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Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayaboutacampusactivitythathasbenefitedyoumost.Youshouldstatethereasonsandwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessaybasedonthepictureabove.Youshouldstateyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofthepictureandthencommentonthekid’sunderstandingofgoingtoschool.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessayentitledStudentUseofComputers.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyouressayonthechartandtheoutlinegivenbelow:AveragenumberofhoursastudentspendsoncomputersperDirections:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnExcessivePackagingfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,butnomorethan180words.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying.“Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftimes.”Youshouldwriteatleast120words,butnomorethan180Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteAPosterRecruitingVolunteers.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,butnomorethan180words.13-1510-127-94-61-30

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanessay.Supposeyouhavetwooptionsupongraduation:Oneistoworkinastate-ownedbusinessandtheotherinajointventure.Youaretomakeachoicebetweenthetwo.Writeanessaytoexplainthereasonsforyourchoice.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

WorkinginaState-OwnedBusinessorinaJointPara.1①Upongraduation,allcollegestudentswillconfronttheproblemofthecareerchoice,whichistrulyatoughone.②Someholdthatthereisnobetterwaytogetadecentjobthaninastated-ownedbusiness,whichwillguaranteetheirqualityoflifeafterretirement,whileothersinsistthatworkinginajointventureoutweighsanyotherjobsasitmayprovidehigher ③Asforme,IpreferthePara.2①Foronething,ajointventureusuallyoffersamorecooperativeandcompetitiveworkingatmospherewhichissuitableforthebeginnerstodeveloptheirabilities.②Foranother,ajointventureusuallyprovideshighersalaries,whichfascinatesagreatnumberofpeople,especiallythebeginnerswhoneedtocovertheexpensesoftransportation,thehouse-renting,andsocial③Besides,Iadmirethediversebusinessculturesinthejointventure,immersedinwhichIcanbroadenmyvisionandexpandmyknowledge.Para.3①Basedontheabovereasons,workinginajointventurewillbemyfirstandsoleDirections:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnExcessivePackagingfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

OnExcessive①Nowadaysmanycommoditiesarepackagedexcessively.②Itiscommonthatasmallitemiswrappedinaverybigandluxurybox;forexample,everyMid-AutumnFestival,wecanseevariousdelicatepackagingboxesinwhichthereareonlyafewsmallmooncakes. everypopularinourDirections:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledNothingSucceedsWithoutaStrongWillbycommentingonthehumoroussaying,“Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftimes.”Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180

①Weoftenhearthehumoroussaying,“Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld.I’vedoneithundredsoftimes.”②Itlsusthatwithoutastrongwill,nothingsucceeds.③Thetruthofitisdeepandprofound.

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnExcessivePackagingfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

OnExcessive①Amongallthesefactors,manufacturersputtingprofitsinthefirstplaceplayacritical②Manymanufacturerspackagethecommongoodsasluxuriouslyandbeautifullyaspossibletoraisetheprices.③What’smore,manycustomersthinkthatdelicaypackagedgoodsaresuperiortothosewithplainpackaging.④Besides,departmentconcernedturnsablindeyetothisirrationalphenomenon,whichfurtherboostsexcessivepackaging.①过①过渡句到个人观点或建 个人意见②Firstly方法/议/观点重申一.③Secondly,方法/建议/观点重申二④Onlyinthisway/Allinall,段落总结句.ally/Inmy①Tosum Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartessaywithabriefdescriptionofpictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofngsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.①Tosumup, ngsmallthingswellfirstisofgreatimportance.②Firstly,weshouldn’talwaysthinkabout nggreatthings.③Secondly,weshouldrealizethateverygreatambitioncanbeachievedonlywhenwestartfrom ngsmallthings.④Allinall,ajourneyofathousandbeginswithasinglestep.

Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledOnExcessivePackagingfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

OnExcessive①Frommypointofview,excessivepackagingisnotonlywastefulbutalsounfriendlytotheenvironment.②Therefore,ontheonehand,Isuggestthelawsonpackagingbeperfectedtorestrictexcessivepackaging.③Ontheotherhand,asresponsiblecustomers,weshouldfirstconsiderthequality,notthepackaging.④Toconclude,weshouldtrytocombatthefurtherexpansionofexcessivepackaging.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay.Youshouldstartyouressaywithabriefdescriptionofpictureandthenexpressyourviewsontheimportanceofngsmallthingsbeforeundertakingsomethingbig.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.①Inthepicturepresentedtous,thesonsays,“Dad,Iamabitworriedaboutdisposingofnuclearwaste.”②Thefatherreplies,“Ifyoucanemptythedustbinhere,youcandoanything.”andpointsthegarbagecanbesidehim.③Obviously,whatthecartoonsymbolicallyillustratesisthatmanypeoplearoundusseemtobesoambitiousthattheyhavenopatiencewiththesmallthings.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledEducationPaysbasedonthestatisticsprovidedinthechartbelow(Unemploymentratein2010).Pleasegiveabriefdescriptionofthechartfirstandthenmakecommentsonit.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.①Accordingtothechartabove,theweeklyearningspeopleobtainprogressivelymountupwiththerisingoftheeducationallevelthatpeopleachieve.②Indetail,peoplewithaneducationdegreeofcollegeoraboveearnatleast300dollarsmoreeveryweekthanthosewithalowerone.③Consequently,thischarthasforcefullyprovedthatthemoreoneinvestsineducation,themoreheorshewillearn. ①Iamvery toknow/learnthat .②AndIamwritingtoexpressmysuggestions/proposals/viewsconcerning ./Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregard ,andIamtryingtomakesomesuggestionshere.③Inmy(humble)opinion,.④Ontheone .⑤Ontheother ①As ,(Iwouldlike mend . would .④In .⑤Iam ①Pleaseinform .②Iamlookingforward ①Iam .②NowIamwritingtoinformyouthatI notsatisfying/adisappointment,andIwouldliketodrawyourattractiontotheproblem.①Thecause/focusofmycomplaint .②(Ontheone .(Ontheother .④Underthiscircumstance,(I .Honestlyspeaking, .⑥Ihope .⑦If cannotbeproperlysettled,Iamafraid ①Itrustyouwilltakemycomplaintsseriously.②Youwouldbehighlyappreciatediftheproblemcouldbesolvedassoonaspossible.③Thankyouforyourtimeandkindconsideration. ①Iwouldliketoapplyfortheposition advertised/posted ②Ibelievemyqualificationsareidealmatchofyour①Imajorin .②Iwillgraduateon .③Inadditiontopassingtherequiredcourses,(suchas ,)Ihaveparticipatedin .④Myatsparetimein providedmewiththeopportunityto.⑤Ibelievemyeducationand.

.⑥Youwillfind①Iappreciateyourtimeinreadingthisletter.②Iwould eanopportunitytomeetwithyoufora alinterview.③Enclosedisacopyofmyresume.④Icanbereachedbyephone ①Iamexcessivelysorrythat .②Iherebywriteyouthislettertoshowmydeepregret.③Pleaseacceptmysincereapology.④AndIhopeyouwillunderstandmeandexcuseme ①Iwillbeverygratefulifyouarekindenoughtolistentomyexplanation.②Thereasonwhyis/was . .④Therefore,itis/wasnotinmy ①Conditionspermitted,Iwouldlike .②Ishallbeobliged/relieved.③Onceagain,Iwouldliketoexpressmysincereapologyforanyinconveniencecaused.④Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologyandunderstandme. ①Iam/Wearewritingthesefewlinestoexpressmy/oursinceregratitude .Haditnotbeenforyourhelp ,I/wefear might/would ③.④I/Wewillalwaysrememberyour①Sinceyouhavedoneme/ussuchagreatfavor,I/wesincerelyhopetohavetheopportunitytorepayyourgenerosity/kindness.② .③I/WewonderifI/wecanhavethehonorto .④AndifthereissomethingI/wecandoforyou,pleasefeelfreetocontact①Again,I/wewouldliketothankyouforyourgeneroushelp(onbehalf ).Pleaseacceptmy/ourkindregards.③Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou ①Ihavelearnedwithdelightthatyou .②Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson .③Ifeelveryhappyfor/proudofyou. isquiteexcitingnews!②Youarereally/Youmustbevery .③Iknowthisissurelytheresultof .④Itisarewardyourichlydeserve.①Withyour ,Iamsurethat .②Ihope .③Again,pleaseacceptmysincerecongratulations.④Bestwishesforyourfurthersuccess!

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