去英国学英语 作文解析

周考作文讲解咨询信书面表达Howtowriteacompositionbetter?写作步骤一：审题二：构思抓中心，列要点，写提纲

.先形成自己的写作语言（中文）三：润色1.想词组句2.连句成段3.连段成篇四：复查纠错成文时应注意：1.文章内容要齐全；2.时态：3.人称：4.注意咨询信的格式；5.适当使用一些高级词汇、短语和从句，以提高文章的档；6.恰当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然流畅。咨询信一般现在时；一般将来时第一人称构思三段式作文模式第一段：引入，直奔主题第二段：主干，适当再构，使行文流畅，前后衔接连贯自然。第三段答谢语。咨询信模板Dear_________,①Iam________(自我介绍、打算…….).②Iamwritingtoseeifitispossibleforyoutoprovidemewithinformationregarding______(要询问的内容).③Firstofall,whatare_________(第一个问题)?④Secondly/Besides,whatare_____(第二个问题)?⑤Thirdly/Inaddition,__________(第三个问题)?⑥Iwouldalsoliketoknow______(延伸的其它问题).⑦Couldyoubesokindastosendmesomerelevantbrochureontheabove-mentionedaspects?⑧ThankyouforyourkindnessandI’dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiHua写作要点1.计划去英国学英语2.看见了对方的广告，想询问具体信息3.培训班开始的日期，班级规模，周课时，费用及食宿方式。4.期待对方的回信。先成自己的写作语言第一段直奔主题：(要点1&2）

第二段主要内容：（要点3）

第三段答谢语（要点4）

期望尽快收到你的回复。我叫李华，是一名来自中国的学生。我计划暑假期间去英国学英语。我在报纸上看到了你们的广告，对此我很感兴趣。但是我有一些问题不明白，因此写了这封信。首先，关于为期3/6/12周的课程，我想知道它的开始时间以及每周学习多少课时。其次，我想知道班级规模，这会影响我的决定。我希望不会有太多学生。再者，收费情况如何，还有额外的费用吗？最后，我想知道我们的食宿方式（寄宿家庭还是大学宿舍，是否配备空调）礼貌委婉提问的常用表达1.Iwouldliketoknow......2.Would/Couldyoupleasetellme……？3.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldexplain…?4.Iwouldappreciateifyou……5.Couldyoubesokindastosendmesomerelevantinformationon……?6.Iwonderifyoucouldtellmetheinformationabout...想词----组句----成段之第一段①计划plan/intendtodo②暑假期间duringthesummervacation/holiday我叫李华，是一名来自中国的学生。我计划暑假期间去英国学英语。我在报纸上看到了你们的广告，对此我很感兴趣。但是我有一些问题不明白，因此写了这封信。成句：1.I'mLiHua,astudentfromChina/aChinesestudent.2.Iplan/intendtostudyEnglishinBritain/Englandbyattendingasummerschool.3.IhaveseenyouradvertisementinanewspaperandIamveryinterestedinit/itarousesmyinterest.4.Ihavesomequestionsaboutit,soIamwritingthislettertoyou./IamwritingtoaskformoreinformationaboutyourEngishcourse.成段I'mLiHua,aChinesestudentwhoplanstostudyEnglishinEnglandbyattendingasummerschool.Ihaveseenyouradvertisementinanewspaper,whicharousesmyinterest.ButIstillhavesomequestions,soIamwritingthislettertoyou.首先，关于为期3/6/12周的课程，我想知道它的开始时间以及每周学习多少课时。其次，我想知道班级规模，这会影响我的决定。我希望不会有太多学生。再者，收费情况如何，还有额外的费用吗？最后，我想知道我们的食宿方式（寄宿家庭还是大学宿舍，是否配备空调）想词----组句----成段之第二段1.开始时间：startdate2.学习时间：studyhours3.班级规模：classsize4.收费：charge5.额外的：additional6.寄宿家庭：hostfamily7.大学宿舍：universitydormitory8.配备：beequippedwith9.空调：airconditioner成句：1.Aboutyoursix-weekEnglishcourse,Iameagertoknowitsstartdateandthestudyhoursperweek.2.I'dliketoknowtheclasssize;itwillaffectmydecision.Ihopetherewillnotbetoomanystudents.3.Howmuchdoyouchargeforthecourse/Whatisthechargeforthecourseandarethereanyadditonalfees?4.Wouldyoupleasetellmesomethingabouttheaccommodation?Wherewillwelive?Withthehostfamilyorintheuniversitydormitory?Ifitisthelatter,isthedormitoryequippedwithanairconditioner成段Firstofall,aboutyoursix-weekEnglishcourse,Iameagertoknowitsstartdateandthestudyhoursperweek.Besides,

I'dalsoliketoknowtheclasssizewhichwillaffectmydecision.IhopetherewillnotbetoomanystudentsbecauseIamaquietgirl.Inaddition,howmuchdoyouchargeforthecourseandarethereanyadditonalfees?Lastbutnotleast,

wouldyoupleasetellmesomethingaboutthetypeofaccommodation?Willwelivewiththehostfamilyorintheuniversitydormitory?Ifitisthelatter,isthedormitoryequippedwithanairconditioner?Iwouldbegratefulifithasoneasitissohotinsummer.想词----组句----成段之第三段期望尽快收到你的回复。Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Iamwaitingforyourquickreply.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply.参考作文成篇

DearSirorMadam,

I'mLiHua,aChinesestudentwhoplanstostudyEnglishinEnglandbyattendingasummerschool.Ihaveseenyouradvertisementinanewspaper,whicharousesmyinterest.ButIstillhavesomequestions,soIamwritingthislettertoyou.

Firstofall,aboutyoursix-weekEnglishcourse,Iameagertoknowitsstartdateandthestudyhoursperweek.Besides,

I'dalsoliketoknowtheclasssizewhichwillaffectmydecision.IhopetherewillnotbetoomanystudentsbecauseIamaquietgirl.Inaddition,howmuchdoyouchargeforthecourseandarethereanyadditionalfees?Lastbutnotleast,

wouldyoupleasetellmesomethingaboutthetypeofaccommodation?Willwelivewiththehostfamilyorintheuniversitydormitory?Ifitisthelatter,isthedormitoryequippedwithanairconditioner?Iwouldbegratefulifithasoneasitissohotinsummer.

I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeanearlyreply.