山作文之2023山东高考英语作文范文

2023山东高考英语作文范文【篇一：历年山东高考英语作文题(2023-2023)】2023山东卷:假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信：1、帮他分析原因；2、给他提出建议；3、陈述你帮助他的具体打算。注意：词数120~150【范文】dearliming,iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers,andyoumayoftenfeellonely.that’sbecauseyouarenewhereandpeopledon’tknowaboutyou.butithinkyoucanmakeitifonlyyoucanfollowtheadvicebelow.first,youshouldtakeanactivepartinthediscussionsandshowyourownopinionsaboutthematters,andatthesametime,learntolistentootherpeople’sviews.second,youshouldlearnaboutyourclassmateslikesanddislikes.thenyoucanhavemuchincommonwiththem.thisway,youcangettoknowmoredifferentpeopleandshowthemthatyouarejustasfriendly.lastbutnotleast,i’malwaysherereadytohelp.wecantakepartinsomeactivitiestogetherandicanintroduceyoutoothers.withtimegoingon,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucandoastheabove.bestregards,zhanghua2023年高考英语作文假设你是李华，曾在美国学校，现现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师mr.smith.但没有其联系方式，请根据以下几点给你的美国同学tom写一封信：1．感谢tom对你英语学习的帮助；2．询问mr.smith的近况并索要其联系方式；3．邀请tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。注意：1.词数120-150；2．可适当增加细节。【范文】deartom,hisletteriwouldliketoconveymyheartfeltappreciationtoyouforyourkindassistanceinmyenglishlearningwheniwasinnewyork.additionally,yourgeneroushelpandtendercaremademefeelwarmlywelcomedandtransformedmyfirstamericantripintoaunforgettablememory.ihavebeenmissingourenglishprofessor,mr.smithwhoseunusualcastofmind,wideandvariedknowledge,togetherwithasingularpersonalcharm,combinedtoexertastronginfluenceonme.whatabouthimrecently?idesiretocontacthimforsomesuggestionsonimprovingmylisteningability.however,hisemailaddressisnotavailable.sowouldyouminddeliveringittomeviatheonlinemailbox?iammorethandelightedtoinviteyoutojoinustocelebratethespringfestival-chineselunarnewyearsothaticanrepayyourfriendship.youcanpartnerwithmetohaveatryinliondances,whichisextremelyexciting.andthegrandlanternfestivalparadewillbeboundtoimpressyou.iassureyouthatyouwouldenjoyvisitinghereasididatyouhome.withmybestregards!bestregards,lihua2023山东卷作文参考范文假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数120~150；2.可适当增加细节。【范文】deartom,iamindeedverysorrythaticannotgotobeijingwithyounextweek,whichihavepromised.ifeelsorryforaboutitandwantyoutoknowwhathappened.justnow,mycousin,liqiong,wholefthometoaustraliaforhisfurtherstudylastyear,informedmethathewouldreturnthissaturdaymorningandaskedmetopickhimupattheairportwithhisfamily.youknow,wehaven’tseeneachotherfornearlyayear.isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandme.iwouldappreciateyourallowingmetomakeanotherdatetoshowyouaroundbeijing.onceagain,?i’msorryforanyinconveniencecaused.sincerelyyours,lihua2023年山东高考英语作文假设你是李华，你的美国朋友tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speechcontest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给tom写一封电子邮件：1．询问tom的生活和学习情况；2．谈谈你的困难并请tom帮忙；3．告诉tom你打算赛后去看他。注意：1．