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Part1:GettoknowViennaWhereintheworldwouldyoumostliketolive?Accordingtoanannualindex(年度指数)bytheEconomistIntelligenceUnit,youshouldthinkaboutVienna.Themagazineagainrateditastheworld’s“mostlivable”city.BeatingmorepopularcitieslikeLondonandNewYork,Viennahascultureasitstrumpcard(王牌).Whetheryourpassionisart,musicorhistory,Viennahassomethingforyou.TheKunsthistorischesnationalmuseumhasoneofEurope’slargestartcollections,includingtheworld’slargestcollectionofworksbyDutchartistPieterBruegeltheElder.Meanwhile,theHofburgImperialPalaceisfreetoexplore.MusicloverscanenjoyVienna’sannualSummerNightConcert,playedbytheViennaPhilharmonic(爱乐乐团).Itattractsover100,000people–whatelsecanyouexpectfromthehomeofMozart?Aswellasbeingaculturalmecca(胜地),Vienna’senvironmentisworld-class.Thecityhasmanygreenareas,suchastheNeueDonauhikingtrail(小径),andanaveragePM2.5levelofjust18,accordingtotheWHO.Thiswas,inpart,achievedbyVienna’stransportsystem.In2013thegovernmentintroducedtheeuro-a-daysystemtogetmorepeopletouseregionaltrains.Itworked!Overhalfoftheresidents(居民)haveannualtravelcards,makingitbothreliableandcheapbyEuropeanstandards.Nottomention,youcantakeatram(有轨电车)andgetupclosewithVienna’sarchitecturallandmarks(地标建筑),liketheBurgTheatreandStStephan’sCathedral.AustrianauthorKarlKrausfamouslysaid,“ThestreetsofViennaarepavedwithculture,thestreetsofothercitieswithasphalt(柏油).”Soifyou’relookingforasafeculturalcitywithalaid-back(悠闲的)lifestyle,Viennacouldbeyournextholidaydestination.

1.Thestyleofthepassageis_________.A.NarrationB.ExpositionC.ArgumentationBPart2:ReadforkeyinformationTask1:readforstructure2.StructureVienna:the“mostlivable”cityPart1:(para1)Part2:reasonscultureenvironmenttransportsystem(para2-3)(para4)(para5)Part3:topic:result:yournextholidaydestination(para6)Task2:Readforkeyinformation

Whereintheworldwouldyoumostliketolive?Accordingtoanannualindex(年度指数)bytheEconomistIntelligenceUnit,youshouldthinkaboutVienna.Themagazineagainrateditastheworld's“mostlivable”city.Para1___________________________________________________________________________________aquestiontoleadtothetopicBeatingmorepopularcitieslikeLondonandNewYork,Viennahascultureasitstrumpcard(王牌).Whetheryourpassionisart,musicorhistory,Viennahassomethingforyou.TheKunsthistorischesnationalmuseumhasoneofEurope'slargestartcollections,includingtheworld'slargestcollectionofworksbyDutchartistPieterBruegeltheElder.Meanwhile,theHofburgImperialPalaceisfreetoexplore.MusicloverscanenjoyVienna'sannualSummerNightConcert,playedbytheViennaPhilharmonic(爱乐乐团).Itattractsover100,000people--whatelsecanyouexpectfromthehomeofMozart?Para2-3__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________examples忽略具体事例或一笔带过Aswellasbeingaculturalmecca(胜地),Vienna'senvironmentisworld-class.Thecityhasmanygreenareas,suchastheNeueDonauhikingtrail(小径),andanaveragePM2.5levelofjust18,accordingtotheWHO.Para4_________________________________detailedinformation忽略具体信息或一笔带过Para5Thiswas,inpart,achievedbyVienna'stransportsystem.In2013thegovernmentintroducedtheeuro-a-daysystemtogetmorepeopletouseregionaltrains.Itworked!Overhalfoftheresidents(居民)haveannualtravelcards,makingitbothreliableandcheapbyEuropeanstandards.Nottomention,youcantakeatram(有轨电车)andgetupclosewithVienna'sarchitecturallandmarks(地标建筑),liketheBurgTheatreandStStephan’sCathedral.____________________________________detailedinformation通过具体信息简要概括交通方面的特点——————————Para6AustrianauthorKarlKrausfamouslysaid,“ThestreetsofViennaarepavedwithculture,thestreetsofothercitieswithasphalt(柏油).”Soifyou’relookingforasafeculturalcitywithalaid-back(悠闲的)lifestyle,Viennacouldbeyournextholidaydestination.

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________aquote引语用来支撑要点，可忽略Para.Key

points1Themagazineagainrateditastheworld’s“mostlivable”city.2-3Viennahascultureasitstrumpcard.Whetheryourpassionisart,musicorhistory,Viennahassomethingforyou.4

Vienna’senvironmentisworld-class.5Vienna’stransportsystemis...6

Soifyou’relookingforasafeculturalcitywithalaid-backlifestyle,Viennacouldbeyournextholidaydestination.topicreasonsresultTipsforgettingkeyinformation1.Thetopicsentenceuauallyliesinthebeginningortheendoftheparagraph.2.Delectthedetailedinformation,examplesandquotes,orjustmentionthembriefly.

Task1:Tipsforparaphrasing词汇：词性转换；使用同义词或反义词；使用广义词代替具体词等。句式：语态变化特殊句式和正常语序句式的转换非谓语动词和从句的转换提炼概括、合并归纳等。Part3:WriteasummaryTask2:Para.1asanexampleThemagazineagainrateditastheworld’s“mostlivable”city.

1.TheEconomistIntelligenceUnitregardedViennaastheworld's“mostlivable”cityforasecondtime.2.Viennawasregardedastheworld's“mostlivable”cityforasecondtimebytheEconomistIntelligenceUnit.Tips:代词转化为具体信息同义词主被动的互换Para.Paraphrasedpoints1Viennawasregardedastheworld's“mostlivable”cityforasecondtimebytheEconomistIntelligenceUnit.2-34

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tobeginwith,aboveall,second,third,furthermore,inaddition,moreover,besides,

finally,lastbutnotleast...二、并列aswellas,notonly...but(also),includingsth/sthincluded...三、对比ontheonehand...ontheotherhand...,onthecontrary...四、因果thanksto，owingto，becauseof，dueto，thus,therefore,so...五、总结inshort，inbrief，inconclusion...六、转折however,nevertheless,but...七、举例suchas,forexample,forinstance...Task3:TipsforconnectingTask4:GroupworkParaphraseeachparagraphsandthenconnectthemtomakeasummaryofabout60words.

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points1Viennawasregardedastheworld's“mostlivable”cityforasecondtimebytheEconomistIntelligenceUnit.

2-3Viennahascultureasitstrumpcard.Whetheryourpassionisart,musicorhistory,Viennahassomethingforyou.4

Vienna’senvironmentisworld-class.5Vienna’stransportsystemis...6

Soifyou’relookingforasafeculturalcitywithalaid-backlifestyle,Viennacouldbeyournextholidaydestination.Besides,Therefore,AlsoAboveall,

CulturegivesViennaacompetitiveadvantage.Therearemanyplacesforart,musicorhistoryloverstoexplore,suchastheKunsthistorischesnationalmuseum.

Vienna'senvironmentisthebestintheworld,includinggreenareasandfreshair.Vienna'stransportsystemiswell-developed.Peoplecantravelaroundthecitybyregionaltrainandtram.Youcanchoosetheculturalcitytorelaxyourselfnexttime.Asampleessay

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