasfollows.B.建议信正文常用句式（详述建议，合情入理）1.Haveyouconsidereddoing.../Sowhynotdo...?2.Don'tyouthinkitmorebeneficialifyoucould…3.Iwouldliketosuggestthatyou(should)…4.IfIwereyou,Iwould…5.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.6.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketomakeasuggestionthatyou(should)…7.You'dbetterdo.../Itis/seemsbetterforyoutodo...8.Thebestwaytodosthistodo…/Thereisnobetterwaytodosththantodosth...9.How/Whataboutdoing...?10.Whatif...?11.Itwouldbeagoodideaif...C.建议信结尾常用句式（归纳总结，提出希望）1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard(在这一点上).4.Idohopethatmyideaswillwork.5.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindtheseideasuseful.6.Iwouldbereadytofurtherdiscussthismatter/discussthismatterwithyouinfurtherdetail.7.Let’skeepintouch.Ihopetoheargoodnewsfromyou.8.Ihopewhat'smentionedabovemightbehelpful.常用关联词1.表示并列的过渡词或短语aswell;or;too;also;aswellas;and;notonly…butalso….;both…and….either…or…;neither…nor…Foronething;Foranother(thing)2.表示递进的过渡词或短语Moreover;What’smore;Besides;What’sworse3.表转折对比的过渡词:but,however,insteadof,onthecontrary,although,differentfrom,despite,inspiteof,Ontheonehand,…;Ontheotherhand,…Some…;Others…4.表原因的过渡词:because,becauseof,since,as,for,nowthat,thanksto,dueto（由于）5.表结果的过渡词:so,thus,therefore,asaresult,sothat,then,

6.表条件的过渡词:if,unless,aslongas

7.表时间的过渡词:recently,atthesametime,finally,atlast,fromnowon,8.表特定的顺序关系的过渡词:first,firstly,second,secondly,third,thirdly,aboveall,firstofall,then,next,finally,intheend,atlast9.表换一种方式表达的过渡词:inotherwords,thatistosay

10.表进行举例说明的过渡词:forinstance,forexample,suchas

11.表陈述事实的过渡词:Infact,Totellyouthetruth

12.表目的的过渡词：forthisreason,forthispurpose,sothat,inorderto,soasto

13.表总结的过渡词:inaword(总之，简言之),inshort(总之),generallyspeaking,finally,inconclusion,atlast,insummary假如你是某中学的学生李华，请你给校委会写一封信，就开办一个艺术画廊给出自己的建议及理由，内容包括；1）建议开办一个校园艺术画廊，展示在校学生自己的作品；2）画廊可以给学生提供一个展示自我的平台，开阔学生视野、传播校园文化DearCommitteemembers,Iwishtomakeasuggestionaboutstartingaschoolartgallery.Therearemanystudentswhoaregoodatpaintinginourschool.Theschoolartgallarycanprovidethesestudentswithaverygoodplatformtodisplaytheirownpaintings,throughwhichotherstudentsmaynotonlygetachancetoadmiretheartisticachievementsandthedevelopmentofschoolculturebutalsocanwidentheirknowledge.Ifyouweretooffersuchanopportunitytothestudentswhoarefondofart,Ibelievetheywouldgiveyouabigsurprise.Iwouldbemorethandelightedifmysuggestioncouldbeconsidered.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua假如你（WangHong）是一名导游，你将带领一个外国旅游团游览广东，请简单介绍广东现在的情况。地理位置：广东位于中国东南部，南临南海，海岸线总长3368公里，岛屿众多。历史：广东历史悠久，简称粤（yue）特点：1.素有“水果王国”之称，香蕉、甘蔗、荔枝、菠萝为其四大名果；2.是华南工业发达之省，水陆交通便利；3.有三个经济特区：深圳、珠海、汕头；4.有“食在广东“（Don’thesitatetohavemealshere）之称。参考词汇：海岸线coastline甘蔗sugarcane荔枝lychee菠萝pineapple经济特区specialeconomiczoneLadiesandGentlemen,WelcometoGuangdongProvince.I’mWangLihong.AndI’mmorethangladtobeyourguide.GuangdongProvince,alsocalledYueforshort,hasalonghistoryandisknownforthesaying,“Don’thesitatetohavemealshere.”LocatedbytheSouthSeainthesoutheastpartofmainlandChina,ithasquiteafewislandsoffitscoastlinewhichhasatotallengthof3,368kilometers.Knownasafruitking,GuangdongProvinceisfamousforitshigh-qualitybananas,sugarcane,lycheesandpineapples.ItisalsooneofthemostdevelopedindustrialprovincesinSouthChina,w