词数：120-150；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【范文】deartom,it’samonthsinceyoustudiedinbeijing.howiseverythinggoingwithyou?iamreallyhappytospendsuchanunforgettableexperiencewithyouhere.iamgoingtotakepartinanenglishspeechcontestformiddleschoolstudentsinjulythissummer.ithinkthechanceisofgreatimportanceforme.tohaveaverygoodperformance,iammakingpreparationsforit.however,istillhavesometroubleincollectingusefulmaterials.meanwhile,ifindithardtouseenglishproperly.iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermeahand.ialsohopethatthegreateffortiammakingwillpayoff.youknow,ihavebeenmissingyousinceyouleft,soihopetoseeyouinbeijingaftertheenglishcontest.ican’twaittoseeyouagain!yourssincerely,lihua2023山东高考英语作文假设你是新华中学的学生李华,不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文?1.参加英语角的益处?2.坚持写英语日记的作用?3.英文阅读网站?enjoyreading?对你的帮助。注意?1.词数?120-150?2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。【范文】myexperienceoflearningenglishafterclassimgladihavewonthefirstprizeintheenglishcontest,whichcompletelycontributestomyafter-classenglishlearning.ioftentakepartintheenglishcornerandpracticespeakingenglish.therearemanyparticipantsinthecornerandwecantalkaboutanytopicsinenglish.bydoingthis,ihaveimprovedmypronunciationandintonation.mostimportantofall,ihaveconqueredmyshynessandtimidness.icantalktoanybodyboldlyinenglish.soididntfeelnervousinthecontestatall.atthesametimeiinsistonkeepingdiariesinenglisheveryday.iwilltrymybesttobringwhatihavelearnttouse.thusmyknowledgehasbeenreviewedandenlarged.ialsovisitenglishreadingwebsitestoreadmuch.learningenglishdependsonreadingwidelyandlargely.thosesitesprovidemanyenglisharticlesofalllevelsandicanfindappropriateonestoread.thedictionaryinthecomputercanhelpmedealwiththenewvocabularyquickly.thereforeibenefitmuchfromthereading.abovearemythreemainlearningmethodsoflearningenglishafterclass.theyarehelpfulandconvenienttome.ihopetheyarealsobeneficialforyou.lihua1．表示转折关系的词：but，however，yet，instead，ontheotherhand，onthecontrary，nevertheless，otherwise，afterall等。如：itrarelyrainsinthenorth，butontheotherhanditrainsalotinthesouth.2．表示因果关系的词：since，as，because，so，thus，therefore，asaresult，sothat等。如：thesebirdsareveryrareandthereforeprotectedbylaw.3．表示条件关系的词：if，onconditionthat，so/aslongas，unless，orelse，or等。如：illcomeonconditionthatiminvited.4．表示时间关系的词：when，while，after，before，until，assoonas，themoment，theminute，immediately，nosooner...than，hardly...when，lately，recently，since，eversince，fromnowon，fromthenon，later，soon等。如：strikewhiletheironishot.5．表示空间顺序的词：ontheright/left，atthetop/foot/of，inthemiddleof，infrontof，atthebackof，nextto，ononeside，here，there等。如：atthefootofthemountainliesariver.6．表示顺序关系的词：aboveall，firstofall，firstly，first，secondly，second，then，next，finally，intheend等。如：andaboveall，remembertosendusyournewaddress.7．表示并列关系的词：both...and，either...or，neither...nor，or，and，also,too，aswellas等。如：imlearningfrenchaswellasenglish.8．表示递进关系的词：even，whatsmore，besides，whatsworse，furthermore，also，tomakethematterworse等。如：idontwanttogo；besides，imtired.9．表示让步关系的词：though，although，as，evenif/though，whoever/whatever/whenever/wherever，nomatterwho/what/when/where等。如：wellhavetofinishthejob，nomatterhowlongittakes.10．表示列举事实的词：forexample/instance，suchas，take...forexample，thatistosay，asfollows，andsoon等。如：thegovernmenthasreducedspendinginseveralareas，forexample，educationandhealth.11．