Topic24新闻报道(写作指导)分析

写作指导十五新闻报道写作指导新闻报道是典型的应用文体裁。掌握新闻的六要素,即人物(who)、事件(what)、时间(when)、地点(where)、原因(why)、方式(how)。它的结构一般分为四个部分:标题、导语、主体、结语。标题是新闻报道的题目,是对最有新闻价值的内容的浓缩、概括、提炼和再创作。导语是新闻报道开头的第一段或第一句话,它扼要地揭示出新闻报道的核心内容。主体是新闻报道的主要部分,它用充分的事实表现主题。新闻报道的结语一般是最后一句话或者一段话,通常对全文内容作概括性的总结,或对新闻事件的发展趋势作出预测。有时,作者根据报道的事实在结语中提出令人深思的问题。写作指导常用句式(1)Nowthereisagrowingawarenessthat...(2)Therearesomearticlesintoday’spaperaboutHopeProject.(3)Therewasnothinginterestinginthepapertoday.(4)Thefirsttwochaptersofthestoryareintheissueofthemagazine.(5)Theheavyfogleavesusintodeepthought.(6)Thethree-dayconferencehascometoaclose.(7)Itissaidthatmanypeopleareagainstthenewtrafficrules.(8)Onlyinthiswaycanwebridgethegenerationgapbetweenparentsandchildren.写作典例(2013江西)星光中学(XingguangHighSchool)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请写一篇短文,报道此次活动。内容包括:1.时间与地点:4月10日,大青山(DaqingMountain);2.活动的过程;3.你对于这次活动的评论。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【范文】Inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise,ourschoolorganizedamountain-climbingonApril10.Hundredsofustookpartinit.Itwasaniceday.At8:00,wegatheredatthefootofDaqingMountainand

setoutforthetopinhighspirits.Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.Whensomefell

behind,otherswouldcomeandofferhelp.About2hourslater,weallreached

thetop.Bathedinthesunshine,wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,italsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.Whatawonderfultime!【写作点评】(1)文章开门见山,用inorderto引出本活动的目的。(2)第二段对活动过程的报道运用了不同的句式和动词形式。运用了过去分词作状语,彰显了作者的写作功底。(3)最后一段中用了两个高级句式:notonly引导的倒装句式和what引导的感叹句。跟踪训练1假如你是李华,对今年一月出现的严重雾霾记忆犹新,认为绿色生活方式对于改善空气质量十分有益。请根据下列要点写一篇短文,向校刊“英语角”栏目投稿。简述雾霾情况倡导绿色生活持续三周左右影响全国很多地方造成极大不便乘坐公交车出行节约水、电、纸张……注意:1.词数:120左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。GreenerLife,CleanerAirItisnoteasytoforgettheheavysmogthatoccurredinJanuary.

【范文】GreenerLife,CleanerAir

ItisnoteasytoforgettheheavysmogthatoccurredinJanuary.ItlastedforaboutthreeweeksandaffectedmanyareasinChina,causingmuchinconvenienceandevendidharmtoourlifeandhealth.Theincidentwarnsustotakeactiontofightforcleanairbeforeit’stoo

late!AndIbelieveagreenlifestylecanmakeabigdifferencetotheairquality!Firstly,it’sgoodtotakebusesorothermeansofpublictransport-ationratherthancarswheneverpossible.What’smore,beawaretosavewater,electricityandpaper.Moreover,recyclewhateverwecan.Lastbutnotleast,don’tforgettoinfluencethosearoundyoutofollow!跟踪训练2：(2015.温州模拟）2013年初，为了抑制浪费，一些网民发起了“光盘行动”，受到人们的普遍欢迎。最近。你校学生会向同学们发出“光盘行动”的倡议，旨在引导同学们节约粮食，抵制浪费。你是学校的英语记者，请根据下面的提示，为校报的英语专栏写一篇稿件。1.列举学校餐厅的浪费现象；2.学校开展“光盘行动”的情况；3.你的看法。注意：词数为120左右。参考词汇：“光盘行动”“ClearYourPlate”campaign

Inthepast,alotoffoodwaswastedinourschoolcanteen.Somestudentsthrewawaysomefoodbecauseitwasnotdeliciousasexpected.Othersleftthefoodontheplatebecausetheyboughttoomuch.LastmonththeStudents’UnionofourschoollaunchedClearYourPlate”campaign,whichaimstocallonusstudentstoeatupallthefoodwebought.Nowthereislessleftoverinours