表示总结性的词：inshort，inbrief，inaword，onthewhole，ingeneral，allinall等。如：inshort，thefilmisthebestiveeverseen.12．插入语：ithink，ibelieve，asfarasiknow，asweallknow等。如：heisnotateacher，ithink.1．提示形式固定。近几年的书面表达都是以“文字提纲”的方式呈现，要点明确，任务具体，结构清晰。文字提示已成为山东高考书面表达的主要命题形式。2．体裁注重应用。近几年书面表达的体裁都是应用文，应用文是人们日常生活中广泛使用的文体，它最突出的特点是它的实际应用性。应用文包括很广，如书信、通知、日记、海报、便条、启事、请柬、电报、合同、稿件等。应用文重在实用，语言规范，表达力求朴实、准确、简洁。3．话题贴近学生生活。近几年的书面表达都秉承了“让学生有话说”的原则。内容来自于学生的实际生活或是学生关心的话题，贴近生活、贴近学生、贴近时代，题目设置的情景真实可信，符合学生的年龄特点，话题易于拓展，让每个学生都有话说，易于动笔.【篇二：山东高考英语作文范文070809年】2007年山东高考英语作文范文今年，教育部直属示范大学将招收一批免费示范生，学生毕业后须回生源所在省份的中小学任教10年以上，你愿意成为一名免费示范生吗？请陈述理由。参考范文：recentlyilearnedfromthenewspaperthatnormaluniversitiesbelongingtotheeducationdepartmentwouldrecruitsomestudentsfree.asareturn,thestudentsmustserveasaprimaryschoolteacherforatleast10yearsinhishometown.ifeelthatisagoodnewsformeandiwillcontacttheuniversitiestogeteolld.firstofall,adsafarmerschild,myfamilyslivingconditionisnotsogood,icanhardlyaffordthehightuitionofregularuniversities.iamsohappytogetthischancetobecomeacollegestudentandconinuemystudy.secondly,servingasateacherismydreamsinceiwasachild.iwasbroughtupinamountainvillage.manyofmylittlefriendsgotpooreducationandtheyhadtogettoworkasateenager.ifibecomeateacher,iwilldevotemyselftogivethembettereducation.lastly,ourcountryisingreatneedofteachers,especiallyinruralareas.afterigraduate,iwillreturntomyhometownandserveasagoodteacher.2023年山东高考英语作文范文假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语(q吧)给他写封信：1、帮他分析原因；2、给他提出建议；3、陈述你帮助他的具体打算。注意：词数120~150dearliming,iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers,andyoumayoftenfeellonely.that’sbecauseyouarenewhereandpeopledon’tknowaboutyou.butithinkyoucanmakeitifonlyyoucanfollowtheadvicebelow.first,youshouldtakeanactivepartinthediscussionsandshowyourownopinionsaboutthematters,andatthesametime,learntolistentootherpeople’sviews.second,youshouldlearnaboutyourclassmateslikesanddislikes.thenyoucanhavemuchincommonwiththem.thisway,youcangettoknowmoredifferentpeopleandshowthemthatyouarejustasfriendly.lastbutnotleast,i’malwaysherereadytohelp.wecantakepartinsomeactivitiestogetherandicanintroduceyoutoothers.withtimegoingon,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucandoastheabove.yours,08年山东卷高考英语作文及范文假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语(q吧)给他写封信：1、帮他分析原因；2、给他提出建议；3、陈述你帮助他的具体打算。注意：词数120~150dearliming,亲爱的李明。iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers,andyoumayoftenfeellonely.that’sbecauseyouarenewhereandpeopledon’tknowaboutyou.butithinkyoucanmakeitifonlyyoucanfollowtheadvicebelow.我知道你现在有麻烦与他人沟通,而且你可能经常感到孤独。那是因为你是新搬来的,人们不知道的关于你的事。但我认为你能做到,如果只有你能遵从这项建议如下。first,youshouldtakeanactivepartinthediscussionsandshowyourownopinionsaboutthematters,andatthesametime,learntolistentootherpeople’sviews.second,youshouldlearnaboutyourclassmateslikesanddislikes.thenyoucanhavemuchincommonwiththem.thisway,youcangettoknowmoredifferentpeopleandshowthemthatyouarejustasfriendly.lastbutnotleast,i’malwaysherereadytohelp.wecantakepartinsomeactivitiestogetherandicanintroduceyoutoothers.首先,你应该积极参加讨论和展示你自己的意见,有关事宜,与此同时,学习聆听别人的意见。第二,你必须了解你的同学的好恶。然后你可以与他们有许多共同之处。这种方式,你能结识更多的不同的人,向他们表明你是一样友好。最后但并非最不重要,我总是在这里,准备“我们可以参加一些活动联系在一起,而我可以把你介绍给别人。withtimegoingon,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucandoastheabove.随着时间的推移,人们就会知道,你得更好,也会想和你做朋友吗?如果你可以做以上任何一件事情。bestregards,问候,zhanghua张华2023年山东高考英语作文范文假设你是李华，曾在美国学校，现现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师mr.smith.但没有其联系方式，请根据以下几点给你的美国同学tom写一封信：1．感谢tom对你英语学习的帮助；2．询问mr.smith的近况并索要其联系方式；3．邀请tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。注意：1.词数120-150；2．可适当增加细节。deartom,hisletteriwouldliketoconveymyheartfeltappreciationtoyouforyourkindassistanceinmyenglishlearningwheniwasinnewyork.additionally,yourgeneroushelpandtendercaremademefeelwarmlywelcomedandtransformedmyfirstamericantripintoaunforgettablememory.ihavebeenmissingourenglishprofessor,mr.smithwhoseunusualcastofmind,wideandvariedknowledge,togetherwithasingularpersonalcharm,combinedtoexertastronginfluenceonme.whatabouthimrecently?idesiretocontacthimforsomesuggestionsonimprovingmylisteningability.however,hisemailaddressisnotavailable.sowouldyouminddeliveringittomeviatheonlinemailbox?iammorethandelightedtoinviteyoutojoinustocelebratethespringfestival-chineselunarnewyearsothaticanrepayyourfriendship.youcanpartnerwithmetohaveatryinliondances,whichisextremelyexciting.andthegrandlanternfestivalparadewillbeboundtoimpressyou.iassureyouthatyouwouldenjoyvisitinghereasididatyouhome.withmybestregards假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：1.表示道歉2.解释原因3.另约时间注意：1.词数120-1502.可适当增加细节deartom:howareyougoing?wemadeaplanthatwewouldtravelinbeijingtogethernextweek.while,ishouldapologizetoyoubecauseicannotgothereontimeforthereasonsasfollows.first,icannotdenythatitcanhelpusbroadenourhorizonanddeepenourmindwhenwetravelinbeijing.however,thegovernmentencouragesusstudentstogotoshanghaiduetothefactthattheexpoisbeingheldinshanghainow.asthesayinggoes,’strikewhiletheironishot’.afterfinishmycollegeentranceexamination,iameagertolearnsomethingaboutstudyfromtheexpotoprepareformyeducationincollege.inaddition,ihavebeenbusywiththepreparationofthecollegeentranceexaminationforabouthalfayearandgottired.ineedsometimetorelaxinsteadoftraveling.forthereasonsthatimentionedabove,iwanttoshowmyapologyagain.andwouldyoupleaserescheduleyourtime?shallwetravelinbeijingaftertwoweeks?iamlookingforwardtoafavorablereplyatyourearliestconvenience.yours,lihua【篇三：山东省历年高考英语作文及范文】山东省历年高考英语作文及范文2005年山东高考英语作文及范文假设你是新华中学的学生李华，得知某英文报招聘兼职记者，你有意应聘，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。*表示感兴趣*说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历*希望得到回复注意：1.词数：100左右2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯范文：dearsirormadam,i’mastudentfromxinhuamiddleschool.i’mgladtolearnthatyouwantafewpart-timeenglishreporters.i’mquiteinterestedinit.ithinki’mfitforthejob.asastudent,i’vereadalotandhavemuchknowledgeinmanyfields.i’mfondofenglishanddowellinbothspeakingandwriting.besides,i’measytogetalongwithandenjoyworkingtogetherwithothers.aboveall,ionceworkedasareporterformyschoolbroadcastingstation.soi’msureicandothejobwellifigettheposition.i’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.yoursfaithfully,lihua2006年山东高考英语作文范文请用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，简要描述漫画内容，并结合生活实际，就漫画主题发表感想，题目自拟。参考词汇：公民道德—civicvirtue任老师补充：吐痰：spit，扔垃圾：litter任老师建议：漫画开头一般会用fromthepicturewecansee,------范文：wholosecivicvirtue?oneday,achildwenthomeafterclass.onhiswayhome,hesawsomeadultsspitontheground.ontheothersideoftheroad,amanthrewthegarbageonthegroundaftereatingabanana.thechildfoundabookcivicvirtue,lyingontheground.sohepickedupthebookandshouted,“wholosecivicvirtue?”thechild’swordsshouldmakepeoplethinkmore.now,manypeoplearescaredofcivicvirtue,anddon’tprotectpublicenvironmentatall.iwishthiscartooncanwaketheirvirtueandmakeourlifebetter.2007年山东高考英语作文范文今年，教育部直属示范大学将招收一批免费示范生，学生毕业后须回生源所在省份的中小学任教10年以上，你愿意成为一名免费示范生吗？请陈述理由。范文：recentlyilearnedfromthenewspaperthatnormaluniversities师范大学（belongingtotheeducationdepartment）wouldrecruitsomestudentsfree.asareturn,thestudentsmustserveas充当aprimaryschoolteacherforatleast10yearsinhishometown.ifeelthatisgoodnewsformeandiwillcontact联系theuniversitiestogeteolled被录取.firstofall,asafarmerschild,myfamilyslivingconditionsisnotsogood,icanhardlyaffordthehightuitionofregularuniversities正规大学.iamsohappytogetthischancetobecomeacollegestudentandcontinuemystudy.secondly,servingasateacherismydreamsinceiwasachild.iwasbroughtupinamountainvillage.manyofmylittlefriendsgotpooreducationandtheyhadtogettoworkasateenager.ifibecomeateacher,iwilldevotemyselftogivingthembettereducation.lastly,ourcountryisingreatneedofteachers,especiallyinruralareas.afterigraduate,iwillreturntomyhometownandserveasagoodteacher.2023年山东卷高考英语作文及范文假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信：1、帮他分析原因；2、给他提出建议；3、陈述你帮助他的具体打算。注意：词数120~150dearliming,bestregards,zhanghua范文：dearliming,iknowyouarenowhavingtroublecommunicatingwithothers,andyoumayoftenfeellonely.that’sbecauseyouarenewhereandpeopledon’tknowaboutyou.butithinkyoucanmakeit搞定ifonlyyoucanfollowtheadvicebelow.first,youshouldtakeanactivepartinthediscussionsandshowyourownopinionsaboutthematters,andatthesametime,learntolistentootherpeople’sviews.second,youshouldlearnaboutyourclassmateslikesanddislikes.thenyoucanhavemuchincommonwith有共同点them.thisway,youcangetto逐渐的knowmoredifferentpeopleandshowthemthatyouarejustasfriendly.lastbutnotleast,i’malwaysherereadytohelp.wecantakepartinsomeactivitiestogetherandicanintroduceyoutoothers.withtimegoingon随着时间的推移,peoplewillknowyoubetterandwillliketomakefriendswithyouifyoucandoas按照theabove以上.bestregards,zhanghua2023年高考英语作文及范文假设你是李华，曾在美国学校，现现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师mr.smith.但没有其联系方式，请根据以下几点给你的美国同学tom写一封信：1．感谢tom对你英语学习的帮助；2．询问mr.smith的近况并索要其联系方式；3．邀请tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。注意：1.词数120-150；2．可适当增加细节。范文：deartom,hisletteriwouldliketoconveymyheartfeltappreciationtoyouforyourkindassistanceinmyenglishlearningwheniwasinnewyork.additionally,yourgeneroushelpandtendercaremademefeelwarmlywelcomedandtransformedmyfirstamericantripintoaunforgettablememory.（过长，建议不采用）ihavebeenmissingourenglishprofessor,mr.smithwhoseunusualcastofmind,wideandvariedknowledge,togetherwithasingularpersonalcharm,combinedtoexertastronginfluenceonme.（建议该做whowaskindtome）whatabouthimrecently?idesiretocontacthimforsomesuggestionsonimprovingmylisteningability.however,hisemailaddressisnotavailable.sowouldyouminddeliveringittomeviatheonlinemailbox?iammorethandelightedtoinviteyoutojoinustocelebratethespringfestival-chineselunarnewyearsothaticanrepayyourfriendship.youcanpartnerwithmetohaveatryinliondances,whichisextremelyexciting.andthegrandlanternfestivalparadewillbeboundtoimpressyou.（建议该做andenjoythetraditionalchineseculture.）iassureyouthatyouwouldenjoyvisitinghereasididatyouhome.withmybestregards!sincerelyyours,lihua2023年高考英语作文及范文假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件：1.表示歉意；2.解释原因；3.另约时间。注意：1.词数120~150；2.可适当增加细节。范文：deartom,iamindeedverysorrythatican’tgotobeijingwithyounextweek,whichihavepromised.ifeelsorryforaboutitandwantyoutoknowwhathappened.justnow,mycousin,liqiong,wholefthometoaustraliaforhisfurtherstudylastyear,informedmethathewouldreturnthissaturdaymorningandaskedmetopickhimupattheairportwithhisfamily.youknow,wehaven’tseeneachotherfornearlyayear.isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandme.iwouldappreciateyourallowingmetomakeanotherdatetoshowyouaroundbeijing.onceagain,i’msorryforanyinconveniencecaused.sincerelyyours,lihua2023年高考英语作文及范文假设你是李华，你的美国朋友tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speechcontest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给tom写一封电子邮件：1．询问tom的生活和学习情况；2．谈谈你的困难并请tom帮忙；3．告诉tom你打算赛后去看他。注意：1．词数：120-150；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。范文：deartom,it’samonthsinceyoustudiedinbeijing.howiseverythinggoingwithyou?iamreallyhappytospendsuchanunforgettableexperiencewithyouhere.iamgoingtotakepartinanenglishspeechcontestformiddleschoolstudentsinjulythissummer.ithinkthechanceisofgreatimportanceforme.tohaveaverygoodperformance,iammakingpreparationsforit.however,istillhavesometroubleincollectingusefulmaterials.meanwhile,ifindithardtouseenglishproperly.iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldoffermeahand.ialsohopethatthegreateffortiammakingwillpayoff.youknow,ihavebeenmissingyousinceyouleft,soihopetoseeyouinbeijingaftertheenglishcontest.ican’twaittoseeyouagain!yourssincerely,lihua2023年高考英语作文及范文假设你是新华中学的学生李华,不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文1.参加英语角的益处2.坚持写英语日记的作用3.英文阅读网站对你的帮助。注意词数：120-1502.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。范文：myexperienceoflearningenglishafterclassimgladihavewonthefirstprizeintheenglishcontest,whichcompletelycontributestomyafter-classenglishlearning.ioftentakepartintheenglishcornerandpracticespeakingenglish.therearemanyparticipantsinthecornerandwecantalkaboutanytopicsinenglish.bydoingthis,ihaveimprovedmypronunciationandintonation.mostimportantofall,ihaveconqueredmyshynessandtimidness.icantalktoanybodyboldlyinenglish.soididntfeelnervousinthecontestatall.atthesametimeiinsistonkeepingdiariesinenglisheveryday.iwilltrymybesttobringwhatihavelearnttouse.thusmyknowledgehasbeenreviewedandenlarged.ialsovisitenglishreadingwebsitestoreadmuch.learningenglishdependsonreadingwidelyandlargely.thosesitesprovidemanyenglisharticlesofalllevelsandicanfindappr